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* After a few successful bouts, they get weirder. They fight on a tiny ring they barely fit on, even one so high that they're [[EventObscuringCamera off screen]]. Their opponents then come [[VideoGame/{{Flicky}} from]] [[VideoGame/AlexKidd different]] [[VideoGame/AlteredBeast games]], including numerous {{Palette Swap}}s of the [[VideoGame/GoldenAxe Bad Brothers]].
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* After a few successful bouts, they get weirder. They fight on a tiny ring they barely fit on, even one so high that they're [[EventObscuringCamera off screen]]. Their opponents then come [[VideoGame/{{Flicky}} from]] [[VideoGame/AlexKidd different]] [[VideoGame/AlteredBeast [[VideoGame/AlteredBeast1988 games]], including numerous {{Palette Swap}}s of the [[VideoGame/GoldenAxe Bad Brothers]].
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!! "[[OverlyLongTitle Shine! The 54th! Shock to the Brain! No Spillage, But We'll Destroy the Barriers of Spillage-obsessed Youth! Sehagaga Academy Culture Festival!]]"
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!! "[[OverlyLongTitle Shine! "Shine! The 54th! Shock to the Brain! No Spillage, But We'll Destroy the Barriers of Spillage-obsessed Youth! Sehagaga Academy Culture Festival!]]"
Festival!"
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* After a few successful bouts, they get weirder. They fight on a tiny ring they barely fit on, even one so high that they're [[CameraScrew [[EventObscuringCamera off screen]]. Their opponents then come [[VideoGame/{{Flicky}} from]] [[VideoGame/AlexKidd different]] [[VideoGame/AlteredBeast games]], including numerous {{Palette Swap}}s of the [[VideoGame/GoldenAxe Bad Brothers]].
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* For failing the Lovely Girl contest [[{{Callback}} in a previous episode]], Mark III claims she'll win this time by stealing a car from VideoGame/SegaRally and return it before anyone notices. In another {{Callback}}, she pulls out a training wheel from her magic hat and tries to return it to Mega Drive, who refuses to use it. Mega Drive 2 asks her sister if she can use it instead, but Mega Drive refuses.
* When the girls have to make their way past the cast of ''Virtua Fighter'', Mega Drive is surrounded by several Kage Marus who all attack her with the Hi'endan (flying headbutt) and [[EpicFail completely miss her]]. The others think Mega Drive is expertly dodging them when she points out that she's simply running in a straight line.
* Ulala turns the ''Space Channel 5'' portion into a quiz show, and performs a dance so quickly that the girls couldn't hope to copy it. As for the question, it's whether she's hungry for instant yakisoba that tastes bland because it was cooked incorrectly. Dreamcast picks true and gets rewarded with another Puyo chute ride, while Saturn and Mega Drive get it wrong and get stuck behind a garbage puyo. The latter two are soon joined by two humans and over a dozen Morolians who also got the answer wrong.
* When the girls have to make their way past the cast of ''Virtua Fighter'', Mega Drive is surrounded by several Kage Marus who all attack her with the Hi'endan (flying headbutt) and [[EpicFail completely miss her]]. The others think Mega Drive is expertly dodging them when she points out that she's simply running in a straight line.
* Ulala turns the ''Space Channel 5'' portion into a quiz show, and performs a dance so quickly that the girls couldn't hope to copy it. As for the question, it's whether she's hungry for instant yakisoba that tastes bland because it was cooked incorrectly. Dreamcast picks true and gets rewarded with another Puyo chute ride, while Saturn and Mega Drive get it wrong and get stuck behind a garbage puyo. The latter two are soon joined by two humans and over a dozen Morolians who also got the answer wrong.
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* For failing the Lovely Girl contest [[{{Callback}} in a previous episode]], Mark III claims she'll win this time by stealing "borrowing" a car from VideoGame/SegaRally ''VideoGame/SegaRally'' and return it before anyone notices. In another {{Callback}}, she She then pulls out a training wheel from the ''Jet Set Radio'' lesson out of her magic hat and tries to return it to Mega Drive, who but she refuses to use it. Mega Drive 2 asks her sister if she can use it instead, but Mega Drive refuses.
doesn't let her.
* When the girls have to make their way past the cast of ''Virtua Fighter'', Mega Drive is surrounded by several Kage Marus who all attack her with the Hi'endan (flying headbutt) and [[EpicFail completely miss her]]. The others think Mega Drive is expertly dodging them whenshe points out that she's simply running in a straight line.
* Ulala turns the ''Space Channel 5'' portion into a quiz show, and performs a dance so quickly that the girls couldn't hope to copy it. As for the question, she asks whether it'swhether true or false that she's hungry for instant yakisoba that tastes bland because it was cooked incorrectly. Dreamcast picks true (because she would eat it) and gets rewarded with another Puyo chute ride, while Saturn and Mega Drive get it wrong and get stuck behind a garbage puyo. The latter two are soon joined by two humans and over a dozen Morolians who also got the answer wrong.wrong.
* Despite Saturn and Mega Drive being blocked in by a garbage puyo as a penalty for getting the answer wrong, Dreamcast somehow ends up in ''Border Break'' ''after'' they do.
* When the girls have to make their way past the cast of ''Virtua Fighter'', Mega Drive is surrounded by several Kage Marus who all attack her with the Hi'endan (flying headbutt) and [[EpicFail completely miss her]]. The others think Mega Drive is expertly dodging them when
* Ulala turns the ''Space Channel 5'' portion into a quiz show, and performs a dance so quickly that the girls couldn't hope to copy it. As for the question, she asks whether it's
* Despite Saturn and Mega Drive being blocked in by a garbage puyo as a penalty for getting the answer wrong, Dreamcast somehow ends up in ''Border Break'' ''after'' they do.
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* Mark III compares riding with Eggman to riding with an uncle she's never met. Meanwhile Robo Pitcher is hanging from the side of the Eggmobile and Master System and Mega Drive 2 are barely able to hang onto his wrecking ball.
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* Mark III compares riding shotgun with Eggman to riding with an uncle she's never met.she doesn't know. Meanwhile Robo Pitcher is hanging from the side of the Eggmobile and Master System and Mega Drive 2 are barely able to hang onto his wrecking ball.
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* Mark III compares riding with Eggman to riding with an uncle she's never met. Meanwhile Robo Pitcher is hanging from the side and Master System and Mega Drive 2 are barely able to hang onto his wrecking ball.
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* Mark III compares riding with Eggman to riding with an uncle she's never met. Meanwhile Robo Pitcher is hanging from the side of the Eggmobile and Master System and Mega Drive 2 are barely able to hang onto his wrecking ball.
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!! "The Excessive 54th Annual! Go Give It All You've Got! Only You Can Be the Champion! Surpass All the School Events of the Past! Sehagaga Academy Sports Festival!"
* When the girls have to make their way past the cast of ''Virtua Fighter'', Mega Drive is surrounded by several Kage Marus who all attack her with the Hi'endan (flying headbutt) and [[EpicFail completely miss her]]. She can't even watch how ridiculous it is.
* During the final race, while the other Hard Girls get help from Sonic, Eggman and Sakura, Saturn is left with the tiny Hercules Ricky Blue beetle. Akira, Jeffry, Wolf and Lau offer to carry her on a sedan chair, Adam Hunk returns only to be turned down again, and Gilius offers to carry or throw her before offering his axe instead.
* When the girls have to make their way past the cast of ''Virtua Fighter'', Mega Drive is surrounded by several Kage Marus who all attack her with the Hi'endan (flying headbutt) and [[EpicFail completely miss her]]. She can't even watch how ridiculous it is.
* During the final race, while the other Hard Girls get help from Sonic, Eggman and Sakura, Saturn is left with the tiny Hercules Ricky Blue beetle. Akira, Jeffry, Wolf and Lau offer to carry her on a sedan chair, Adam Hunk returns only to be turned down again, and Gilius offers to carry or throw her before offering his axe instead.
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!! "The "[[RunningGag The Excessive 54th Annual! Go No Holds Barred! Give It All You've Got! Only You Can Be the Champion! Winner Takes All! Surpass All the School Events of the Past! Sehagaga Academy Sports Festival!"
Festival!]]"
* After Dreamcast recites the name of the tournament, she simply shortens it as "VideoGame/HangOn".
* For failing the Lovely Girl contest [[{{Callback}} in a previous episode]], Mark III claims she'll win this time by stealing a car from VideoGame/SegaRally and return it before anyone notices. In another {{Callback}}, she pulls out a training wheel from her magic hat and tries to return it to Mega Drive, who refuses to use it. Mega Drive 2 asks her sister if she can use it instead, but Mega Drive refuses.
* When the girls have to make their way past the cast of ''Virtua Fighter'', Mega Drive is surrounded by several Kage Marus who all attack her with the Hi'endan (flying headbutt) and [[EpicFail completely miss her]].She can't even watch how ridiculous The others think Mega Drive is expertly dodging them when she points out that she's simply running in a straight line.
* Ulala turns the ''Space Channel 5'' portion into a quiz show, and performs a dance so quickly that the girls couldn't hope to copy it. As for the question, it's whether she's hungry for instant yakisoba that tastes bland because itis.
was cooked incorrectly. Dreamcast picks true and gets rewarded with another Puyo chute ride, while Saturn and Mega Drive get it wrong and get stuck behind a garbage puyo. The latter two are soon joined by two humans and over a dozen Morolians who also got the answer wrong.
* During the final race, while the other Hard Girls get help from Sonic, Eggman and Sakura, Saturn is left with the tiny Hercules Ricky Blue beetle. Akira, Jeffry, Wolf and Lau offer to carry her on a sedan chair, Adam Hunk returns only to be turned down again, and Gilius offers to carryor throw her on his back.
* Like in the previous festival, none of the girls end up winning. The small Hercules Ricky Blue beetle crosses the finish line right beforeoffering his axe instead.they do and wins the tournament.
* After Dreamcast recites the name of the tournament, she simply shortens it as "VideoGame/HangOn".
* For failing the Lovely Girl contest [[{{Callback}} in a previous episode]], Mark III claims she'll win this time by stealing a car from VideoGame/SegaRally and return it before anyone notices. In another {{Callback}}, she pulls out a training wheel from her magic hat and tries to return it to Mega Drive, who refuses to use it. Mega Drive 2 asks her sister if she can use it instead, but Mega Drive refuses.
* When the girls have to make their way past the cast of ''Virtua Fighter'', Mega Drive is surrounded by several Kage Marus who all attack her with the Hi'endan (flying headbutt) and [[EpicFail completely miss her]].
* Ulala turns the ''Space Channel 5'' portion into a quiz show, and performs a dance so quickly that the girls couldn't hope to copy it. As for the question, it's whether she's hungry for instant yakisoba that tastes bland because it
* During the final race, while the other Hard Girls get help from Sonic, Eggman and Sakura, Saturn is left with the tiny Hercules Ricky Blue beetle. Akira, Jeffry, Wolf and Lau offer to carry her on a sedan chair, Adam Hunk returns only to be turned down again, and Gilius offers to carry
* Like in the previous festival, none of the girls end up winning. The small Hercules Ricky Blue beetle crosses the finish line right before
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* With the lesson taking place inside ''VideoGame/VirtuaFighter'', each of the girls are given a special move from the game to use. Saturn gets a punch combo, Mega Drive gets a knee attack, and Dreamcast gets Kage's down attack, a jump that sends her headfirst into her downed opponent... or the concrete. Guess what happens more often.
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* With the lesson taking place inside ''VideoGame/VirtuaFighter'', each of the girls are given a special move from the game to use. Saturn gets a punch combo, Mega Drive gets a knee attack, and Dreamcast gets Kage's down attack, Kage Maru's Hi'endan, a jump that sends her headfirst into her downed opponent... or the concrete. Guess what happens more often.
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* During their farewell speech, the girls recall the games they covered, including ''VideoGame/CrazyTaxi'', ''Love and Berry'', and ''Feel the Magic''. [[OnlySaneWoman Saturn]] points out [[NoodleIncident they never covered those games]], while Mega Drive [[BlatantLies insists they did]] and Dreamcast tells her to just run with it.
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* During their farewell speech, the girls recall the games they covered, including ''VideoGame/CrazyTaxi'', ''Love and Berry'', and ''Feel the Magic''. [[OnlySaneWoman Saturn]] points out [[NoodleIncident they never covered those games]], while Mega Drive [[BlatantLies insists they did]] and Dreamcast tells her to just run with it.it.
!! "The Excessive 54th Annual! Go Give It All You've Got! Only You Can Be the Champion! Surpass All the School Events of the Past! Sehagaga Academy Sports Festival!"
* When the girls have to make their way past the cast of ''Virtua Fighter'', Mega Drive is surrounded by several Kage Marus who all attack her with the Hi'endan (flying headbutt) and [[EpicFail completely miss her]]. She can't even watch how ridiculous it is.
* During the final race, while the other Hard Girls get help from Sonic, Eggman and Sakura, Saturn is left with the tiny Hercules Ricky Blue beetle. Akira, Jeffry, Wolf and Lau offer to carry her on a sedan chair, Adam Hunk returns only to be turned down again, and Gilius offers to carry or throw her before offering his axe instead.
!! "The Excessive 54th Annual! Go Give It All You've Got! Only You Can Be the Champion! Surpass All the School Events of the Past! Sehagaga Academy Sports Festival!"
* When the girls have to make their way past the cast of ''Virtua Fighter'', Mega Drive is surrounded by several Kage Marus who all attack her with the Hi'endan (flying headbutt) and [[EpicFail completely miss her]]. She can't even watch how ridiculous it is.
* During the final race, while the other Hard Girls get help from Sonic, Eggman and Sakura, Saturn is left with the tiny Hercules Ricky Blue beetle. Akira, Jeffry, Wolf and Lau offer to carry her on a sedan chair, Adam Hunk returns only to be turned down again, and Gilius offers to carry or throw her before offering his axe instead.
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* Then it turns out Dreamcast's attack is a [[OneHitKill one-hit K.O.]], rendering the other girls' moves useless.
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* Then it turns out Dreamcast's attack is a [[OneHitKill one-hit K.O.]], rendering the other girls' moves useless.meaningless.
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* [[VideoGame/SakuraWars Sakura Shinguji]] makes a triumphant surprise appearance as the FinalBoss, but not even her Kohbu is safe from Dreamcast's flying headbutt.
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* [[VideoGame/SakuraWars Sakura Shinguji]] makes a triumphant surprise appearance as the FinalBoss, but [[CurbStompBattle effortlessly wipes the floor]] with the Hard Girls and even engages Dreamcast in a SwordFight. But even our beloved LadyOfWar learns the hard way that not even her Kohbu is safe from Dreamcast's flying headbutt.
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* Dreamcast's inability to use her Blast Runner, which left her unable to help the others fight the enemy Blast Runners.
!! "Shine! The 54th! Shock to the Brain! No Spillage, But We'll Destroy the Barriers of Spillage-obsessed Youth! Sehagaga Academy Culture Festival!"
!! "Shine! The 54th! Shock to the Brain! No Spillage, But We'll Destroy the Barriers of Spillage-obsessed Youth! Sehagaga Academy Culture Festival!"
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* Poor Saturn doesn't get a Blast Runner, meaning she has to move through the large canyon arena entirely on foot.
* Dreamcast's inability to use her Blast Runner, which left her unable to help the others fight the enemy BlastRunners.
Runners. Half the time she ended up shooting at Saturn instead.
!!"Shine! "[[OverlyLongTitle Shine! The 54th! Shock to the Brain! No Spillage, But We'll Destroy the Barriers of Spillage-obsessed Youth! Sehagaga Academy Culture Festival!"
Festival!]]"
* Dreamcast's inability to use her Blast Runner, which left her unable to help the others fight the enemy Blast
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* The episode ends with Dreamcasting fighting another and even bigger dragon boss... InSpace!
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* The episode ends with Dreamcasting Dreamcast fighting another and even bigger dragon boss... InSpace!
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* Each of the girls are given a special move from the game to use. Saturn gets a punch combo, Mega Drive gets a knee attack, and Dreamcast gets Kage's down attack, a jump that sends her headfirst into her downed opponent... or the concrete. Guess what happens more often.
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* Each With the lesson taking place inside ''VideoGame/VirtuaFighter'', each of the girls are given a special move from the game to use. Saturn gets a punch combo, Mega Drive gets a knee attack, and Dreamcast gets Kage's down attack, a jump that sends her headfirst into her downed opponent... or the concrete. Guess what happens more often.
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* The entire ''Virtua Fighter'' lesson.
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* Each of the girls are given a special move from the game to use. Saturn gets a punch combo, Mega Drive gets a knee attack, and Dreamcast gets Kage's down attack, a jump that sends her headfirst into her downed opponent... or the concrete. Guess what happens more often.
* Saturn learns to block to keep her health bar from dropping... and that Akira's attacks still hurt a lot regardless.
* Then it turns out Dreamcast's attack is a [[OneHitKill one-hit K.O.]], rendering the other girls' moves useless.
* After a few successful bouts, they get weirder. They fight on a tiny ring they barely fit on, even one so high that they're [[CameraScrew off screen]]. Their opponents then come [[VideoGame/{{Flicky}} from]] [[VideoGame/AlexKidd different]] [[VideoGame/AlteredBeast games]], including numerous {{Palette Swap}}s of the [[VideoGame/GoldenAxe Bad Brothers]].
* Theentire ''Virtua Fighter'' lesson.
girls get hyped to fight against the famous Hercules Ricky Blue beetle, except that it's so small that none of their attacks connect. It later flies away and calls out its mother, [[SummonBiggerFish a much bugger]] Hercules Ricky Blue. Dreamcast takes it out in one hit.
* [[VideoGame/SakuraWars Sakura Shinguji]] makes a triumphant surprise appearance as the FinalBoss, but not even her Kohbu is safe from Dreamcast's flying headbutt.
* Saturn learns to block to keep her health bar from dropping... and that Akira's attacks still hurt a lot regardless.
* Then it turns out Dreamcast's attack is a [[OneHitKill one-hit K.O.]], rendering the other girls' moves useless.
* After a few successful bouts, they get weirder. They fight on a tiny ring they barely fit on, even one so high that they're [[CameraScrew off screen]]. Their opponents then come [[VideoGame/{{Flicky}} from]] [[VideoGame/AlexKidd different]] [[VideoGame/AlteredBeast games]], including numerous {{Palette Swap}}s of the [[VideoGame/GoldenAxe Bad Brothers]].
* The
* [[VideoGame/SakuraWars Sakura Shinguji]] makes a triumphant surprise appearance as the FinalBoss, but not even her Kohbu is safe from Dreamcast's flying headbutt.
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* The episode ends with Dreamcasting fighting another and even bigger dragon boss... InSpace!
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* The girls propose a haunted house exhibit featuring [[ICantDance Mega Drive's]] [[CallBack dancing]] to scare people. She initially agrees until she realizes the joke.
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* The girls propose a haunted house exhibit featuring [[ICantDance Mega Drive's]] [[CallBack dancing]] to scare people. She initially agrees until she realizes she's the butt of the joke.
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* Mega Drive brings up a video of a car crash in ''VideoGame/OutRun'', saying the driver had twenty years left on the loan for his [[CoolCar Ferrari Testarossa]].
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* Mega Drive brings up a video of a car crash in ''VideoGame/OutRun'', saying revealing the driver had twenty years left on the loan for his [[CoolCar Ferrari Testarossa]].
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* Dreamcast's inability to use the Blast Runners, which left her unable to help the others fight the enemy Blast Runners.
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* Dreamcast's inability to use the her Blast Runners, Runner, which left her unable to help the others fight the enemy Blast Runners.
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* When Dreamcast and Saturn are damaged fighting against the boss, Mega Drive performs her healing spell, which grants them one measly hit point.
** When Mega Drive panics and throws her book at the dragon [[spoiler: and knocks it out.]]
** When Mega Drive panics and throws her book at the dragon [[spoiler: and knocks it out.]]
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* When Dreamcast and Saturn are damaged fighting against the boss, Mega Drive performs her special healing spell, which grants them one measly hit point.
**When How Mega Drive panics and throws her book at defeats the dragon [[spoiler: and knocks it out.]]
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* She later tries this as a peaceful resolution [[TooDumbToLive against the boss they encounter,]] with disastrous results.
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* She later tries this the same song and dance as a peaceful resolution [[TooDumbToLive against the boss they encounter,]] [[TalkToTheFist with disastrous results.results]].
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* The wall of text that describes the epic journey through Black Asobin's tower: His recoloring was great for the budget, Saturn suffered a WardrobeMalfunction during a battle, Dreamcast got homesick and cried, and nothing interesting happened with Mega Drive.
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* The wall of text that describes the epic journey through Black Asobin's tower: His recoloring was great for the show's budget, Saturn suffered a WardrobeMalfunction during a battle, Dreamcast got homesick and cried, and nothing interesting happened with Mega Drive.
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More examples, fixing my errors like Feel the Magic\'s english name
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* [[CloudCuckooLander Dreamcast]] [[EstablishingCharacterMoment introduces herself by saying her favorite food is naruto, and goes on a rant about how ramen doesn't have it anymore.]]
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* [[CloudCuckooLander Dreamcast]] [[EstablishingCharacterMoment introduces herself herself]] by saying her favorite food is naruto, and goes on a rant about how ramen doesn't have it anymore.]]
* Mega Drive brings up a video of a car crash in ''VideoGame/OutRun'', saying the driver had twenty years left on the loan for his [[CoolCar Ferrari Testarossa]].
* The girls propose a haunted house exhibit featuring [[ICantDance Mega Drive's]] [[CallBack dancing]] to scare people. She initially agrees until she realizes the joke.
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* As soon as they enter ''Chain Chronicle'', the girls are welcomed by a server error message.
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* As soon as they enter ''Chain Chronicle'', the girls are welcomed by a server connection error message.
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* In the following battle, a huge line of enemies appear. [[CloudCuckooLander Dreamcast tells them that it's not the line for a new ramen restaurant that everyone's talking about.]] The enemies immediately wander off; they really did mistake it for the ramen place...
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* In the following battle, a huge line of enemies appear. [[CloudCuckooLander Dreamcast Dreamcast]] tells them that it's not the line for a new ramen restaurant that everyone's talking about.]] about. The enemies immediately wander off; they off.
-->'''Mega Drive:''' They really did mistake it for the ramenplace...place's line.
-->'''Mega Drive:''' They really did mistake it for the ramen
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* She tries this as a peaceful resolution [[TooDumbToLive against the boss they encounter later on,]] with disastrous results.
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* She later tries this as a peaceful resolution [[TooDumbToLive against the boss they encounter later on,]] encounter,]] with disastrous results.
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* The wall of text that describes the epic journey to Black Asobin's tower: His recoloring was great for the budget, Saturn suffered a WardrobeMalfunction during a battle, Dreamcast got homesick and cried, and nothing interesting happened with Mega Drive.
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* The wall of text that describes the epic journey to through Black Asobin's tower: His recoloring was great for the budget, Saturn suffered a WardrobeMalfunction during a battle, Dreamcast got homesick and cried, and nothing interesting happened with Mega Drive.
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* During their farewell speech, the girls recall the games they covered, including ''VideoGame/CrazyTaxi'', ''Love & Berry'', and ''I Would Die For You''. [[OnlySaneWoman Saturn]] [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall points out they never covered those games]], while Mega Drive [[BlatantLies insists otherwise]] and Dreamcast tells her to just run with it.
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* During their farewell speech, the girls recall the games they covered, including ''VideoGame/CrazyTaxi'', ''Love & and Berry'', and ''I Would Die For You''. ''Feel the Magic''. [[OnlySaneWoman Saturn]] [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall points out [[NoodleIncident they never covered those games]], while Mega Drive [[BlatantLies insists otherwise]] they did]] and Dreamcast tells her to just run with it.
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* The various weapon ideas the girls come up with, such as wielding an irritated wife, a mother-in-law, ice cream, a backscratcher and other things.
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* The various weapon ideas the girls come up with, such as wielding an irritated wife, a mother-in-law, ice cream, a backscratcher and other things. Considering PSO has a tradition of having {{Joke Weapon}}s to fight with, it makes it funnier when you think about it.
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* The very fact an ''actual Rappy'' was the one that slayed the boss is priceless.
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* When the girls went to the nearby pub, they weren't able to do so since the pub's visitors were either cramming, partying, eating or just drinking to pass the time.
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* When the girls went to the nearby pub, pub to recruit members, they weren't able to do so since the pub's visitors were either cramming, partying, eating or just drinking to pass the time.
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* [[CloudCuckooLander Dreamcast]] [[EstablishingCharacterMoment introduces herself by saying her favorite food is naruto, and goes on a rant about how ramen doesn't have it anymore.]]
-->'''Mega Drive:''' That's it.
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* When the girls enter ''Chain Chronicle'', they're immediately welcomed by an error message saying it cannot connect to the server.
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* When the girls As soon as they enter ''Chain Chronicle'', they're immediately the girls are welcomed by an a server error message saying it cannot connect to the server.message.
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* In the following battle, a huge line of enemies appear. Dreamcast tells them that it's not the line for a new ramen restaurant that everyone's talking about. The enemies immediately wander off; they really did mistake it for the ramen place...
* After Dreamcast and Saturn are defeated by the boss, Mega Drive panics and throws her book at the dragon. It immediately knocks it out.
* After Dreamcast and Saturn are defeated by the boss, Mega Drive panics and throws her book at the dragon. It immediately knocks it out.
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* In the following battle, a huge line of enemies appear. [[CloudCuckooLander Dreamcast tells them that it's not the line for a new ramen restaurant that everyone's talking about. about.]] The enemies immediately wander off; they really did mistake it for the ramen place...
*After When Dreamcast and Saturn are defeated by damaged fighting against the boss, Mega Drive performs her healing spell, which grants them one measly hit point.
** When Mega Drive panics and throws her book at thedragon. It immediately dragon [[spoiler: and knocks it out.
out.]]
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** When Mega Drive panics and throws her book at the
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* Mega Drive's handicap skates. She can't control her speed and goes straight into a wall. She later flies into the sky, landing in what appears to be the ocean.
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* Mega Drive's handicap skates. She can't control her speed and goes straight into a wall. She later flies into the sky, goes airborne, landing in what appears to be the ocean.
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* When Dreamcast sings the [[VideoGame/AlteredBeast Beast King Financial]] theme song: "Money is everything in this world. Money can buy you out of hell!" Her chipper tone while singing it is what sells it.
* [[TooDumbToLive She tries this against the dragon boss they encounter later on, with disastrous results.]]
* [[TooDumbToLive She tries this against the dragon boss they encounter later on, with disastrous results.]]
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* When Dreamcast dances and sings the [[VideoGame/AlteredBeast Beast King Financial]] Financial theme song: "Money song. Her chipper tone while singing it is what sells it.
-->''"Money is everything in this world. Money can buy you out ofhell!" Her chipper tone while singing it is what sells it.
hell!"''
* She tries this as a peaceful resolution [[TooDumbToLiveShe tries this against the dragon boss they encounter later on, on,]] with disastrous results.]]
results.
-->''"Money is everything in this world. Money can buy you out of
* She tries this as a peaceful resolution [[TooDumbToLive
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* The wall of text that describes the epic journey to Black Asobin's tower: His recoloring was great for the budget, Saturn suffered a WardrobeMalfunction during a battle, Dreamcast got homesick and cried, and nothing interesting happened concerning Mega Drive.
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* The wall of text that describes the epic journey to Black Asobin's tower: His recoloring was great for the budget, Saturn suffered a WardrobeMalfunction during a battle, Dreamcast got homesick and cried, and nothing interesting happened concerning with Mega Drive.
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* During their farewell speech, the girls recall the games they covered, including ''VideoGame/CrazyTaxi'', ''Love & Berry'', and ''I Would Die For You''. [[OnlySaneWoman Saturn points out they never covered those games]], while Mega Drive and Dreamcast tell her to just run with it.
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* During their farewell speech, the girls recall the games they covered, including ''VideoGame/CrazyTaxi'', ''Love & Berry'', and ''I Would Die For You''. [[OnlySaneWoman Saturn Saturn]] [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall points out they never covered those games]], while Mega Drive [[BlatantLies insists otherwise]] and Dreamcast tell tells her to just run with it.
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* Dreamcast just asking Center-sensei what his favorite food was out of the blue.
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* Dreamcast just asking Center-sensei what his favorite food was out of the blue.
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* When the girls went to the nearby pub, they weren't able to do so since the pub's visitors were either cramming, partying, eating or just drinking to pass the time.
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* When the girls enter ''Chain Chronicle'', they're immediately welcomed by an error message saying it cannot connect to the server.
* When the girls went to the nearby pub, they weren't able to do so since the pub's visitors were either cramming, partying, eating or just drinking to pass thetime.time.
* In the following battle, a huge line of enemies appear. Dreamcast tells them that it's not the line for a new ramen restaurant that everyone's talking about. The enemies immediately wander off; they really did mistake it for the ramen place...
* After Dreamcast and Saturn are defeated by the boss, Mega Drive panics and throws her book at the dragon. It immediately knocks it out.
!! "Broken Jet Set Radio"
* Mega Drive's handicap skates. She can't control her speed and goes straight into a wall. She later flies into the sky, landing in what appears to be the ocean.
!! "Dream Rappy, Saturn Rappy, Mega Rappy, ?? Rappy"
* The various weapon ideas the girls come up with, such as wielding an irritated wife, a mother-in-law, ice cream, a backscratcher and other things.
* When Dreamcast sings the [[VideoGame/AlteredBeast Beast King Financial]] theme song: "Money is everything in this world. Money can buy you out of hell!" Her chipper tone while singing it is what sells it.
* [[TooDumbToLive She tries this against the dragon boss they encounter later on, with disastrous results.]]
!! "I Heard We're Graduating Sehaga"
* The wall of text that describes the epic journey to Black Asobin's tower: His recoloring was great for the budget, Saturn suffered a WardrobeMalfunction during a battle, Dreamcast got homesick and cried, and nothing interesting happened concerning Mega Drive.
!! "We'll Always Be Connected!"
* During their farewell speech, the girls recall the games they covered, including ''VideoGame/CrazyTaxi'', ''Love & Berry'', and ''I Would Die For You''. [[OnlySaneWoman Saturn points out they never covered those games]], while Mega Drive and Dreamcast tell her to just run with it.
* When the girls went to the nearby pub, they weren't able to do so since the pub's visitors were either cramming, partying, eating or just drinking to pass the
* In the following battle, a huge line of enemies appear. Dreamcast tells them that it's not the line for a new ramen restaurant that everyone's talking about. The enemies immediately wander off; they really did mistake it for the ramen place...
* After Dreamcast and Saturn are defeated by the boss, Mega Drive panics and throws her book at the dragon. It immediately knocks it out.
!! "Broken Jet Set Radio"
* Mega Drive's handicap skates. She can't control her speed and goes straight into a wall. She later flies into the sky, landing in what appears to be the ocean.
!! "Dream Rappy, Saturn Rappy, Mega Rappy, ?? Rappy"
* The various weapon ideas the girls come up with, such as wielding an irritated wife, a mother-in-law, ice cream, a backscratcher and other things.
* When Dreamcast sings the [[VideoGame/AlteredBeast Beast King Financial]] theme song: "Money is everything in this world. Money can buy you out of hell!" Her chipper tone while singing it is what sells it.
* [[TooDumbToLive She tries this against the dragon boss they encounter later on, with disastrous results.]]
!! "I Heard We're Graduating Sehaga"
* The wall of text that describes the epic journey to Black Asobin's tower: His recoloring was great for the budget, Saturn suffered a WardrobeMalfunction during a battle, Dreamcast got homesick and cried, and nothing interesting happened concerning Mega Drive.
!! "We'll Always Be Connected!"
* During their farewell speech, the girls recall the games they covered, including ''VideoGame/CrazyTaxi'', ''Love & Berry'', and ''I Would Die For You''. [[OnlySaneWoman Saturn points out they never covered those games]], while Mega Drive and Dreamcast tell her to just run with it.
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* When Mega Drive plays Sehagaga's school song. Said song is [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GpzH0WJ52kc only two syllables long]].
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* The girls losing in a beauty contest due to the judges awarding Bongo as the winner.
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* The girls losing in a beauty contest due to the judges awarding Bongo (a gorilla) as the winner.
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Added DiffLines:
!! "You're Always 10 Years Early!"
* Dreamcast just asking Center-sensei what his favorite food was out of the blue.
!! "Connect Your Passions into a Combo"
* The entire ''Virtua Fighter'' lesson.
!! "Center-sensei's Center Exam"
* Dreamcast's inability to use the Blast Runners, which left her unable to help the others fight the enemy Blast Runners.
!! "Shine! The 54th! Shock to the Brain! No Spillage, But We'll Destroy the Barriers of Spillage-obsessed Youth! Sehagaga Academy Culture Festival!"
* The girls losing in a beauty contest due to the judges awarding Bongo as the winner.
!! "Weapon Enhancement Succeeds at a 50% Rate, but It Sure Feels Like 15% to Me"
* When the girls went to the nearby pub, they weren't able to do so since the pub's visitors were either cramming, partying, eating or just drinking to pass the time.
* Dreamcast just asking Center-sensei what his favorite food was out of the blue.
!! "Connect Your Passions into a Combo"
* The entire ''Virtua Fighter'' lesson.
!! "Center-sensei's Center Exam"
* Dreamcast's inability to use the Blast Runners, which left her unable to help the others fight the enemy Blast Runners.
!! "Shine! The 54th! Shock to the Brain! No Spillage, But We'll Destroy the Barriers of Spillage-obsessed Youth! Sehagaga Academy Culture Festival!"
* The girls losing in a beauty contest due to the judges awarding Bongo as the winner.
!! "Weapon Enhancement Succeeds at a 50% Rate, but It Sure Feels Like 15% to Me"
* When the girls went to the nearby pub, they weren't able to do so since the pub's visitors were either cramming, partying, eating or just drinking to pass the time.
