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--> (''scene changes and we meet Madame Loo, who looks to be a thirty year old 100 pound lady'')
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--> (''scene changes and we meet Madame Loo, who looks to be a thirty year old 100 pound thirty-year-old 100-pound lady'')
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* The survey team asking Chance and the execs what color they want for there public restrooms.
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* The survey team asking Chance and the execs what color they want for there their public restrooms.
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--> '''Tish''': I think we oughta get her a tin hat.
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--> '''Tish''': (''with a smile'') I think we oughta get her a tin hat.
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** What makes the moment hilarious is the fact that George doesn't miss a beat. The moment Chance calls him off, George just makes a U-turn and goes to join him and the others for a drinks.
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** What makes the moment hilarious is the fact that George doesn't miss a beat. The moment Chance calls him off, George just makes a U-turn and goes to join him and the others for a drinks.drink.
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** What makes the moment hilarious is the fact that George doesn't miss a beat. The moment Chance calls him off, George just makes a U-turn and goes to join him and the others for a drinks.
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* [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome "I am not overwrought! I just damn mad!"]]
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* [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome [[SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome "I am not overwrought! I just damn mad!"]]
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** A few moments later, Chance invites Greg back into the room. He moves towards Greg, who flinches in expectation of getting punched again only to find Chance congratulating him marrying Tish.
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* When Tish tells Chance Greg brought her to a fire, he calls in Greg. Greg comes in. Chance punches him out.
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* [[RunningGag "He's all mine!" (*gets punched out himself*)]]
** "He's all mine!" "The wars over."
** "He's all mine!" "The wars over."
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* [[RunningGag "He's all ALL mine!" (*gets punched out himself*)]]
** "He'sall ALL mine!" "The wars over."
** "He's
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--> '''Survey Man''': So gentleman, which would you prefer? The soft willow green, the royal blue, or the flaming heart red?
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--> '''Survey Man''': So gentleman, which would you prefer? The soft willow green, the lovely royal blue, or the flaming heart red?red?
** Throughout, you can see Chance looking around at the other executives and trying his hardest not to burst out laughing at the absurdity.
** Throughout, you can see Chance looking around at the other executives and trying his hardest not to burst out laughing at the absurdity.
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--> (''scene changes and we meet Madame Loo, who looks to be a thirty year old 150 pond lady'')
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--> (''scene changes and we meet Madame Loo, who looks to be a thirty year old 150 pond 100 pound lady'')
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* After the brawl in Madame Loo'a is over.
--> '''Chance''': Let the old den mother by the drink.
--> '''Chance''': Let the old den mother by the drink.
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* After the brawl in Madame Loo'a Loo's is over.
--> '''Chance''': Let the old den motherby buy the drink.
--> '''Chance''': Let the old den mother
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--> '''Survey Man''': So gentleman, which would you prefer? The soft willow green, the royal blue, or the flaming heart read?
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--> '''Survey Man''': So gentleman, which would you prefer? The soft willow green, the royal blue, or the flaming heart read?red?
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* The survey team asking Chance and the execs what color they want for there public restrooms.
--> '''Survey Man''': So gentleman, which would you prefer? The soft willow green, the royal blue, or the flaming heart read?
--> '''Survey Man''': So gentleman, which would you prefer? The soft willow green, the royal blue, or the flaming heart read?
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--> '''Tish''': I think we oughta get her a tin hat.
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--> '''Tish''': I think we oughta get her a tin hat.
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* After the brawl in Madame Loo'a is over.
--> '''Chance''': Let the old den mother by the drink.
--> '''Greg''': I love you mother.
--> '''Chance''': Let the old den mother by the drink.
--> '''Greg''': I love you mother.
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* [[RunningGag "He's all mine!" (*gets punched himself*)]]
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* [[RunningGag "He's all mine!" (*gets punched himself*)]] out himself*)]]
** "He's all mine!" "The wars over."
** "He's all mine!" "The wars over."
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* [[RunningGag "He's all mine!" (*gets punched himself*)]]
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--> '''Chance''': Somebody wake me up!
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--> '''Chance''': Somebody wake me up!up!
* [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome "I am not overwrought! I just damn mad!"]]
* Greg and Tish note upon Madelyn's newfound courage.
--> '''Tish''': I think we oughta get her a tin hat.
* [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome "I am not overwrought! I just damn mad!"]]
* Greg and Tish note upon Madelyn's newfound courage.
--> '''Tish''': I think we oughta get her a tin hat.
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* When Tish mentions that Greg told her about Madame Loo, Chance is understandably concerned.
--> '''Chance''': Exactly WHAT did you tell her about Madame Loo?
--> '''Greg''': Only that she's 80 years old, weighs 300 pounds and is one of your oldest friends.
--> (''scene changes and we meet Madame Loo, who looks to be a thirty year old 150 pond lady'')
* The scene where Tish and Madelyn sneak into Chance and Greg's sleeping quarters. Tish then wakes Greg with a kiss, once he wakes up fully, he's not happy.
--> '''Greg''': (''after being woke up by a Tish's kiss'') What are you doing here?!
--> '''Chance''': (''awakened by Greg's question'') What's Tish doing here?!
--> '''Madelyn''': That was my idea.
--> '''Chance''': Somebody wake me up!
--> '''Chance''': Exactly WHAT did you tell her about Madame Loo?
--> '''Greg''': Only that she's 80 years old, weighs 300 pounds and is one of your oldest friends.
--> (''scene changes and we meet Madame Loo, who looks to be a thirty year old 150 pond lady'')
* The scene where Tish and Madelyn sneak into Chance and Greg's sleeping quarters. Tish then wakes Greg with a kiss, once he wakes up fully, he's not happy.
--> '''Greg''': (''after being woke up by a Tish's kiss'') What are you doing here?!
--> '''Chance''': (''awakened by Greg's question'') What's Tish doing here?!
--> '''Madelyn''': That was my idea.
--> '''Chance''': Somebody wake me up!
