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* Shinji rescues a plane about to crash down, asks if everybody is fine and a goon of Asuka's security detail complains he has bitten his tongue off... he has just survived a plane crash and he is complaining about his tongue hurting.
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* Shinji rescues a plane about to crash down, asks if everybody is fine and a goon of Asuka's security detail complains he has bitten his tongue off...tongue... he has just survived a plane crash and he is complaining about his tongue hurting.
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* After a conversation with Misato concerning men, Rei is told to buy a motorcycle instead of chasing after boys. [[LiteralMinded She does]].
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* After a conversation with Misato concerning men, Rei is told to buy a motorcycle instead of chasing after boys. [[LiteralMinded She does]].does.]]
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* After a conversation with Misato concerning men, Rei is told to buy a motorcycle instead of chasing after boys. [[LiteralMinded she does]].
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* After a conversation with Misato concerning men, Rei is told to buy a motorcycle instead of chasing after boys. [[LiteralMinded she She does]].
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*After a conversation with Misato concerning men, Rei is told to buy a motorcycle instead of chasing after boys. [[LiteralMinded she does]].
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* In chapter 8 Asuka goes to school and notices she is not the center of attention anymore. She is not amused for it.
-->''First of all, when she arrived at school, Shinji in tow, she discovered that she was no longer the center of attention, and this inflamed her sensibilities deeply.''
-->''First of all, when she arrived at school, Shinji in tow, she discovered that she was no longer the center of attention, and this inflamed her sensibilities deeply.''
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Funny moments found in ''Fanfic/LastChildOfKrypton'':
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* Shinji rescues a plane about to crash down, asks if everybody is fine and a goon of Asuka's security detail complains he has bitten his tongue off... he has just survived a plane crash and he is complaining about his tongue hurting.
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* Shinji rescues a plane about to crash down, asks if everybody is fine and a goon of Asuka's security detail complains he has bitten his tongue off... he has just survived a plane crash and he is complaining about his tongue hurting.
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