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** Chiefblaze was imprisoned for "spitting at a fireman."
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** Chiefblaze [[IronicName Chiefblaze]] was imprisoned for "spitting at a fireman."
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* The fact that, instead of simply opposing the rehabilitation of [=BoyJedi=], most of the prisoners chanted for his death.
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* The fact that, instead of simply opposing the rehabilitation of [=BoyJedi=], asking for [=BoyJedi=] to be released, most of the prisoners chanted for his death.
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* Solev's reaction to Ish having the front gate open up due to lack of funding:
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* Solev's reaction [[NotSoStoic reaction]] to Ish having the front gate open up due to lack of funding:
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* The "Age of Jungle Advancement," featuring such wonders as the VideoGame/AmongUs crewmate monument, [[SensoryAbuse sound machine]], and lag "machine" (a bunch of Minecraft boats scattered around the village).
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* The "Age of Jungle Advancement," featuring such wonders as the VideoGame/AmongUs "VideoGame/AmongUs crewmate monument, [[SensoryAbuse monument", "[[SensoryAbuse sound machine]], machine]]", and lag "machine" "lag 'machine'" (a bunch of Minecraft boats scattered around the village).
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-->-- ''"What type of ritual is this?" - Ish, after observing one of their ceremonies''
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-->--''"The walls keep us safe. We can't leave the walls for long, cuz(sic) then we're not safe. Everyone inside the walls is safe Everyone outside is not safe. The're strangers we shoudn't trust them." - unsentinel: desert cultist''
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** After hoping that nothing bad happens between the Plains factions, someone in Sidefall's town states that they want to make an VideoGame/AmongUs character. Ish then immediately backpedals, [[KickTheDog "hop[ing that] they die."]]
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** After hoping that nothing bad happens between the Plains factions, someone in Sidefall's town states that they want to make an VideoGame/AmongUs character. [[VerbalBackspace Ish then immediately backpedals, backpedals]], [[KickTheDog "hop[ing that] they die."]]
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--> "Don't worry about it. [[JustBetweenYouAndMe Just don't them know. Don't let the other team]][[VerbalBackspace .. or]] don't let our underclass know at that, please. [[ComedicSociopathy They work in the farms.]]"
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--> "Don't worry about it. [[JustBetweenYouAndMe Just don't them know. Don't let the other team]][[VerbalBackspace .. or]] or, don't let our underclass know at that, please. please.]] [[ComedicSociopathy They work in the farms.]]"
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* Solev executing someone for the [[FelonyMisdemeanor "crime"]] of [[ARareSentence "build[ing] a monument to worship]] Music/CardiB" and was [[UnusualEuphemism "whopped" out of existence]].
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* Solev executing someone for the [[FelonyMisdemeanor "crime"]] of [[ARareSentence "build[ing] a monument to worship]] Music/CardiB" and was [[UnusualEuphemism "whopped" "'whopped' out of existence]].existence."]]
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--> ''[[CrazyPrepared "Oh, By the way/Also don't push any buttons you find in here."]]''
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** [[DeadpanSnarker Ish]] summarizing [[AnAesop the moral]] of this event: [[SpoofAesop "Don't call everyone to the cafeteria]] ''[[SpoofAesop at once!]]'' "
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** [[DeadpanSnarker Ish]] summarizing [[AnAesop the moral]] of this event: [[SpoofAesop "Don't call everyone to the cafeteria]] ''[[SpoofAesop at once!]]'' "once!"]]''
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** [[DeadpanSnarker Ish]] summarizing [[AnAesop the moral]] of this event: [[SpoofAesop "Don't call everyone to the cafeteria]] ''[[SpoofAesop at once!]]''[[SpoofAesop "]]
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** [[DeadpanSnarker Ish]] summarizing [[AnAesop the moral]] of this event: [[SpoofAesop "Don't call everyone to the cafeteria]] ''[[SpoofAesop at once!]]''[[SpoofAesop "]]once!]]'' "
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** [[DeadpanSnarker Ish]] summarizing [[AnAesop the moral]] of this event: "Don't call everyone to the cafeteria ''at once!''"
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** [[DeadpanSnarker Ish]] summarizing [[AnAesop the moral]] of this event: [[SpoofAesop "Don't call everyone to the cafeteria ''at once!''"cafeteria]] ''[[SpoofAesop at once!]]''[[SpoofAesop "]]
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** [=AFreakinTurkey=] [[KickTheDog threatening]] the farmers on the Snow mountain with [=TooDrew=]'s bow into agreeing to a large delivery order.
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** [=AFreakinTurkey=] [[KickTheDog [[ShootTheDog threatening]] the farmers on the Snow mountain with [=TooDrew=]'s bow into agreeing to a large delivery order.
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* You know Zuffii, the guy who got knocked off a pillar to his death early on during the [[FinalBattle Battle of the Wooden Fence]]? Turns out, according to his own perspective, [[LockedOutOfTheLoop he wasn't paying enough attention to world events, and so joined the battle on the side of the United Sands without knowing what was happening.]]
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* You know Zuffii, the guy who got knocked off a pillar to his death early on during the [[FinalBattle Battle of the Wooden Fence]]? Turns out, according to his own perspective, [[LockedOutOfTheLoop [[IgnoredVitalNewsReports he wasn't paying enough attention to world events, and so joined the battle on the side of the United Sands without knowing what was happening.]]
