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* When a bunch of students is discussing Laika's disappearance during class, A male human wearing a TinfoilHat pipes up while [[AdjustingYourGlasses adjusting his glasses]].
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* When a bunch of students is discussing Laika's disappearance during class, A male human wearing a TinfoilHat pipes up while [[AdjustingYourGlasses adjusting his glasses]].glasses.
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* When a bunch of students is discussing Laika's disappearance during class, A male human wearing a TinfoilHat pipes up while [[ AdjustingYourGlasses adjusting glasses]].
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* When a bunch of students is discussing Laika's disappearance during class, A male human wearing a TinfoilHat pipes up while [[ AdjustingYourGlasses [[AdjustingYourGlasses adjusting his glasses]].
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* When a bunch of students is discussing Laika's disappearance during class, A male human wearing a tinfoil hat pipes up while adjusting glasses.
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* When a bunch of students is discussing Laika's disappearance during class, A male human wearing a tinfoil hat TinfoilHat pipes up while [[ AdjustingYourGlasses adjusting glasses.glasses]].
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* Despite the seriousness of the situation, the students disappearing one by one around the school is depicted in a comedic manner.
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* When a bunch of students is discussing Laika's disappearance during class, A male human wearing a tinfoil hat pipes up while adjusting glasses.
--->'''Tinfoil Hat Student:''' Cryptids. It’s the work of cryptids I tell you!
---> '''Two Girls:''' (in unison) Oh, put a lid on it, Marty!
* Despite the seriousness of the situation, the students disappearing one by one around the school is depicted in a [[PlayedForLaughs comedicmanner.manner]].
--->'''Tinfoil Hat Student:''' Cryptids. It’s the work of cryptids I tell you!
---> '''Two Girls:''' (in unison) Oh, put a lid on it, Marty!
* Despite the seriousness of the situation, the students disappearing one by one around the school is depicted in a [[PlayedForLaughs comedic
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* Laelaps being [[NoSocialSkills socially inept]] and having to hastily apologize to Kasumi after bluntly dismissing her [[TheEmpath empath powers]]. The moment her heart shattered was audible.
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* Laelaps being [[NoSocialSkills socially inept]] and having to hastily apologize to Kasumi after bluntly dismissing her [[TheEmpath empath powers]].PsychicPowers. The moment her heart shattered was audible.
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* Ascelin frightening a group of girls by shooting them with his mother's Crescent Moon smile after overhearing them talk about him.
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* Ascelin frightening a group of girls by shooting flashing them with his mother's [[CheshireCatGrin Crescent Moon smile Moon]] [[SlasherSmile smile]] after overhearing them talk about him.
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* Ascelin and Laika bonding over their love of shopping in Chapter 3.
--->'''Ascelin:''' Don’t worry guys, the next place you wanna go to I’ll be paying.
---> '''Laika:''' Oh yeah, I forgot [[TokenRichStudent you’re the rich one here]]. Hmmm… how about... (grins) How about some shopping
---> '''Ascelin:''' (squeals & gives finger guns) I was hoping you’d say that!
--->'''Ascelin:''' Don’t worry guys, the next place you wanna go to I’ll be paying.
---> '''Laika:''' Oh yeah, I forgot [[TokenRichStudent you’re the rich one here]]. Hmmm… how about... (grins) How about some shopping
---> '''Ascelin:''' (squeals & gives finger guns) I was hoping you’d say that!
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* Ascelin frightening a group of girls by shooting them with his mother's Crescent Moon smile after overhearing them talk about him.
* Laelaps being [[NoSocialSkills socially inept]] and having to hastily apologize to Kasumi after bluntly dismissing her [[TheEmpath empath powers]]. The moment her heart shattered was audible.
* Laelaps being [[NoSocialSkills socially inept]] and having to hastily apologize to Kasumi after bluntly dismissing her [[TheEmpath empath powers]]. The moment her heart shattered was audible.
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->''"OUUUUUUUU, MIKHAILLLLLL"''
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* Ascelin [[HateAtFirstSight instantly despising Nagisa when Kasumi introduces the two to each other]].
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** A male student named Johnny is reluctant to confess to his crush Clara but is given the courage by his friend Mikhail. Johnny approaches Clara in the hallway with a [[FlowersOfRomance bouquet of roses]] and blurts out a LoveConfession with only to discover that she had vanished. Perceiving this as her rejecting him, [[InelegantBlubbering Johnny cries to Mikhail with snot running down his nose]].
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** A male student named Johnny is reluctant to confess to his crush Clara but is given the courage by his friend Mikhail. Johnny approaches Clara in the hallway with a [[FlowersOfRomance bouquet of roses]] and blurts out a LoveConfession with only to discover that she had vanished. Perceiving this as her rejecting him, [[InelegantBlubbering Johnny cries to Mikhail with snot running down his nose]].nose]].
->''"OUUUUUUUU, MIKHAILLLLLL"''
* In Chapter 5, Axel is shown to still have his theatricality.
--->'''Kasumi:''' We have no way of contacting anyone from the outside world and vice versa so be careful, Axe-papa!
---> '''Axel:''' Likewise, take care! (gives a two-finger salute with a wink before running off) [[CapsLock FOR THE EARTHHHHHH!]]
---> '''Sherbet:''' (mutters) So theatrical…
->''"OUUUUUUUU, MIKHAILLLLLL"''
* In Chapter 5, Axel is shown to still have his theatricality.
--->'''Kasumi:''' We have no way of contacting anyone from the outside world and vice versa so be careful, Axe-papa!
---> '''Axel:''' Likewise, take care! (gives a two-finger salute with a wink before running off) [[CapsLock FOR THE EARTHHHHHH!]]
---> '''Sherbet:''' (mutters) So theatrical…
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** A male student named Johnny is reluctant to confess to his crush Clara but is given the courage by his friend Mikhail. Johnny approaches Clara in the hallway with a bouquet of roses and blurts out a LoveConfession with tightly squeezed eyes but when he opens them, sees that Clara had gone. Perceiving this as her leaving him, Johnny cries to Mikhail with snot running down his nose.
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** A male student named Johnny is reluctant to confess to his crush Clara but is given the courage by his friend Mikhail. Johnny approaches Clara in the hallway with a [[FlowersOfRomance bouquet of roses roses]] and blurts out a LoveConfession with tightly squeezed eyes but when he opens them, sees only to discover that Clara she had gone. vanished. Perceiving this as her leaving rejecting him, [[InelegantBlubbering Johnny cries to Mikhail with snot running down his nose.nose]].
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** A male student named Johnny is reluctant to confess to his crush Clara but is given the courage by his friend Mikhail. Johnny approaches Clara in the hallway with a bouquet of roses and blurts out a LoveConfession with tightly squeezed eyes but when he opens them, sees that Clara had gone. Perceiving this as her leaving him, Johnny cries to Mikhail with snot running down his nose.
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** A scene from the school's gymnasium showed a cheerleading pyramid collapsing from a portal being opened up on the ground.
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** A scene from the school's gymnasium showed a cheerleading pyramid collapsing from a portal being opened up on the ground.ground.
** A male student named Johnny is reluctant to confess to his crush Clara but is given the courage by his friend Mikhail.
** A male student named Johnny is reluctant to confess to his crush Clara but is given the courage by his friend Mikhail.
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* Despite the seriousness of the situation, the students disappearing one by one around the school is depicted in a comedic manner.
** A scene from the school's gymnasium showed a cheerleading pyramid collapsing from a portal being opened up on the ground.
** A scene from the school's gymnasium showed a cheerleading pyramid collapsing from a portal being opened up on the ground.
