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** We later find out Dirk plays the kid with ''cigarettes.''
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** We later find out Dirk plays pays the kid with ''cigarettes.''
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* In the pilot, [=Macduff=] asks Dirk if he thinks Gordon Way and Henry's disappearances were related. Dirk responds by saying he [[BestialityIsDepraved knows nothing of Gordon Way's romantic history, feline or otherwise.]] When they get ahold of Gordon's therapy files, the first thing Dirk remarks on is that Gordon showed no signs [[BrickJoke of inappropriate feelings towards cats.]]
* At one point in the pilot, a cat can be seen walking behind Dirk and [=Macduff=] whilst they're looking for Henry.
* Dirk casually eating some biscuits he took from Ruth [[ItMakesSenseInContext while he, [=Macduff=], and Susan are in the hospital.]]
* At one point in the pilot, a cat can be seen walking behind Dirk and [=Macduff=] whilst they're looking for Henry.
* Dirk casually eating some biscuits he took from Ruth [[ItMakesSenseInContext while he, [=Macduff=], and Susan are in the hospital.]]
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* In the pilot, [=Macduff=] [=MacDuff=] asks Dirk if he thinks Gordon Way and Henry's disappearances were related. Dirk responds by saying he [[BestialityIsDepraved knows nothing of Gordon Way's romantic history, feline or otherwise.]] When they get ahold of Gordon's therapy files, the first thing Dirk remarks on is that Gordon showed no signs [[BrickJoke of inappropriate feelings towards cats.]]
* At one point in the pilot, a cat can be seen walking behind Dirk and[=Macduff=] [=MacDuff=] whilst they're looking for Henry.
* Dirk casually eating some biscuits he took from Ruth [[ItMakesSenseInContext while he,[=Macduff=], [=MacDuff=], and Susan are in the hospital.]]
* At one point in the pilot, a cat can be seen walking behind Dirk and
* Dirk casually eating some biscuits he took from Ruth [[ItMakesSenseInContext while he,
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* The smirk [=Macduff=] gives Dirk as he sits down in his new chair.
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* The smirk [=Macduff=] [=MacDuff=] gives Dirk as he sits down in his new chair.
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* in episode 2 Just as Macduff is declaring to Susan how smart and great Dirk is you can see a Dirk shaped blur running by in the background as he runs from the cops.
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* in episode 2 Just as Macduff [=MacDuff=] is declaring to Susan how smart and great Dirk is you can see a Dirk shaped blur running by in the background as he runs from the cops.
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* "So we've got elves and orcs, and now we've got ghosts?"
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* "So we've got elves and orcs, and now we've got ghosts?"ghosts?"
* in episode 2 Just as Macduff is declaring to Susan how smart and great Dirk is you can see a Dirk shaped blur running by in the background as he runs from the cops.
* in episode 2 Just as Macduff is declaring to Susan how smart and great Dirk is you can see a Dirk shaped blur running by in the background as he runs from the cops.
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* "Oh no, silly me. [[ItMakesSenseInContext You just have a sledgehammer down your pants.]]
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* "Oh no, silly me. [[ItMakesSenseInContext You just have a sledgehammer down your pants.]]]]
* "So we've got elves and orcs, and now we've got ghosts?"
* "So we've got elves and orcs, and now we've got ghosts?"
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* Ms. Jordan's habit of describing her late husband with vulgar profanity.
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* Ms. Jordan's habit of describing her late husband with vulgar profanity.profanity.
* "Oh no, silly me. [[ItMakesSenseInContext You just have a sledgehammer down your pants.]]
* "Oh no, silly me. [[ItMakesSenseInContext You just have a sledgehammer down your pants.]]
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* All of Dirk's thoughts that show up on the mind-reading machine.
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* All of Dirk's thoughts that show up on the mind-reading machine.machine.
* Ms. Jordan's habit of describing her late husband with vulgar profanity.
* Ms. Jordan's habit of describing her late husband with vulgar profanity.
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* Dirk casually eating some biscuits he took from Ruby [[ItMakesSenseInContest while he, [-Macduff=], and Susan are in the hospital.]]
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* Dirk casually eating some biscuits he took from Ruby [[ItMakesSenseInContest Ruth [[ItMakesSenseInContext while he, [-Macduff=], [=Macduff=], and Susan are in the hospital.]]
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* TheReveal that the {{Tsudere}} sending Dirk love\hate letters is [[spoiler: Janet.]]
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* TheReveal All of Dirk's thoughts that show up on the {{Tsudere}} sending Dirk love\hate letters is [[spoiler: Janet.]]mind-reading machine.
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* In the pilot, [=Macduff=] asks Dirk if he thinks Gordon Way and Henry's disappearances were related. Dirk responds by saying he [[BestialityIsDepraved knows nothing of Gordon Way's romantic history, feline or otherwise.]] When they get ahold of Gordon's therapy files, the first thing Dirk remarks on is that Gordon showed no signs [[BrickJoke of sexual desires towards cats.]]
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* In the pilot, [=Macduff=] asks Dirk if he thinks Gordon Way and Henry's disappearances were related. Dirk responds by saying he [[BestialityIsDepraved knows nothing of Gordon Way's romantic history, feline or otherwise.]] When they get ahold of Gordon's therapy files, the first thing Dirk remarks on is that Gordon showed no signs [[BrickJoke of sexual desires inappropriate feelings towards cats.]]
* At one point in the pilot, a cat can be seen walking behind Dirk and [=Macduff=] whilst they're looking for Henry.
* Dirk casually eating some biscuits he took from Ruby [[ItMakesSenseInContest while he, [-Macduff=], and Susan are in the hospital.]]
* Dirk getting slapped in the face with a pizza slice by the delivery boy he tried to divert so he could get the pizza for free.
* The smirk [=Macduff=] gives Dirk as he sits down in his new chair.
* TheReveal that the {{Tsudere}} sending Dirk love\hate letters is [[spoiler: Janet.]]
* At one point in the pilot, a cat can be seen walking behind Dirk and [=Macduff=] whilst they're looking for Henry.
* Dirk casually eating some biscuits he took from Ruby [[ItMakesSenseInContest while he, [-Macduff=], and Susan are in the hospital.]]
* Dirk getting slapped in the face with a pizza slice by the delivery boy he tried to divert so he could get the pizza for free.
* The smirk [=Macduff=] gives Dirk as he sits down in his new chair.
* TheReveal that the {{Tsudere}} sending Dirk love\hate letters is [[spoiler: Janet.]]
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* In the pilot, [=Macduff=] asks Dirk if he thinks Gordon Way and Henry's disappearances were related. Dirk responds by saying he [[BestiallyIsDepraved knows nothing of Gordon Way's romantic history, feline or otherwise.]] When they get ahold of Gordon's therapy files, the first thing Dirk remarks on is that Gordon showed no signs [[BrickJoke of sexual desires towards cats.]]
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* In the pilot, [=Macduff=] asks Dirk if he thinks Gordon Way and Henry's disappearances were related. Dirk responds by saying he [[BestiallyIsDepraved [[BestialityIsDepraved knows nothing of Gordon Way's romantic history, feline or otherwise.]] When they get ahold of Gordon's therapy files, the first thing Dirk remarks on is that Gordon showed no signs [[BrickJoke of sexual desires towards cats.]]
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* The first episode ends off with [=MacDuff=] discovering the person sending Dirk {{Tsundere}} Valentine's Day cards and stuffed animal pigs was [[spoiler: Janice, Dirk's long-suffering secretary.]] [=MacDuff=] and the sender decide to forget the incident and not tell Dirk.
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* The first episode ends off with [=MacDuff=] discovering the person sending Dirk {{Tsundere}} Valentine's Day cards and stuffed animal pigs was [[spoiler: Janice, Dirk's long-suffering secretary.]] [=MacDuff=] and the sender decide to forget the incident and not tell Dirk.Dirk.
* In the pilot, [=Macduff=] asks Dirk if he thinks Gordon Way and Henry's disappearances were related. Dirk responds by saying he [[BestiallyIsDepraved knows nothing of Gordon Way's romantic history, feline or otherwise.]] When they get ahold of Gordon's therapy files, the first thing Dirk remarks on is that Gordon showed no signs [[BrickJoke of sexual desires towards cats.]]
* In the pilot, [=Macduff=] asks Dirk if he thinks Gordon Way and Henry's disappearances were related. Dirk responds by saying he [[BestiallyIsDepraved knows nothing of Gordon Way's romantic history, feline or otherwise.]] When they get ahold of Gordon's therapy files, the first thing Dirk remarks on is that Gordon showed no signs [[BrickJoke of sexual desires towards cats.]]
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* The missing Henry being a cat is a TomatoSuprise in the pilot.
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* The missing Henry being a cat is a TomatoSuprise TomatoSurprise in the pilot.pilot.
* Dirk's method of getting a doctor out of his office so he can get to some confidential files.
* The first episode ends off with [=MacDuff=] discovering the person sending Dirk {{Tsundere}} Valentine's Day cards and stuffed animal pigs was [[spoiler: Janice, Dirk's long-suffering secretary.]] [=MacDuff=] and the sender decide to forget the incident and not tell Dirk.
* Dirk's method of getting a doctor out of his office so he can get to some confidential files.
* The first episode ends off with [=MacDuff=] discovering the person sending Dirk {{Tsundere}} Valentine's Day cards and stuffed animal pigs was [[spoiler: Janice, Dirk's long-suffering secretary.]] [=MacDuff=] and the sender decide to forget the incident and not tell Dirk.
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* Had a crash then?" ... "Oh. You look like you've had a crash!" This is definitely how most British people would react in this situation.
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* Had a crash then?" ... "Oh. You look like you've had a crash!" This is definitely how most British people would react in this situation.situation.
* The pilot has Dirk's expert computer hacker be a ten year-old boy who he hands the laptop to through his school's playground gate.
** We later find out Dirk plays the kid with ''cigarettes.''
* The missing Henry being a cat is a TomatoSuprise in the pilot.
* The pilot has Dirk's expert computer hacker be a ten year-old boy who he hands the laptop to through his school's playground gate.
** We later find out Dirk plays the kid with ''cigarettes.''
* The missing Henry being a cat is a TomatoSuprise in the pilot.
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'''Dirk:''' ''[Cheerfully]'' Yes!
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'''Dirk:''' ''[Cheerfully]'' Yes!Yes!
* Had a crash then?" ... "Oh. You look like you've had a crash!" This is definitely how most British people would react in this situation.
* Had a crash then?" ... "Oh. You look like you've had a crash!" This is definitely how most British people would react in this situation.
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* In the third episode of the TV series, [[spoiler: both occasions where Dirk admits he's the stalker.]]
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* In the third episode of the TV series, [[spoiler: both occasions where Dirk admits he's the stalker.]]]]
* This exchange in the first episode:
-->'''Dirk:''' The circumstances of my first meeting with Mr. Edwards lead me to believe that he is a paranoid conspiracy theorist.\\
''[Flashback; Dirk is clearly following Mr. Edwards]''\\
'''Mr. Edwards:''' ''[Suspicious]'' Are you following me?!\\
'''Dirk:''' ''[Cheerfully]'' Yes!
* This exchange in the first episode:
-->'''Dirk:''' The circumstances of my first meeting with Mr. Edwards lead me to believe that he is a paranoid conspiracy theorist.\\
''[Flashback; Dirk is clearly following Mr. Edwards]''\\
'''Mr. Edwards:''' ''[Suspicious]'' Are you following me?!\\
'''Dirk:''' ''[Cheerfully]'' Yes!
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* In the third episode of the TV series, [[spoiler: both occasions where Dirk admits he's the stalker.]]
