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* The ending credits of the arcs give characters some amusing titles, like labeling Umio as [[EmergancyFoodSupplyAnimal "Uzume's Emergency Rations."]]
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* The ending credits of the arcs give characters some amusing titles, like labeling Umio as [[EmergancyFoodSupplyAnimal [[EmergencyFoodSupplyAnimal "Uzume's Emergency Rations."]]
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Trope was cut/disambiguated due to cleanup
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* The ending credits of the arcs give characters some amusing titles, like labeling Umio as [[EatTheDog "Uzume's Emergency Rations."]]
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* The ending credits of the arcs give characters some amusing titles, like labeling Umio as [[EatTheDog [[EmergancyFoodSupplyAnimal "Uzume's Emergency Rations."]]
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I think Impossibly Low Necklone fits better since Cleavage Window refers to a hole in a woman's outfit rather than a strapless dress
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---> '''Blanc:''' [[BerserkButton Graaaaaaah]]!! I won't be made a fool of, you bastards! That Kurome asshole too! [...] I'm getting pissed off just looking at it! Uzume, the Sharing Field! Hurry it up!!
---> '''Uzume:''' R-Right...
---> ''(Uzume transforms into Orange Heart)''
---> '''Orange Heart:''' Blansy's scary...
---> '''Blanc:''' What'd you say?
---> '''Orange Heart:''' Eek?! N-Nothing! Sha-Shaving Fields activate!
---> '''Compa:''' She's so scared she's completely fumbling her words...
---> '''IF:''' Well, that's the normal response when you're not used to... um... [[HairTriggerTemper Blanc]]...
---> '''Uzume:''' R-Right...
---> ''(Uzume transforms into Orange Heart)''
---> '''Orange Heart:''' Blansy's scary...
---> '''Blanc:''' What'd you say?
---> '''Orange Heart:''' Eek?! N-Nothing! Sha-Shaving Fields activate!
---> '''Compa:''' She's so scared she's completely fumbling her words...
---> '''IF:''' Well, that's the normal response when you're not used to... um... [[HairTriggerTemper Blanc]]...
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* When Blanc gets trapped in Kurome's LotusEaterMachine alongside the other goddesses, she has a dream that emphasizes her deepest desires. Said dream shows that she had [[BreastExpansion grown a huge pair of breasts]] and becomes [[BigBreastPride very prideful]] of it. When Nepgear, C-Sha, and the twins go to visit her dream, they are understandably put-off by how she looks (Nepgear points out that Lowee's shares would go down if they see her like this, as well as the fact that, thanks to her increased bust, [[CleavageWindow her dress is far more revealing]], which C-Sha remarks is not appropriate for children) and how she acts (Blanc [[TookALevelInJerkass suddenly becomes cocky and unwelcoming after gaining huge breasts]], a dramatic shift in character that makes even ''[[ShrinkingViolet Rom]]'' angry), to the point that the twins consider getting rid of those 'funbags' by attempting to pop them with needles, which Nepgear tells Blanc to flee from them.
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* When Blanc gets trapped in Kurome's LotusEaterMachine alongside the other goddesses, she has a dream that emphasizes her deepest desires. Said dream shows that she had [[BreastExpansion grown a huge pair of breasts]] and becomes [[BigBreastPride very prideful]] of it. When Nepgear, C-Sha, and the twins go to visit her dream, they are understandably put-off by how she looks (Nepgear points out that Lowee's shares would go down if they see her like this, as well as the fact that, thanks to her increased bust, [[CleavageWindow [[ImpossiblyLowNeckline her dress is far more revealing]], which C-Sha remarks is not appropriate for children) and how she acts (Blanc [[TookALevelInJerkass suddenly becomes cocky and unwelcoming after gaining huge breasts]], a dramatic shift in character that makes even ''[[ShrinkingViolet Rom]]'' angry), to the point that the twins consider getting rid of those 'funbags' by attempting to pop them with needles, which Nepgear tells Blanc to flee from them.
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As much as I hate that scene, I had to add it anyways since it's one of the game's comedic moments.
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** Notably, this is a fun reference to Manga/AhMyGoddess and how goddesses do not get drunk... on alcohol at least.
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** Notably, this is a fun reference to Manga/AhMyGoddess ''Manga/AhMyGoddess'' and how goddesses do not get drunk... on alcohol at least.
* When Blanc gets trapped in Kurome's LotusEaterMachine alongside the other goddesses, she has a dream that emphasizes her deepest desires. Said dream shows that she had [[BreastExpansion grown a huge pair of breasts]] and becomes [[BigBreastPride very prideful]] of it. When Nepgear, C-Sha, and the twins go to visit her dream, they are understandably put-off by how she looks (Nepgear points out that Lowee's shares would go down if they see her like this, as well as the fact that, thanks to her increased bust, [[CleavageWindow her dress is far more revealing]], which C-Sha remarks is not appropriate for children) and how she acts (Blanc [[TookALevelInJerkass suddenly becomes cocky and unwelcoming after gaining huge breasts]], a dramatic shift in character that makes even ''[[ShrinkingViolet Rom]]'' angry), to the point that the twins consider getting rid of those 'funbags' by attempting to pop them with needles, which Nepgear tells Blanc to flee from them.
--> '''Blanc:''' A thin and flattering waist, a large round bottom, and breasts that would make even [[MsFanservice Vert]] cry. Aren't ''I'' the ideal woman?
* When Blanc gets trapped in Kurome's LotusEaterMachine alongside the other goddesses, she has a dream that emphasizes her deepest desires. Said dream shows that she had [[BreastExpansion grown a huge pair of breasts]] and becomes [[BigBreastPride very prideful]] of it. When Nepgear, C-Sha, and the twins go to visit her dream, they are understandably put-off by how she looks (Nepgear points out that Lowee's shares would go down if they see her like this, as well as the fact that, thanks to her increased bust, [[CleavageWindow her dress is far more revealing]], which C-Sha remarks is not appropriate for children) and how she acts (Blanc [[TookALevelInJerkass suddenly becomes cocky and unwelcoming after gaining huge breasts]], a dramatic shift in character that makes even ''[[ShrinkingViolet Rom]]'' angry), to the point that the twins consider getting rid of those 'funbags' by attempting to pop them with needles, which Nepgear tells Blanc to flee from them.
--> '''Blanc:''' A thin and flattering waist, a large round bottom, and breasts that would make even [[MsFanservice Vert]] cry. Aren't ''I'' the ideal woman?
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---> '''Blanc:''' [[RageBreakingPoint Graaaaaaah]]!! I won't be made a fool of, you bastards! That Kurome asshole too! [...] I'm getting pissed off just looking at it! Uzume, the Sharing Field! Hurry it up!!
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---> '''Blanc:''' [[RageBreakingPoint [[BerserkButton Graaaaaaah]]!! I won't be made a fool of, you bastards! That Kurome asshole too! [...] I'm getting pissed off just looking at it! Uzume, the Sharing Field! Hurry it up!!
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---> '''Blanc:''' [[RageBreakingPoint Graaaaaaah]]!! I won't be made a fool of, you bastards! That Kurome asshole too! That Kurome asshole too! [...] I'm getting pissed off just looking at it! Uzume, the Sharing Field! Hurry it up!!
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---> '''Blanc:''' [[RageBreakingPoint Graaaaaaah]]!! I won't be made a fool of, you bastards! That Kurome asshole too! That Kurome asshole too! [...] I'm getting pissed off just looking at it! Uzume, the Sharing Field! Hurry it up!!
