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** Then Blake, who's been interrupted a lot trying to read her book, sees where this is going and puts her book down. Then she takes her lit candlebra, and blows it out (which also ''blows out the episode itself'')
* In a way, some of Weiss's lines are said with such blunt seriousness that it's hilarious:
--> (still holding the 'Dust for Dummies' pamphlet) "You really wanna start making things up to me? (Ruby says "Absolutely") Read this and don't ever speak to me again"
--> (referring to Ruby) "She's a hazard to my health!"
* In a way, some of Weiss's lines are said with such blunt seriousness that it's hilarious:
--> (still holding the 'Dust for Dummies' pamphlet) "You really wanna start making things up to me? (Ruby says "Absolutely") Read this and don't ever speak to me again"
--> (referring to Ruby) "She's a hazard to my health!"
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* Ruby leaping into Yang's arms when Weiss does a loud "You!" behind her.
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* Ruby leaping into Yang's arms when Weiss does a loud "You!" behind her.her, complete with "AHH! IT'S HAPPENING AGAIN!".
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* Ruby leaping into Yang's arms when Weiss does a loud "You!" behind her.
** [[CassandraTruth "Oh my God, you really exploded..."]]
** [[CassandraTruth "Oh my God, you really exploded..."]]
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-->'''Weiss''': [[SarcasmMode Yeah! And we can paint our nails, and try on clothes, and talk about cute boys, like Tall, Blond, and Scraggly over there! -points at Jaune-]]
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-->'''Weiss''': [[SarcasmMode Yeah! And we can paint our nails, and try on clothes, and talk about cute boys, like Tall, Blond, and and... Scraggly over there! there!]] -points at Jaune-]]Jaune-
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-->'''Weiss''': [[DeathGlare -Death Glare-]] NO.
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-->'''Weiss''': [[DeathGlare -Death Glare-]] NO.-DeathGlare- [[LittleNo No]].
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* Jaune in footy pajamas. ''With bunny slippers.''
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* Ruby and Yang arguing and getting into a BigBallOfViolence. With [[{{Catfight}} cat noises]].
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** Blake's "okay" afterwards has a hint of barely restrained amusement to it.
* Ruby and Yang arguing and getting into a BigBallOfViolence. With [[{{Catfight}}cat cat]] [[ThatPoorCat noises]].
* Ruby and Yang arguing and getting into a BigBallOfViolence. With [[{{Catfight}}
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* Weiss barging into the middle of Yang and Ruby's tussle.
-->'''Weiss:''' What is going on over here?! Can't you see some of us are trying to sleep?! ''(notices Ruby)''
-->'''Weiss and Yang:''' OH, NOT YOU AGAIN!
-->'''Weiss:''' What is going on over here?! Can't you see some of us are trying to sleep?! ''(notices Ruby)''
-->'''Weiss and Yang:''' OH, NOT YOU AGAIN!
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* [[CassandraTruth "Oh my God, you really exploded..."]]
-->'''Weiss''': (''getting faster and higher pitched with each word'') The Schnee Dust Company is not responsible for any injuries or damages sustained while operating a Schnee Dust Company product. Although not mandatory, the Schnee family highly encourages their customers to read and familiarize themselves with this easy-to-follow guide that describes applications, practices, and appeals.
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* Ruby points out that their father probably wouldn't approve of them sleeping in the same room with a bunch of boys. Yang looks the boys over and says ''she'' approves (though maybe not of Jaune's...).
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* Ruby points out that their father probably wouldn't approve of them sleeping in the same room with a bunch of boys. Yang looks the boys over and says ''she'' approves and purrs (though maybe not of Jaune's...).
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* Ruby almost introducing herself to Blake as [[EmbarrassingNickname Crater Face]] before she catches herself.
* Ruby and Yang arguing and getting into aBigBallOfViolence.
* [[CassandraTruth "Oh my God, you really exploded..."]]
BigBallOfViolence. With [[{{Catfight}} cat noises]].
* Ruby and Yang arguing and getting into a
* [[CassandraTruth "Oh my God, you really exploded..."]]
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* Ruby points out that their father probably wouldn't approve of them sleeping in the same room with a bunch of boys. Yang looks the boys over and says ''she'' approves.
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* Ruby points out that their father probably wouldn't approve of them sleeping in the same room with a bunch of boys. Yang looks the boys over and says ''she'' approves.approves (though maybe not of Jaune's...).
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* Jaune in footy pajamas. ''With bunny slippers.''Weiss handing Ruby a pamphlet for the Schnee Dust Company and talking about it [[MotorMouth so fast]] that Ruby can't understand her.
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** Afterwards, Jaune tries to hit on Weiss and fails miserably.
* Ruby points out that their father probably wouldn't approve of them sleeping in the same room with a bunch of boys. Yang looks the boys over and says ''she'' approves.
* Jaune in footy pajamas. ''With bunny slippers.''
* Ruby and Yang arguing and getting into a BigBallOfViolence.
* Ruby points out that their father probably wouldn't approve of them sleeping in the same room with a bunch of boys. Yang looks the boys over and says ''she'' approves.
* Jaune in footy pajamas. ''With bunny slippers.''
* Ruby and Yang arguing and getting into a BigBallOfViolence.
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-->'''Ruby''': [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Oh, wow, really?!]]
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-->'''Ruby''': [[ComicallyMissingThePoint [[SarcasmBlind Oh, wow, really?!]]
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* After Weiss and Ruby meet up again, Yang encourages them to start over. It goes as well as you'd expect.
-->'''Ruby''': Hello, Weiss! I'm Ruby! Wanna hang out? We could go shopping for school supplies!
-->'''Weiss''': [[SarcasmMode Yeah! And we can paint our nails, and try on clothes, and talk about cute boys, like Tall, Blond, and Scraggly over there! -points at Jaune-]]
-->'''Ruby''': [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Oh, wow, really?!]]
-->'''Weiss''': [[DeathGlare -Death Glare-]] NO.
-->'''Ruby''': Hello, Weiss! I'm Ruby! Wanna hang out? We could go shopping for school supplies!
-->'''Weiss''': [[SarcasmMode Yeah! And we can paint our nails, and try on clothes, and talk about cute boys, like Tall, Blond, and Scraggly over there! -points at Jaune-]]
-->'''Ruby''': [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Oh, wow, really?!]]
-->'''Weiss''': [[DeathGlare -Death Glare-]] NO.
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* Jaune in footy pajamas. ''With bunny slippers.''
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[[AC:Episode 1:]]
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[[AC:Episode 1:]]3:]]
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*"Great, now where I am supposed to find a nice, quirky girl to talk to?" *Immediately cue bright red and gold girl in a crowd of silhouettes*
*"Great, now where I am supposed to find a nice, quirky girl to talk to?" *Immediately cue bright red and gold girl in a crowd of silhouettes*
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* Ruby telling Ozpin that she was taught to use Crescent Rose by her uncle, doing so by saying "Oh, that's my uncle" in an Asian-sounding accent similar to the "Oh, that's my uncle!" gag in the Rooster Teeth Podcast.
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* Ruby telling Ozpin that she was taught to use Crescent Rose by her uncle, doing so by saying "Oh, that's my uncle" in an Asian-sounding accent ('justified' by her mouthful of cookies) similar to the "Oh, that's my uncle!" gag in the Rooster Teeth Podcast.
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* Ruby eats cookies in the funniest way possible. The eating animation is minimal to the point that the cookies just disappear when they are near her mouth. It's played for [[RuleOfFunny laughs]].
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* Ruby eats cookies in the funniest way possible. The eating animation is minimal to the point that the cookies just disappear [[http://i.minus.com/iQ9fBDpkxPDCb.gif disappear]] when they are near her mouth. It's played for [[RuleOfFunny laughs]].
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* How did the episode start? Vomit Boy...vomiting.
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* How did the episode start? [[EmbarrassingNickname Vomit Boy...Boy]][[EstablishingCharacterMoment ...vomiting.]]
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'''Ruby''': Get away from me, get away from me!
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'''Ruby''': Get away from me, get away from me, get away from me, get away from me!
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* Ruby telling Ozpin that she was taught to use Crescent Rose by her uncle, doing so by saying "Oh, that's my uncle" in an Asian-sounding accent similar to the "Oh, that's my uncle!" gag in the Rooster Teeth Podcast.
* The new students listen to a hologram recording of Glynda:
-->'''Yang''': Who's that?\\
'''Glynda''': [[TheTapeKnewYouWouldSayThat My name is Glynda Goodwitch.]]\\
'''Yang''': Oh.
-->'''Yang''': Who's that?\\
'''Glynda''': [[TheTapeKnewYouWouldSayThat My name is Glynda Goodwitch.]]\\
'''Yang''': Oh.
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* Ruby telling Ozpin that she was taught to use Crescent Rose by her uncle, doing so by saying "Oh, that's my uncle" in an Asian-sounding accent similar to the "Oh, that's my uncle!" gag in the Rooster Teeth Podcast.
* The new students listen to a hologram recording of Glynda:
-->'''Yang''': Who's that?\\
'''Glynda''': [[TheTapeKnewYouWouldSayThat My name is Glynda Goodwitch.]]\\
'''Yang''': Oh.
* The new students listen to a hologram recording of Glynda:
-->'''Yang''': Who's that?\\
'''Glynda''': [[TheTapeKnewYouWouldSayThat My name is Glynda Goodwitch.]]\\
'''Yang''': Oh.
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* The new students listen to a hologram recording of Glynda:
-->'''Yang''': Who's that?\\
'''Glynda''': [[TheTapeKnewYouWouldSayThat My name is Glynda Goodwitch.]]\\
'''Yang''': Oh.
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* The episode ends with both Ruby and Jaune getting lost and with nobody to turn to for directions. (Note that at the beginning there were still random passerbys in the background but eventually disappeared.)
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* The episode ends with both Ruby and Jaune getting lost and with nobody to turn to for directions. (Note that at the beginning there were still random passerbys in the background but they eventually disappeared.)
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* How did the episode start? Vomiting Boy...vomiting.
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* How did the episode start? Vomiting Vomit Boy...vomiting.
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-->'''Ruby''': (dizzily mumbles) I don't know what I'm doing... *plop*\\
'''Weiss''': [[RhetoricalQuestionBlunder What are you doing!?]]
'''Weiss''': [[RhetoricalQuestionBlunder What are you doing!?]]
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* Ruby reveals that she designed her own weapon. Consider that fact that she's a 15 year old girl and suddenly [[SwissArmyWeapon this explains]] [[RuleOfCool a lot]].
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* Ruby says she doesn't need friends because she has Yang, except Yang's friends and she [[MotorMouth quickly]] tells Ruby they are going to hang out. They run away, leaving Ruby in the dust, as well as so dizzy she falls over onto Weiss's luggage.
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* Ruby says she doesn't need friends because she has Yang, except Yang's friends arrive right then and she [[MotorMouth quickly]] tells Ruby they are going to hang out. They run away, leaving Ruby in the dust, as well as so dizzy she falls over onto Weiss's luggage.
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Yeah, that\'s not lazy animation. That\'s the fact that they simply don\'t have the time/resources to make a whole bunch of background character models.
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* The fact that all unnamed extras just look like black silhouettes, even when the main characters are touching them. What lazy animation.
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* Ruby says she doesn't need friends because she has Yang. Yang quickly grabs some random people and says they are her friends and they are going to hang out. They run away, leaving Ruby in the dust, as well as so dizzy she falls over onto Weiss's luggage.
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* Ruby says she doesn't need friends because she has Yang. Yang quickly grabs some random people and says they are her Yang, except Yang's friends and she [[MotorMouth quickly]] tells Ruby they are going to hang out. They run away, leaving Ruby in the dust, as well as so dizzy she falls over onto Weiss's luggage.
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** Then, in response to Weiss's over-dramatic 'dust is precious' rant (which blew up a lot of Dust), she has an explosive Dust-powered fire sneeze. [[AshFace Weiss is not amused]].
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** Then, in response to Weiss's over-dramatic 'dust is precious' rant (which blew threw up a lot of Dust), Dust into the air around them), she has an explosive Dust-powered fire sneeze. [[AshFace Weiss is not amused]].
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* Ruby Rose. SuperDeformed and being a FanGirl about weapons.
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* Ruby Rose. SuperDeformed SuperDeformed, floating and being a FanGirl about weapons.
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* How did the episode start? Vomiting Boy...vomiting.
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* Ruby and Jaune calling each other by their [[EmbarassingNickname embarrassing nicknames]] in the courtyard: Vomit Boy and Crater Face. Let's see if both sticks on.
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* Ruby and Jaune calling each other by their [[EmbarassingNickname [[EmbarrassingNickname embarrassing nicknames]] in the courtyard: Vomit Boy and Crater Face. Let's see if both sticks on.
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*Ruby and Jaune calling each other by their [[EmbarassingNickname embarrassing nicknames]] in the courtyard: Vomit Boy and Crater Face. Let's see if both sticks on.
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** Before that we have Jaune vs his collapsible shield. Winner: the shield.
* The episode ends with both Ruby and Jaune getting lost and with nobody to turn to for directions. (Note that at the beginning there were still random passerbys in the background but eventually disappeared.)
* The episode ends with both Ruby and Jaune getting lost and with nobody to turn to for directions. (Note that at the beginning there were still random passerbys in the background but eventually disappeared.)
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** And right afterwards when Yang asks if she's not happy with her own weapon, Ruby responds by ''cuddling with [[{{BFS}} Crescent]] [[{{BFG}} Rose]]''.
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** And right afterwards when Yang asks if she's not happy with her own weapon, Ruby responds by ''cuddling ''[[CompanionCube cuddling]] with [[{{BFS}} Crescent]] [[{{BFG}} Rose]]''.
