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* Sasuke ends up fighting Lee, but has to find a way to defeat him quickly. Much to his major reluctance, he uses the Sexy Jutsu (while being naked this time), resulting in an instant KO on Lee. However, Sakura saw that and is none too pleased about it, causing Sasuke to make an OhCrap face. She makes an angry rant about it, while he whines that it's all Naruto's fault. As Sakura continues to be angry, Sasuke decides to [[ShutUpKiss kiss her in the hopes it will shut her up]]. It works.
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* Sasuke ends up fighting Lee, but has to find a way to defeat him quickly. Much to his major reluctance, he uses the Sexy Jutsu (while being naked this time), resulting in an instant KO on Lee. However, Sakura saw that sees this and is none too pleased about it, causing Sasuke to make an OhCrap face. She makes an angry rant about it, while he whines that it's all Naruto's fault. As Sakura continues to be angry, Sasuke decides to [[ShutUpKiss kiss her in the hopes it will shut her up]]. It works.
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!!Chapter 17
* Sakura is talking to the head of the Nation of Steel while Naruto and Sasuke are waiting outside:
-->''Naruto:''' I still don't get why we couldn't go up with her?\\
'''Sasuke:''' Because you have a big mouth, and I have to make sure you don't wander off.\\
'''Naruto:''' So you're saying I need a babysitter?!
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!!Chapter 17
* Sakura is talking to the head of the Nation of Steel while Naruto and Sasuke are waiting outside:
-->''Naruto:''' I still don't get why we couldn't go up with her?\\
'''Sasuke:''' Because you have a big mouth, and I have to make sure you don't wander off.\\
'''Naruto:''' So you're saying I need a babysitter?!
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!!General
* Hiashi has a habit of drawing his sword on Naruto, whether it's to defend Hinata's honor, or to emphasize his instructions regarding Naruto's treatment of Hinata, and even once by accident because Neji, the real target of Hiashi's wrath, just so happened to hide behind Naruto.
* It's subtle, but anyone who angers Sakura immediately hides behind Naruto. Perhaps on the assumption that she's hit Naruto a lot so he's pretty good at taking it.
* Hiashi has a habit of drawing his sword on Naruto, whether it's to defend Hinata's honor, or to emphasize his instructions regarding Naruto's treatment of Hinata, and even once by accident because Neji, the real target of Hiashi's wrath, just so happened to hide behind Naruto.
* It's subtle, but anyone who angers Sakura immediately hides behind Naruto. Perhaps on the assumption that she's hit Naruto a lot so he's pretty good at taking it.
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* Hiashi has a habit of drawing his sword on Naruto, whether it's to defend Hinata's honor, or to emphasize his instructions regarding Naruto's treatment of Hinata, and even once by accident because Neji, the real target of Hiashi's wrath, just so happened to hide behind Naruto.
* It's subtle, but anyone who angers Sakura immediately hides behind Naruto. Perhaps on the assumption that she's hit Naruto a lot so he's pretty good at taking it.
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!!General
* Hiashi has a habit of drawing his sword on Naruto, whether it's to defend Hinata's honor, or to emphasize his instructions regarding Naruto's treatment of Hinata, and even once by accident because Neji, the real target of Hiashi's wrath, just so happened to hide behind Naruto.
* It's subtle, but anyone who angers Sakura immediately hides behind Naruto. Perhaps on the assumption that she's hit Naruto a lot so he's pretty good at taking it.
!!General
* Hiashi has a habit of drawing his sword on Naruto, whether it's to defend Hinata's honor, or to emphasize his instructions regarding Naruto's treatment of Hinata, and even once by accident because Neji, the real target of Hiashi's wrath, just so happened to hide behind Naruto.
* It's subtle, but anyone who angers Sakura immediately hides behind Naruto. Perhaps on the assumption that she's hit Naruto a lot so he's pretty good at taking it.
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!!Chapter 16
* Shizune tries to find someone who can be a diplomatic messenger in charge of running important messages between the heads of Konoha and Suna. Naruto realizes that Shikamaru might be willing to accept that job, which turns out to be the case. However, it never occurred to Naruto that Shikamaru would accept it in order to spend some time with Temari:
-->'''Naruto:''' ''[grinning sheepishly]'' Huh?! Oh yeah! That too!\\
'''Shikamaru:''' You didn't even think about that part, did you?\\
'''Naruto:''' Err... Heh! Heh! I guess not!\\
'''Shikamaru:''' ''[thinking]'' This guy!? He's getting older, but he'll never change!
** Shikamaru then notices that Naruto is holding a bag and asks him what's in it:
--->'''Naruto:''' Huh?! Oh this?! [[ExplainExplainOhCrap It's a present for Hinata's bir... OH CRAP! I'M SUPPOSED TO MEET HER!]]
* Tenten comes across Hinata, who tells the former that she's shopping with Naruto. Tenten comments that Hinata is becoming "quite the little house-wife". Hinata then imagines herself being married to Naruto and faints, much to Tenten's shock.
* Shizune tries to find someone who can be a diplomatic messenger in charge of running important messages between the heads of Konoha and Suna. Naruto realizes that Shikamaru might be willing to accept that job, which turns out to be the case. However, it never occurred to Naruto that Shikamaru would accept it in order to spend some time with Temari:
-->'''Naruto:''' ''[grinning sheepishly]'' Huh?! Oh yeah! That too!\\
'''Shikamaru:''' You didn't even think about that part, did you?\\
'''Naruto:''' Err... Heh! Heh! I guess not!\\
'''Shikamaru:''' ''[thinking]'' This guy!? He's getting older, but he'll never change!
** Shikamaru then notices that Naruto is holding a bag and asks him what's in it:
--->'''Naruto:''' Huh?! Oh this?! [[ExplainExplainOhCrap It's a present for Hinata's bir... OH CRAP! I'M SUPPOSED TO MEET HER!]]
* Tenten comes across Hinata, who tells the former that she's shopping with Naruto. Tenten comments that Hinata is becoming "quite the little house-wife". Hinata then imagines herself being married to Naruto and faints, much to Tenten's shock.
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* When Naruto explains he's not sure whether or not he should use the money that the late Jirayia left to him, Tsunade reassures him by telling him he shouldn't worry as Jirayia left him that money to do as he wants. She then comes closer to Naruto and, glaring at him, tells him "[[ImpliedDeathThreat But if you take advantage of that innocent young woman, I'll make sure you can ask Jirayia in person.]]" Naruto makes yet another OhCrap face in response.
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* When Naruto explains he's not sure whether or not he should use the money that the late Jirayia left to him, Tsunade reassures him by telling him he shouldn't worry as Jirayia left him that money to do with as he wants.wanted. She then comes closer to Naruto and, glaring at him, tells him "[[ImpliedDeathThreat But if you take advantage of that innocent young woman, I'll make sure you can ask Jirayia in person.]]" Naruto makes yet another OhCrap face in response.
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* Naruto goes to Shikamaru's appartment to give him back his wallet. He then notices the presence of Temari's fan next to his friend's couch. What is Shikamaru's response?
-->'''Shikamaru:''' Well... Erm... Y'know what, it's too much of a bother to come up with a plausible excuse. So... Just go away!
* Upon learning Hinata has moved into Naruto's appartment, Tsunade angrily put Naruto into a headlock and rapidly rubs her fist against the top of his head, all while saying:
-->'''Tsunade:''' Well Naruto, the first thing you're going to do is get a bigger place to live. I don't want you two sharing a room... or a bed for that matter. And don't think I don't know about you two sleeping together either. So you had better behave yourself. Got that?\\
'''Naruto:''' YES! NOW PLEASE STOP!
* When Naruto explains he's not sure whether or not he should use the money that the late Jirayia left to him, Tsunade reassures him by telling him he shouldn't worry as Jirayia left him that money to do as he wants. She then comes closer to Naruto and, glaring at him, tells him "[[ImpliedDeathThreat But if you take advantage of that innocent young woman, I'll make sure you can ask Jirayia in person.]]" Naruto makes yet another OhCrap face in response.
-->'''Shikamaru:''' Well... Erm... Y'know what, it's too much of a bother to come up with a plausible excuse. So... Just go away!
* Upon learning Hinata has moved into Naruto's appartment, Tsunade angrily put Naruto into a headlock and rapidly rubs her fist against the top of his head, all while saying:
-->'''Tsunade:''' Well Naruto, the first thing you're going to do is get a bigger place to live. I don't want you two sharing a room... or a bed for that matter. And don't think I don't know about you two sleeping together either. So you had better behave yourself. Got that?\\
'''Naruto:''' YES! NOW PLEASE STOP!
* When Naruto explains he's not sure whether or not he should use the money that the late Jirayia left to him, Tsunade reassures him by telling him he shouldn't worry as Jirayia left him that money to do as he wants. She then comes closer to Naruto and, glaring at him, tells him "[[ImpliedDeathThreat But if you take advantage of that innocent young woman, I'll make sure you can ask Jirayia in person.]]" Naruto makes yet another OhCrap face in response.
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!!Chapter 15
* Mina tells Naruto that she'll give him a shot to stop any infection. He makes an OhCrap face [[AfraidOfNeedles upon realizing it'll be done with a needle]].
* Both Shikamaru and Temari [[INeedToGoIronMyDog make excuses to leave]] to Ino and Kankuro respectively so they can spend the night together alone.
* At some hotel in Konoha, Gaara and Matsuri are sitting next to each other. The former is reading a book while the latter is gradually getting impatient. Matsuri then tackles Gaara, exclaiming "God damnit Gaara! Just take me already!"
* Naruto and Hinata come across a destroyed bar, with Choji, Kiba, and Neji all piling on top of Lee. Turns out [[DrunkenMaster the latter]] [[CantHoldHisLiquor was given some sake]].
-->'''Lee:''' ''[drunk]'' I'm (hic) juchst be(hic)ing youful!
* Mina tells Naruto that she'll give him a shot to stop any infection. He makes an OhCrap face [[AfraidOfNeedles upon realizing it'll be done with a needle]].
* Both Shikamaru and Temari [[INeedToGoIronMyDog make excuses to leave]] to Ino and Kankuro respectively so they can spend the night together alone.
* At some hotel in Konoha, Gaara and Matsuri are sitting next to each other. The former is reading a book while the latter is gradually getting impatient. Matsuri then tackles Gaara, exclaiming "God damnit Gaara! Just take me already!"
* Naruto and Hinata come across a destroyed bar, with Choji, Kiba, and Neji all piling on top of Lee. Turns out [[DrunkenMaster the latter]] [[CantHoldHisLiquor was given some sake]].
-->'''Lee:''' ''[drunk]'' I'm (hic) juchst be(hic)ing youful!
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!!Chapter 14
* When Naruto, Sasuke, and the remaining finalists all get ready to face the bad guy who is trying to blow up the stadium, Hanajima comments that Echo is really short, causing the latter to tell the former to shut up.
* Sasuke tells Naruto to take a break and let him and the other finalists to handle the bad guy:
-->'''Naruto:''' ''[smirking]'' Sasuke. You should know me better than that by now.\\
'''Sasuke:''' ''[smirking]'' Oh yeah! [[SarcasmMode What was I thinking?]]
* Naruto tackles Hanajima to the ground so that both would avoid getting hurt by flying blades. This results in Naruto lying on top of Hanajima. Hinata sees this and behaves like a ClingyJealousGirl for the first time by having a ComicalAngryFace and looking like she's on fire, angrily saying that Hanajima had better keep her hands to herself and not take advantage of her Naruto. [[SecurityCling Konohamaru and Hanabi are so scared by her behavior that they hug each other]] (with Hanabi mentally expressing her joy over hugging her crush).
* When Naruto, Sasuke, and the remaining finalists all get ready to face the bad guy who is trying to blow up the stadium, Hanajima comments that Echo is really short, causing the latter to tell the former to shut up.
* Sasuke tells Naruto to take a break and let him and the other finalists to handle the bad guy:
-->'''Naruto:''' ''[smirking]'' Sasuke. You should know me better than that by now.\\
'''Sasuke:''' ''[smirking]'' Oh yeah! [[SarcasmMode What was I thinking?]]
* Naruto tackles Hanajima to the ground so that both would avoid getting hurt by flying blades. This results in Naruto lying on top of Hanajima. Hinata sees this and behaves like a ClingyJealousGirl for the first time by having a ComicalAngryFace and looking like she's on fire, angrily saying that Hanajima had better keep her hands to herself and not take advantage of her Naruto. [[SecurityCling Konohamaru and Hanabi are so scared by her behavior that they hug each other]] (with Hanabi mentally expressing her joy over hugging her crush).
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* Naruto and Hinata come across Konohamaru, who does his own Sexy Jutsu: the Triple Girl on Girl Version. Naruto gives it his perverted seal of approval that would make Jiraiya proud. But then Konohamaru does a version he did specifically for Naruto: the Hinata Version. Naruto is incredibly shocked over this, while the real Hinata is so embarassed that her boyfriend is seeing her naked that she faints.
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* Naruto and Hinata come across Konohamaru, who does his own Sexy Jutsu: the Triple Girl on Girl Version. Naruto gives it his perverted seal of approval that would make have made Jiraiya proud. But then Konohamaru does a version he did specifically for Naruto: the Hinata Version. Naruto is incredibly shocked over this, while the real Hinata is so embarassed that her boyfriend is seeing her naked that she faints.
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!!Chapter 13
* Sasuke tells Naruto what they can or cannot do in order to avoid getting spotted on their way to the stadium, culminating with him saying they have two choices: fight their way in or go over the walls, althought the wall guards may still see them. Grinning, Naruto tells him there's a third option, causing Sasuke to have a skeptical look on his face and say "Somehow I don't have a good feeling about this!"
** Naruto's solution consists of the two of them turning into girls by using the ''Sexy Jutsu'' (without being naked at least).
* After entering the village, they have an argument over Sasuke really not liking the idea of someone seeing him like that. Yori overhears them and mistakes them for two girls talking about doing some girl-on-girl action, [[GirlOnGirlIsHot which he finds to be really hot]], and he even hopes to have a threesome with them. He tries to get their attention with a pickup line, but it doesn't work at all for obvious reasons.
-->'''Sasuke:''' ''[frowning]'' Please tell me he didn't just give us a pickup line!\\
'''Naruto:''' ''[frowning]'' Worse. He gave us an awful pickup line.
** Yori tries to put some moves on Sasuke. The latter responds by punching him and using the Chidori on him. Both Sasuke and Naruto then transform back into their normal appearances, making Yori realize his mistake.
--->'''Yori:''' [[Unsettling Gender-Reveal Wait... They were... They were g... guys? ... Oh, God!]]
* Sasuke ends up fighting Lee, but has to find a way to defeat him quickly. Much to his major reluctance, he uses the Sexy Jutsu (while being naked this time), resulting in an instant KO on Lee. However, Sakura saw that and is none too pleased about it, causing Sasuke to make an OhCrap face. She makes an angry rant about it, while he whines that it's all Naruto's fault. As Sakura continues to be angry, Sasuke decides to [[ShutUpKiss kiss her in the hopes it will shut her up]]. It works.
* Sasuke tells Naruto what they can or cannot do in order to avoid getting spotted on their way to the stadium, culminating with him saying they have two choices: fight their way in or go over the walls, althought the wall guards may still see them. Grinning, Naruto tells him there's a third option, causing Sasuke to have a skeptical look on his face and say "Somehow I don't have a good feeling about this!"
** Naruto's solution consists of the two of them turning into girls by using the ''Sexy Jutsu'' (without being naked at least).
* After entering the village, they have an argument over Sasuke really not liking the idea of someone seeing him like that. Yori overhears them and mistakes them for two girls talking about doing some girl-on-girl action, [[GirlOnGirlIsHot which he finds to be really hot]], and he even hopes to have a threesome with them. He tries to get their attention with a pickup line, but it doesn't work at all for obvious reasons.
-->'''Sasuke:''' ''[frowning]'' Please tell me he didn't just give us a pickup line!\\
'''Naruto:''' ''[frowning]'' Worse. He gave us an awful pickup line.
** Yori tries to put some moves on Sasuke. The latter responds by punching him and using the Chidori on him. Both Sasuke and Naruto then transform back into their normal appearances, making Yori realize his mistake.
--->'''Yori:''' [[Unsettling Gender-Reveal Wait... They were... They were g... guys? ... Oh, God!]]
* Sasuke ends up fighting Lee, but has to find a way to defeat him quickly. Much to his major reluctance, he uses the Sexy Jutsu (while being naked this time), resulting in an instant KO on Lee. However, Sakura saw that and is none too pleased about it, causing Sasuke to make an OhCrap face. She makes an angry rant about it, while he whines that it's all Naruto's fault. As Sakura continues to be angry, Sasuke decides to [[ShutUpKiss kiss her in the hopes it will shut her up]]. It works.
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!!Chapter 12
* The first person to get out of the Forest of Death is a girl named Hanajima who has been drinking too much coffee to stay up all night, making a twirly dance to celebrate her victory.
* Naruto goes into the CornerOfWoe upon seeing Ichiro with the item he needed.
** In that same panel, Takara asks Ichiro what happened to his forehead protector whose top is missing some bits. Some creature ended up chewing Ichiro's head, but the latter tells Takara "Please... don't ask!"
* Naruto almost gets the item he need, only to find Sasuke with the item in question.
-->'''Sasuke:''' And now I have my item. ... Oh I see you don't. ...\\
'''Naruto:''' ''[[OcularGushers crying]]'' Sasuke! Please! Don't rub it in!
* Naruto tells Sasuke he doesn't have to help him find the item, but Sasuke insists to make sure that his friend makes it to the stadium so there can be at least a little bit of competition. But also because...
-->'''Sasuke:''' Besides... If I left you to do it yourself, you'll still be here next week dumbass.\\
'''Naruto:''' ''[annoyed]'' I'm gonna ignore that Sasuke!
* Naruto has finally found a box. Miko (one of the persons in charge of surveilling the gate to the Forest of Death) asks him what happened to his arm, as his jacket is now missing its right sleeve. This is followed by a flashback where Naruto found the box, only for some creature (seemingly the same one that attacked Ichiro) to eat his box by chewing on Naruto's arm, causing the latter to try to get the box back while Sasuke calls him a baka. It also took ''an hour'' for Naruto to retrieve the box from the creature.
* The first person to get out of the Forest of Death is a girl named Hanajima who has been drinking too much coffee to stay up all night, making a twirly dance to celebrate her victory.
* Naruto goes into the CornerOfWoe upon seeing Ichiro with the item he needed.
** In that same panel, Takara asks Ichiro what happened to his forehead protector whose top is missing some bits. Some creature ended up chewing Ichiro's head, but the latter tells Takara "Please... don't ask!"
* Naruto almost gets the item he need, only to find Sasuke with the item in question.
-->'''Sasuke:''' And now I have my item. ... Oh I see you don't. ...\\
'''Naruto:''' ''[[OcularGushers crying]]'' Sasuke! Please! Don't rub it in!
* Naruto tells Sasuke he doesn't have to help him find the item, but Sasuke insists to make sure that his friend makes it to the stadium so there can be at least a little bit of competition. But also because...
-->'''Sasuke:''' Besides... If I left you to do it yourself, you'll still be here next week dumbass.\\
'''Naruto:''' ''[annoyed]'' I'm gonna ignore that Sasuke!
* Naruto has finally found a box. Miko (one of the persons in charge of surveilling the gate to the Forest of Death) asks him what happened to his arm, as his jacket is now missing its right sleeve. This is followed by a flashback where Naruto found the box, only for some creature (seemingly the same one that attacked Ichiro) to eat his box by chewing on Naruto's arm, causing the latter to try to get the box back while Sasuke calls him a baka. It also took ''an hour'' for Naruto to retrieve the box from the creature.
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* Sakura and Ino's [[BigWhat reaction]] to seeing Naruto asking Hinata on a date for the first time.
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* Hinata tries to help Naruto with the picnic, so she comes closer to him. Naruto doesn't notice her and they accidentally bonk their heads against each other, causing the two of them to be lying on the ground in a dazed state.
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* Hinata tries to help Naruto with the picnic, so she comes closer to him. Naruto doesn't notice her and they accidentally bonk their heads against each other, causing the two of them to be lying on the ground in a dazed state. Naruto then has an over-the-top panicking face upon seeing Hinata knocked out.
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* Before the Chunin Exams begin, Hinata tells Naruto that she will cheer for him when he gets to the stadium. Some guy named Ichiro overhears her, leans over her shoulder, and playfully asks her if she'll cheer for him too, as he loves it when pretty girls cheer him on. Hinata is taken aback by this while Naruto behaves like a CrazyJealousGuy in response, [[JustJokingJustification causing Ichiro to say he was just playing]].
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** Afterwards, Sasuke tries to make Naruto guess what he was talking about. The only answers Naruto can come up with are "Make-out" and "Eating ramen". Sasuke is in disbelief that someone who created the sexy jutsu just doesn't get it.
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** Afterwards, Sasuke tries to make Naruto guess what he was talking about. The only answers Naruto can come up with are "Make-out" and "Eating ramen". Sasuke is in disbelief that someone who created the sexy jutsu Sexy Jutsu just doesn't get it.
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* Hinata finds Hanabi crying. The latter explains that she made a fool out of herself to a boy she likes:
-->'''Hanabi:''' I realised I liked him. And now whenever I get close to him I... I...\\
'''Hinata:''' Do you go all red and pass out?\\
'''Hanabi:''' ''[frowning]'' [[InnocentlyInsensitive No... That would be lame. Who does that?]]\\
'''Hinata:''' ''[becomes BlueWithShock]'' L... Lame?!
** The boy turns out to be Konohamaru. And he's just as {{oblivious|ToLove}} towards Hanabi's feelings for him as Naruto was towards Hinata. In a flashback, Konohamaru thought Hanabi was sick because her face was all red and she was sweating. He touched her forehead with his hand and she reacted by punching him on the head.
** Made even funnier by the fact that something similar happened to Naruto and Hinata at the beginning of the [[Recap/NarutoSearchForTheBikochuArc Search for the Bikōchū]] filler arc from Part 1 of the anime.
-->'''Hanabi:''' I realised I liked him. And now whenever I get close to him I... I...\\
'''Hinata:''' Do you go all red and pass out?\\
'''Hanabi:''' ''[frowning]'' [[InnocentlyInsensitive No... That would be lame. Who does that?]]\\
'''Hinata:''' ''[becomes BlueWithShock]'' L... Lame?!
** The boy turns out to be Konohamaru. And he's just as {{oblivious|ToLove}} towards Hanabi's feelings for him as Naruto was towards Hinata. In a flashback, Konohamaru thought Hanabi was sick because her face was all red and she was sweating. He touched her forehead with his hand and she reacted by punching him on the head.
** Made even funnier by the fact that something similar happened to Naruto and Hinata at the beginning of the [[Recap/NarutoSearchForTheBikochuArc Search for the Bikōchū]] filler arc from Part 1 of the anime.
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!!Chapter 10
* Tsunade berates Naruto for not telling anyone about Rokuro being inside of his body. However, Hinata is ''still'' [[OverlyLongHug hugging]] Naruto while this is happening, leading to:
-->'''Tsunade:''' ARE YOU EVEN LISTENING TO ME, NARUTO?\\
'''Naruto:''' Errr... Hinata!\\
'''Hinata:''' ''[with a big smile on her face]'' I'll never let my Naruto go!
!!Chapter 11
* At the beginning, Tsunade talks to Naruto and Sasuke about the last Chunin Exams. Both Naruto and ''[[NotSoAboveItAll even Sasuke]]'' are [[CornerOfWoe sulking in a corner]] as they were unable to attend them (the former because he overslept and the latter because he was on probation), and thus are still genins.
-->'''Tsunade:''' ''[doing a ComicalAngryFace]'' HEY! PAY ATTENTION!
* Tsunade berates Naruto for not telling anyone about Rokuro being inside of his body. However, Hinata is ''still'' [[OverlyLongHug hugging]] Naruto while this is happening, leading to:
-->'''Tsunade:''' ARE YOU EVEN LISTENING TO ME, NARUTO?\\
'''Naruto:''' Errr... Hinata!\\
'''Hinata:''' ''[with a big smile on her face]'' I'll never let my Naruto go!
!!Chapter 11
* At the beginning, Tsunade talks to Naruto and Sasuke about the last Chunin Exams. Both Naruto and ''[[NotSoAboveItAll even Sasuke]]'' are [[CornerOfWoe sulking in a corner]] as they were unable to attend them (the former because he overslept and the latter because he was on probation), and thus are still genins.
-->'''Tsunade:''' ''[doing a ComicalAngryFace]'' HEY! PAY ATTENTION!
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!!Chapter 9
* Sasuke wonders what else Sakura could be planning for their first anniversary of dating, only to quickly realize before Naruto does that it might be sex, leading to the following conversation:
-->'''Sasuke:''' ''[shocked while having a nosebleed]'' Wait. You don't think she...?\\
'''Naruto:''' It's probably gonna be what Hinata did for me on our anniversary date.\\
'''Sasuke:''' Wait you and Hinata?! I didn't know you two..? Well... How was it? Was it... good?\\
'''Naruto:''' Great! But then Hinata's had a lot of practice. She gives treats like that all the time!\\
'''Sasuke:''' ''[even more shocked]'' SHE WHAT?! HOW LONG HAVE YOU TWO...\\
'''Naruto:''' ''[drooling while having stars in his eyes]'' I can still taste those Hinata-shaped cookies.\\
'''Sasuke:''' WAIT?! COOKIES?!\\
'''Naruto:''' Yeah. Cookies. Hinata made us cookies. I had ones shaped like her, and she had ones shaped like me. What were you talking about?
** Afterwards, Sasuke tries to make Naruto guess what he was talking about. The only answers Naruto can come up with are "Make-out" and "Eating ramen". Sasuke is in disbelief that someone who created the sexy jutsu just doesn't get it.
--->'''Sasuke:''' You really are a BAKA!\\
'''Naruto:''' ''[glaring]'' WHAT DID YOU SAY?\\
'''Sasuke:''' ''[glaring back]'' You heard me moron!
* Sasuke wonders what else Sakura could be planning for their first anniversary of dating, only to quickly realize before Naruto does that it might be sex, leading to the following conversation:
-->'''Sasuke:''' ''[shocked while having a nosebleed]'' Wait. You don't think she...?\\
'''Naruto:''' It's probably gonna be what Hinata did for me on our anniversary date.\\
'''Sasuke:''' Wait you and Hinata?! I didn't know you two..? Well... How was it? Was it... good?\\
'''Naruto:''' Great! But then Hinata's had a lot of practice. She gives treats like that all the time!\\
'''Sasuke:''' ''[even more shocked]'' SHE WHAT?! HOW LONG HAVE YOU TWO...\\
'''Naruto:''' ''[drooling while having stars in his eyes]'' I can still taste those Hinata-shaped cookies.\\
'''Sasuke:''' WAIT?! COOKIES?!\\
'''Naruto:''' Yeah. Cookies. Hinata made us cookies. I had ones shaped like her, and she had ones shaped like me. What were you talking about?
** Afterwards, Sasuke tries to make Naruto guess what he was talking about. The only answers Naruto can come up with are "Make-out" and "Eating ramen". Sasuke is in disbelief that someone who created the sexy jutsu just doesn't get it.
--->'''Sasuke:''' You really are a BAKA!\\
'''Naruto:''' ''[glaring]'' WHAT DID YOU SAY?\\
'''Sasuke:''' ''[glaring back]'' You heard me moron!
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!!Chapter 8
* Naruto being shocked to learn that only are Sasuke and Sakura going on a date, but ''Sasuke'' is the one who asked her out instead of the other way around.
* Naruto put both Sasuke and Sakura in a headlock while suggesting they do a double date with Hinata. Both Sasuke and Sakura are clearly annoyed as they just want to spend some time alone.
* At the end, Tsunade yells Shizune's name, leading to this bit:
-->'''Shizune:''' Tsunade-Sama?! What is it? If you can't find the sake, it's because I threw it out... again!\\
'''Tsunade:''' It's not that (how does she keep finding my sake).
* Naruto being shocked to learn that only are Sasuke and Sakura going on a date, but ''Sasuke'' is the one who asked her out instead of the other way around.
* Naruto put both Sasuke and Sakura in a headlock while suggesting they do a double date with Hinata. Both Sasuke and Sakura are clearly annoyed as they just want to spend some time alone.
* At the end, Tsunade yells Shizune's name, leading to this bit:
-->'''Shizune:''' Tsunade-Sama?! What is it? If you can't find the sake, it's because I threw it out... again!\\
'''Tsunade:''' It's not that (how does she keep finding my sake).
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* When Naruto sees Sasuke at the Hokage's office, at first, it looks like it's gonna be a heartwarming reunion. However, Naruto punches Sasuke on the head and calls him a baka, leading to the two bickering like in the old days. Sakura is at first shocked upon seeing that before being angry at Naruto and hurting him like usual.
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* When Naruto sees Sasuke at the Hokage's office, at first, it looks like it's gonna be a heartwarming rather touching reunion. However, Naruto punches Sasuke on the head and calls him a baka, leading to the two bickering like in the old days. Sakura is at first shocked upon seeing that before being angry at Naruto and hurting him like usual.
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!!Chapter 5
* Naruto and Hinata come across Konohamaru, who does his own Sexy Jutsu: the Triple Girl on Girl Version. Naruto gives it his perverted seal of approval that would make Jiraiya proud. But then Konohamaru does a version he did specifically for Naruto: the Hinata Version. Naruto is incredibly shocked over this, while the real Hinata is so embarassed that her boyfriend is seeing her naked that she faints.
* Later on, Naruto and Hinata are eating ice cream. Konohamaru also has ice cream, but he uses it to heal the black eye he got no doubt because of his Hinata-themed Sexy Jutsu.
** Hinata nervously asks Naruto if they can go somewhere alone and do "boyfriend girlfriend stuff". [[StealthHiBye Konohomaru doesn't even notice that the couple is gone]] until after he tells Naruto that he could do with another ice cream.
* Naruto and Hinata come across Konohamaru, who does his own Sexy Jutsu: the Triple Girl on Girl Version. Naruto gives it his perverted seal of approval that would make Jiraiya proud. But then Konohamaru does a version he did specifically for Naruto: the Hinata Version. Naruto is incredibly shocked over this, while the real Hinata is so embarassed that her boyfriend is seeing her naked that she faints.
* Later on, Naruto and Hinata are eating ice cream. Konohamaru also has ice cream, but he uses it to heal the black eye he got no doubt because of his Hinata-themed Sexy Jutsu.
** Hinata nervously asks Naruto if they can go somewhere alone and do "boyfriend girlfriend stuff". [[StealthHiBye Konohomaru doesn't even notice that the couple is gone]] until after he tells Naruto that he could do with another ice cream.
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* When Naruto sees Sasuke at the Hokage's office, at first, it looks like it's gonna be a heartwarming reunion. However, Naruto punches Sasuke on the head and calls him a baka, leading to the two bickering like in the old days. Sakura is at first confused shocked upon seeing that before being angry at Naruto like usual and hurting him.him like usual.
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!!Chapter 1
* Sakura finally finds Naruto and Hinata after the two went missing. However, having no idea that Hinata just kissed Naruto, Sakura is confused to see Hinata lying on her side and looking lovesick, while Naruto is looking away and blushing.
* Naruto notices that Sakura seems angry and asks if he's done something to make her be mad at him. She has enough and responds with:
-->'''Sakura:''' [[AngerBornOfWorry Naruto... You... You... YOU JUMPED OFF OF A CLIFF. YOU COULD HAVE BEEN KILLED. I KNOW YOU WERE JUST TRYING TO SAVE HINATA, BUT WHAT ARE YOU A COMPLETE MORON? THAT WAS THE STUPIDEST THING YOU'VE EVER DONE. YOU MADE US ALL WORRY OURSELVES TO DEATH WONDERING IF YOU WERE ALIVE OR NOT! SO YES! I'M A LITTLE PISSED OFF WITH YOU RIGHT NOW!]]
!!Chapter 2
* The chapter begins with Naruto sneaking out of the hospital to get some ramen at Ichiraku. Unfortunately, a rather angry Sakura finds him there and literally drags him back to the hospital right after he ordered his meal, much to Naruto's sadness.
* Sakura and Ino's [[BigWhat reaction]] to seeing Naruto asking Hinata on a date.
** In that same panel, Kiba asks Shino "Why are we over here?" Shino replies with "[[BreakingTheFourthWall I wanted to be in the picture.]]"
!!Chapter 3
* Hinata tries to help Naruto with the picnic, so she comes closer to him. Naruto doesn't notice her and they accidentally bonk their heads against each other, causing the two of them to be lying on the ground in a dazed state.
* Mina is healing a fellow ninja and, while talking about his current state, says that he could die. She's then reminded not to say that in front of him, leading to this exchange:
-->'''Ninja:''' D...DIE?!\\
'''Mina:''' OOOHH! Um... sorry. I... I didn't mean... Umm... don't worry. You'll... you'll be just fine! Honestly!\\
'''Ninja:''' YOU JUST SAID I WAS GONNA DIE!!\\
'''Mina:''' No... I said you could die. You could still live too!\\
'''Ninja:''' WHAT DO YOU MEAN COULD?\\
'''Mina:''' WAAHH! That's not what I meant!
* Ino notices that Sakura is snickering while explaining that Kiba injured his knee. Sakura then explains that Kiba got injured by falling off Akamaru's back, causing Ino to laugh as well much to his annoyance.
* Mina is about to tell Sakura about the return of Sasuke, only to be distracted by the sight of Kiba on a hospital bed.
-->'''Mina:''' ''[blushing]'' Are you injured? Does it hurt you? Can I get you anything? Do you feel faint?\\
'''Kiba:''' ''[looking confused]'' Eh?... I'm... fine, Mina.
!!Chapter 4
* Naruto calling himself a moron and making an over-the-top panicking face over how he handled his latest interaction with Hinata.
* When Naruto sees Sasuke at the Hokage's office, at first, it looks like it's gonna be a heartwarming reunion. However, Naruto punches Sasuke on the head and calls him a baka, leading to the two bickering like in the old days. Sakura is at first confused before being angry at Naruto like usual and hurting him.
-->'''Kakashi:''' ''[looking exasperated alongside Tsunade]'' Not even together for five minutes, and it's like they've never been apart!
* Kiba complaining about Mina being such a klutz.
-->'''Kiba:''' I mean she's a Chunin, and I've seen her trip over her own feet... HER OWN FEET!
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* Rokuro made the mistake of stealing Kakashi's body in order to infiltrate Konoha and assassinate the Hokage. Incidentally, Kakashi had memorized ''Icha Icha Paradise'' and was positively eager to have a captive audience to recite it to...
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-->'''Sasuke''': Er, you see...
-->'''Sakura''': Let's go, Sasuke.
-->'''Sasuke''': *hangs head and follows quietly*
-->'''Sasuke''': Er, you see...
-->'''Sakura''': Let's go, Sasuke.
-->'''Sasuke''': *hangs head and follows quietly*
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-->'''Sasuke''':
'''Sasuke:''' Er, you
-->'''Sakura''':
'''Sakura:''' Let's go,
-->'''Sasuke''':
'''Sasuke:''' *hangs head and follows quietly*
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* During Tenten's bachelorette party, Naruto jutsu winds up controlled by a member of the Kyouko clan, who uses Naruto's shadow clones to attack the rest of the party. Everyone else has a moderately difficult time. Except for Sakura, who dusts multiple clones at a time, with a small happy smile on her face.face.
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* Naruto and Hinata apologize to [[spoiler: Kushina]] for their absence while they work out their differences over wedding catering. [[spoiler: Kushina]] waves it off, it gave her a chance to make the bed. [[ParentalSexualitySquick It takes a few moments for Naruto and Hinata to realize why]] [[spoiler: Minato and Kushina]] would have to make the bed, ''again'', in the middle of the afternoon.
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-->'''Sasuke''': *hangs head and follows quietly*quietly*
* During Tenten's bachelorette party, Naruto jutsu winds up controlled by a member of the Kyouko clan, who uses Naruto's shadow clones to attack the rest of the party. Everyone else has a moderately difficult time. Except for Sakura, who dusts multiple clones at a time, with a small happy smile on her face.
* During Tenten's bachelorette party, Naruto jutsu winds up controlled by a member of the Kyouko clan, who uses Naruto's shadow clones to attack the rest of the party. Everyone else has a moderately difficult time. Except for Sakura, who dusts multiple clones at a time, with a small happy smile on her face.
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* Gaara is not exactly the fun-having type of guy, and feels lost on vacation. So he asks a little girl if building her little sandcastle is "fun"... and then, with her encouragement, Gaara of the ''Sand'' builds a ''sandcastle''. With ''style''.
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* Gaara is not exactly the fun-having type of guy, and feels lost on vacation. So he asks a little girl if building her little sandcastle is "fun"... and then, with her encouragement, Gaara of the ''Sand'' Sand builds a ''sandcastle''. With ''style''.
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* Gaara is not exactly the fun-having type of guy, and feels lost on vacation. So he asks a little girl if building her little sandcastle is "fun"... and then, with her encouragement, Gaara of the ''Sand'' builds a ''sandcastle''. Withe With ''style''.
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* Gaara is not exactly the fun-having type of guy, and feels lost on vacation. So he asks a little girl if building her little sandcastle is "fun"... and then, with her encouragement, Gaara of the ''Sand'' builds a ''sandcastle''. Withe ''style''.
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'''Sasuke''': Er, you see...
'''Sakura''': Let's go, Sasuke.
'''Sasuke''': *hangs head and follows quietly*
'''Sakura''': Let's go, Sasuke.
'''Sasuke''': *hangs head and follows quietly*
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--> '''Sakura''': Let's go, Sasuke.
--> '''Sasuke''': *hangs head and follows quietly*
--> '''Sasuke''': Er, you see...
--> '''Sakura''': Let's go, Sasuke.
--> '''Sasuke''': *hangs head and follows quietly*
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* It's subtle, but anyone who angers Sakura immediately hides behind Naruto. Perhaps on the assumption that she's hit Naruto a lot so he's pretty good at taking it.
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* It's subtle, but anyone who angers Sakura immediately hides behind Naruto. Perhaps on the assumption that she's hit Naruto a lot so he's pretty good at taking it.it.
* Sasuke pantomimed a cracking whip while watching Hinata sweet talk Naruto into getting his head injury checked out... right in front of Sakura.
--> '''Sakura''': *level stare* Whipped. Really?
--> '''Sasuke''': Er, you see...
--> '''Sakura''': Let's go, Sasuke.
--> '''Sasuke''': *hangs head and follows quietly*
* Sasuke pantomimed a cracking whip while watching Hinata sweet talk Naruto into getting his head injury checked out... right in front of Sakura.
--> '''Sakura''': *level stare* Whipped. Really?
--> '''Sasuke''': Er, you see...
--> '''Sakura''': Let's go, Sasuke.
--> '''Sasuke''': *hangs head and follows quietly*
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* Rokuro made the mistake of stealing Kakashi's body in order to infiltrate Konoha and assassinate the Hokage. Incidentally, Kakashi had memorized ''Icha Icha Paradise'' and was positively eager to have a captive audience to recite it to...
* Hiashi has a habit of drawing his sword on Naruto, whether it's to defend Hinata's honor, or to emphasize his instructions regarding Naruto's treatment of Hinata, and even once by accident because Neji, the real target of Hiashi's wrath, just so happened to hide behind Naruto.
* It's subtle, but anyone who angers Sakura immediately hides behind Naruto. Perhaps on the assumption that she's hit Naruto a lot so he's pretty good at taking it.
* Hiashi has a habit of drawing his sword on Naruto, whether it's to defend Hinata's honor, or to emphasize his instructions regarding Naruto's treatment of Hinata, and even once by accident because Neji, the real target of Hiashi's wrath, just so happened to hide behind Naruto.
* It's subtle, but anyone who angers Sakura immediately hides behind Naruto. Perhaps on the assumption that she's hit Naruto a lot so he's pretty good at taking it.
