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* When the group eventually meets Gladion, Diana decided to jump into battle and pet Type-Null because she wanted to find out what kind of Pokemon Type-Null was, which earned her a good scolding from Gladion.
** By the end of this battle, Hau and Eli are officially in a shipping war with Rotom because Hau and Eli shipped Diana with Gladion while Rotom shipped Diana with Ilima.
** By the end of this battle, Hau and Eli are officially in a shipping war with Rotom because Hau and Eli shipped Diana with Gladion while Rotom shipped Diana with Ilima.
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* Diana JumpedAtTheCall for the island trials. Why? She likes sparkly things and Z-Crystals are sparkly enough for her.
* Diana's reaction to hearing Professor Kukui to goad his Pokemon to attack him.
--> '''Diana''': I think I'm going to like my new boss. He gets me.
* The group meets a Tauros blocking the road.
--> '''Elli''': Well, THAT'S a roadblock.
--> '''Lillie''': We were only going as far as the Trainer's school, anyway, someone else can deal with that, right?
--> '''Diana''': Unless we have to come back and deal with it later.
--> '''Rotom''': [[LampshadeHanging What do you think we are]], [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall video game protagonist?]]
--> '''Elli''': ARE we?
* Diana's reaction to hearing Professor Kukui to goad his Pokemon to attack him.
--> '''Diana''': I think I'm going to like my new boss. He gets me.
* The group meets a Tauros blocking the road.
--> '''Elli''': Well, THAT'S a roadblock.
--> '''Lillie''': We were only going as far as the Trainer's school, anyway, someone else can deal with that, right?
--> '''Diana''': Unless we have to come back and deal with it later.
--> '''Rotom''': [[LampshadeHanging What do you think we are]], [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall video game protagonist?]]
--> '''Elli''': ARE we?
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* Right at the very first chapter, we learn that Diana and her family are cursed with supernatural abilities. Diana's mother is BornLucky, her grandfather survived natural disasters more than once. Her cousin, Elio? Everything he touches will be caught on fire in mere seconds. It's to a point that he is infamous for it that they refer to burned objects as having been "Elli'd". Quite an IronicName, since his surname is ''Frost''.
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Boy, the fact that we try to count them is just showing how much funny moments exist in this series.
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* Proton wants the bazooka, but the grunts brought him a Rattata nicknamed Bazooka.
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* Proton wants the bazooka, but the grunts brought him a Rattata nicknamed Bazooka.''the Bazooka''.
* Giovanni is a doting parent even as Silver rebels against him.
--> '''Petrel''': But sir, don't you remember when your son was four years old and you brought him to work? [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking He called Team Rocket 'stupid,' threatened to burn our base to the ground, and ordered a pizza on your business phone]].
--> '''Giovanni''': I know, and I have never been more proud of him.
* Giovanni is a doting parent even as Silver rebels against him.
--> '''Petrel''': But sir, don't you remember when your son was four years old and you brought him to work? [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking He called Team Rocket 'stupid,' threatened to burn our base to the ground, and ordered a pizza on your business phone]].
--> '''Giovanni''': I know, and I have never been more proud of him.
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* How does Team Rocket deal with Sabrina and render her unavailable to deal with them? [[spoiler:[[AMindIsATerribleThingToRead Have themselves reading and recite M-Rated fics on their minds]]]].
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--> '''Red''': Hey, Brock? Can we have a rematch sometime? I want to try that now.
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--> '''Red''': That's a stupid idea. (Turns to Brock) Hey, Brock? Can we have a rematch sometime? I want to try that now.
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--> Red: I'm a Pokedex carrier, how much trouble can I get into?
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--> Red: '''Red''': I'm a Pokedex carrier, how much trouble can I get into?
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* Red's response to Brock telling him to be careful. To anyone who knows the ForegoneConclusion that Red will be famous, Red is basically TemptingFate.
--> Red: I'm a Pokedex carrier, how much trouble can I get into?
--> Red: I'm a Pokedex carrier, how much trouble can I get into?
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* Red pulling a LoopholeAbuse by avoiding the warm up trainers... with Brock struggling not to laugh.
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* Red pulling a LoopholeAbuse by avoiding the warm up trainers... with Brock struggling not to laugh.laugh because he imagined them pulling that on [[EpicFail Sabrina and Misty's gym]] (Misty less so, but still).
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--> Leaf: How dramatic.
--> Red: And entirely unnecessary,
--> Leaf: I liked him better with his shirt on.
--> Red: We all did.
--> Red: And entirely unnecessary,
--> Leaf: I liked him better with his shirt on.
--> Red: We all did.
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--> Leaf: '''Leaf''': How dramatic.
-->Red: '''Red''': And entirely unnecessary,
-->Leaf: '''Leaf''': I liked him better with his shirt on.
-->Red: '''Red''': We all did.
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--> Leaf: Maybe it was because both of us chose starters super-effective against Rock-types, I mean, it's not like you brought a Pikachu in here and tried to wet the Onix down with a sprinkler.
--> Red: Hey, Brock? Can we have a rematch sometime? I want to try that now.
--> Brock: You want to try beating my Onix with a Pikachu and a sprinkler?
--> Red: Some kid did it on TV.
--> Brock: No. The League already put a don't-try-this-at-home disclaimer on that episode.
--> Red: Hey, Brock? Can we have a rematch sometime? I want to try that now.
--> Brock: You want to try beating my Onix with a Pikachu and a sprinkler?
--> Red: Some kid did it on TV.
--> Brock: No. The League already put a don't-try-this-at-home disclaimer on that episode.
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--> Leaf: '''Leaf''': Maybe it was because both of us chose starters super-effective against Rock-types, I mean, it's not like you brought a Pikachu in here and tried to wet the Onix down with a sprinkler.
-->Red: '''Red''': Hey, Brock? Can we have a rematch sometime? I want to try that now.
-->Brock: '''Brock''': You want to try beating my Onix with a Pikachu and a sprinkler?
-->Red: '''Red''': Some kid did it on TV.
-->Brock: '''Brock''': No. The League already put a don't-try-this-at-home disclaimer on that episode.episode.
** This got Leaf interested.
--> '''Leaf''': Why? What have Gym Leaders done that made the disclaimers a thing?
--> '''Brock''': Not all of it. It's the challengers.
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** This got Leaf interested.
--> '''Leaf''': Why? What have Gym Leaders done that made the disclaimers a thing?
--> '''Brock''': Not all of it. It's the challengers.
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* Red pulling a LoopholeAbuse by avoiding the warm up trainers... with Brock struggling not to laugh.
* Red and Leaf's reaction to Brock taking off his shirt.
--> Leaf: How dramatic.
--> Red: And entirely unnecessary,
--> Leaf: I liked him better with his shirt on.
--> Red: We all did.
* ''This'', which amounts as such a big TakeThat to the Pokemon Anime.
--> Leaf: Maybe it was because both of us chose starters super-effective against Rock-types, I mean, it's not like you brought a Pikachu in here and tried to wet the Onix down with a sprinkler.
--> Red: Hey, Brock? Can we have a rematch sometime? I want to try that now.
--> Brock: You want to try beating my Onix with a Pikachu and a sprinkler?
--> Red: Some kid did it on TV.
--> Brock: No. The League already put a don't-try-this-at-home disclaimer on that episode.
* Red and Leaf's reaction to Brock taking off his shirt.
--> Leaf: How dramatic.
--> Red: And entirely unnecessary,
--> Leaf: I liked him better with his shirt on.
--> Red: We all did.
* ''This'', which amounts as such a big TakeThat to the Pokemon Anime.
--> Leaf: Maybe it was because both of us chose starters super-effective against Rock-types, I mean, it's not like you brought a Pikachu in here and tried to wet the Onix down with a sprinkler.
--> Red: Hey, Brock? Can we have a rematch sometime? I want to try that now.
--> Brock: You want to try beating my Onix with a Pikachu and a sprinkler?
--> Red: Some kid did it on TV.
--> Brock: No. The League already put a don't-try-this-at-home disclaimer on that episode.
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* The Forest Gods make a return! Except...
--> '''Bug Catcher''': (Runs past Red and Leaf in fear) Run for your lives! The Forest Gods are angry!"
--> '''Leaf''': (Confused) That's it?
--> '''Red''': We were missing someone talking about the forest gods? [[OverlyLongGag A joke that should]] [[BreakingTheFourthWall be dead by now]]?
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* From the author's chapter headline notes.
--> 15 Uses for a Legendary Pokémon: A book by Ethan that no one should take seriously.
--> 15 Uses for a Legendary Pokémon: A book by Ethan that no one should take seriously.
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* The Happy birthday special to commemorate the six year anniversary of the series has a few.
** Hilda's taste in supernatural movies due to her CelebrityCrush with Grimsley is being questioned on and her Chandelure has this to say which amounts to be a TakeThat to [[{{Literature/Twilight}} a certain vampire and werewolf romance story]].
--> '''Chandelure''': Plenty of guys like that, but you went for the vampire and the werewolf. Congratulations on turning your personal life into a bad supernatural romance novel.
** Bianca winning the card game by copying ''Hugh''.
** The dark ritual play pretend between N and Hilda.
** Hilda's taste in supernatural movies due to her CelebrityCrush with Grimsley is being questioned on and her Chandelure has this to say which amounts to be a TakeThat to [[{{Literature/Twilight}} a certain vampire and werewolf romance story]].
--> '''Chandelure''': Plenty of guys like that, but you went for the vampire and the werewolf. Congratulations on turning your personal life into a bad supernatural romance novel.
** Bianca winning the card game by copying ''Hugh''.
** The dark ritual play pretend between N and Hilda.
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* N's Zoroark, ShipperOnDeck extraordinaire, urges N to confess.
--> '''Zoroark''': Just do the sappy love-confession thing already, Just say, 'Hilda, my darling, I have never seen a creature more stunning than you are. Become my mate, no, my queen, and we will live with Pokémon and Disney movies and all the Pecha Berry smoothies you desire.' That might get her.
--> '''N''': That isn't what I was getting at, Zoroark.
--> '''Zoroark''': Just do the sappy love-confession thing already, Just say, 'Hilda, my darling, I have never seen a creature more stunning than you are. Become my mate, no, my queen, and we will live with Pokémon and Disney movies and all the Pecha Berry smoothies you desire.' That might get her.
--> '''N''': That isn't what I was getting at, Zoroark.
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The shadow monster didn't blink.
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--> The shadow monster didn't blink.
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** In the Spear Pillar, they do this again [[ForTheLulz just to see Mars pissed off]].
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* Cyrus's reaction to Giratina's appearance.
--> '''Cyrus''': You weren't invited! I have Dialga and Palkia. There is nothing you can do!
The shadow monster didn't blink.
--> '''Cyrus''': [[SkewedPriorities I have even prepared a song for -]]
--> With a loud, unholy shriek, the shadow monster pounced.
--> '''Cyrus''': You weren't invited! I have Dialga and Palkia. There is nothing you can do!
The shadow monster didn't blink.
--> '''Cyrus''': [[SkewedPriorities I have even prepared a song for -]]
--> With a loud, unholy shriek, the shadow monster pounced.
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--> '''Dawn''': Loyalty to what? Bad fashion choices?"
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--> '''Dawn''': Loyalty to what? Bad fashion choices?"choices?
* Lucas and Dawn acting like SickeningSweethearts in front of Mars when she called them a couple (Actually TheyDo, but not to a SickeningSweethearts level).
** In the Spear Pillar, they do this again [[ForTheLulz just to see Mars pissed off]].
--> '''Dawn''': Kick her butt, honey.
--> '''Lucas''': Already on it, sunshine.
--> Jupiter and Barry wore the same expression of "When did this happen?" but Mars threw her hands up to the sky.
* Lucas and Dawn acting like SickeningSweethearts in front of Mars when she called them a couple (Actually TheyDo, but not to a SickeningSweethearts level).
** In the Spear Pillar, they do this again [[ForTheLulz just to see Mars pissed off]].
--> '''Dawn''': Kick her butt, honey.
--> '''Lucas''': Already on it, sunshine.
--> Jupiter and Barry wore the same expression of "When did this happen?" but Mars threw her hands up to the sky.
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* Calem and Serena meets a Phanthump and Pumpkaboo who are good friends and want to evolve together. Calem doesn't get what the Phanthump wants till one of his Pokemon hinted it to him, he refused, and Phanthump used Perish Song like it's on tantrum.
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* How Calem caught his Eevee. Well, she jumped in between the Poke ball he meant to use for a Golett, trying to greet and got caught by that very same ball.
* Calem and Serena meets a Phanthump and Pumpkaboo who are good friends and want to evolve together. Calem doesn't get what the Phanthump wants till one of his Pokemon hinted it to him, he refused, and Phanthump used Perish Song like it's on tantrum. Pumpkaboo following suit.
* Calem and Serena meets a Phanthump and Pumpkaboo who are good friends and want to evolve together. Calem doesn't get what the Phanthump wants till one of his Pokemon hinted it to him, he refused, and Phanthump used Perish Song like it's on tantrum. Pumpkaboo following suit.
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* Lyra being joked as dressing up as a pre-teen Genderbent Mario. A nod to how some video game fans thought of Lyra's design.
* All three starters from Professor Elm are too scared of Ethan and ended up attacking him. Leading to Professor Elm to give him starters who have yet to finish rehabilitation due to their odd circumstances of growing up, and chose a bite happy Chikorita. ItMakesSenseInContext.
* All three starters from Professor Elm are too scared of Ethan and ended up attacking him. Leading to Professor Elm to give him starters who have yet to finish rehabilitation due to their odd circumstances of growing up, and chose a bite happy Chikorita. ItMakesSenseInContext.
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--> Sylveon: But why don't you like Calem and Serena? They're the ones who used the power of shipping to stop Lysandre from blowing up the planet.
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Mawile: ItMakesSenseInContext.\\
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--> Sylveon: But why don't you like Calem and Serena? They're the ones who used the power of shipping to stop Lysandre from blowing up the planet.
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Mawile: ItMakesSenseInContext.
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* Sylveon is the one that convinced Mimi the Espurr to warm up to Calem and Selena... by saying this.
--> Sylveon: But why don't you like Calem and Serena? They're the ones who used the power of shipping to stop Lysandre from blowing up the planet.
Mawile: ItMakesSenseInContext.//
** Even better, Mimi agrees to join them in exchange of getting the context of the story and by the end of it, looked [[HeroWorship awe-struck]] at Calem and Serena.
--> Sylveon: But why don't you like Calem and Serena? They're the ones who used the power of shipping to stop Lysandre from blowing up the planet.
Mawile: ItMakesSenseInContext.//
** Even better, Mimi agrees to join them in exchange of getting the context of the story and by the end of it, looked [[HeroWorship awe-struck]] at Calem and Serena.
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* Colress finds out that the Shadow Triad played TheSims and made a Sim of him, married to Professor Juniper with a son named '''[[GenderBlenderName Amanda]]'''. Their reasons? Gorgeous Science Babies.
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* Colress finds out that the Shadow Triad played TheSims VideoGame/TheSims and made a Sim of him, married to Professor Juniper with a son named '''[[GenderBlenderName Amanda]]'''. Their reasons? Gorgeous Science Babies.
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* As the trio reach Ecruteak, they try their hand on the fortune cookies. Lyra and Kris are rather vague. Ethan's? ''"You will ride Raikou like a horse."''.
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* As the trio reach Ecruteak, they try their hand on the fortune cookies. Lyra and Kris are rather vague. Ethan's? ''"You Ethan's?
--> '''Fortune Cookie''': You will ride Raikou like a horse."''.
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* Like the games, Professor Rowan questioning Team Galatic's fashion choices brought a laugh, but this fic adds another gem mostly through Dawn and Lucas's snark.
--> ''' Dawn''': Aren't you going to comment on their awful hairstyles, too?
--> '''Lucas''': It's hard to tell what they are, Lady Gaga fans? Space Aliens?
--> '''Galatic Grunt''': We are Team Galactic! We wear these uniforms to pledge our loyalty!
--> '''Dawn''': Loyalty to what? Bad fashion choices?"
--> ''' Dawn''': Aren't you going to comment on their awful hairstyles, too?
--> '''Lucas''': It's hard to tell what they are, Lady Gaga fans? Space Aliens?
--> '''Galatic Grunt''': We are Team Galactic! We wear these uniforms to pledge our loyalty!
--> '''Dawn''': Loyalty to what? Bad fashion choices?"
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* Calem and Serena meets a Phanthump and Pumpkaboo who are good friends and want to evolve together. Calem doesn't get what the Phanthump wants till one of his Pokemon hinted it to him, he refused, and Phanthump used Perish Song like it's on tantrum.
* How does Calem managed to convince Lysandre to not use the ultimate weapon? [[spoiler:Distract him by convincing him that if he does not use it, he'll live long enough to see his OTP, Sycamore and Diantha, have a baby.]] He turns on the weapon anyway, but he actually managed to have a change of heart and survived thanks to exposure near Xerneas's aura.
* The first thing that AZ's Floette says to Serena.
--> '''Floette''': Give me your shoes.
[[folder: Destiny Bond]]
* Calem and Serena meets a Phanthump and Pumpkaboo who are good friends and want to evolve together. Calem doesn't get what the Phanthump wants till one of his Pokemon hinted it to him, he refused, and Phanthump used Perish Song like it's on tantrum.
* How does Calem managed to convince Lysandre to not use the ultimate weapon? [[spoiler:Distract him by convincing him that if he does not use it, he'll live long enough to see his OTP, Sycamore and Diantha, have a baby.]] He turns on the weapon anyway, but he actually managed to have a change of heart and survived thanks to exposure near Xerneas's aura.
* The first thing that AZ's Floette says to Serena.
--> '''Floette''': Give me your shoes.
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--> '''Hilbert''': You tried to take over Unova by taking away Pokémon, manipulated N into running things for you, and challenged a kid that made friends with a legendary, Did you learn nothing from Team Rocket and Team Galactic?
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* Rosa being bribed Lollipop so Colress can battle her.
