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*** Also during his time out in the Highstorm, Dalinar sees a colossal figure on spindly legs striding the storm: the Stormfather, the Spren he would bond later in life. He makes a rude gesture at the Stormfather, which goes entirely unnoticed.
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''Doesn't like''... Dalinar blinked. What kind of world did he live in where ''swords'' didn't like ''hurting people''?
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''Doesn't like''... Dalinar blinked. [[ARareSentence What kind of world did he live in where ''swords'' where]] ''[[ARareSentence swords]]'' [[ARareSentence didn't like ''hurting people''?like]] ''[[ARareSentence hurting people]]''?
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I have no idea why this was changed. It was basically chopped up to disrupt the flow of the lines and make it less clear and less funny.
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* When Lift meets with Dalinar during the climatic battle, he is walking out to face Odium "armed" only with his copy of ''The Way of Kings''. He asks Lift if she has a weapon.
-->'''Lift''': Nope. Can't read.
** When Dalinar clarifies, Lift manifests...a pole, explaining that Wyndle doesn't like hurting people. Dalinar's reaction makes it even better.
--> ''Doesn't like''... Dalinar blinked. What kind of world did he live in where ''swords'' didn't like ''hurting people''?
-->'''Lift''': Nope. Can't read.
** When Dalinar clarifies, Lift manifests...a pole, explaining that Wyndle doesn't like hurting people. Dalinar's reaction makes it even better.
--> ''Doesn't like''... Dalinar blinked. What kind of world did he live in where ''swords'' didn't like ''hurting people''?
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* When Lift meets with Dalinar during the climatic battle, he is walking out to face Odium "armed" only with his copy of ''The Way of Kings''. He asks Lift if she has Kings''.
-->"Do you have aweapon.
-->'''Lift''': Nope.weapon?" he asked.\\
"Nope. Can'tread.
** Whenread."\\
"Can't..." Dalinarclarifies, looked down at his book. "I meant a real weapon, Lift."\\
"Oh! Yeah, I've got one a those." She thrust her hand to the side. Mist formed into a small, glittering Shardblade.\\
... Or, no. It was just a pole. A silver pole with a rudimentary crossguard.\\
Liftmanifests...a pole, explaining that Wyndle shrugged. "Wyndle doesn't like hurting people. Dalinar's reaction makes it even better.
-->people."\\
''Doesn't like''... Dalinar blinked. What kind of world did he live in where ''swords'' didn't like ''hurting people''?
-->"Do you have a
-->'''Lift''': Nope.
"Nope. Can't
** When
"Can't..." Dalinar
"Oh! Yeah, I've got one a those." She thrust her hand to the side. Mist formed into a small, glittering Shardblade.\\
... Or, no. It was just a pole. A silver pole with a rudimentary crossguard.\\
Lift
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''Doesn't like''... Dalinar blinked. What kind of world did he live in where ''swords'' didn't like ''hurting people''?
