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* Doc wants to send Hoagy to tell Elliot they have Pete.
-->'''Doc''': He knows you! He trusts you!\\
'''Hoagy''': ''[wailing]'' He scares me! He hates meeeeeeeeee!
-->'''Doc''': He knows you! He trusts you!\\
'''Hoagy''': ''[wailing]'' He scares me! He hates meeeeeeeeee!
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* Followed later by Doc Terminus and Hogie's arrival in town, causing even more havoc, outright ''obliterating'' the same picket fence, tearing up the same section of sidewalk that was just re-done and--thanks to Terminus ordering Hoagie to drop the anchor--catching and dragging away a staircase in front of City Hall, leading the mayor to fall flat on his face (breaking his cigar a second time) as pandemonium happens around him and lament:
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* Followed later by Doc Terminus and Hogie's arrival in town, causing even more havoc, outright ''obliterating'' the same picket fence, tearing up the same section of sidewalk that was just re-done and--thanks to Terminus ordering Hoagie Hoagy to drop the anchor--catching and dragging away a staircase in front of City Hall, leading the mayor to fall flat on his face (breaking his cigar a second time) as pandemonium happens around him and lament:
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** Right after the anchor finally does its job, the carriage abruptly stops, launching Terminus and Hoagie into the air right into a well-placed fishermen's net hastily setup beforehand while the carriage's various signage and a portable stage deploys.
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** Right after the anchor finally does its job, the carriage abruptly stops, launching Terminus and Hoagie Hoagy into the air right into a well-placed fishermen's net hastily setup beforehand while the carriage's various signage and a portable stage deploys.
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-->'''Hoagie:''' You ''told'' me to ''drop'' the anchor, I ''dropped'' the anchor!
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'''Hoagie:''' Quoddy.\\
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qgcNyQyVV3I Hoagie and Lampy venture into Elliot's cave.]] Lampy describes to Hoagie about Elliot as if he's some kind of dreaded monster from Hell. Elliot is listening in, unknowingly terrified of himself.
-->''[A terrified Elliot grabs Hoagie's shoulder for comfort. Hoagie looks at it.]''\\
'''Hoagie:''' ''(pats Elliot's hand)'' Stay close.\\
-->''[A terrified Elliot grabs Hoagie's shoulder for comfort. Hoagie looks at it.]''\\
'''Hoagie:''' ''(pats Elliot's hand)'' Stay close.\\
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qgcNyQyVV3I Hoagie and Lampy venture into Elliot's cave.]] Lampy describes to Hoagie Hoagy about Elliot as if he's some kind of dreaded monster from Hell. Elliot is listening in, unknowingly terrified of himself.
-->''[A terrified Elliot grabsHoagie's Hoagy's shoulder for comfort. Hoagie Hoagy looks at it.]''\\
'''Hoagie:''' '''Hoagy:''' ''(pats Elliot's hand)'' Stay close.\\
-->''[A terrified Elliot grabs
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'''Hoagie:''' ''(sees Elliot's hand on his shoulder again, now absolutely terrified)'' ''Pffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffttttt....'' it's g-g-go-o-t me-e-e-e-e....\\
''[Lampy looks behind him. Sees Elliot's hand on Hoagie's shoulder. Then looks up, sees a shaking Elliot.]''\\
''[Lampy looks behind him. Sees Elliot's hand on Hoagie's shoulder. Then looks up, sees a shaking Elliot.]''\\
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''[Lampy looks behind him. Sees Elliot's hand on
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''[Elliot sees his shadow, thinking it's the terrifying monster. He screams and grabs Hoagie and Lampy, making them shake.]''
* Hoagie trying to tell Terminus he saw Elliot the dragon.
-->'''Hoagie:''' I sa-sa-sa-sa-saw it!\\
* Hoagie trying to tell Terminus he saw Elliot the dragon.
-->'''Hoagie:''' I sa-sa-sa-sa-saw it!\\
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''[Elliot sees his shadow, thinking it's the terrifying monster. He screams and grabs Hoagie Hoagy and Lampy, making them shake.]''
*Hoagie Hoagy trying to tell Terminus he saw Elliot the dragon.
-->'''Hoagie:''' -->'''Hoagy:''' I sa-sa-sa-sa-saw it!\\
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'''Hoagie:''' El-El... d-dra-dra...\\
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-->'''Terminus:''' Hoagie, I can't stand you when you're drunk!\\
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-->'''Terminus:''' Hoagie, Hoagy, I can't stand you when you're drunk!\\
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* The Gogans laugh at Terminus when he propose a team-up to help capture Elliot, giving Ma Gogan pain on her side as a result of them getting sick from getting wet by Elliot. When they laugh a second time (the pain moving to her head), Hoagie joins in.
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* Willie and Grover Gogan start fighting over who's going to "hold" Nora while the other grabs Pete. Merle settles it by telling them to both grab Pete, and ''he'll'' hold Nora. Ma Gogan says, "If'n you think you're gonna hold her like my boys wanna hold her, you're gonna be holdin' your head, y'understand?"
* The Gogans laugh at Terminus when he propose a team-up to help capture Elliot, giving Ma Gogan pain on her side as a result of them getting sick from getting wet by Elliot. When they laugh a second time (the pain moving to her head),Hoagie Hoagy joins in.
* The Gogans laugh at Terminus when he propose a team-up to help capture Elliot, giving Ma Gogan pain on her side as a result of them getting sick from getting wet by Elliot. When they laugh a second time (the pain moving to her head),
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* The Gogans laugh at Terminus when he propose a team-up to help capture Elliot, giving Ma Gogan pain on her side as a result of them getting sick from getting wet by Elliot. When they laugh a second time (the pain moving to her head), Hoagie joins in.
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* The Gogans laugh at Terminus when he propose a team-up to help capture Elliot, giving Ma Gogan pain on her side as a result of them getting sick from getting wet by Elliot. When they laugh a second time (the pain moving to her head), Hoagie joins in.
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-->'''Nora:''' Has anyone seen my Dad?
-->''(the bar's patrons point down at the floor)''
-->''(the bar's patrons point down at the floor)''
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** Right after the anchor finally does its job, the carriage stops, launching Terminus and Hoagie into the air right into a well-place fishermen's net while the carriage's various signs and a portable stage deploys.
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** Right after the anchor finally does its job, the carriage abruptly stops, launching Terminus and Hoagie into the air right into a well-place well-placed fishermen's net hastily setup beforehand while the carriage's various signs signage and a portable stage deploys.
