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-->'''Karen:''' It's like the whole world is my canvas.
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** Dennis proves just [[SarcasmMode how good he is at his job]]:
--->'''Dennis:''' I can't believe that idiot thought he could just waltz in here and do my job. It's HARD to be a negotiator! Of my first 50 jumpers, 49 died.\\
'''Rosa:''' You only talked down one person?\\
'''Dennis:''' No, he jumped too, but he landed on this woman who broke his fall. [[BlackComedy She died]], but you can't count that against me.
--->'''Dennis:''' I can't believe that idiot thought he could just waltz in here and do my job. It's HARD to be a negotiator! Of my first 50 jumpers, 49 died.\\
'''Rosa:''' You only talked down one person?\\
'''Dennis:''' No, he jumped too, but he landed on this woman who broke his fall. [[BlackComedy She died]], but you can't count that against me.
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* In the ColdOpen, Jake [[ItMakesSenseInContext makes the lineup of perps sing The]] Music/BackstreetBoys [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ffyKY3Dj5ZE “I Want It That Way”.]] It's a SignatureScene for a reason.
-->'''Victim''': It was Number Five. Number Five killed my brother.
-->'''Victim''': It was Number Five. Number Five killed my brother.
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* In the ColdOpen, Jake [[ItMakesSenseInContext makes the lineup of perps sing The]] Music/BackstreetBoys Music/BackstreetBoys' [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ffyKY3Dj5ZE “I Want It That Way”.]] It's a SignatureScene for a reason.
-->'''Victim''': It was Number Five. [[MoodWhiplash Number Five killed my brother.]]
-->'''Victim''': It was Number Five. [[MoodWhiplash Number Five killed my brother.]]
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-->'''Kate:''' He taught me how to shave!
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-->'''Kate:''' He taught me ''me'' how to shave!
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--> '''Scully''': Do you know Anne Heche?
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--> '''Scully''': Do you know Anne Heche?Creator/AnneHeche?
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* Kyle expresses appreciation for Jake and Charles befriending him because when they met, he was having some dark thoughts and thinking about giving up... [[NotSoDire on his rap career]].
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* Amy is shown in a library heavily examining the books. It initially seems like she's researching for Jake and Rosa's case... but it turns out that she just spends her free time reshelving books at the library, which the actual librarian is highly offended by.
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-->'''Jake:''' Whatever it takes to make Amy happy! You told em to do this, now let's get these gift bags to the menu! ''[throws another rock, smashing yet another window]''
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-->'''Jake:''' Whatever it takes to make Amy happy! You told em me to do this, now let's get these gift bags to the menu! ''[throws another rock, smashing yet another window]''
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-->'''Amy:''' I'm starting to think it's a bad idea for us to be basing so many of our life decisions on bets and contests.
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* Since Jake had been talking to the warden, Romero gets suspicious and asks Jake what was going on. We have an extreme close up of Jake's eyes as he [[InternalMonologue internally says to himself]] '''"Okay Jake, don't freak out, just stay calm! You're on a crazy amount of blizz but your brain still works!"''' Cut to Jake very calmly lying to Romero. Romero then reveals that Jake wasn't internally monologing, [[OnceMoreWithClarity he was screaming those words]].
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* Since Jake had been talking to the warden, Romero gets suspicious and asks Jake what was going on. We have [[EyedScreen an extreme close up of Jake's eyes eyes]] as he [[InternalMonologue internally says to himself]] '''"Okay Jake, don't freak out, just stay calm! You're on a crazy amount of blizz but your brain still works!"''' Cut to Jake very calmly lying to Romero. Romero then reveals that Jake wasn't internally monologing, [[OnceMoreWithClarity he was screaming those words]].
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* Jake gets ''really'' into his example speech of Rosa coming out to her parents.
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* Jake [[AmbiguouslyBi Jake]] gets ''really'' into his example speech of Rosa coming out to her parents.
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** There's also the first suspect's reaction when he's asked to [[FlatWhat sing the opening line.]]
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* In the ColdOpen, Jake [[ItMakesSenseInContext makes the lineup of perps sing The]] Music/BackstreetBoys [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ffyKY3Dj5ZE “I Want It That Way”.]]
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* In the ColdOpen, Jake [[ItMakesSenseInContext makes the lineup of perps sing The]] Music/BackstreetBoys [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ffyKY3Dj5ZE “I Want It That Way”.]]]] It's a SignatureScene for a reason.
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-->'''Boyle:''' This is happening, Jake and Amy are getting married tonight! [[ShipperOnDeck TITLE OF MY SEX TAPE!]]\\
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-->'''Boyle:''' This is happening, Jake and Amy are getting married tonight! [[ShipperOnDeck TITLE OF Title of MY SEX TAPE!]]\\sex tape!]]\\
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* Boyle gets super pumped up about Jake and Amy's wedding.
-->'''Boyle:''' This is happening, Jake and Amy are getting married tonight! [[ShipperOnDeck TITLE OF MY SEX TAPE!]]\\
'''Jake:''' [[FlatWhat What?]]\\
'''Amy:''' ''(confused and disgusted look)''
-->'''Boyle:''' This is happening, Jake and Amy are getting married tonight! [[ShipperOnDeck TITLE OF MY SEX TAPE!]]\\
'''Jake:''' [[FlatWhat What?]]\\
'''Amy:''' ''(confused and disgusted look)''
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* Jake in solitary, from start to finish, whether making a [[BuxomIsBetter busty]] stick figure portrait of Amy out of mashed potatoes or reenacting Mufasa and Scar's opening conversation from ''WesternAnimation/TheLionKing1994''.
** Jake breaks within the first minute of solitary.
** Jake breaks within the first minute of solitary.
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* Jake in solitary, from start to finish, whether making a [[BuxomIsBetter [[BuxomBeautyStandard busty]] stick figure portrait of Amy out of mashed potatoes or reenacting Mufasa and Scar's opening conversation from ''WesternAnimation/TheLionKing1994''.
** * Jake breaks within the first minute of solitary.
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* The entire scene where Rosa draws the card "Wedding" for Pictionary and thus decides, in an act of anger at how her parents dismissed her bisexuality as a phase, to draw a wedding between two women, resulting in her mom guessing basically anything ''other'' than a wedding. It's classic CringeComedy with an undercurrent of sadness.
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* The entire scene where Rosa draws the card "Wedding" for Pictionary ''TabletopGame/{{Pictionary}}'' and thus decides, in an act of anger at how her parents dismissed her bisexuality as a phase, to draw a wedding between two women, resulting in her mom guessing basically anything ''other'' than a wedding. It's classic CringeComedy with an undercurrent of sadness.
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Names The Same is no longer a trope
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* Terry is finding a way to make it up to Teri after their [[NamesTheSame misunderstanding]].
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* Terry is finding a way to make it up to Teri after their [[NamesTheSame misunderstanding]].misunderstanding.
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--> '''Holt''': No, we just ran into him in the vestibule.
--> '''Hitchcock''': *to a female prisoner* Hey baby! I ''love'' what prison's doing to your figure!
--> '''Hitchcock''': *to a female prisoner* Hey baby! I ''love'' what prison's doing to your figure!
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--> '''Holt''': No, we just ran bumped into him in the vestibule.
lobby. We don't know why he is here.
--> '''Hitchcock''': *to a female prisoner*Hey Jamie baby! I ''love'' what prison's doing to your figure!
--> '''Hitchcock''': *to a female prisoner*
