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* On April Fools Day in 2017, the blog posted a [[http://dreadnought-despair.tumblr.com/post/159087428259/chapter-1-009 fake body discovery announcement]] in order to prank it's readers.
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* On April Fools Day in 2017, the blog posted a [[http://dreadnought-despair.tumblr.com/post/159087428259/chapter-1-009 fake body discovery announcement]] in order to prank it's its readers.
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* During Ping's free time event, Timaeus finds an old {{Creator/Atari}} and boots it up in order to play some games with the robot. They settle on [[VideoGame/{{Pong}}]], and everything seems to be going well... until Ping's robot reflexes kick in and she beats Timaeus ''[[RubberBandAI 75 times in a row.]]''
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* During Ping's free time event, Timaeus finds an old {{Creator/Atari}} and boots it up in order to play some games with the robot. They settle on [[VideoGame/{{Pong}}]], VideoGame/{{Pong}}, and everything seems to be going well... until Ping's robot reflexes kick in and she beats Timaeus ''[[RubberBandAI 75 times in a row.]]''
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* During Ping's free time event, Timaeus finds an old {{Creator/Atari}} and boots it up in order to play some games with the robot. They settle on {{Pong}}, and everything seems to be going well... until Ping's robot reflexes kick in and she beats Timaeus ''[[RubberBandAI 75 times in a row.]]''
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* During Ping's free time event, Timaeus finds an old {{Creator/Atari}} and boots it up in order to play some games with the robot. They settle on {{Pong}}, [[VideoGame/{{Pong}}]], and everything seems to be going well... until Ping's robot reflexes kick in and she beats Timaeus ''[[RubberBandAI 75 times in a row.]]''
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* Tim has a habit of getting flustered around pretty much anyone [[BiTheWay (regardless of their gender)]] for pretty much any reason, whether it be something that the other person says or does.
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* Tim has a habit of getting flustered around pretty much anyone [[BiTheWay (regardless of their gender)]] gender) for pretty much any reason, whether it be something that the other person says or does.
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* Riko, at first, seems like a very cold, serious, and professional girl... until you learn that she's a ClosetGeek with a love for all things ''StarTrek.''
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* Riko, at first, seems like a very cold, serious, and professional girl... until you learn that she's a ClosetGeek with a love for all things ''StarTrek.''Franchise/StarTrek.''
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* When investigating the basketball court, Timaeus finds some lockers with items belonging to some of the students, which are locked with a password. After texting [[spoiler:Ishi]] to ask what the password to [[spoiler:her]] locker might be, [[spoiler:she]] answers with ''42069''. Despite Tim's disbelief, [[spoiler:Ishi]] insists that that is the correct password. [[spoiler:She's]] right.
* When Tim goes to investigate the basketball court, Tiffani mentions that it brings back some bad memories from her middle school years. When Michi asks why she's still there, she explains that she's there out of spite, and that she's going to [[IHatePastMe burn down every cheerleading-related item she finds.]]
* When Tim goes to investigate the basketball court, Tiffani mentions that it brings back some bad memories from her middle school years. When Michi asks why she's still there, she explains that she's there out of spite, and that she's going to [[IHatePastMe burn down every cheerleading-related item she finds.]]
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* Occasionally, when Tim goes to talk to some of the girls, he'll address them by saying "hello ladies," due to him usually working with an older demographic in the library.
* Tim has a habit of getting flustered around pretty much anyone [[BiTheWay (regardless of their gender)]] for pretty much any reason, whether it be something that the other person says or does.
* Tim has a habit of getting flustered around pretty much anyone [[BiTheWay (regardless of their gender)]] for pretty much any reason, whether it be something that the other person says or does.
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* During the class trial, when the students are attempting to figure out what the white powder found on [[spoiler:Ping's body]] is, one of the options is ''cocaine.'' If this option is selected the first time the question of the powder's identity comes about, there's even some bonus dialogue that comes up later.
---> '''Honoka:''' Why is ''cocaine'' the first thing you think of?!
* There's a scene in the cafeteria where Timaeus and Ishi go to talk to Jurou, Tiffani and Ping, and Jurou and Tim teach Ping various [[VerbalTic southern contractions]] while Tiffani desperately attempts to reset Ping's internal dictionary. The reason she's doing this in the first place is because Ishi already taught Ping a bunch of swear words.
---> '''Honoka:''' Why is ''cocaine'' the first thing you think of?!
* There's a scene in the cafeteria where Timaeus and Ishi go to talk to Jurou, Tiffani and Ping, and Jurou and Tim teach Ping various [[VerbalTic southern contractions]] while Tiffani desperately attempts to reset Ping's internal dictionary. The reason she's doing this in the first place is because Ishi already taught Ping a bunch of swear words.
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* During the class trial, when the students are attempting to figure out what the white powder found on [[spoiler:Ping's body]] is, one of the options is ''cocaine.'' If this option is selected the While first time the question of the powder's identity comes about, there's even some bonus dialogue that comes up later.
---> '''Honoka:''' Why is ''cocaine'' the first thing you think of?!
* There's a scene ininvestigating the cafeteria where in Sector One, Timaeus finds Jurou and Ishi go Gugalanna looking around in the kitchen. When Tim steps inside to talk to Jurou, Tiffani look with them, they find a pile of various vegetables sitting on the counter. They initially suspect that the veggies are poisonous, and Ping, remain cautious... that is until Gugalanna eats one of them in order to find out if this is true. Luckily, the vegetables weren't tainted with anything, and Jurou and Tim teach Ping various [[VerbalTic southern contractions]] while Tiffani desperately attempts to reset Ping's internal dictionary. The reason she's doing this in the first place is because Ishi already taught Ping a bunch of swear words.ended up cooking supper for everyone later that day.
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* During Ping's free time event, Timaeus finds an old {{Creator/Atari}} and boots it up in order to play some games with the robot. They settle on {{Pong}}, and everything seems to be going well... until Ping's robot reflexes kick in and she beats Timaeus ''[[RubberBandAI 75 times in a row.]]''
* There's a scene in the cafeteria where Timaeus and Ishi go to talk to Jurou, Tiffani and Ping, and Jurou and Tim teach Ping various [[VerbalTic southern contractions]] while Tiffani desperately attempts to reset Ping's internal dictionary. The reason she's doing this in the first place is because Ishi already taught Ping a bunch of swear words.
* While investigating the laundry room after [[spoiler:Gugalanna's death,]] Tim goes into the laundry room closet... only to find Michi lounging on a pile of towels.
* During the class trial, when the students are attempting to figure out what the white powder found on [[spoiler:Ping's body]] is, one of the options is ''cocaine.'' If this option is selected the first time the question of the powder's identity comes about, there's even some bonus dialogue that comes up later.
---> '''Honoka:''' Why is ''cocaine'' the first thing you think of?!
* There's a scene in the cafeteria where Timaeus and Ishi go to talk to Jurou, Tiffani and Ping, and Jurou and Tim teach Ping various [[VerbalTic southern contractions]] while Tiffani desperately attempts to reset Ping's internal dictionary. The reason she's doing this in the first place is because Ishi already taught Ping a bunch of swear words.
* While investigating the laundry room after [[spoiler:Gugalanna's death,]] Tim goes into the laundry room closet... only to find Michi lounging on a pile of towels.
* During the class trial, when the students are attempting to figure out what the white powder found on [[spoiler:Ping's body]] is, one of the options is ''cocaine.'' If this option is selected the first time the question of the powder's identity comes about, there's even some bonus dialogue that comes up later.
---> '''Honoka:''' Why is ''cocaine'' the first thing you think of?!
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* Michi's free time event sees him and Timaeus watching ''KiaraTheBrave'', much to Tim's confusion. Turns out Michi was pranking Tim by pretending to like it so he could get
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* The students have given MONO-9000 various nicknames, including "The Toaster" and "Fucko-9000."
* MONO-9000's general [[EvilIsHammy hammy attitude]] is entertaining, but can also be downright terrifying in certain cases.
* MONO-9000's general [[EvilIsHammy hammy attitude]] is entertaining, but can also be downright terrifying in certain cases.
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** The general interactions between Tim and Nik add fuel to the fire, and many fans have commented about how they want Tim and Nik to ask each other out.
* Sal's general CampGay attitude and mannerisms are entertaining to witness during his conversations with other characters.
* Sal's general CampGay attitude and mannerisms are entertaining to witness during his conversations with other characters.
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** Everyone's reaction to Ishi actually [[spoiler:peeing on the couch]] is rather entertaining to witness as well.
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* There's a scene in the cafeteria where Timaeus and Ishi go to talk to Jurou, Tiffani and Ping, where and Jurou and Tim teach Ping various [[VerbalTic southern contractions]] while Tiffani desperately attempts to reset Ping's internal dictionary. The reason she's doing this in the first place is because Ishi already taught Ping a bunch of swear words.words.
* When Timaeus is first investigating Sector One, he comes across Salvatore and Siegfried in the laundry room. When he finds Ping blocking the door to the storage room, Salvatore starts climbing on Siegfried and speaks in a seductive manner in order to try to get Sieg to help move Ping out of the way.
* When Timaeus firsts investigates the rec room in Sector One, he finds Honoka and Michi conversing by the pool table. Michi then pranks Honoka by comparing her cane to a pool stick and trying to put chalk on it.
* When Timaeus is first investigating Sector One, he comes across Salvatore and Siegfried in the laundry room. When he finds Ping blocking the door to the storage room, Salvatore starts climbing on Siegfried and speaks in a seductive manner in order to try to get Sieg to help move Ping out of the way.
* When Timaeus firsts investigates the rec room in Sector One, he finds Honoka and Michi conversing by the pool table. Michi then pranks Honoka by comparing her cane to a pool stick and trying to put chalk on it.
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** One of these asks reads (and I quote), ''[[Robosexual "monodaddy makes me moist,"]]'' followed by a few emojis. This spawned a whole slew of asks from anonymous readers admitting their desires to [[CasualKink "fuck the murder orb."]]
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** One of these asks reads (and I quote), ''[[Robosexual ''[[{{Robosexual}} "monodaddy makes me moist,"]]'' followed by a few emojis. This spawned a whole slew of asks from anonymous readers admitting their desires to [[CasualKink "fuck the murder orb."]]
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Various funny moments and bits of dialogue throughout the story. Marked Spoilers inbound in the Chapter folders.
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* The cast has a handful of [[DeadpanSnarker deadpan snarkers,]] as well as characters that just have a blunt way of speaking. Naturally, their dialogue is rather entertaining to read. These characters include Aoi, Michi, Tiffani, and Yusra.
* Ping's childlike mannerisms and general behavior are pretty fun to witness.
* Riko, at first, seems like a very cold, serious, and professional girl... until you learn that she's a ClosetGeek with a love for all things ''StarTrek.''
* Ishi's various attempts to [[ShipperOnDeck make Timaeus and Nikola a couple]] are hilarious to see, especially for the fans who also ship the two.
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[[folder:Prologue]]
* During Gugalanna's introduction, Timaeus mentions that he's [[NoodlePeople not much of an athlete.]] Gugalanna says that she's already taken a note of this, and proceeds to boast about how Tim is no match for her or some of the other wrestlers she's faced.
* During Siegfried's introduction, Siegfried and Ishi get into a verbal spat and start yelling at each other. At one point, the former makes a comment about the latter's outfit by calling her a swimsuit girl... ''[[GratuitousGerman in German.]]''
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[[folder:Chapter One - Don't Panic]]
* During the class trial, when the students are attempting to figure out what the white powder found on [[spoiler:Ping's body]] is, one of the options is ''cocaine.'' If this option is selected the first time the question of the powder's identity comes about, there's even some bonus dialogue that comes up later.
---> '''Honoka:''' Why is ''cocaine'' the first thing you think of?!
* There's a scene in the cafeteria where Timaeus and Ishi go to talk to Jurou, Tiffani and Ping, where Jurou and Tim teach Ping various [[VerbalTic southern contractions]] while Tiffani desperately attempts to reset Ping's internal dictionary. The reason she's doing this in the first place is because Ishi already taught Ping a bunch of swear words.
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[[folder:Chapter Two - Delusions of Morality]]
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[[folder:The Blog in General]]
* [[http://dreadnought-despair.tumblr.com/tagged/dreadnoughtasks The asks answered on the blog]] are pretty funny to look at, and are often comic reliefs from sad or disturbing things that happen in the story.
** One of these asks reads (and I quote), ''[[Robosexual "monodaddy makes me moist,"]]'' followed by a few emojis. This spawned a whole slew of asks from anonymous readers admitting their desires to [[CasualKink "fuck the murder orb."]]
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[[folder:General]]
* The cast has a handful of [[DeadpanSnarker deadpan snarkers,]] as well as characters that just have a blunt way of speaking. Naturally, their dialogue is rather entertaining to read. These characters include Aoi, Michi, Tiffani, and Yusra.
* Ping's childlike mannerisms and general behavior are pretty fun to witness.
* Riko, at first, seems like a very cold, serious, and professional girl... until you learn that she's a ClosetGeek with a love for all things ''StarTrek.''
* Ishi's various attempts to [[ShipperOnDeck make Timaeus and Nikola a couple]] are hilarious to see, especially for the fans who also ship the two.
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[[folder:Prologue]]
* During Gugalanna's introduction, Timaeus mentions that he's [[NoodlePeople not much of an athlete.]] Gugalanna says that she's already taken a note of this, and proceeds to boast about how Tim is no match for her or some of the other wrestlers she's faced.
* During Siegfried's introduction, Siegfried and Ishi get into a verbal spat and start yelling at each other. At one point, the former makes a comment about the latter's outfit by calling her a swimsuit girl... ''[[GratuitousGerman in German.]]''
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[[folder:Chapter One - Don't Panic]]
* During the class trial, when the students are attempting to figure out what the white powder found on [[spoiler:Ping's body]] is, one of the options is ''cocaine.'' If this option is selected the first time the question of the powder's identity comes about, there's even some bonus dialogue that comes up later.
---> '''Honoka:''' Why is ''cocaine'' the first thing you think of?!
* There's a scene in the cafeteria where Timaeus and Ishi go to talk to Jurou, Tiffani and Ping, where Jurou and Tim teach Ping various [[VerbalTic southern contractions]] while Tiffani desperately attempts to reset Ping's internal dictionary. The reason she's doing this in the first place is because Ishi already taught Ping a bunch of swear words.
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[[folder:Chapter Two - Delusions of Morality]]
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[[folder:The Blog in General]]
* [[http://dreadnought-despair.tumblr.com/tagged/dreadnoughtasks The asks answered on the blog]] are pretty funny to look at, and are often comic reliefs from sad or disturbing things that happen in the story.
** One of these asks reads (and I quote), ''[[Robosexual "monodaddy makes me moist,"]]'' followed by a few emojis. This spawned a whole slew of asks from anonymous readers admitting their desires to [[CasualKink "fuck the murder orb."]]
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