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* Kana is seriously into the moment when she and Daikichi are ... you know ... and she floats towards the ceiling clutching Daikichi. When she, ''[[BlushSticker ahem]]'', finishes, she gets a bit insubstantial, leaving Daikichi unsupported several feet above the ground. Gravity Ensues.
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* Kana is seriously into the moment when she and Daikichi are ... you know ... are having sex and she floats towards the ceiling clutching Daikichi. When she, ''[[BlushSticker ahem]]'', finishes, she gets a bit insubstantial, leaving Daikichi unsupported several feet above the ground. Gravity Ensues.
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!! '''''Moments pages are Administrivia/SpoilersOff.'''''
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* After [[spoiler: Utako moves in, but before Kana and Daikichi know she is there,]] Kana has been hearing strange noises in the apartments:
--> '''Kana:''' (serious) Don't be too shocked... but one comes out... in this building...
--> '''Daikichi:''' One what?
--> '''Kana:''' (excitedly) A '''ghost'''!
--> ''[[BeatPanel sound of dog barking in the distance]]''
--> '''Daikichi:''' (deadpan) ... You don't say. I already knew that.
--> '''Kana:''' (serious) Don't be too shocked... but one comes out... in this building...
--> '''Daikichi:''' One what?
--> '''Kana:''' (excitedly) A '''ghost'''!
--> ''[[BeatPanel sound of dog barking in the distance]]''
--> '''Daikichi:''' (deadpan) ... You don't say. I already knew that.
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* After [[spoiler: Utako moves in, but before Kana and Daikichi know she is there,]] there, Kana has been hearing strange noises in the apartments:
--> '''Kana:''' -->'''Kana:''' (serious) Don't be too shocked... but one comes out... in this building...
-->building...\\
'''Daikichi:''' Onewhat?
-->what?\\
'''Kana:''' (excitedly) A'''ghost'''!
-->'''ghost'''!\\
''[[BeatPanel sound of dog barking in thedistance]]''
-->distance]]''\\
'''Daikichi:''' (deadpan) ... You don't say. I already knew that.
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'''Daikichi:''' One
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'''Kana:''' (excitedly) A
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'''Daikichi:''' (deadpan) ... You don't say. I already knew that.
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--> '''Kana:''' A '''ghost'''!
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--> '''Kana:''' (excitedly) A '''ghost'''!
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--> '''Daikichi:''' ... You don't say. I already knew that.
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--> '''Daikichi:''' ...'''Daikichi:''' (deadpan) ... You don't say. I already knew that.
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* She's pretty excited about getting to drink beer again after so many years. And even notices they changed the label. As she goes on to drink Daikuchi further into the poorhouse in chapter 1.
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* She's pretty excited about getting to drink beer again after so many years. And even notices they changed the label. As she goes on to drink Daikuchi further into the poorhouse in chapter 1.1.
* ''Too spicy!''
* ''Too spicy!''
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Removing Nightmare Fuel potholes. NF should be on YMMV only.
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* Kana's retaliation for Daikichi drawing all over the image of her face on the peace wall, when she's in it for a significant time after an argument. It [[{{Understatement}} wouldn't b]][[NightmareFuel e funny]], except for the situation and the fact that when you look at her face on the wall behind him when he wakes up with the bloody handprints, she's sticking her tongue out and audibly raspberrying him.
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* Kana's retaliation for Daikichi drawing all over the image of her face on the peace wall, when she's in it for a significant time after an argument. It [[{{Understatement}} wouldn't b]][[NightmareFuel e be funny]], except for the situation and the fact that when you look at her face on the wall behind him when he wakes up with the bloody handprints, she's sticking her tongue out and audibly raspberrying him.
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* She's pretty excited about getting a beer again after so many years. And even notices they changed the label. As she goes on to drink Daikuchi further into the poorhouse in chapter 1.
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* She's pretty excited about getting a to drink beer again after so many years. And even notices they changed the label. As she goes on to drink Daikuchi further into the poorhouse in chapter 1.
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* The whole first part of chapter 4 (after the teaser/title page).
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* The whole first part of chapter 4 (after the teaser/title page).page).
* She's pretty excited about getting a beer again after so many years. And even notices they changed the label. As she goes on to drink Daikuchi further into the poorhouse in chapter 1.
* She's pretty excited about getting a beer again after so many years. And even notices they changed the label. As she goes on to drink Daikuchi further into the poorhouse in chapter 1.
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* Kana's retaliation for Daikichi drawing all over the image of her face on the peace wall, when she's in it for a significant time after an argument. It [[{{Understatement}} wouldn't b]][[NightmareFuel e funny]], except for the situation and the fact that when you look at her face on the wall behind him when he wakes up with the bloody handprints, she's sticking her tongue out and audibly raspberrying him.
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* Kana's retaliation for Daikichi drawing all over the image of her face on the peace wall, when she's in it for a significant time after an argument. It [[{{Understatement}} wouldn't b]][[NightmareFuel e funny]], except for the situation and the fact that when you look at her face on the wall behind him when he wakes up with the bloody handprints, she's sticking her tongue out and audibly raspberrying him.him.
* The book signing in chapter 20, directly related to previous chapter 5 example.
* The whole first part of chapter 4 (after the teaser/title page).
* The book signing in chapter 20, directly related to previous chapter 5 example.
* The whole first part of chapter 4 (after the teaser/title page).
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* Kana's retaliation for Daikichi drawing all over the image of her face on the peace wall, when she's in it for a significant time after an argument. It wouldn't be funny, except for the situation and the fact that when you look at her face on the wall behind him when he wakes up with the bloody handprints, she's sticking her tongue out and audibly raspberrying him.
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* Kana's retaliation for Daikichi drawing all over the image of her face on the peace wall, when she's in it for a significant time after an argument. It [[{{Understatement}} wouldn't be funny, b]][[NightmareFuel e funny]], except for the situation and the fact that when you look at her face on the wall behind him when he wakes up with the bloody handprints, she's sticking her tongue out and audibly raspberrying him.
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just cause she raspberried him while doing it, I laughed hard at that. And he deserved what he got for drawing on her face on the peace wall :p
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--> "1.. 2... 3... 4?!"
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--> "1.. 2... 3... 4?!"4?!"
* Kana's retaliation for Daikichi drawing all over the image of her face on the peace wall, when she's in it for a significant time after an argument. It wouldn't be funny, except for the situation and the fact that when you look at her face on the wall behind him when he wakes up with the bloody handprints, she's sticking her tongue out and audibly raspberrying him.
* Kana's retaliation for Daikichi drawing all over the image of her face on the peace wall, when she's in it for a significant time after an argument. It wouldn't be funny, except for the situation and the fact that when you look at her face on the wall behind him when he wakes up with the bloody handprints, she's sticking her tongue out and audibly raspberrying him.
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* After [[spoiler: Utako moves in, but before Kana and Daikichi know she is there,]] Kana has been hearing strange noises in the apartments:
--> '''Kana:''' (serious) Don't be too shocked... but one comes out... in this building...
--> '''Daikichi:''' One what?
--> '''Kana:''' A '''ghost'''!
--> ''[[BeatPanel sound of dog barking in the distance]]''
--> '''Daikichi:''' ... You don't say. I already knew that.
--> '''Kana:''' (serious) Don't be too shocked... but one comes out... in this building...
--> '''Daikichi:''' One what?
--> '''Kana:''' A '''ghost'''!
--> ''[[BeatPanel sound of dog barking in the distance]]''
--> '''Daikichi:''' ... You don't say. I already knew that.
