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* Later, Geo accidentally looks up Ami's dress while the two are climbing up a rock face. He abruptly shoves her up to the top to stop himself from staring.
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** He arrived at an unfortunate time, as Marlow, who was trying to point out Geo to the Principal, fingers *Mizu* instead. This happens again in the next episode.
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** He arrived at an unfortunate time, as Marlow, who was trying to point out Geo to the Principal, fingers *Mizu* ''Mizu'' instead. This happens again in the next episode.
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* When Luna throws off her disguise, Agni holds up his video camera, fully expecting her to be naked underneath.
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* Mizu spends his time in class solving the overcomplicated formula that Luna made. He struggles a bit at first, though much later, it's shown that he solved it as he goes outside to seek out the now absent substitute.
** He arrived at an unfortunate time, as Marlow, who was trying to point out Geo to the Principal, fingers *Mizu* instead. This happens again in the next episode.
** He arrived at an unfortunate time, as Marlow, who was trying to point out Geo to the Principal, fingers *Mizu* instead. This happens again in the next episode.
* Ami, having noticed Marlow stalking the group, shoots her down from a tree with an arrow. After Marlow falls down, nothing happens, and she attempts to walk away nonchalantly. Then the arrow's status effect kicks in when she goes offscreen, and she's out cold.
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** One bandit makes the ''horrible'' mistake of trying to grope Luna's ass, instigating the confrontation.
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** One bandit makes the ''horrible'' mistake of trying to grope Luna's ass, instigating the entire confrontation.
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* Marlow's bestiary displays pictures of several fictional vampires, such as [[{{SesameStreet}} Count von Count]] and [[{{Recap/TheSimpsonsS5E5TreehouseOfHorrorIV}} Count Burns.]]
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* Marlow's bestiary displays pictures of several fictional vampires, such as [[{{SesameStreet}} [[Series/SesameStreet Count von Count]] and [[{{Recap/TheSimpsonsS5E5TreehouseOfHorrorIV}} Count Burns.]]
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** She uses a pool cue to whack some billiard balls at the bandits; two of the balls embed into one's mask and look like googly eyes.
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** One of the bandits briefly aims a banana at her. He quickly exchanges it for proper gun like his comrades.
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** One of the bandits Another bandit briefly aims a banana at her. her after she takes out his lecherous companion. He quickly exchanges it for proper gun like his comrades.the others.
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** To distract the gang, Luna projects an image of [[spoiler: a displeased Gwain wearing a ''Playboy bunny outfit.'']] Makes one wonder how Luna even got such a picture in the first place.
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** To distract the gang, Luna projects an image of [[spoiler: a displeased Gwain wearing a ''Playboy bunny outfit.'']] outfit'']]. Makes one wonder how Luna even got such a picture in the first place.
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** One bandit makes the ''horrible'' mistake of trying to grope Luna's ass, instigating the confrontation.
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** To distract the gang, Luna projects an image of [[spoiler: a displeased Gwain wearing a ''Playboy bunny outfit.'']] Makes one wonder how Luna even got such a picture in the first place.
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* Luna's bar fight is rife with comedy. The humor was likely why the scene was used as Episode 6's preview:
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* Luna's bar fight is rife with comedy. The humor was is likely why the scene was used as Episode 6's preview:
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** As she leaves, the remaining bandits shoot up her motorcycle. Luna blasts the bandits' cycles in one fell swoop, leaving the head bandit [[FacePalm chiding himself]]
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** As she leaves, the remaining bandits shoot try to one-up her victory by shooting up her motorcycle. Luna blasts the bandits' cycles in one fell swoop, leaving the head bandit [[FacePalm chiding himself]]himself.]]
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** As if nothing had ever happened, Luna pays the terrified bartender for her drink before exiting.
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* Geo's rough entrance into the new world. The poor kid slams into a couple mountains before becoming entangled in vines.
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* Geo's rough entrance into the new world.Teora. The poor kid slams into a couple mountains before becoming entangled in vines.
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* A drunken Ami attempts to shoot Luna with an arrow. She misses her shot, which hits [[{{EpicFail}} Deva instead after deflecting off of the robot squid's tentacles.]]
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* A drunken Ami attempts to shoot Luna with an arrow. She misses her shot, which hits [[{{EpicFail}} Deva instead after deflecting off of the robot squid's tentacles.]]]]
!!Episode 6
* Luna's bar fight is rife with comedy. The humor was likely why the scene was used as Episode 6's preview:
** One of the bandits briefly aims a banana at her. He quickly exchanges it for proper gun like his comrades.
** Luna confronts the head bandit. [[GroinAttack She kicks a floorboard into his nuts to make him lose his focus,]] then tosses a nearby jukebox at him to finish him off.
** As she leaves, the remaining bandits shoot up her motorcycle. Luna blasts the bandits' cycles in one fell swoop, leaving the head bandit [[FacePalm chiding himself]]
!!Episode 6
* Luna's bar fight is rife with comedy. The humor was likely why the scene was used as Episode 6's preview:
** One of the bandits briefly aims a banana at her. He quickly exchanges it for proper gun like his comrades.
** Luna confronts the head bandit. [[GroinAttack She kicks a floorboard into his nuts to make him lose his focus,]] then tosses a nearby jukebox at him to finish him off.
** As she leaves, the remaining bandits shoot up her motorcycle. Luna blasts the bandits' cycles in one fell swoop, leaving the head bandit [[FacePalm chiding himself]]
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* Deva attempts to distract Luna by throwing a snowball in her face. Ami throws a carrot onto the snowball for good measure.
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* Geo's mild annoyance at his change in clothing.
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* Geo finally sticks up for himself against Gwain's bigotry by ''licking'' her across the face. Sure, she embeds him into the doghouse he was sitting on during the scene, but she spends the rest of the morning washing herself in a nearby fountain.
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* Geo finally sticks up for himself against Gwain's bigotry by ''licking'' her across the face. Sure, she embeds him into the doghouse he was sitting on during the scene, but she spends the rest of the morning washing herself in a nearby fountain.fountain.
* A drunken Ami attempts to shoot Luna with an arrow. She misses her shot, which hits [[{{EpicFail}} Deva instead after deflecting off of the robot squid's tentacles.]]
* A drunken Ami attempts to shoot Luna with an arrow. She misses her shot, which hits [[{{EpicFail}} Deva instead after deflecting off of the robot squid's tentacles.]]
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* Geo finally sticks up for himself against Gwain's bigotry by ''licking'' her across the face. Sure, she embeds him into the doghouse he was sitting on, during the scene but she spends the rest of the morning washing herself in a nearby fountain.
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* Geo finally sticks up for himself against Gwain's bigotry by ''licking'' her across the face. Sure, she embeds him into the doghouse he was sitting on, on during the scene scene, but she spends the rest of the morning washing herself in a nearby fountain.
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* Geo finally sticks up for himself against Gwain's bigotry by ''licking'' her across the face. Sure, she embeds him into the doghouse he's sitting on, but she spends the rest of the morning washing herself in a nearby fountain.
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* Geo finally sticks up for himself against Gwain's bigotry by ''licking'' her across the face. Sure, she embeds him into the doghouse he's he was sitting on, during the scene but she spends the rest of the morning washing herself in a nearby fountain.
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!!Episode 5
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!!Episode 55
* Geo finally sticks up for himself against Gwain's bigotry by ''licking'' her across the face. Sure, she embeds him into the doghouse he's sitting on, but she spends the rest of the morning washing herself in a nearby fountain.
* Geo finally sticks up for himself against Gwain's bigotry by ''licking'' her across the face. Sure, she embeds him into the doghouse he's sitting on, but she spends the rest of the morning washing herself in a nearby fountain.
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* Marlow's bestiary displays pictures of several fictional vampires, such as [[{{SesameStreet}} Count von Count]] and [[{{TheSimpsonsS5E5TreehouseOfHorrorIV}} Count Burns.]]
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* Marlow's bestiary displays pictures of several fictional vampires, such as [[{{SesameStreet}} Count von Count]] and [[{{TheSimpsonsS5E5TreehouseOfHorrorIV}} [[{{Recap/TheSimpsonsS5E5TreehouseOfHorrorIV}} Count Burns.]]
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* Marlow's bestiary displays pictures of several fictional vampires, such as [[{{SesameStreet}} Count Von Count]] and [[{{TheSimpsonsS5E5TreehouseOfHorrorIV}} Count Burns.]]
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* Gwain visits Ami's room and leans against a closet during the ensuing conversation She's well aware that her daughter brought an uninvited guest. After some buildup, [[{{BaitAndSwitch}} the camera abruptly pans right to show]] [[{{PaperThinDisguise}} Geo wearing a lampshade,]] [[{{BaitAndSwitch}} which Gwain promptly knocks off.]]
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* Gwain visits Ami's room and leans against a closet during the ensuing conversation She's conversation; she's well aware that her daughter Ami brought an uninvited guest. After some buildup, [[{{BaitAndSwitch}} the camera abruptly pans right to show]] [[{{PaperThinDisguise}} Geo wearing a lampshade,]] [[{{BaitAndSwitch}} which Gwain promptly knocks off.]]
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**Elsewhere, Electra finds one of the robots in the ladies' restroom, reading a newspaper.
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* Knowing that she brought an uninvited guest, Gwain visits Ami's room and leans against a closet during the ensuing conversation.conversation She's well aware that her daughter brought an uninvited guest. After some buildup, [[{{BaitAndSwitch}} the camera abruptly pans right to show]] [[{{PaperThinDisguise}} Geo wearing a lampshade,]] [[{{BaitAndSwitch}} which Gwain promptly knocks off.]]
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* Gwain visits Ami's room, knowing that she brought in an uninvited guest, and leans against her closet as she talks to her daughter. After some buildup, [[{{BaitAndSwitch}} the camera abruptly pans right to show]] [[{{PaperThinDisguise}} Geo wearing a lampshade,]] [[{{BaitAndSwitch}} which Gwain promptly knocks off.]]
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* Knowing that she brought an uninvited guest, Gwain visits Ami's room, knowing that she brought in an uninvited guest, room and leans against her a closet as she talks to her daughter.during the ensuing conversation. After some buildup, [[{{BaitAndSwitch}} the camera abruptly pans right to show]] [[{{PaperThinDisguise}} Geo wearing a lampshade,]] [[{{BaitAndSwitch}} which Gwain promptly knocks off.]]
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* Gwain visits Ami's room, knowing that she brought in an uninvited guest, and leans against her closet as she talks to her daughter. After some buildup, [[{{BaitAndSwitch}} the camera abruptly pans right to show]] [[{{PaperThinDisguise}} Geo wearing a lampshade]], lampshade,]] [[{{BaitAndSwitch}} which Gwain promptly knocks off.]]
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* Gwain visits Ami's room, knowing that she brought in an uninvited guest, and leans against her closet as she talks to her daughter. After some buildup, [[{{BaitAndSwitch}} the camera abruptly pans right to show] [[{{PaperThinDisguise}} Geo wearing a lampshade]], [[{{BaitAndSwitch}} which Gwain promptly knocks off.]]
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* Gwain visits Ami's room, knowing that she brought in an uninvited guest, and leans against her closet as she talks to her daughter. After some buildup, [[{{BaitAndSwitch}} the camera abruptly pans right to show] show]] [[{{PaperThinDisguise}} Geo wearing a lampshade]], [[{{BaitAndSwitch}} which Gwain promptly knocks off.]]
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A decent start; I do believe my explanation of the gags could be a lot better, though. Feel free to make changes as you see fit.
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!!Episode 3
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*When Luna throws off her disguise, Agni holds up his video camera, fully expecting her to be naked underneath.
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!!Episode 4
!!Episode 5
!!Episode 2
*When Luna throws off her disguise, Agni holds up his video camera, fully expecting her to be naked underneath.
*Luna's spherical robots are unleashed after a dodgeball confrontation between Geo and Agni's bullies. [[{{IncrediblyLamePun}} "Play ball" indeed.]]
!!Episode 3
!!Episode 4
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