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** I said b4 this is serious, lots of ppl will get killed maybe even some of the MCs so dont laugh bitches PS [[TakeThatCritics The monsters in this part reprisent u, flamers! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA]]
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** I said b4 this is serious, lots of ppl will get killed maybe even some of the MCs [=MCs=] so dont laugh bitches PS [[TakeThatCritics The monsters in this part reprisent u, flamers! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA]]
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** [[CaptainObvious "I was only a baby when I was borned.]] [[MarySue But evern as a baby I was slim an pale not looking like a fukin tomato like all teh other babys."]]
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** [[CaptainObvious "I was only a baby when I was borned.]] [[MarySue But evern as a baby I was slim an pale not looking like a fukin tomato like all teh other babys."]]"
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* Ivy betrays them to Kronos. Why? "He was so [[YouKeepUsingThatWord pervasive!"]]
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* The courtroom scene. [[ArtisticLicenseLaw Hanna does not know how a court operates.]]
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* The Both courtroom scene.scenes. [[ArtisticLicenseLaw Hanna does not know how a court operates.]]
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** "Thou hast been...served!"
** "Look Im sorry but I can't have 2 lawyers, thats just not how court works ok. Maybe 1 of you can be on teh jury instead or maybe like a judge or something"
** "Moshion 66...moshion to suk it"
** "Look Im sorry but I can't have 2 lawyers, thats just not how court works ok. Maybe 1 of you can be on teh jury instead or maybe like a judge or something"
** "Moshion 66...moshion to suk it"