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-->'''Mr. Nobody:''' ''({{Beat}})'' [[FlatWhat ...What!]]
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-->'''Mr. Nobody:''' ''({{Beat}})'' [[FlatWhat ...What!]]What?!]]
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-->'''Female Cop:''' (''incredulous'') He's a giant fucking robot.
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** Cliff spending the whole time with the Sex Men having absolutely no idea what the fuck is going on ''especially'' when Shadowy Mister Evans births his doomsday baby.
---> '''Cliff''': I have no clue what the fuck is going on and ''this time I mean it!''
---> '''Cliff''': I have no clue what the fuck is going on and ''this time I mean it!''
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** Cliff spending the whole time with the Sex Men having absolutely no idea what the fuck is going on ''especially'' when Shadowy Mister Evans births his doomsday baby.
---> '''Cliff''': I have no fucking clue what's happening right now and ''I really mean it this time!''
---> '''Cliff''': I have no fucking clue what's happening right now and ''I really mean it this time!''
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* Cliff's watching the news and we get to find out what happened to that man back in Puppet Patrol. He apparently tried robbing a store, but his dinosaur head started biting his head and the cashier ended up knocking the two of them out anyway. The man and his dinosaur were both charged, him with robbery and the dinosaur for aiding and [[IncrediblyLamePun a-bite-ing]].
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* Cliff's watching the news and we get to find out what happened to that man back in Puppet Patrol. He apparently tried robbing a store, but his dinosaur head started biting his head and the cashier ended up knocking the two of them out anyway. The man and his dinosaur were both charged, him with robbery and the dinosaur for aiding and [[IncrediblyLamePun [[{{Pun}} a-bite-ing]].
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* "I should have chosen [[Creator/YoungAnimal the timeline that featured Lotion!]]"
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* "I should have chosen [[Creator/YoungAnimal [[ComicBook/DoomPatrol2016 the timeline that featured Lotion!]]"
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* Cliff wondering how the Scissormen dress themselves or pee.
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* Cliff being surprised that he can still understand zombie language when he talks to the zombified Darren Jones.
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* Cliff plays a game of 20 Questions with the rest of the team while waiting for the time machine to send them to their destination and is miffed that they easily guessed the answer was "Animal-Vegetable-Mineral Man". Larry retorts that there aren't many people who match the description Cliff gave.
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** If you'll look closely at the photographs Rita is using to represent the Brotherhood of Evil, you'll see that Garguax is represented by a picture of [[WesternAnimation/LooneyTunes Marvin the Martian]].
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** After Deric saves the team from Orqwith's collapse by creating force fields around them, Rita assumes that ''she'' somehow did that. Laura points out that they forgot to protect the booze cart.
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* In the opening song, Dorothy assures the audience that there is "nothing sus" about Immortimas, especially since Dorothy is from the 19th century, and thus probably wouldn't be familiar with such modern slang.
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** Rita's reaction is particularly funny, as she has a disgusted grimace, as if thinking, "Oh my god, I worshiped this bitch?"
* "I should have chosen [[Creator/YoungAnimal the timeline that featured Lotion!]]"
* "I should have chosen [[Creator/YoungAnimal the timeline that featured Lotion!]]"
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-->"First, I'll eject ''him'' into space, then I'll find his stupid body, rip off his stupid head, and take the mother of all craps down his neck-hole! ... Except I can't shit anymore. SHIT! Okay, new plan! Eject him into space, find his body ''and'' a great Dane with giardia, and have ''it'' take a shit down his neck-hole! Yeah! Revenge by ComicStrip/{{Marmaduke}}! It's happening!"
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-->"First, I'll eject ''him'' into space, then I'll find his stupid body, rip off his stupid head, and take the mother of all craps down his neck-hole! ... Except I can't shit anymore. SHIT! Okay, new plan! Eject him into space, find his body ''and'' a great Great Dane with giardia, and have ''it'' take a shit down his neck-hole! Yeah! Revenge by ComicStrip/{{Marmaduke}}! It's happening!"
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** Also the fact that the Beard Hunter is wearing Beast Boy Teen Titans Go underpants.
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** Also the fact that the Beard Hunter is wearing underpants that have the image of the face of Beast Boy Teen Titans Go underpants.Boy's ''WesternAnimation/TeenTitansGo'' incarnation.
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'''Beard Hunter:''' (''beat'') Pardon me, gentlemen. Listen to me, little lady. I'm a self-trained shinobi warrior, and a semi-semi professional Fortnite streamer, okay?
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'''Beard Hunter:''' (''beat'') Pardon me, gentlemen. Listen to me, little lady. I'm a self-trained shinobi warrior, and a semi-semi professional Fortnite ''VideoGame/{{Fortnite}}'' streamer, okay?
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* Cliff is sent hurtling towards Earth and crash-lands in the middle of nowhere. As he walks, he at first just repeatedly says "fuck", then starts ranting that he's going to kill the Chief, then formulates an overly-elaborate plan:
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* Cliff is sent hurtling towards Earth and crash-lands in the middle of nowhere. As he walks, he at first just repeatedly says "fuck", then starts ranting that he's going to kill the Chief, then formulates [[CutHisHeartOutWithASpoon an overly-elaborate plan:revenge plan]]:
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* Cliff dryly remarking about the two sex ghosts getting it on that weren't eliminated by the Sex Men and asking them if they know where to find the tape he's looking for.
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* Dorothy referring to Cliff's guttermouth as "having many pretty words".
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* The PreviouslyOn segment directly cutting to Cliff saying "Nurnheim sucks!" after he asks what Nurnheim is.
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* Another character has a TV-show fantasy about partnering with Victor: this time it's Rita, with the two of them as "Beekeeper & Borg", in a pastiche of ''Series/{{The Avengers|1960s}}''. [[labelnote:*]]No, not ''[[Franchise/TheAvengers those]]'' [[Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse Avengers]].[[/labelnote]]
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* Another character has a TV-show fantasy about partnering with Victor: this time it's Rita, with the two of them as "Beekeeper & Borg", in a pastiche of ''Series/{{The Avengers|1960s}}''. [[labelnote:*]]No, not ''[[Franchise/TheAvengers ''[[ComicBook/TheAvengers those]]'' [[Franchise/MarvelCinematicUniverse Avengers]].[[/labelnote]]
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--> '''Jane:''' (''Beat'') What the fuck is the Doom Patrol?
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--> '''Jane:''' (''Beat'') ''[{{beat}}]'' What the fuck is the Doom Patrol?
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* The only line we hear from the actor playing Cliff in Rita's play is "[[{{Catchphrase}} What the fuck?]]".
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* The only line we hear from the actor playing Cliff in Rita's play is "[[{{Catchphrase}} "[[CharacterCatchphrase What the fuck?]]".
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* Despite the general somberness about Rita's funeral, the rest of the Patrol can't help but bring the wrong objects to the cremation, to ghost Rita's annoyance.
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* Despite the general somberness about Rita's funeral, the rest of the Patrol can't help but bring the wrong objects to the cremation, to ghost Rita's annoyance. Victor just gives Rita a bottle of honey because he vaguely remembers some connection between Rita and bees, forgetting that the memory was of Rita getting cast as an extra who dressed like a beekeeper.
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** Following the cremation ceremony, the team sits down to watch one of Rita's old movies, and Vic decides to bring a plate of s'mores to the occasion. Everyone else notes that this is in poor taste.
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** Following the cremation ceremony, the team sits down to watch one of Rita's old movies, and Vic decides to bring a plate of s'mores to the occasion. Everyone else notes that this is in poor taste. He defends it by saying he had a craving.
* In an otherwise somber montage, we see Clara Steele giving Rory a set of condoms in full view of his prom date. Cut to said prom date going into labor.
* In an otherwise somber montage, we see Clara Steele giving Rory a set of condoms in full view of his prom date. Cut to said prom date going into labor.
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* Immortus arrives, and greets everyone with a cheery, casual "Hey, you guys!"
** Rita is completely astonished by the identity of Immortus - "Isabel ''fucking'' Feathers?!"
** Rita is completely astonished by the identity of Immortus - "Isabel ''fucking'' Feathers?!"
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** In the middle of arguing with Cliff, Dorothy suddenly sounds like a younger version of Niles Caulder.
-->"If you can take care of yourself, then walk up the damn steps!"
-->"If you can take care of yourself, then walk up the damn steps!"
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* As Immortus departs, she leaves behind an autographed photo
-->"You're DOOMED. Love, Isabel xoxo"
-->"You're DOOMED. Love, Isabel xoxo"
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* Jane refusing to hold onto Cliff's mitten he's been wearing the entire season, preferring instead to go with Larry.
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* Cliff complaining to Past Niles that electric weapons are his AchillesHeel when he and the Chief are attacked by a couple of [[ItMakesSenseInContext electric axe-wielding]] [[ThoseWackyNazis nazis]], only for Niles to non-chalantly kill one of them with a thrown knife.
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* Jane refusing to hold onto Cliff's mitten he's been wearing the entire season, preferring instead to go with Larry.
Larry. Cliff points out that Larry's bandages aren't any cleaner.
* Past!Niles pulls out a knife to try and defend himself against Cliff. Cliff is incredulous.
-->"Are you fucking ''high?!''"
* Cliff complaining toPast Niles Past!Niles that electric weapons are his AchillesHeel when he and the Chief are attacked by a couple of [[ItMakesSenseInContext electric axe-wielding]] [[ThoseWackyNazis nazis]], Nazis]], only for Niles to non-chalantly nonchalantly kill one of them with a thrown knife.
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-->"Are you fucking ''high?!''"
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** Future Vic's non-chalance to being told Deric and their students are trying to save his past self from a time vortex.
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** Future Vic's non-chalance Future!Vic's nonchalance to being told Deric and their students are trying to save his past self from a time vortex.
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* Larry being annoyed that Cliff is using the word 'ergo' "ergo" after he taught him.
* Isabel giving the Doom Patrol their youth back by eating one of hertoe nails.toenails. And despite how gross it is, Jane and Cliff are the first ones to do it.
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* How are the the butts and Immortus defeated? With the musical number that [[BrickJoke Margaret Yu and her butt husband]] had created.
* Larry being annoyed that Cliff is using the word 'ergo' after he taught him.
* Isabel giving the Doom Patrol their youth back by eating one of her toe nails. And despite how gross it is, Jane and Cliff are the first ones to do it.
* Despite the general somberness about Rita's funeral, the rest of the Patrol can't help but bring the wrong objects to the cremation, to ghost Rita's annoyance.
** And then Rita's corpse reverts back to its blob form and inflates like a balloon, with Rouge poking it with a stick, causing it to deflate and release a nasty smell that Jane compares to burning rubber.
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* Cliff complaining to Past Niles that electric weapons are his AchillesHeel when he and the Chief are attacked by a couple of [[ItMakesSenseInContext elctric axe-wielding]] [[ThoseWackyNazis nazis]], only for Niles to non-chalantly kill one of them with a thrown knife.
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* Cliff complaining to Past Niles that electric weapons are his AchillesHeel when he and the Chief are attacked by a couple of [[ItMakesSenseInContext elctric electric axe-wielding]] [[ThoseWackyNazis nazis]], only for Niles to non-chalantly kill one of them with a thrown knife.
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* Jane refusing to hold onto Cliff's mitten he's been wearing the entire season, preferring instead to go with Larry.
* Cliff complaining to Past Niles that electric weapons are his AchillesHeel when he and the Chief are attacked by a couple of [[ItMakesSenseInContext elctric axe-wielding]] [[ThoseWackyNazis nazis]], only for Niles to non-chalantly kill one of them with a thrown knife.
* Deric's reaction to hearing Vic's voice coming from the Mr. Invincible toy and the students laughing at their cussing.
** Future Vic's non-chalance to being told Deric and their students are trying to save his past self from a time vortex.
* Cliff complaining to Past Niles that electric weapons are his AchillesHeel when he and the Chief are attacked by a couple of [[ItMakesSenseInContext elctric axe-wielding]] [[ThoseWackyNazis nazis]], only for Niles to non-chalantly kill one of them with a thrown knife.
* Deric's reaction to hearing Vic's voice coming from the Mr. Invincible toy and the students laughing at their cussing.
** Future Vic's non-chalance to being told Deric and their students are trying to save his past self from a time vortex.
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** While Immortus doesn't do anything pornographic, you've got to wonder where her head is at for her to engineer a reality where she's both the messiah ''and'' a porn star.
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