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--> '''Celestia:''' Oh TWILIGHT! You did remember my birthday!'''
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--> '''Celestia:''' Oh TWILIGHT! You did remember my birthday!'''birthday!
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--> '''Celestia: Oh TWILIGHT! You did remember my birthday!'''
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--> '''Celestia: '''Celestia:''' Oh TWILIGHT! You did remember my birthday!'''
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-->Waldorf entered the room with a tray to retrieve their glasses. "A Mister Roller Reel to see you, Miss," he said smoothly to Twilight. Right behind him came the scruffy teenage pony, camera mounted on his shoulder and saddlebags stuffed with film cartridges slung over his back. "Hey, Miss Twilight, I'm sorry I'm la--- wuhohoah." Roller came to a screeching halt.
-->''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look about her-- a [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicPinkiePie cute pink earth filly with a curly mane and a huge smile]], [[GenkiGirl all perky and bubbly]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRarity whoa, a dazzling white unicorn mare with a purple mane]] [[TheBeautifulElite and serious high-class looks, definitely high maintenance, check out that diamond cutie mark]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash a sleek blue pegasus with a lightning bolt cutie mark and a rainbow mane]], had to be an athlete of some kind, you could tell she worked out-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy oh gosh, a yellow pegasus filly with a waterfall of pink mane and the biggest blue eyes he'd ever seen-- ]]''
-->It has to be kept in mind: Roller Reel was a colt. He was a teenage colt, one who had spent the early portion of that awkward stage not at the beach girlwatching or at school dances flirting with the local cheerleader fillies, but hiding from the press gangs in the basement of his home and slaving in King Sombra's mines. Fillies, in brief, had been less of a part of his life and more like a distant dreamlike concept. It had been intimidating enough working under, as a subordinate, [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicTwilightSparkle to the rather pretty protege of a Princess.]]
-->And now he had, without warning, walked in the middle of a room filled with what were routinely regarded, by those that commented on that sort of thing, as six of the hottest young mares in Equestria. He took one sweeping look at the roomful of beauties, heard their friendly 'helloes', and felt an emotion flush through his body he'd never felt before.
-->He gave them his suavest smile and smoothed his mane back. "Hey, ladies," he said, threw up an elbow to lean on the back of Twilight's chair, missed entirely and [[FacePlant fell flat on his face at their hooves.]]
-->''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look about her-- a [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicPinkiePie cute pink earth filly with a curly mane and a huge smile]], [[GenkiGirl all perky and bubbly]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRarity whoa, a dazzling white unicorn mare with a purple mane]] [[TheBeautifulElite and serious high-class looks, definitely high maintenance, check out that diamond cutie mark]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash a sleek blue pegasus with a lightning bolt cutie mark and a rainbow mane]], had to be an athlete of some kind, you could tell she worked out-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy oh gosh, a yellow pegasus filly with a waterfall of pink mane and the biggest blue eyes he'd ever seen-- ]]''
-->It has to be kept in mind: Roller Reel was a colt. He was a teenage colt, one who had spent the early portion of that awkward stage not at the beach girlwatching or at school dances flirting with the local cheerleader fillies, but hiding from the press gangs in the basement of his home and slaving in King Sombra's mines. Fillies, in brief, had been less of a part of his life and more like a distant dreamlike concept. It had been intimidating enough working under, as a subordinate, [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicTwilightSparkle to the rather pretty protege of a Princess.]]
-->And now he had, without warning, walked in the middle of a room filled with what were routinely regarded, by those that commented on that sort of thing, as six of the hottest young mares in Equestria. He took one sweeping look at the roomful of beauties, heard their friendly 'helloes', and felt an emotion flush through his body he'd never felt before.
-->He gave them his suavest smile and smoothed his mane back. "Hey, ladies," he said, threw up an elbow to lean on the back of Twilight's chair, missed entirely and [[FacePlant fell flat on his face at their hooves.]]
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-->Waldorf entered the room with a tray to retrieve their glasses. "A Mister Roller Reel to see you, Miss," he said smoothly to Twilight. Right behind him came the scruffy teenage pony, camera mounted on his shoulder and saddlebags stuffed with film cartridges slung over his back. "Hey, Miss Twilight, I'm sorry I'm la--- wuhohoah." Roller came to a screeching halt. \n-->''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack \\
''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on hercheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty cheeks]], [[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look about her-- a [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicPinkiePie cute pink earth filly with a curly mane and a huge smile]], [[GenkiGirl all perky and bubbly]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRarity whoa, a dazzling white unicorn mare with a purple mane]] [[TheBeautifulElite and serious high-class looks, definitely high maintenance, check out that diamond cutie mark]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash a sleek blue pegasus with a lightning bolt cutie mark and a rainbow mane]], had to be an athlete of some kind, you could tell she worked out-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy oh gosh, a yellow pegasus filly with a waterfall of pink mane and the biggest blue eyes he'd ever seen-- ]]''
-->Itseen--]]''\\
It has to be kept in mind: Roller Reel was a colt. He was a teenage colt, one who had spent the early portion of that awkward stage not at the beach girlwatching or at school dances flirting with the local cheerleader fillies, but hiding from the press gangs in the basement of his home and slaving in King Sombra's mines. Fillies, in brief, had been less of a part of his life and more like a distant dreamlike concept. It had been intimidating enough working under, as a subordinate, [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicTwilightSparkle to the rather pretty protege of a Princess.]]
-->And]]\\
And now he had, without warning, walked in the middle of a room filled with what were routinely regarded, by those that commented on that sort of thing, as six of the hottest young mares in Equestria. He took one sweeping look at the roomful of beauties, heard their friendly 'helloes', and felt an emotion flush through his body he'd never felt before. \n\n-->He \\
He gave them his suavest smile and smoothed his mane back. "Hey, ladies," he said, threw up an elbow to lean on the back of Twilight's chair, missed entirely and [[FacePlant fell flat on his face at their hooves.]]
''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her
-->It
It has to be kept in mind: Roller Reel was a colt. He was a teenage colt, one who had spent the early portion of that awkward stage not at the beach girlwatching or at school dances flirting with the local cheerleader fillies, but hiding from the press gangs in the basement of his home and slaving in King Sombra's mines. Fillies, in brief, had been less of a part of his life and more like a distant dreamlike concept. It had been intimidating enough working under, as a subordinate, [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicTwilightSparkle to the rather pretty protege of a Princess.
-->And
And now he had, without warning, walked in the middle of a room filled with what were routinely regarded, by those that commented on that sort of thing, as six of the hottest young mares in Equestria. He took one sweeping look at the roomful of beauties, heard their friendly 'helloes', and felt an emotion flush through his body he'd never felt before.
He gave them his suavest smile and smoothed his mane back. "Hey, ladies," he said, threw up an elbow to lean on the back of Twilight's chair, missed entirely and [[FacePlant fell flat on his face at their hooves.]]
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--> '''Everyone else''' ''[deadpan]:'' "A party."
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--> '''Everyone else''' ''[deadpan]:'' "A A party."
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** The best part is the fact that he can be heard saying this in his cell; [[MadnessMantra "Ponies are evil...ponies are evil..."]]. Put that to the obvious musical cue, and it just gets funnier.
* During Spike's beatdown of Tirek, the dragon engulfs the tyrant in green flame.... which '''''burns off his beard''''' and '''''sends it to Celestia, in Tartarus'''''.
* During Spike's beatdown of Tirek, the dragon engulfs the tyrant in green flame.... which '''''burns off his beard''''' and '''''sends it to Celestia, in Tartarus'''''.
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** The best part is the fact that he can be heard saying this in his cell; [[MadnessMantra "Ponies are evil...evil… ponies are evil..."]].evil…"]]. Put that to the obvious musical cue, and it just gets funnier.
* During Spike's beatdown of Tirek, the dragon engulfs the tyrant in greenflame.... flame… which '''''burns off his beard''''' and '''''sends it to Celestia, in Tartarus'''''.
* During Spike's beatdown of Tirek, the dragon engulfs the tyrant in green
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--> Meanwhile, in Tartarus, Celestia and Luna are chained. A pile of burnt beard hair falls from the sky, burying them.
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--> Meanwhile, ''Meanwhile, in Tartarus, Celestia and Luna are chained. A pile of burnt beard hair falls from the sky, burying them.''
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** Twilight certainly finds it hilarious, laughing hard enough to fall out of bed and wake her husband.
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** Twilight certainly finds it hilarious, laughing hard enough to fall out of bed and wake her husband.husband.
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-->'''Nyx''': Nothing. (''Shining Armor approaches the group. Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon start fangirling... but then their faces fall when Shining gives Nyx an affectionate noogy)
-->'''Shining Armor''': Hey Nixie stix. (''points at Diamond and Silver) Friends of yours?
-->'''Shining Armor''': Hey Nixie stix. (''points at Diamond and Silver) Friends of yours?
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-->'''Nyx''': Nothing. (''Shining Armor approaches the group. Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon start fangirling... but then their faces fall when Shining gives Nyx an affectionate noogy)
noogy'')
-->'''Shining Armor''': Hey Nixie stix. (''points at Diamond andSilver) Silver'') Friends of yours?
-->'''Shining Armor''': Hey Nixie stix. (''points at Diamond and
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* During Spike's beatdown of Tirek, the dragon engulfs the tyrant in green flames.... which '''''sings off his beard''''' and '''''sends it to Celestia, in Tartarus'''''.
--> '''Tirek''': (noticing his beard missing) MY BEARD!!!!!
--> Meanwhile, in Tartarus, Celestia and Luna are chained. A ball of hair falls from the sky, burying them two.
--> '''Celestia''': (buried under Tirek's beard, half-muffled): Okay. Chained to a peak in Tartarus is bad enough. This is disgusting.
--> '''Luna''': (gagging) Forsoth. Ye gods.... the SMELL.... Doth Tirek never BATHE?
--> '''Tirek''': (noticing his beard missing) MY BEARD!!!!!
--> Meanwhile, in Tartarus, Celestia and Luna are chained. A ball of hair falls from the sky, burying them two.
--> '''Celestia''': (buried under Tirek's beard, half-muffled): Okay. Chained to a peak in Tartarus is bad enough. This is disgusting.
--> '''Luna''': (gagging) Forsoth. Ye gods.... the SMELL.... Doth Tirek never BATHE?
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* During Spike's beatdown of Tirek, the dragon engulfs the tyrant in green flames.... flame.... which '''''sings '''''burns off his beard''''' and '''''sends it to Celestia, in Tartarus'''''.
--> '''Tirek''': (noticing his beard missing) MYBEARD!!!!!
BEARD!!
--> Meanwhile, in Tartarus, Celestia and Luna are chained. Aball pile of burnt beard hair falls from the sky, burying them two.
them.
--> '''Celestia''':(buried (muffled, under Tirek's beard, half-muffled): pile): Okay. Chained to a peak in Tartarus is was bad enough. This This...is disgusting.
--> '''Luna''': (gagging)Forsoth. Ye gods.... Forsooth...Odd gods, the SMELL.... SMELL...Doth Tirek never BATHE?
** And this exchange, just before Spike torches Tirek:
--> '''Bright Eyes''': Spike, we need him in one piece!
--> '''Spike''': '''CRISPY is still one piece, ain't it?'''
--> '''Tirek''': (noticing his beard missing) MY
--> Meanwhile, in Tartarus, Celestia and Luna are chained. A
--> '''Celestia''':
--> '''Luna''': (gagging)
** And this exchange, just before Spike torches Tirek:
--> '''Bright Eyes''': Spike, we need him in one piece!
--> '''Spike''': '''CRISPY is still one piece, ain't it?'''
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** Celestia and Luna's royal guards trying very hard not to laugh, which probably feels like being the legionnaires in MontyPythonsLifeOfBrian,
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** Celestia and Luna's royal guards trying very hard not to laugh, which probably feels like being the legionnaires in MontyPythonsLifeOfBrian,''Film/MontyPythonsLifeOfBrian''.
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-->''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look about her-- a [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicPinkiePie cute pink earth filly with a curly mane and a huge smile]], [[GenkiGirl all perky and bubbly]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRarity whoa, a dazzling white unicorn mare with a purple mane]] [[TheBeautifulElite and serious high-class looks, definitely high maintenance, check out that diamond cutie mark]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash a sleek blue pegasus with a lightning bolt cutie mark and a rainbow mane]], had to be an athlete of some kind, you could tell she worked out-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy oh gosh, a yellow pegasus filly with a waterfall of pink mane and the biggest blue eyes he'd ever seen-- ]]''
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-->''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look about her-- a [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicPinkiePie cute pink earth filly with a curly mane and a huge smile]], [[GenkiGirl all perky and bubbly]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRarity whoa, a dazzling white unicorn mare with a purple mane]] [[TheBeautifulElite and serious high-class looks, definitely high maintenance, check out that diamond cutie mark]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash a sleek blue pegasus with a lightning bolt cutie mark and a rainbow mane]], mane]], had to be an athlete of some kind, you could tell she worked out-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy oh gosh, a yellow pegasus filly with a waterfall of pink mane and the biggest blue eyes he'd ever seen-- ]]''
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-->''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look about her-- a [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicPinkiePie cute pink earth filly with a curly mane and a huge smile]], [[GenkiGirl all perky and bubbly]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRarity whoa, a dazzling white unicorn mare with a purple mane]] [[TheBeautifulElite and serious high-class looks, definitely high maintenance, check out that diamond cutie mark]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash a sleek blue pegasus with a lightning bolt cutie mark and a rainbow mane]], {{Tomboy had to be an athlete of some kind, you could tell she worked out-- }}[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy oh gosh, a yellow pegasus filly with a waterfall of pink mane and the biggest blue eyes he'd ever seen-- ]]''
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-->''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look about her-- a [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicPinkiePie cute pink earth filly with a curly mane and a huge smile]], [[GenkiGirl all perky and bubbly]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRarity whoa, a dazzling white unicorn mare with a purple mane]] [[TheBeautifulElite and serious high-class looks, definitely high maintenance, check out that diamond cutie mark]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash a sleek blue pegasus with a lightning bolt cutie mark and a rainbow mane]], {{Tomboy mane]], had to be an athlete of some kind, you could tell she worked out-- }}[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy oh gosh, a yellow pegasus filly with a waterfall of pink mane and the biggest blue eyes he'd ever seen-- ]]''
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-->''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look about her-- a [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicPinkiePie cute pink earth filly with a curly mane and a huge smile]], [[GenkiGirl all perky and bubbly]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRarity whoa, a dazzling white unicorn mare with a purple mane]] [[TheBeautifulElite and serious high-class looks]], [[ProperLady definitely high maintenance, check out that diamond cutie mark]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash a sleek blue pegasus with a lightning bolt cutie mark and a rainbow mane]], had to be an athlete of some kind, you could tell she worked out-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy oh gosh, a yellow pegasus filly with a waterfall of pink mane and the biggest blue eyes he'd ever seen-- ]]''
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-->''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look about her-- a [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicPinkiePie cute pink earth filly with a curly mane and a huge smile]], [[GenkiGirl all perky and bubbly]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRarity whoa, a dazzling white unicorn mare with a purple mane]] [[TheBeautifulElite and serious high-class looks]], [[ProperLady looks, definitely high maintenance, check out that diamond cutie mark]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash a sleek blue pegasus with a lightning bolt cutie mark and a rainbow mane]], {{Tomboy had to be an athlete of some kind, you could tell she worked out-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy }}[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy oh gosh, a yellow pegasus filly with a waterfall of pink mane and the biggest blue eyes he'd ever seen-- ]]''
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* During Spike's beatdown of Tirek, the dragon engulfs the tyrant in green flames.... which '''''sings off his beard''''' and '''''sends it to Celestia, in Tartarus'''''.
--> '''Tirek''': (noticing his beard missing) MY BEARD!!!!!
--> Meanwhile, in Tartarus, Celestia and Luna are chained. A ball of hair falls from the sky, burying them two.
--> '''Celestia''': (buried under Tirek's beard, half-muffled): Okay. Chained to a peak in Tartarus is bad enough. This is disgusting.
--> '''Luna''': (gagging) Forsoth. Ye gods.... the SMELL.... Doth Tirek never BATHE?
--> '''Tirek''': (noticing his beard missing) MY BEARD!!!!!
--> Meanwhile, in Tartarus, Celestia and Luna are chained. A ball of hair falls from the sky, burying them two.
--> '''Celestia''': (buried under Tirek's beard, half-muffled): Okay. Chained to a peak in Tartarus is bad enough. This is disgusting.
--> '''Luna''': (gagging) Forsoth. Ye gods.... the SMELL.... Doth Tirek never BATHE?
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* Chapter 22: Roller's DistractedByTheSexy moment..... when he walks into the room where the Mane 6 are in.
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* Chapter 22: 22: Roller's DistractedByTheSexy moment..... when he walks into the room where the Mane 6 are in.
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-->''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look about her-- a [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicPinkiePie cute pink earth filly with a curly mane and a huge smile]], [[GenkiGirl all perky and bubbly]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRarity whoa, a dazzling white unicorn mare with a purple mane]][[TheBeautifulElite and serious high-class looks]], [[ProperLady definitely high maintenance, check out that diamond cutie mark]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash a sleek blue pegasus with a lightning bolt cutie mark and a rainbow mane]], had to be an athlete of some kind, you could tell she worked out-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy oh gosh, a yellow pegasus filly with a waterfall of pink mane and the biggest blue eyes he'd ever seen-- ]]''
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-->''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look about her-- her-- a [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicPinkiePie cute pink earth filly with a curly mane and a huge smile]], [[GenkiGirl all perky and bubbly]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRarity whoa, a dazzling white unicorn mare with a purple mane]][[TheBeautifulElite mane]] [[TheBeautifulElite and serious high-class looks]], [[ProperLady definitely high maintenance, check out that diamond cutie mark]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash a sleek blue pegasus with a lightning bolt cutie mark and a rainbow mane]], had to be an athlete of some kind, you could tell she worked out-- out-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy oh gosh, a yellow pegasus filly with a waterfall of pink mane and the biggest blue eyes he'd ever seen-- ]]''
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* Chapter 22: Roller's DistractedByTheSexy moment..... when he walks into the room where the Mane 6 are in.
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* Chapter 22: 22: Roller's DistractedByTheSexy moment..... when he walks into the room where the Mane 6 are in.
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-->''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look about her-- a [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicPinkiePie cute pink earth filly with a curly mane and a huge smile]], [[GenkiGirl all perky and bubbly]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRarity whoa, a dazzling white unicorn mare with a purple mane]][[TheBeautifulElite and serious high-class looks]], [[ProperLady definitely high maintenance, check out that diamond cutie mark]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash a sleek blue pegasus with a lightning bolt cutie mark and a rainbow mane]], had to be an athlete of some kind, you could tell she worked out-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy oh gosh, a yellow pegasus filly with a waterfall of pink mane and the biggest blue eyes he'd ever seen-- ]]''
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-->''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look about her-- her-- a [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicPinkiePie cute pink earth filly with a curly mane and a huge smile]], [[GenkiGirl all perky and bubbly]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRarity whoa, a dazzling white unicorn mare with a purple mane]][[TheBeautifulElite and serious high-class looks]], [[ProperLady definitely high maintenance, check out that diamond cutie mark]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash a sleek blue pegasus with a lightning bolt cutie mark and a rainbow mane]], had to be an athlete of some kind, you could tell she worked out-- out-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy oh gosh, a yellow pegasus filly with a waterfall of pink mane and the biggest blue eyes he'd ever seen-- ]]''
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* Chapter 22: Roller's DistractedByTheSexy moment..... when he walks into the room where the Mane 6 are in.
-->Waldorf entered the room with a tray to retrieve their glasses. "A Mister Roller Reel to see you, Miss," he said smoothly to Twilight. Right behind him came the scruffy teenage pony, camera mounted on his shoulder and saddlebags stuffed with film cartridges slung over his back. "Hey, Miss Twilight, I'm sorry I'm la--- wuhohoah." Roller came to a screeching halt. ''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look about her-- a [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicPinkiePie cute pink earth filly with a curly mane and a huge smile]], [[GenkiGirl all perky and bubbly]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRarity whoa, a dazzling white unicorn mare with a purple mane]][[TheBeautifulElite and serious high-class looks]], [[ProperLady definitely high maintenance, check out that diamond cutie mark]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash a sleek blue pegasus with a lightning bolt cutie mark and a rainbow mane]], had to be an athlete of some kind, you could tell she worked out-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy oh gosh, a yellow pegasus filly with a waterfall of pink mane and the biggest blue eyes he'd ever seen-- ]]''
It has to be kept in mind: Roller Reel was a colt. He was a teenage colt, one who had spent the early portion of that awkward stage not at the beach girlwatching or at school dances flirting with the local cheerleader fillies, but hiding from the press gangs in the basement of his home and slaving in King Sombra's mines. Fillies, in brief, had been less of a part of his life and more like a distant dreamlike concept. It had been intimidating enough working under, as a subordinate, [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicTwilightSparkle to the rather pretty protege of a Princess.]] And now he had, without warning, walked in the middle of a room filled with what were routinely regarded, by those that commented on that sort of thing, as six of the hottest young mares in Equestria. He took one sweeping look at the roomful of beauties, heard their friendly 'helloes', and felt an emotion flush through his body he'd never felt before. He gave them his suavest smile and smoothed his mane back. "Hey, ladies," he said, threw up an elbow to lean on the back of Twilight's chair, missed entirely and [[FacePlant fell flat on his face at their hooves.]]
-->Waldorf entered the room with a tray to retrieve their glasses. "A Mister Roller Reel to see you, Miss," he said smoothly to Twilight. Right behind him came the scruffy teenage pony, camera mounted on his shoulder and saddlebags stuffed with film cartridges slung over his back. "Hey, Miss Twilight, I'm sorry I'm la--- wuhohoah." Roller came to a screeching halt. ''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look about her-- a [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicPinkiePie cute pink earth filly with a curly mane and a huge smile]], [[GenkiGirl all perky and bubbly]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRarity whoa, a dazzling white unicorn mare with a purple mane]][[TheBeautifulElite and serious high-class looks]], [[ProperLady definitely high maintenance, check out that diamond cutie mark]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash a sleek blue pegasus with a lightning bolt cutie mark and a rainbow mane]], had to be an athlete of some kind, you could tell she worked out-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy oh gosh, a yellow pegasus filly with a waterfall of pink mane and the biggest blue eyes he'd ever seen-- ]]''
It has to be kept in mind: Roller Reel was a colt. He was a teenage colt, one who had spent the early portion of that awkward stage not at the beach girlwatching or at school dances flirting with the local cheerleader fillies, but hiding from the press gangs in the basement of his home and slaving in King Sombra's mines. Fillies, in brief, had been less of a part of his life and more like a distant dreamlike concept. It had been intimidating enough working under, as a subordinate, [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicTwilightSparkle to the rather pretty protege of a Princess.]] And now he had, without warning, walked in the middle of a room filled with what were routinely regarded, by those that commented on that sort of thing, as six of the hottest young mares in Equestria. He took one sweeping look at the roomful of beauties, heard their friendly 'helloes', and felt an emotion flush through his body he'd never felt before. He gave them his suavest smile and smoothed his mane back. "Hey, ladies," he said, threw up an elbow to lean on the back of Twilight's chair, missed entirely and [[FacePlant fell flat on his face at their hooves.]]
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* Chapter 22: 22: Roller's DistractedByTheSexy moment..... when he walks into the room where the Mane 6 are in.
-->Waldorf entered the room with a tray to retrieve their glasses. "A Mister Roller Reel to see you, Miss," he said smoothly to Twilight. Right behind him came the scruffy teenage pony, camera mounted on his shoulder and saddlebags stuffed with film cartridges slung over his back. "Hey, Miss Twilight, I'm sorry I'm la--- wuhohoah." Roller came to a screeching halt. ''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack
-->''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look abouther-- her-- a [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicPinkiePie cute pink earth filly with a curly mane and a huge smile]], [[GenkiGirl all perky and bubbly]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRarity whoa, a dazzling white unicorn mare with a purple mane]][[TheBeautifulElite and serious high-class looks]], [[ProperLady definitely high maintenance, check out that diamond cutie mark]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash a sleek blue pegasus with a lightning bolt cutie mark and a rainbow mane]], had to be an athlete of some kind, you could tell she worked out-- out-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy oh gosh, a yellow pegasus filly with a waterfall of pink mane and the biggest blue eyes he'd ever seen-- ]]''
It]]''
-->It has to be kept in mind: Roller Reel was a colt. He was a teenage colt, one who had spent the early portion of that awkward stage not at the beach girlwatching or at school dances flirting with the local cheerleader fillies, but hiding from the press gangs in the basement of his home and slaving in King Sombra's mines. Fillies, in brief, had been less of a part of his life and more like a distant dreamlike concept. It had been intimidating enough working under, as a subordinate, [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicTwilightSparkle to the rather pretty protege of a Princess.]] And ]]
-->And now he had, without warning, walked in the middle of a room filled with what were routinely regarded, by those that commented on that sort of thing, as six of the hottest young mares in Equestria. He took one sweeping look at the roomful of beauties, heard their friendly 'helloes', and felt an emotion flush through his body he'd never felt before. He
-->He gave them his suavest smile and smoothed his mane back. "Hey, ladies," he said, threw up an elbow to lean on the back of Twilight's chair, missed entirely and [[FacePlant fell flat on his face at their hooves.]]
-->Waldorf entered the room with a tray to retrieve their glasses. "A Mister Roller Reel to see you, Miss," he said smoothly to Twilight. Right behind him came the scruffy teenage pony, camera mounted on his shoulder and saddlebags stuffed with film cartridges slung over his back. "Hey, Miss Twilight, I'm sorry I'm la--- wuhohoah." Roller came to a screeching halt.
-->''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look about
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-->It has to be kept in mind: Roller Reel was a colt. He was a teenage colt, one who had spent the early portion of that awkward stage not at the beach girlwatching or at school dances flirting with the local cheerleader fillies, but hiding from the press gangs in the basement of his home and slaving in King Sombra's mines. Fillies, in brief, had been less of a part of his life and more like a distant dreamlike concept. It had been intimidating enough working under, as a subordinate, [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicTwilightSparkle to the rather pretty protege of a Princess.
-->And now he had, without warning, walked in the middle of a room filled with what were routinely regarded, by those that commented on that sort of thing, as six of the hottest young mares in Equestria. He took one sweeping look at the roomful of beauties, heard their friendly 'helloes', and felt an emotion flush through his body he'd never felt before.
-->He gave them his suavest smile and smoothed his mane back. "Hey, ladies," he said, threw up an elbow to lean on the back of Twilight's chair, missed entirely and [[FacePlant fell flat on his face at their hooves.]]
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* Chapter 22: Roller's DistractedByTheSexy moment..... when he walks in the room where the Mane 6 are in.
-->Waldorf entered the room with a tray to retrieve their glasses. "A Mister Roller Reel to see you, Miss," he said smoothly to Twilight. Right behind him came the scruffy teenage pony, camera mounted on his shoulder and saddlebags stuffed with film cartridges slung over his back. "Hey, Miss Twilight, I'm sorry I'm la--- wuhohoah." Roller came to a screeching halt. ''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look about her-- a [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicPinkiePie cute pink earth filly with a curly mane and a huge smile]], [[GenkiGirl all perky and bubbly]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRarity whoa, a dazzling white unicorn mare with a purple mane]][[TheBeautifulElite and serious high-class looks]], [[ProperLady definitely high maintenance, check out that diamond cutie mark]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash a sleek blue pegasus with a lightning bolt cutie mark and a rainbow mane]], had to be an athlete of some kind, you could tell she worked out-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy oh gosh, a yellow pegasus filly with a waterfall of pink mane and the biggest blue eyes he'd ever seen-- ]]''
-->Waldorf entered the room with a tray to retrieve their glasses. "A Mister Roller Reel to see you, Miss," he said smoothly to Twilight. Right behind him came the scruffy teenage pony, camera mounted on his shoulder and saddlebags stuffed with film cartridges slung over his back. "Hey, Miss Twilight, I'm sorry I'm la--- wuhohoah." Roller came to a screeching halt. ''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look about her-- a [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicPinkiePie cute pink earth filly with a curly mane and a huge smile]], [[GenkiGirl all perky and bubbly]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRarity whoa, a dazzling white unicorn mare with a purple mane]][[TheBeautifulElite and serious high-class looks]], [[ProperLady definitely high maintenance, check out that diamond cutie mark]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash a sleek blue pegasus with a lightning bolt cutie mark and a rainbow mane]], had to be an athlete of some kind, you could tell she worked out-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy oh gosh, a yellow pegasus filly with a waterfall of pink mane and the biggest blue eyes he'd ever seen-- ]]''
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* Chapter 22: 22: Roller's DistractedByTheSexy moment..... when he walks in into the room where the Mane 6 are in.
-->Waldorf entered the room with a tray to retrieve their glasses. "A Mister Roller Reel to see you, Miss," he said smoothly to Twilight. Right behind him came the scruffy teenage pony, camera mounted on his shoulder and saddlebags stuffed with film cartridges slung over his back. "Hey, Miss Twilight, I'm sorry I'm la--- wuhohoah." Roller came to a screeching halt. ''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look abouther-- her-- a [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicPinkiePie cute pink earth filly with a curly mane and a huge smile]], [[GenkiGirl all perky and bubbly]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRarity whoa, a dazzling white unicorn mare with a purple mane]][[TheBeautifulElite and serious high-class looks]], [[ProperLady definitely high maintenance, check out that diamond cutie mark]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash a sleek blue pegasus with a lightning bolt cutie mark and a rainbow mane]], had to be an athlete of some kind, you could tell she worked out-- out-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy oh gosh, a yellow pegasus filly with a waterfall of pink mane and the biggest blue eyes he'd ever seen-- ]]''
-->Waldorf entered the room with a tray to retrieve their glasses. "A Mister Roller Reel to see you, Miss," he said smoothly to Twilight. Right behind him came the scruffy teenage pony, camera mounted on his shoulder and saddlebags stuffed with film cartridges slung over his back. "Hey, Miss Twilight, I'm sorry I'm la--- wuhohoah." Roller came to a screeching halt. ''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look about
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-->Waldorf entered the room with a tray to retrieve their glasses. "A Mister Roller Reel to see you, Miss," he said smoothly to Twilight. Right behind him came the scruffy teenage pony, camera mounted on his shoulder and saddlebags stuffed with film cartridges slung over his back. "Hey, Miss Twilight, I'm sorry I'm la--- wuhohoah." Roller came to a screeching halt. ''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look about her-- a [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicPinkiePie cute pink earth filly with a curly mane and a huge smile]], [[GenkiGirl all perky and bubbly]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRarity whoa, a dazzling white unicorn mare with a purple mane]][[TheBeautifulElite and serious high-class looks]], [[ProperLady definitely high maintenance, check out that diamond cutie mark]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash a sleek blue pegasus with a lightning bolt cutie mark and a rainbow mane]], [[Tomboy had to be an athlete of some kind]], you could tell she worked out-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy oh gosh, a yellow pegasus filly with a waterfall of pink mane and the biggest blue eyes he'd ever seen-- ]]''
-->Waldorf entered the room with a tray to retrieve their glasses. "A Mister Roller Reel to see you, Miss," he said smoothly to Twilight. Right behind him came the scruffy teenage pony, camera mounted on his shoulder and saddlebags stuffed with film cartridges slung over his back. "Hey, Miss Twilight, I'm sorry I'm la--- wuhohoah." Roller came to a screeching halt. ''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look about her-- a [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicPinkiePie cute pink earth filly with a curly mane and a huge smile]], [[GenkiGirl all perky and bubbly]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRarity whoa, a dazzling white unicorn mare with a purple mane]][[TheBeautifulElite and serious high-class looks]], [[ProperLady definitely high maintenance, check out that diamond cutie mark]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash a sleek blue pegasus with a lightning bolt cutie mark and a rainbow mane]], [[Tomboy had to be an athlete of some kind]], you could tell she worked out-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy oh gosh, a yellow pegasus filly with a waterfall of pink mane and the biggest blue eyes he'd ever seen-- ]]''
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* Chapter 22: 22: Roller's DistractedByTheSexy moment..... when he walks in the room where the Mane 6 are in.
-->Waldorf entered the room with a tray to retrieve their glasses. "A Mister Roller Reel to see you, Miss," he said smoothly to Twilight. Right behind him came the scruffy teenage pony, camera mounted on his shoulder and saddlebags stuffed with film cartridges slung over his back. "Hey, Miss Twilight, I'm sorry I'm la--- wuhohoah." Roller came to a screeching halt. ''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look abouther-- her-- a [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicPinkiePie cute pink earth filly with a curly mane and a huge smile]], [[GenkiGirl all perky and bubbly]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRarity whoa, a dazzling white unicorn mare with a purple mane]][[TheBeautifulElite and serious high-class looks]], [[ProperLady definitely high maintenance, check out that diamond cutie mark]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash a sleek blue pegasus with a lightning bolt cutie mark and a rainbow mane]], [[Tomboy had to be an athlete of some kind]], kind, you could tell she worked out-- out-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy oh gosh, a yellow pegasus filly with a waterfall of pink mane and the biggest blue eyes he'd ever seen-- ]]''
-->Waldorf entered the room with a tray to retrieve their glasses. "A Mister Roller Reel to see you, Miss," he said smoothly to Twilight. Right behind him came the scruffy teenage pony, camera mounted on his shoulder and saddlebags stuffed with film cartridges slung over his back. "Hey, Miss Twilight, I'm sorry I'm la--- wuhohoah." Roller came to a screeching halt. ''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look about
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-->Waldorf entered the room with a tray to retrieve their glasses. "A Mister Roller Reel to see you, Miss," he said smoothly to Twilight. Right behind him came the scruffy teenage pony, camera mounted on his shoulder and saddlebags stuffed with film cartridges slung over his back. "Hey, Miss Twilight, I'm sorry I'm la--- wuhohoah." Roller came to a screeching halt.
''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look about her-- a [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicPinkiePie cute pink earth filly with a curly mane and a huge smile]], [[GenkiGirl all perky and bubbly]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRarity whoa, a dazzling white unicorn mare with a purple mane]][[TheBeautifulElite and serious high-class looks]], [[ProperLady definitely high maintenance, check out that diamond cutie mark]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash a sleek blue pegasus with a lightning bolt cutie mark and a rainbow mane]], [[Tomboy had to be an athlete of some kind]], you could tell she worked out-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy oh gosh, a yellow pegasus filly with a waterfall of pink mane and the biggest blue eyes he'd ever seen-- ]]''
It has to be kept in mind: Roller Reel was a colt. He was a teenage colt, one who had spent the early portion of that awkward stage not at the beach girlwatching or at school dances flirting with the local cheerleader fillies, but hiding from the press gangs in the basement of his home and slaving in King Sombra's mines. Fillies, in brief, had been less of a part of his life and more like a distant dreamlike concept. It had been intimidating enough working under, as a subordinate, [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicTwilightSparkle to the rather pretty protege of a Princess.]]
And now he had, without warning, walked in the middle of a room filled with what were routinely regarded, by those that commented on that sort of thing, as six of the hottest young mares in Equestria. He took one sweeping look at the roomful of beauties, heard their friendly 'helloes', and felt an emotion flush through his body he'd never felt before.
He gave them his suavest smile and smoothed his mane back. "Hey, ladies," he said, threw up an elbow to lean on the back of Twilight's chair, missed entirely and [[FacePlant fell flat on his face at their hooves.]]
-->Waldorf entered the room with a tray to retrieve their glasses. "A Mister Roller Reel to see you, Miss," he said smoothly to Twilight. Right behind him came the scruffy teenage pony, camera mounted on his shoulder and saddlebags stuffed with film cartridges slung over his back. "Hey, Miss Twilight, I'm sorry I'm la--- wuhohoah." Roller came to a screeching halt.
''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look about her-- a [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicPinkiePie cute pink earth filly with a curly mane and a huge smile]], [[GenkiGirl all perky and bubbly]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRarity whoa, a dazzling white unicorn mare with a purple mane]][[TheBeautifulElite and serious high-class looks]], [[ProperLady definitely high maintenance, check out that diamond cutie mark]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash a sleek blue pegasus with a lightning bolt cutie mark and a rainbow mane]], [[Tomboy had to be an athlete of some kind]], you could tell she worked out-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy oh gosh, a yellow pegasus filly with a waterfall of pink mane and the biggest blue eyes he'd ever seen-- ]]''
It has to be kept in mind: Roller Reel was a colt. He was a teenage colt, one who had spent the early portion of that awkward stage not at the beach girlwatching or at school dances flirting with the local cheerleader fillies, but hiding from the press gangs in the basement of his home and slaving in King Sombra's mines. Fillies, in brief, had been less of a part of his life and more like a distant dreamlike concept. It had been intimidating enough working under, as a subordinate, [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicTwilightSparkle to the rather pretty protege of a Princess.]]
And now he had, without warning, walked in the middle of a room filled with what were routinely regarded, by those that commented on that sort of thing, as six of the hottest young mares in Equestria. He took one sweeping look at the roomful of beauties, heard their friendly 'helloes', and felt an emotion flush through his body he'd never felt before.
He gave them his suavest smile and smoothed his mane back. "Hey, ladies," he said, threw up an elbow to lean on the back of Twilight's chair, missed entirely and [[FacePlant fell flat on his face at their hooves.]]
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* Chapter 22: 22: Roller's DistractedByTheSexy moment..... when he walks in the room where the Mane 6 are in.
-->Waldorf entered the room with a tray to retrieve their glasses. "A Mister Roller Reel to see you, Miss," he said smoothly to Twilight. Right behind him came the scruffy teenage pony, camera mounted on his shoulder and saddlebags stuffed with film cartridges slung over his back. "Hey, Miss Twilight, I'm sorry I'm la--- wuhohoah." Roller came to a screechinghalt.
halt. ''[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look about her-- her-- a [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicPinkiePie cute pink earth filly with a curly mane and a huge smile]], [[GenkiGirl all perky and bubbly]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRarity whoa, a dazzling white unicorn mare with a purple mane]][[TheBeautifulElite and serious high-class looks]], [[ProperLady definitely high maintenance, check out that diamond cutie mark]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash a sleek blue pegasus with a lightning bolt cutie mark and a rainbow mane]], [[Tomboy had to be an athlete of some kind]], you could tell she worked out-- out-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy oh gosh, a yellow pegasus filly with a waterfall of pink mane and the biggest blue eyes he'd ever seen-- ]]''
It has to be kept in mind: Roller Reel was a colt. He was a teenage colt, one who had spent the early portion of that awkward stage not at the beach girlwatching or at school dances flirting with the local cheerleader fillies, but hiding from the press gangs in the basement of his home and slaving in King Sombra's mines. Fillies, in brief, had been less of a part of his life and more like a distant dreamlike concept. It had been intimidating enough working under, as a subordinate, [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicTwilightSparkle to the rather pretty protege of a Princess.]]
]] And now he had, without warning, walked in the middle of a room filled with what were routinely regarded, by those that commented on that sort of thing, as six of the hottest young mares in Equestria. He took one sweeping look at the roomful of beauties, heard their friendly 'helloes', and felt an emotion flush through his body he'd never felt before.
before. He gave them his suavest smile and smoothed his mane back. "Hey, ladies," he said, threw up an elbow to lean on the back of Twilight's chair, missed entirely and [[FacePlant fell flat on his face at their hooves.]]
-->Waldorf entered the room with a tray to retrieve their glasses. "A Mister Roller Reel to see you, Miss," he said smoothly to Twilight. Right behind him came the scruffy teenage pony, camera mounted on his shoulder and saddlebags stuffed with film cartridges slung over his back. "Hey, Miss Twilight, I'm sorry I'm la--- wuhohoah." Roller came to a screeching
It has to be kept in mind: Roller Reel was a colt. He was a teenage colt, one who had spent the early portion of that awkward stage not at the beach girlwatching or at school dances flirting with the local cheerleader fillies, but hiding from the press gangs in the basement of his home and slaving in King Sombra's mines. Fillies, in brief, had been less of a part of his life and more like a distant dreamlike concept. It had been intimidating enough working under, as a subordinate, [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicTwilightSparkle to the rather pretty protege of a Princess.
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* Chapter 22: Roller's DistractedByTheSexy moment..... when he walks in the room where the Mane 6 are in.
-->Waldorf entered the room with a tray to retrieve their glasses. "A Mister Roller Reel to see you, Miss," he said smoothly to Twilight. Right behind him came the scruffy teenage pony, camera mounted on his shoulder and saddlebags stuffed with film cartridges slung over his back. "Hey, Miss Twilight, I'm sorry I'm la--- wuhohoah." Roller came to a screeching halt.
''--[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look about her-- a [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicPinkiePie cute pink earth filly with a curly mane and a huge smile]], [[GenkiGirl all perky and bubbly]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRarity whoa, a dazzling white unicorn mare with a purple mane]][[TheBeautifulElite and serious high-class looks]], [[ProperLady definitely high maintenance, check out that diamond cutie mark]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash a sleek blue pegasus with a lightning bolt cutie mark and a rainbow mane]], [[Tomboy had to be an athlete of some kind]], you could tell she worked out-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy oh gosh, a yellow pegasus filly with a waterfall of pink mane and the biggest blue eyes he'd ever seen-- ]]''
It has to be kept in mind: Roller Reel was a colt. He was a teenage colt, one who had spent the early portion of that awkward stage not at the beach girlwatching or at school dances flirting with the local cheerleader fillies, but hiding from the press gangs in the basement of his home and slaving in King Sombra's mines. Fillies, in brief, had been less of a part of his life and more like a distant dreamlike concept. It had been intimidating enough working under, as a subordinate, [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicTwilightSparkle to the rather pretty protege of a Princess.]]
And now he had, without warning, walked in the middle of a room filled with what were routinely regarded, by those that commented on that sort of thing, as six of the hottest young mares in Equestria. He took one sweeping look at the roomful of beauties, heard their friendly 'helloes', and felt an emotion flush through his body he'd never felt before.
He gave them his suavest smile and smoothed his mane back. "Hey, ladies," he said, threw up an elbow to lean on the back of Twilight's chair, missed entirely and [[FacePlant fell flat on his face at their hooves.]]
-->Waldorf entered the room with a tray to retrieve their glasses. "A Mister Roller Reel to see you, Miss," he said smoothly to Twilight. Right behind him came the scruffy teenage pony, camera mounted on his shoulder and saddlebags stuffed with film cartridges slung over his back. "Hey, Miss Twilight, I'm sorry I'm la--- wuhohoah." Roller came to a screeching halt.
''--[[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicApplejack An orange earth filly with a golden mane and an apple cutie mark]], [[NiceHat she was wearing a stetson]], [[YouthfulFreckles freckles on her cheeks]],[[AmazonianBeauty shapely yet muscular]], had to be a farm girl, she had that look about her-- a [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicPinkiePie cute pink earth filly with a curly mane and a huge smile]], [[GenkiGirl all perky and bubbly]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRarity whoa, a dazzling white unicorn mare with a purple mane]][[TheBeautifulElite and serious high-class looks]], [[ProperLady definitely high maintenance, check out that diamond cutie mark]]-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicRainbowDash a sleek blue pegasus with a lightning bolt cutie mark and a rainbow mane]], [[Tomboy had to be an athlete of some kind]], you could tell she worked out-- [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicFluttershy oh gosh, a yellow pegasus filly with a waterfall of pink mane and the biggest blue eyes he'd ever seen-- ]]''
It has to be kept in mind: Roller Reel was a colt. He was a teenage colt, one who had spent the early portion of that awkward stage not at the beach girlwatching or at school dances flirting with the local cheerleader fillies, but hiding from the press gangs in the basement of his home and slaving in King Sombra's mines. Fillies, in brief, had been less of a part of his life and more like a distant dreamlike concept. It had been intimidating enough working under, as a subordinate, [[Characters/FriendshipIsMagicTwilightSparkle to the rather pretty protege of a Princess.]]
And now he had, without warning, walked in the middle of a room filled with what were routinely regarded, by those that commented on that sort of thing, as six of the hottest young mares in Equestria. He took one sweeping look at the roomful of beauties, heard their friendly 'helloes', and felt an emotion flush through his body he'd never felt before.
He gave them his suavest smile and smoothed his mane back. "Hey, ladies," he said, threw up an elbow to lean on the back of Twilight's chair, missed entirely and [[FacePlant fell flat on his face at their hooves.]]
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* Pele's reaction to Duke Blueblood's plan to TakeOverTheWorld. She must have brushed up on that {{VideoGame: WorldOfWarcraft Troll}} language.
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* Pele's reaction to Duke Blueblood's plan to TakeOverTheWorld. She must have brushed up on that {{VideoGame: WorldOfWarcraft Troll}} [[WorldOfWarcraft Troll]] language.
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* Luna's frustration at King Triton being [[ObliviousToLove oblivious to Celestia's attraction to him]].
--> '''Princess Luna''': THOU JOLT HEADED LOON! SHE FAVORS THEE!
* Pele's reaction to Duke Blueblood's plan to TakeOverTheWorld. She must have brushed up on that {{VideoGame: WorldOfWarcraft Troll}} language.
--> '''Pele''': Oh, rule de worl', eh? Joo tink mebbe we were all gon' sit on our tails and let you rule?
--> '''Princess Luna''': THOU JOLT HEADED LOON! SHE FAVORS THEE!
* Pele's reaction to Duke Blueblood's plan to TakeOverTheWorld. She must have brushed up on that {{VideoGame: WorldOfWarcraft Troll}} language.
--> '''Pele''': Oh, rule de worl', eh? Joo tink mebbe we were all gon' sit on our tails and let you rule?
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* Nyx's {{Accidental Innuendo}}.
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* Nyx's {{Accidental Innuendo}}.AccidentalInnuendo. It also counts as an [[InnocentInnuendo innocent example]].
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** --->'''Nyx''': "EEEEEEEEE! Omigoshomigoshomigoshomigosh!!"
** Actually, Prince Blueblood's paranoia the whole time is pretty funny. Especially his {{Oh Crap!}} moment upon seeing Celestia get angry from Duke Blueblood insisting on the ArrangedMarriage contract.
** Actually, Prince Blueblood's paranoia the whole time is pretty funny. Especially his {{Oh Crap!}} moment upon seeing Celestia get angry from Duke Blueblood insisting on the ArrangedMarriage contract.
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** Actually, Prince Blueblood's paranoia the whole time is pretty funny. Especially his
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* Nyx's {{Accidental Innuendo}}.
--> '''Nyx''':"He may be all tough when he's running around with you, but he's all sweet and sensitive and vulnerable with me when we get his armor off. ...What? Whaaaat? What did I say?"
--> '''Nyx''':"He may be all tough when he's running around with you, but he's all sweet and sensitive and vulnerable with me when we get his armor off. ...What? Whaaaat? What did I say?"
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* Nyx's {{Accidental Innuendo}}.
--> '''Nyx''':"He may be all tough when he's running around with you, but he's all sweet and sensitive and vulnerable with me when we get his armor off. ...What? Whaaaat? What did I say?"
--> '''Nyx''':"He may be all tough when he's running around with you, but he's all sweet and sensitive and vulnerable with me when we get his armor off. ...What? Whaaaat? What did I say?"
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** Actually, Prince Blueblood's paranoia the whole time is pretty funny. Especially his {{OhCrap}} moment upon seeing Celestia get angry from Duke Blueblood insisting on the ArrangedMarriage contract.
** Actually, Prince Blueblood's paranoia the whole time is pretty funny. Especially his {{OhCrap}} moment upon seeing Celestia get angry from Duke Blueblood insisting on the ArrangedMarriage contract.
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** Actually, Prince Blueblood's paranoia the whole time is pretty funny. Especially his
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* Nyx's {{AccidentalInnuendo}}.{{Accidental Innuendo}}.
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* Nyx's {{AccidentalInnuendo}}.
--> '''Nyx''':"He may be all tough when he's running around with you, but he's all sweet and sensitive and vulnerable with me when we get his armor off. ...What? Whaaaat? What did I say?"
--> '''Nyx''':"He may be all tough when he's running around with you, but he's all sweet and sensitive and vulnerable with me when we get his armor off. ...What? Whaaaat? What did I say?"
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** Actually, Prince Blueblood's paranoia the whole time is pretty funny.
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** When Twilight accepts Ink Spot's proposal, Nyx hops around the room "like Pinkie Pie on triple espresso."
**--->'''Nyx''': "EEEEEEEEE! Omigoshomigoshomigoshomigosh!!"
** Actually, Prince Blueblood's paranoia the whole time is pretty funny. Especially his {{OhCrap}} moment upon seeing Celestia get angry from Duke Blueblood insisting on the ArrangedMarriage contract.
--->'''Prince Blueblood''': "Oh no no no! Not the fiery mane of doom again!"
**--->'''Nyx''': "EEEEEEEEE! Omigoshomigoshomigoshomigosh!!"
** Actually, Prince Blueblood's paranoia the whole time is pretty funny. Especially his {{OhCrap}} moment upon seeing Celestia get angry from Duke Blueblood insisting on the ArrangedMarriage contract.
--->'''Prince Blueblood''': "Oh no no no! Not the fiery mane of doom again!"
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* When Willow's scaring of Snips and Snails is revealed, Cheerilee doesn't believe them...until Willow demonstrates what he did. This goes on for several minutes and Scootaloo asks him to do it again.
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* Upon finding Level Head's tomb, Twilight starts reading the journals that describe the true Hearthwarming Day story. At one point in the story, Level Head starts discussing how his grandchild had a threesome with two of the other major figures in the story. Twilight then mentions that somebody had scribbled out the juicier details and written '''LIES, ALL LIES''' over it.
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-->'''[[spoiler:[[FailOSuckyname Sundae Sprinkles]]]]''': "Get me three of the lesser amethyst crystals, a tourmaline, some duct tape and a banana!"//
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* The end of "A Little Hearth Warming" is insanely funny. Nyx, being a classic little kid was worring about Santa not coming because of her nature. Then at the end she says, "Aww, man. This night is gonna last '''''FOREVER!'''''" Now if you remember [[FanFic/PastSins who]] [[FanFic/RealityChecksNyxverse she is]], you will find out the joke.
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* The end of "A Little Hearth Warming" is insanely funny. Nyx, being a classic little kid was worring worrying about Santa not coming because of her nature. Then at the end she says, "Aww, man. This night is gonna last '''''FOREVER!'''''" Now if you remember [[FanFic/PastSins who]] [[FanFic/RealityChecksNyxverse she is]], you will find out the joke.joke.
** Twilight certainly finds it hilarious, laughing hard enough to fall out of bed and wake her husband.
** Twilight certainly finds it hilarious, laughing hard enough to fall out of bed and wake her husband.
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* Princess Luna's tongue lashing of Triton [[spoiler: for making poor Nyx believe she killed hundreds when she caused Eternal Night in the original story. Very much needed after Nyx's emotional breakdown.]]
