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--->'''Pinkie Pie''': Minty, why are you in my house? [[ItMakesSenseInContext And why do you have a sock on your head?]]\\
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--->'''Pinkie Pie''': Minty, why What are you in my house? doing here, with [[ItMakesSenseInContext And why do you have a sock one of your socks on your head?]]\\
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* Razzaroo is showing Wysteria's page from her scrapbook.
-->'''Razzaroo''': Even at her birthday picnic, she picked wildflowers. Then a bee picked her nose. [[ThatCameOutWrong No, that didn’t come out right!]] A bee landed on her nose.
-->'''Razzaroo''': Even at her birthday picnic, she picked wildflowers. Then a bee picked her nose. [[ThatCameOutWrong No, that didn’t come out right!]] A bee landed on her nose.
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* Kimono's [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Mare]] moment. Minty comes by and, [[BadLiar in an extremely transparent fashion]], gets some advice on how the eight of them should handle the fact that they're all basically making her the birthday present. After Minty walks off, Kimono comments, "This is why I live out of town."
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* Kimono's [[OnlySaneMan Only Sane Mare]] moment. Minty comes by and, [[BadLiar in an extremely transparent fashion]], gets some advice on how the eight of them should handle the fact that they're all basically making her the same birthday present. After Minty walks off, Kimono comments, "This is why I live out of town."
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* Twinkle Twirl triumphantly finishes her "Rainbow Rollercoaster" dance...then turns to see complete chaos behind her as the other ponies run amuck and crash into things. When Skywishes talks to her about the need for an extra-special wish, [[FunnyBackgroundEvent the ponies are still horsing around behind them.]] At one point, Coconut Cream slides across the floor randomly and smashes into a cake.
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** While helping Minty with the balloon, Thistle Whistle gets tangled up in its cord. Followed by this exchange:
--->'''Minty''': Thistle, do you know the way home?\\
'''Thistle Whistle''': [[DeadpanSnarker I'm okay, thanks for asking!]]
--->'''Minty''': Thistle, do you know the way home?\\
'''Thistle Whistle''': [[DeadpanSnarker I'm okay, thanks for asking!]]
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* After Rarity's song, she ends up in the mud, and she accidentally splashes Rainbow Dash with it. When Rarity notices, cue RD pulling a hilarious DeathGlare, as pictured above. She then gets as close to TranquilFury as we've ever seen her, and assures Rarity that if she knew how to get her back to Unicornia, [[StealthInsult she would tell her instantly]].
** And then, when Rarity says that she wants to go home, the other ponies ''drop'' RD and just leave her there. Some friends they are.
** And then, when Rarity says that she wants to go home, the other ponies ''drop'' RD and just leave her there. Some friends they are.
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* After Rarity's song, she ends up in the mud, and she accidentally splashes Rainbow Dash with it. When Rarity notices, cue RD pulling a hilarious DeathGlare, as pictured above. She then gets as close to TranquilFury as we've ever seen her, and assures Rarity that if she knew how to get her back to Unicornia, [[StealthInsult she would tell her instantly]].
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** And then, when Rarity says that she wants to go home, the other ponies ''drop'' RD and just leave her there. Some friends theyare.
are. Rainbow then gets as close to TranquilFury as we've ever seen her, and assures Rarity that if she knew where Unicornia was, [[StealthInsult she would be glad to tell her]].
** And then, when Rarity says that she wants to go home, the other ponies ''drop'' RD and just leave her there. Some friends they
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* After Rarity's song, she ends up in the mud, and she accidentally splashes Rainbow Dash with it. When Rarity notices, cue RD pulling a hilarious DeathGlare, as pictured above. She then gets as close to TranquilFury as we've ever seen her, and assures Rarity that if she knew how to get her back to Unicornia, [[StealthInsult she would do it immediately]].
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* After Rarity's song, she ends up in the mud, and she accidentally splashes Rainbow Dash with it. When Rarity notices, cue RD pulling a hilarious DeathGlare, as pictured above. She then gets as close to TranquilFury as we've ever seen her, and assures Rarity that if she knew how to get her back to Unicornia, [[StealthInsult she would do it immediately]].tell her instantly]].
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Changed line(s) 67 (click to see context) from:
* After Rarity's song, she ends up in the mud, and she accidentally splashes Rainbow Dash with it. When Rarity notices, cue RD pulling a hilarious DeathGlare, as pictured above. She then gets as close to TranquilFury as we've ever seen her, and assures Rarity that if she knew how to get her back to Unicornia, [[StealthInsult she would do it instantly]].
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* After Rarity's song, she ends up in the mud, and she accidentally splashes Rainbow Dash with it. When Rarity notices, cue RD pulling a hilarious DeathGlare, as pictured above. She then gets as close to TranquilFury as we've ever seen her, and assures Rarity that if she knew how to get her back to Unicornia, [[StealthInsult she would do it instantly]].immediately]].
