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* Sienna Khan has a lot of trouble with people who want her to demand Blake's return as her "negotiations" with Beacon.
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* Sienna Khan has a lot of trouble with people who want her to demand Blake's return as part of her "negotiations" with Beacon.
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* In Chapter 16, after Cinder accidentally knocks herself out, Jinn cheekily states that it was clearly all Jaune's "master plan".
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* In Chapter 16, after Cinder accidentally knocks herself out, Jinn cheekily states that it was clearly all part of Jaune's "master plan".
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* Jaune decides to troll Winter by pretending she has feelings for him while talking to Jacques. Winter pays him back by playing along and upping the ante.
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* Jaune decides to troll Winter by pretending she has feelings for him while talking to Jacques. Winter pays him back by playing along and upping the ante. It culminates with Jaune accusing Winter of [[BrainsAndBondage being into handcuffs]], resulting in Glynda doing a SpitTake and Ironwood choking on air.
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* When shoved into giving an on-the-spot speech, Jaune manages to sound like he's giving a normal speech about repairing Beacon, insult Winter and Ironwood three times, and make a reference to Ozpin's ResurrectiveImmortality without actually cueing anyone in. Whitley is in awe.
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* Sienna Khan has a lot of trouble with people who want her to demand Blake's return as part of her "negotiations" with Beacon.
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* Sienna Khan has a lot of trouble with people who want her to demand Blake's return as part of her "negotiations" with Beacon.
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* In Chapter 16, after Cinder accidentally knocks herself out, Jinn cheekily states that it was clearly all part of Jaune's "master plan".
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* In Chapter 16, after Cinder accidentally knocks herself out, Jinn cheekily states that it was clearly all part of Jaune's "master plan".
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** Hilariously, this also puts ''Cinder and Ozma'' as foils, being the hilariously incomprehensible primary opponent they face, who presumes that every single thing they do is PartOfThePlan.
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** Hilariously, this also puts ''Cinder and Ozma'' as foils, being the hilariously incomprehensible primary opponent they face, who presumes that every single thing they do is PartOfThePlan.AllAccordingToPlan.
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* Glynda is utterly furious at Blake going over Jaune's head and inviting her team to the fundraised hosted by Jacques Schnee - not because of her sabotaging an extremely important event just to see Weiss (or at least not ''just'' because of that) but because she added ''Torchwick'' to the guest list.
** Jaune and Glynda's CoolAndUnusualPunishment for Team [=RBY=], which consists of Glynda drilling them on upper-class etiquette by ''launching cutlery at them while quizzing them''. Glynda adds to Blake's punishment, as the one who forged the invitation, by [[HoistByHisOwnPetard forcing her to be Torchwick's chaperone for the night]].
** When Blake argues against having to be Torchwicks' chaperone with the justification that he's a criminal, Jaune responds that so is she - not because of her White Fang past, but because going through other peoples' files and forging signatures is a crime.
** Jaune and Glynda's CoolAndUnusualPunishment for Team [=RBY=], which consists of Glynda drilling them on upper-class etiquette by ''launching cutlery at them while quizzing them''. Glynda adds to Blake's punishment, as the one who forged the invitation, by [[HoistByHisOwnPetard forcing her to be Torchwick's chaperone for the night]].
** When Blake argues against having to be Torchwicks' chaperone with the justification that he's a criminal, Jaune responds that so is she - not because of her White Fang past, but because going through other peoples' files and forging signatures is a crime.
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* Chapter 60 has Yang have a BedmateReveal with Jinn after the exams. After making sure that they didn't sleep together ([[OpenMouthInsertFoot Oscar would have watched]]), Jinn responds to Blake's despair over her parent's [=PDA=] by revealing that she was conceived during doggy style... which implies that they ''all already knew that'' since Jinn can't communicate unless everyone liable to understand already knows what she's going to say.
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* Chapter 56 has Ironwood have a breakdown over how much Jaune gained over his stay in Atlas, raving about how he made cucks of them all and how he could probably get Ironwood fired, forcing him to ''also'' collect a contract at Beacon as if [[GottaCatchThemAll Jaune was trying to get everyone influential into his employ]].
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* Jaune challenges Salem to a duel to buy more time, with her staying overnight at Beacon - or rather, ''Ozma Sucks Academy'', as it has been officially renamed for the duration of the siege - if she loses, and her staying the night with Nicholas Arc if she wins. The winner wins through ring-out or the loser getting knocked out. Due to Salem's inhuman stamina, he can't knock her out, so Jaune does what any headmaster does when initiating someone into the academy - using the launch pads at the cliff to launch her into the Emerald Forest.
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* During the siege on Vale, we get a glimpse into Salem's mind... and it immediately establishes her as a {{Foil}} to Jaune in a hilarious manner. They're both the respected leaders of their own factions and are seen as intimidating masterminds... when they're both barely proficient at combat, getting thrown into situations they don't want to be in because of [[SignatureMove a single trait that they often use when faced with hardship]]; [[NoKillLikeOverkill Salem has her Grimm Army,]] [[ConsummateLiar and Jaune has his bluffing and cheap tricks]]. They're also both ''very'' aware of their weaknesses, and prefer to surround themselves with people who can do things for them to cover up their lack of skill.
** Hilariously, this also puts ''Cinder and Ozma'' as foils, being the hilariously incomprehensible primary opponent they face, who presumes that every single thing they do is PartOfThePlan.
** Hilariously, this also puts ''Cinder and Ozma'' as foils, being the hilariously incomprehensible primary opponent they face, who presumes that every single thing they do is PartOfThePlan.
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'''2nd Bar patron''': Peter Port. I still hear his voice in my nightmares, you know? How did I graduate?
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'''2nd Bar patron''': Peter Port. I still hear his voice in my nightmares, you know? How did I graduate?graduate?
* Chapter 82: To briefly summarize, ''everything''. Jaune's plan to get Salem to spare humanity is to convince her they're too entertaining to kill. To that end, he holds a party where the general rule is "throw everything at the wall and see what sticks":
** Oobleck's gift is books on almost every subject known to man, which Salem genuinely appreciates. Port follows it up with hours of movies and sitcoms, but with the endings and finales removed so that Salem would have to spare them to see how everything ends.
** Roman and Neo's contribution is every drug they could get their hands on, with Roman defending himself by swearing that only ''most'' of them are Class-A.
** Coco's idea, meanwhile, is to have every able man she could find perform a strip show for her - "every man" comes down to Taiyang, Qrow, and Clover. Naturally, Taiyang turns on the charm as normal, and Salem, Kali, and Willow all get incredibly into it while Glynda puts her head in her hands in shame.
* Chapter 83:
** Continuing his idea from last chapter, Jaune takes Salem to his room and introduces her to video games. She gets especially excited by the concept of [=RPGs=].
** Meanwhile, RWBY and Cinder finally discover where the Relic of Destruction is located, but before Cinder can turn on them, Blake gives her a letter from Jaune wherein he perfectly predicted her actions as always, convincing her to spare RWBY's lives. Later that night, Yang catches Blake burning somewhere around ''fifty'' identical letters filled with every possible action Cinder could've taken, including settling down as a farmer and attempting to kill Salem. Blake's only response is to say that Jaune truly predicted ''everything'' and then ask Yang to help her burn the rest.
* Chapter 84: The opening scene is Salem, drunk off her ass, watching a stand up comedian talking about the dangers of meeting your potential, all while Hazel attempts to get her to pay attention. When she finally talks to him, she reveals that she's seeing four of him and calls one of them [[VideoGame/AmongUs sus]], leaving Hazel saddened that she's now discovered memes.
* Chapter 82: To briefly summarize, ''everything''. Jaune's plan to get Salem to spare humanity is to convince her they're too entertaining to kill. To that end, he holds a party where the general rule is "throw everything at the wall and see what sticks":
** Oobleck's gift is books on almost every subject known to man, which Salem genuinely appreciates. Port follows it up with hours of movies and sitcoms, but with the endings and finales removed so that Salem would have to spare them to see how everything ends.
** Roman and Neo's contribution is every drug they could get their hands on, with Roman defending himself by swearing that only ''most'' of them are Class-A.
** Coco's idea, meanwhile, is to have every able man she could find perform a strip show for her - "every man" comes down to Taiyang, Qrow, and Clover. Naturally, Taiyang turns on the charm as normal, and Salem, Kali, and Willow all get incredibly into it while Glynda puts her head in her hands in shame.
* Chapter 83:
** Continuing his idea from last chapter, Jaune takes Salem to his room and introduces her to video games. She gets especially excited by the concept of [=RPGs=].
** Meanwhile, RWBY and Cinder finally discover where the Relic of Destruction is located, but before Cinder can turn on them, Blake gives her a letter from Jaune wherein he perfectly predicted her actions as always, convincing her to spare RWBY's lives. Later that night, Yang catches Blake burning somewhere around ''fifty'' identical letters filled with every possible action Cinder could've taken, including settling down as a farmer and attempting to kill Salem. Blake's only response is to say that Jaune truly predicted ''everything'' and then ask Yang to help her burn the rest.
* Chapter 84: The opening scene is Salem, drunk off her ass, watching a stand up comedian talking about the dangers of meeting your potential, all while Hazel attempts to get her to pay attention. When she finally talks to him, she reveals that she's seeing four of him and calls one of them [[VideoGame/AmongUs sus]], leaving Hazel saddened that she's now discovered memes.
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* In an omake in the sequel, Penny smuggles Weiss letters from her team via a storage compartment in her butt. While Weiss is retrieving them, Winter walks in and sees her sister apparently fisting another girl.
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* In an omake in the sequel, Penny smuggles Weiss letters from her team via a storage compartment in her butt. While Weiss is retrieving them, Winter walks in and sees her sister apparently fisting another girl. Better yet, it is implied later that this scene was canon.
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* In Chapter 18, Beacon's staff all celebrate Jaune getting one over on Winter and getting the Dust for the Vytal Festival by all getting mind-numbingly drunk, resulting in this gem as Jaune attempts to guide Glynda back to her room;
--> With a short sigh he pushed open the staffroom door.\\
"Chug – chug – chug!" Peter chanted, standing topless on a table as he held an industrial-sized kettle over the Headmaster, who was on his knees, his mouth below the spout. Bartholomew was cheering them both on, waving his tie around his head like some kind of bola.\\
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--> With a short sigh he pushed open the staffroom door.\\
"Chug – chug – chug!" Peter chanted, standing topless on a table as he held an industrial-sized kettle over the Headmaster, who was on his knees, his mouth below the spout. Bartholomew was cheering them both on, waving his tie around his head like some kind of bola.\\
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'''Glynda''': Not yet. (bites her lip) [[DistractedByTheSexy Not yet...]]
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'''Glynda''': Not yet. (bites her lip) [[DistractedByTheSexy Not yet...]]]]
* Chapter 66: Jaune is summoned to explain exactly how Salem's latest invasion was repelled...in front of several important politicians, and several television cameras. Being no expert on Grimm, it seems as though there is nothing that sounds remotely plausible for Jaune to say this time...so he brings in the one man who can tell the absolute truth and it would still sound completely unbelievable...Professor Port. Everyone, including the councilmen and everyone watching TV zone out because he's just so BORING.
--> '''Bar patron, watching the live broadcast''': Oh bloody hell! He's still alive? He's still ''teaching!?'' Gah. Get it off!\\
'''2nd Bar patron''': Peter Port. I still hear his voice in my nightmares, you know? How did I graduate?
* Chapter 66: Jaune is summoned to explain exactly how Salem's latest invasion was repelled...in front of several important politicians, and several television cameras. Being no expert on Grimm, it seems as though there is nothing that sounds remotely plausible for Jaune to say this time...so he brings in the one man who can tell the absolute truth and it would still sound completely unbelievable...Professor Port. Everyone, including the councilmen and everyone watching TV zone out because he's just so BORING.
--> '''Bar patron, watching the live broadcast''': Oh bloody hell! He's still alive? He's still ''teaching!?'' Gah. Get it off!\\
'''2nd Bar patron''': Peter Port. I still hear his voice in my nightmares, you know? How did I graduate?
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* This story plays with the idea of Jaune's [[MrFanservice inert manliness]] as evident in the omake of chapter 36. An alternate take of his fight with Winter sees him taking her on himself rather than Neo disguised as Jaune, which for the most part starts pretty similarly, up until the part where he casts his shield aside.
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* This story plays with the idea of Jaune's [[MrFanservice inert innate manliness]] as evident in the omake of chapter 36. An alternate take of his fight with Winter sees him taking her on himself rather than Neo disguised as Jaune, which for the most part starts pretty similarly, up until the part where he casts his shield aside.
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* Chapter 59 sees a [[CallBack callback to chapter 36 from the preceding story]], where Jaune's [[MrFanservice inert manliness]] [[WeNeedADistraction is once again called upon during desperate times.]] Salem's approach is halted by Jaune's presence upon an elevated stage, and once Jaune gets going...
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* Chapter 59 sees a [[CallBack callback to chapter 36 from the preceding story]], where Jaune's [[MrFanservice inert innate manliness]] [[WeNeedADistraction is once again called upon during desperate times.]] Salem's approach is halted by Jaune's presence upon an elevated stage, and once Jaune gets going...
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* In the chapter 36 omake, Raven asks for Summer's help collecting her pay from her part time job. Summer learns the hard way that Raven is running a protection racket in Vale.
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* In the chapter 36 omake, Raven asks for Summer's help collecting her pay from her part time job. Summer learns the hard way that Raven is running a protection racket in Vale.Vale.
* While planning the midterms, Glynda says they need all the help they can get. When Willow offers to help, Glynda [[NotHyperbole immediately hires her]]. She also gets Neo on board by offering to let her expose and humiliate anyone she catches cheating.
* While planning the midterms, Glynda says they need all the help they can get. When Willow offers to help, Glynda [[NotHyperbole immediately hires her]]. She also gets Neo on board by offering to let her expose and humiliate anyone she catches cheating.
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* After deciding to use the Atlas battleship that was crashed into Beacon as a new dorm wing, Jaune replies to Ironwood's demands for it to be returned with, "Battleship? What battleship?"
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* After deciding to use the Atlas battleship that was crashed into Beacon as a new dorm wing, Jaune replies to Ironwood's demands for it to be returned with, "Battleship? "[[ImplausibleDeniability Battleship?]] [[RunningGag What battleship?"battleship?]]"
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'''Jaune''': Please.
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'''Jaune''': Please.
[[HypocriticalHumor Please]].
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-->'''Jaune''': Sure. [[SureLetsGoWithThat Sure]]. [[DramaticIrony Why not.not]].
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** It's later shown that Ironwood has assigned an entire team to crack the code in the newest book in the series.
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* After capturing Ilia with her own tent, Neo takes to hitting her repeatedly with her umbrella. But between the fact it's an umbrella and how thick the tent is, Jaune compares it to being beaten to death with a foam bat.
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* After capturing Ilia with her own tent, Neo takes to hitting her repeatedly with her umbrella. But between the fact it's an umbrella and how thick the tent is, Jaune compares it to being beaten to death with a foam bat.bat.
* In chapter 36, Jaune asks Ozpin for advice on how to deal with Cinder. Ozpin suggests firing her out of a cannon and into the sun. Yes, he's still a little bitter about her killing him.
* Ilia is interrogated by Blake expounding exactly how disappointed she is with the chameleon Faunus.
* In the chapter 36 omake, Raven asks for Summer's help collecting her pay from her part time job. Summer learns the hard way that Raven is running a protection racket in Vale.
* In chapter 36, Jaune asks Ozpin for advice on how to deal with Cinder. Ozpin suggests firing her out of a cannon and into the sun. Yes, he's still a little bitter about her killing him.
* Ilia is interrogated by Blake expounding exactly how disappointed she is with the chameleon Faunus.
* In the chapter 36 omake, Raven asks for Summer's help collecting her pay from her part time job. Summer learns the hard way that Raven is running a protection racket in Vale.
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** In the following chapter, Winter comes to the conclusion that the bondage themed smut amounts to Jaune playing on Cinder's intelligence and lust to convince her to submit to him and help him take control of Atlas: specifically translating the female protagonist having a "phallus hard as steel" placed in her hand to mean Cinder having "Iron wood" in her grasp.
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** In the following chapter, Winter comes to the conclusion that the bondage themed smut amounts to Jaune playing on Cinder's intelligence and lust to convince her to submit to him and help him take control of Atlas: specifically translating the female protagonist having a "phallus hard as steel" placed in her hand to mean Cinder having "Iron wood" in her grasp.grasp.
* After capturing Ilia with her own tent, Neo takes to hitting her repeatedly with her umbrella. But between the fact it's an umbrella and how thick the tent is, Jaune compares it to being beaten to death with a foam bat.
* After capturing Ilia with her own tent, Neo takes to hitting her repeatedly with her umbrella. But between the fact it's an umbrella and how thick the tent is, Jaune compares it to being beaten to death with a foam bat.
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* After Cinder's 180 in her attitude in general and towards Jaune in particular, Winter and Ironwood decide Jaune somehow sent her a coded message in the smut book that Winter provided her. Ironwood insists Winter get her book and read through it carefully to decipher the hidden message.
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* After Cinder's 180 in her attitude in general and towards Jaune in particular, Winter and Ironwood decide Jaune somehow sent her a coded message in the smut book that Winter provided her. Ironwood insists Winter get her book and read through it carefully to decipher the hidden message.message.
** In the following chapter, Winter comes to the conclusion that the bondage themed smut amounts to Jaune playing on Cinder's intelligence and lust to convince her to submit to him and help him take control of Atlas: specifically translating the female protagonist having a "phallus hard as steel" placed in her hand to mean Cinder having "Iron wood" in her grasp.
** In the following chapter, Winter comes to the conclusion that the bondage themed smut amounts to Jaune playing on Cinder's intelligence and lust to convince her to submit to him and help him take control of Atlas: specifically translating the female protagonist having a "phallus hard as steel" placed in her hand to mean Cinder having "Iron wood" in her grasp.
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* Cinder proves to be so delusional that she's convinced herself Jaune desires her and [[WeCanRuleTogether wants to rule the world together with her]].
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* Cinder proves to be so delusional that she's convinced herself Jaune desires her and [[WeCanRuleTogether wants to rule the world together with her]].her]].
* After Cinder's 180 in her attitude in general and towards Jaune in particular, Winter and Ironwood decide Jaune somehow sent her a coded message in the smut book that Winter provided her. Ironwood insists Winter get her book and read through it carefully to decipher the hidden message.
* After Cinder's 180 in her attitude in general and towards Jaune in particular, Winter and Ironwood decide Jaune somehow sent her a coded message in the smut book that Winter provided her. Ironwood insists Winter get her book and read through it carefully to decipher the hidden message.
