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* An official looking person comes into the lab, and Professor Oak asks if he's from the government. Offended, he asks:
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-->'''Delia''': [[BluntYes Well, yes actually.]]
* The official explains that he represents Pokemon TV, and wants to purchase the exclusive rights to film and air Gary Oak and Ash Ketchum. Professor Oak was initially going to decline, mentally noting that he is resistant to corporate attacks, but then:
-->'''Official''': Did I mention the generous monetary compensation?
** And just like that, Professor Oak agreed after noting that due to limited government funding, ''monetary'' attacks are super effective against him.
-->'''Official''': Do I look like a tax collector to you?!
-->'''Delia''': [[BluntYes Well, yes actually.]]
* The official explains that he represents Pokemon TV, and wants to purchase the exclusive rights to film and air Gary Oak and Ash Ketchum. Professor Oak was initially going to decline, mentally noting that he is resistant to corporate attacks, but then:
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* Bulbasaur has many titles. One of them however, isn't very dignified, Bulbasaur the Sap Giver. He dreads the day Heracross will rejoin the team.
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* Ash attempts to [[spoiler: release Lucario from Aaron's staff]]. It's as successful as his attempts to teach his Unovan team Counter Shield.
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* When James brings up Juan in his conversation with Giovanni, Giovanni gets a haunted look. Apparently, he does not have fond memories of the Hoenn gym leader and after the call ends, [[INeedAFreakingDrink Giovanni immediately goes for some alcohol]], mentally cursing Juan while doing so.
* When Bulbasaur asks why Ash's Unovan captures didn't utilise Counter Shield, Ash {{Flashback}}s to the disastrous results. In particular, Oshawott got very dizzy, Tepig ended up on his back and couldn't get back up, and Snivy {{Death Glare}}s him.
* When Bulbasaur asks why Ash's Unovan captures didn't utilise Counter Shield, Ash {{Flashback}}s to the disastrous results. In particular, Oshawott got very dizzy, Tepig ended up on his back and couldn't get back up, and Snivy {{Death Glare}}s him.
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* When Gary questions why he and Ash are testing the H.O.P.E. gloves instead of the more elite trainers, Professor Oak's answer includes him not having hand molds of those trainers while he does have Gary's and Ash's. Gary's response:
-->'''Gary''': When did you get a mold of my hand!? Or Ash's for that matter.
-->'''Gary''': When did you get a mold of my hand!? Or Ash's for that matter.
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* While in Orre, as part of being covert, Giovanni makes one of his grunts where clothes a grandparent would be proud of, that is, ''a hand sewn Mareep sweater, good slacks and dress shoes, and it causes the grunt no small amount of discomfort''.
* After a phone call with Jessie, James and Meowth, Giovanni really realises the fate of his organisation is dependent on those three. [[INeedAFreakingDrink He copes with alcohol]].
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* While running from a flock of Spearows and Fearows, Ash uses Dexter to find information that might help. All Dexter gives are details on how dangerous they are and eventually, Ash gives up.
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* Lt. Surge is introduced and he's such a LargeHam. And apparently, his portrayal was so well received it convinced the author to go the extra mile in fleshing out the canon gym leaders.
* Dexter realises Paul's Pokedex has no personality, so what does he do? He hacks it and gives it a Valley Girl personality!
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* Ash's NoSenseOfDirection trait continues. Though Dexter has a navigation system, it doesn't help:
-->'''Dexter''': You could just follow my directions, you know. I am a GPS.
-->'''Ash''': I did, we ended up here.
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* When Ash tries searching for a Gyarados, Dexter describes all the ways Gyarados are dangerous, and becomes increasingly unsubtle until he outright says what Ash is doing is suicidal and requests to be removed from his person so Dexter himself doesn't get eaten.
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* Ash, while thinking about how some gyms have odd challenges to fight in them, starts to imagine possible scenarios in which he may have to face. They are all fairly funny, but the Chuck one stands out.
-->'''Mental Chuck'''You've got to beat my Machoke in a thumb war'''': [[ARareSentence Behind him, his Machoke flexed his thumbs threateningly.]]
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As a fic based on Ashes of the Past, Reset ''Fanfic/AshesOfThePast'', ''Fanfic/PokemonResetBloodlines'' is quite capable of creating a few good jokes along the way.
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* Apparently, Dexter hacked Paul's Pokedex so it would talk like ValleyGirl, and it's ''hilarious'':
-->'''Paul's Pokedex''' ''(while scanning a Glalie)'': Glalie, like, the Face Pokemon! It, like, totally freezes its prey, and then, like, eats it slowly. OMG it's totally horrible!
-->'''Paul's Pokedex''' ''(while scanning an Abomasnow)'': Abomasnow, like, the Forst Tree Pokemon. It makes snow which is SNOW cool! OMG, ya now the people who have Abomasnow have to, like, tell the school districts nearby that they do, 'cause reasons!
-->'''Paul's Pokedex''' ''(while scanning a Glalie)'': Glalie, like, the Face Pokemon! It, like, totally freezes its prey, and then, like, eats it slowly. OMG it's totally horrible!
-->'''Paul's Pokedex''' ''(while scanning an Abomasnow)'': Abomasnow, like, the Forst Tree Pokemon. It makes snow which is SNOW cool! OMG, ya now the people who have Abomasnow have to, like, tell the school districts nearby that they do, 'cause reasons!
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* Thanks to being a massive DeadpanSnarker, Dexter is a fountain of this. He even defines his main function as "Providing Ash with battle advice and witty commentary"
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** Arceus also tells Ash, comnpletely nonchalant, that he will not remember meeting him in the new timeline, and that he might try to kill Ash if the two of them meet again.
-->'''Arceus''': No offense.
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* Dexter's potshots at the Seansational Sisters and their out of shape Pokemon. Gems include:
-->'''Dexter''': Cloyster, the Bivalve Pokemon. Cloyster's armor, when in good condition, can whistand most modern armed explosives. When poorly, kept, say by a certain trio of former Toddler and Tiara's stars, a simple Focus Punch should be able to shatter it.
-->'''Dexter''': Poliwrath, the Tadpole Pokemon. One of the two evolutions of Poliwhirl. A fit Poliwrath is said to be able to cross entire oceans. Yours...really shouldn't attempt that.
**Even better, when Poliwrath is described as one of two possible divergent evolutions, Daisy is completely surprised.
-->'''Dexter''': Cloyster, the Bivalve Pokemon. Cloyster's armor, when in good condition, can whistand most modern armed explosives. When poorly, kept, say by a certain trio of former Toddler and Tiara's stars, a simple Focus Punch should be able to shatter it.
-->'''Dexter''': Poliwrath, the Tadpole Pokemon. One of the two evolutions of Poliwhirl. A fit Poliwrath is said to be able to cross entire oceans. Yours...really shouldn't attempt that.
**Even better, when Poliwrath is described as one of two possible divergent evolutions, Daisy is completely surprised.
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