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* In a Mood whiplash to the scene beforehand, Chetney, Launda and Imogen head to the skysails to have some fun. It turns into an actual dogfight air show with everyone having the time of their lives.
--> '''Orym:''' (''beat'') That went as well as I thought it would.
--> '''Orym:''' (''beat'') That went as well as I thought it would.
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* In a Mood whiplash to the scene beforehand, Chetney, Launda Laudna and Imogen head to the skysails to have some fun. It turns into an actual dogfight air show with everyone having the time of their lives.
--> '''Orym:''' (''beat'') That went as well as I thought it would.lives.
--> '''Orym:''' (''beat'') That went as well as I thought it would.
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** Matt describes Chetney landing ass-first into a chicken coop, completely stuck a la Winnie the Pooh while the chickens peck at his ass. Ashton stands off to the side laughing his ass off and not helping.
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** Matt describes Chetney landing ass-first into a chicken coop, completely stuck a la Winnie the Pooh while the chickens peck at his ass. Ashton stands off to the side side, alternating between shooing away those trying to help and laughing his ass off and not helping. off.
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** The kicker is that this scene came directly after a quiet, emotional scene of Orym visiting the graves of his husband and father alongside F.C.G. and Fearne. Matt describes them walking back towards Zephrah in solemn silence, when they start hearing screams and are treated to a wonderful view of the insanity unfolding in the sky ahead.
---> '''Orym:''' (''beat'') That's about as well as I thought it'd go. [[SarcasmMode Cool]].\\
'''F.C.G.:''' Life really is beautiful.
---> '''Orym:''' (''beat'') That's about as well as I thought it'd go. [[SarcasmMode Cool]].\\
'''F.C.G.:''' Life really is beautiful.
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-->'''Sam:''' Matt, if you had said "Blue Perennem", the same thing would have happened.
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* After Marisha lovingly descibes the grotesque way in which Laudna's Hound of Ill Omen bursts forth from her skeletal ribcage, Matt points to an open-mouthed Laura and says "That's your girlfriend."
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* To kill time, Laudna attaches a ribbon to Pate, throws him off the edge of the mountain, and starts to fly him like a kite.
-->'''Pate:''' Little nervous up here!\\
'''Laudna:''' You're fine!\\
'''Pate:''' There's a big hawk circling! I think he wants to be friends!
* After Marisha lovinglydescibes describes the grotesque way in which Laudna's Hound of Ill Omen bursts forth from her skeletal ribcage, Matt points to an open-mouthed Laura and says "That's your girlfriend."
-->'''Pate:''' Little nervous up here!\\
'''Laudna:''' You're fine!\\
'''Pate:''' There's a big hawk circling! I think he wants to be friends!
* After Marisha lovingly
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* It's canon: Whitestone is for lovers; Zephrah is for fuckers. And Orym's mom (a midwife) is a ''reeeeeally'' busy woman.
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** As Ashton is leaving, he overhears Fanny Z mutter "What a strange hunk." He immediately fist-pumps and whispers "Yes!"
--->'''Marisha:''' Everyone's getting fucked in Zephrah. Zephrah ''fucks.''\\
'''Taliesin:''' Zephrah is for fuckers.\\
'''Liam/Orym:''' My mom [a midwife] is ''busy.''\\
'''Marisha:''' Whitestone is for lovers. Zephrah is for fuckers.\\
''(everyone bursts out laughing)''\\
'''Liam/Orym:''' ''(glaring at Travis/Chetney)'' Motherfuckers.
--->'''Marisha:''' Everyone's getting fucked in Zephrah. Zephrah ''fucks.''\\
'''Taliesin:''' Zephrah is for fuckers.\\
'''Liam/Orym:''' My mom [a midwife] is ''busy.''\\
'''Marisha:''' Whitestone is for lovers. Zephrah is for fuckers.\\
''(everyone bursts out laughing)''\\
'''Liam/Orym:''' ''(glaring at Travis/Chetney)'' Motherfuckers.
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* After Marisha lovingly descibes the grotesque way in which Laudna's Hound of Ill Omen bursts forth from her skeletal ribcage, Matt points to an open-mouth Laura and says "That's your girlfriend."
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* After Marisha lovingly descibes the grotesque way in which Laudna's Hound of Ill Omen bursts forth from her skeletal ribcage, Matt points to an open-mouth open-mouthed Laura and says "That's your girlfriend."
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* Ashton goes to get a new outfit at the abode of Fanny Z, a flamboyant woman in a beehive hairdo and glorious drag makeup.
-->'''Ashton:''' I'm going through a bit of a life crisis at the moment.\\
'''Fanny Z:''' Oh goodness! Welcome to the party!\\
'''Ashton:''' ...I had a funny feeling.
-->'''Ashton:''' I'm going through a bit of a life crisis at the moment.\\
'''Fanny Z:''' Oh goodness! Welcome to the party!\\
'''Ashton:''' ...I had a funny feeling.
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** Imogen rolls an insight check to see if Alma remembers Chetney, and gets a whisper. Liam, who is next to her, immediately plugs his ears and starts shouting "Lalala, it can't hurt me!"
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** After Chetney gives her his gift, Alma calls him a handsome man. Orym looks like he's in physical pain.
--->'''Orym:''' ''(strained)'' Cool. It's cool.\\
'''Ashton:''' This just somehow keeps getting weirder.\\
'''Chetney:''' It's called gravity. It's just a law of nature.
--->'''Orym:''' ''(strained)'' Cool. It's cool.\\
'''Ashton:''' This just somehow keeps getting weirder.\\
'''Chetney:''' It's called gravity. It's just a law of nature.
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-->'''Orym:''' Did you create my childhood, Chetney? Did you create Optimus Prime?\\
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-->'''Orym:''' Did you create my childhood, Chetney? Did you create [[Franchise/{{Transformers}} Optimus Prime?\\Prime]]?\\
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** Right before this, as Orym is still reeling, Chetney asks them if they thought he was joking about his fame. Imogen says that she always believed him. [[BrutalHonesty Orym and Fearne both say yes]].
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* When the Hells met Alma (Orym's mom), Chetney immediately started carving for her. Imogen mentally joked to Orym that Chetney was interested in his mom. Orym somehow combined a [[TheUnSmile pained smile]] with a ThousandYardStare.
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* When the Hells met meet Alma (Orym's mom), Chetney immediately started starts carving for her. Imogen mentally joked jokes to Orym that Chetney was interested in is going to try to fuck his mom. Orym doesn't respond, but somehow combined manages to combine a [[TheUnSmile pained smile]] with a ThousandYardStare.
