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** Poor sexually frustrated succubus Koakuma thought she finally gotten laid with some Oni men, but completely forgotten her experience due to the hangover. Worse still, it's latter reveal that she still didn't get lucky,[[ThrowTheDogABone though she at least leaves the city with.]]
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** Poor sexually frustrated succubus Koakuma thought she finally gotten laid with some Oni men, but completely forgotten her experience due to the hangover. Worse still, it's latter reveal that she still didn't get lucky,[[ThrowTheDogABone though lucky, as the Oni men she was with happen to be a particular group who pride themselves in their gentlemen behavior. [[ThrowTheDogABone Though, she at least leaves the city with.hopeful from their speech of encouragement, which later results in things going her way.]]
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* Meiling's girls night out into the underground city with Koakuma, Reisen, Shou, Iku and Tenshi naturally went awry when alcohol entered the equation, leaving much of what happened a blur for much of the arc. Most of the cast is wearing each-other's clothing, the city has a trail of ruins (though the Oni seem to not care much about that), Parsee's in a red PlayboyBunny outfit retching into a toilet, Reisen's found BoundAndGagged in a large spider web courtesy of a sleepy and nearly-naked Yamame who's cuddling up to her, a sleeping underwyrm rests atop a pile of glass bottles (with Meiling vaguely remember ''riding'' the thing), Iku is competely without her clothes -- only having a tablecloth for modesty, and Shou is legally married to ''Koishi Komeiji''. And that's all from just waking up in the morning.
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* Meiling's girls night out into the underground city with Koakuma, Reisen, Shou, Iku and Tenshi naturally went awry when alcohol entered the equation, [[WhatDidIDoLastNight leaving much of what happened a blur for much of the arc.arc]]. Most of the cast is wearing each-other's clothing, the city has a trail of ruins (though the Oni seem to not care much about that), Parsee's in a red PlayboyBunny outfit retching into a toilet, Reisen's found BoundAndGagged in a large spider web courtesy of a sleepy and nearly-naked Yamame who's cuddling up to her, a sleeping underwyrm rests atop a pile of glass bottles (with Meiling vaguely remember ''riding'' the thing), Iku is competely without her clothes -- only having a tablecloth for modesty, and Shou is legally married to ''Koishi Komeiji''. And that's all from just waking up in the morning.
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--->'''Satori:''' You know what they would call this in any other city in the world? They would call this a calamity. A disaster of unprecedented proportions. Do you know what the Oni call this? [[Film/StreetFighter Tuesday]].\\
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--->'''Satori:''' You know what they would call this in any other city in the world? They would call this a calamity. A disaster of unprecedented proportions. [[ButForMeItWasTuesday Do you know what the Oni call this? [[Film/StreetFighter Tuesday]].\\Tuesday.]]\\
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** Poor sexually frustrated succubus Koakuma thought she finally gotten laid with some Oni men, but completely forgotten her experience due to the hangover. Worse still, it's latter reveal that she still didn't get lucky.lucky,[[ThrowTheDogABone though she at least leaves the city with.]]
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** All of this becomes funnier with a dash of FridgeBrilliance: it's common in fanworks for the otherwise casually malicious Yuuka to have a soft spot for Cirno and her crew, and [[WouldNotHurtAChild consider harming children to be beneath her]]. Aya tripped over ''two'' of the Ultimate Sadistic Creature's [[BerserkButton Berserk Buttons]] and should be glad she's still alive!
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** All of this becomes funnier with a dash of FridgeBrilliance: it's common in fanworks for the otherwise casually malicious Yuuka to [[MoralityPet have a soft spot for Cirno and her crew, crew]], and [[WouldNotHurtAChild consider harming children to be beneath her]]. Aya tripped over ''two'' of the Ultimate Sadistic Creature's [[BerserkButton Berserk Buttons]] and should be glad she's still alive!
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** All of this becomes funnier with a dash of FridgeBrilliance: it's common in fanworks for the otherwise casually malicious Yuuka to have a soft spot for Cirno and her crew, and [[WouldNotHurtAChild consider harming children to be beneath her]]. Aya tripped over ''two'' of the Ultimate Sadistic Creature's BerserkButtons and should be glad she's still alive!
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** All of this becomes funnier with a dash of FridgeBrilliance: it's common in fanworks for the otherwise casually malicious Yuuka to have a soft spot for Cirno and her crew, and [[WouldNotHurtAChild consider harming children to be beneath her]]. Aya tripped over ''two'' of the Ultimate Sadistic Creature's BerserkButtons [[BerserkButton Berserk Buttons]] and should be glad she's still alive!
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** All of this becomes funnier with a dash of FridgeBrilliance: it's common in fanworks for the otherwise casually malicious Yuuka to have a soft spot for Cirno and her crew, and [[WouldNotHurtAChild consider harming children to be beneath her]]. Aya tripped over ''two'' of the Ultimate Sadistic Creature's BerserkButtons and should be glad she's still alive!
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** Flandre believes that BuxomIsBetter, as demonstrated by her long spiel over everyone she knows who's gifted, with the exception of her and her sister, which [[ACupAngst she sees as an injustice]]. The casual "what the heck" attitude and way of speaking is what really sells this.
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** Flandre believes that BuxomIsBetter, as demonstrated by her long spiel over everyone she knows who's gifted, with the exception of her and her sister, which [[ACupAngst she sees as an injustice]]. The casual "what the heck" attitude and drunken way of speaking is what really sells this.
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* Meiling's girls night out into the underground city with Koakuma, Reisen, Shou, Iku and Tenshi naturally went awry when alcohol entered the equation, leaving much of what happened a blur for much of the arc. Most of the cast is wearing each-other's clothing, the city has a trail of ruins (though the Oni seem to not care much about that), Parsee's in a red PlayboyBunny outfit retching into a toilet, Reisen's found BoundAndGagged in a large spider web courtesy of a sleepy and nearly-naked Yamame's who's cuddling up to her, a sleeping underwyrm rests atop a pile of glass bottles (with Meiling vaguely remember ''riding'' the thing), Iku is competely without her clothes -- only having a tablecloth for modesty, and Shou is legally married to Koishi Komeiji. And that's all from just waking up in the morning.
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* Meiling's girls night out into the underground city with Koakuma, Reisen, Shou, Iku and Tenshi naturally went awry when alcohol entered the equation, leaving much of what happened a blur for much of the arc. Most of the cast is wearing each-other's clothing, the city has a trail of ruins (though the Oni seem to not care much about that), Parsee's in a red PlayboyBunny outfit retching into a toilet, Reisen's found BoundAndGagged in a large spider web courtesy of a sleepy and nearly-naked Yamame's Yamame who's cuddling up to her, a sleeping underwyrm rests atop a pile of glass bottles (with Meiling vaguely remember ''riding'' the thing), Iku is competely without her clothes -- only having a tablecloth for modesty, and Shou is legally married to Koishi Komeiji.''Koishi Komeiji''. And that's all from just waking up in the morning.
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'''Koakuma:''' Here ya go. ''[lobs a box of condoms at the spider web]'' ...What? It'll prevent pregnancy!\\
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'''Koakuma:''' Here ya go. ''[lobs a box of condoms at the spider web]'' ...web, earns stares from the group]'' ...What? It'll prevent pregnancy!\\
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** When "Girls night out in the city" was the last major option at the time, Keymaster had fun with it by presenting four options... [[ButThouMust which are all the same aforementioned option. Cue the voters [[SeriousBusiness agonizing over the decisions]].
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** When "Girls night out in the city" was the last major option at the time, Keymaster had fun with it by presenting four options... [[ButThouMust which are all the same aforementioned option.option]]. Cue the voters [[SeriousBusiness agonizing over the decisions]].
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* The multiple-choices at the end of each chapter/post that allows for AudienceParticipation. They bring they're own brand of comedy to the table. For examples:
** At the end of the post/chapter where Sakuya and Yuuka end up fighting over Meiling, all of the options are generally of Meiling telling them to stop. In the following chapter, while initially thinking about stopping them, she decides to TakeAThirdOption and [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere walks away from the fight, declaring herself needing a vacation.]]
** When attempting to counter Flandre and Koakuma's attempts at barging in on Reimu and Remilia's private time, she has several methods, which leads to Meiling [[CallingYourAttacks calling out the chosen attack out loud]].
-->''[ ] Punishment Kick!\\
[ ] Get-a-Life Chop!\\
[ ] Sensibility Suplex!\\
[ ] Tackle of Terror!''
** When "Girls night out in the city" was the last major option at the time, Keymaster had fun with it by presenting four options... [[ButThouMust which are all the same aforementioned option. Cue the voters [[SeriousBusiness agonizing over the decisions]].
** At the end of the post/chapter where Sakuya and Yuuka end up fighting over Meiling, all of the options are generally of Meiling telling them to stop. In the following chapter, while initially thinking about stopping them, she decides to TakeAThirdOption and [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere walks away from the fight, declaring herself needing a vacation.]]
** When attempting to counter Flandre and Koakuma's attempts at barging in on Reimu and Remilia's private time, she has several methods, which leads to Meiling [[CallingYourAttacks calling out the chosen attack out loud]].
-->''[ ] Punishment Kick!\\
[ ] Get-a-Life Chop!\\
[ ] Sensibility Suplex!\\
[ ] Tackle of Terror!''
** When "Girls night out in the city" was the last major option at the time, Keymaster had fun with it by presenting four options... [[ButThouMust which are all the same aforementioned option. Cue the voters [[SeriousBusiness agonizing over the decisions]].
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* Poor Marisa has to deal with Pameel drastically changing her life ever since becoming married. In particular, Marisa isn't happy with all the cleaning and organizing of her house, evidently being attached to her various messes and dangers, going by her deadpan responses:
-->'''Marisa:''' ...It was my clutter, and I liked it...\\
'''Pameel:''' And things never catch on fire anymore!\\
'''Marisa:''' Those were my fires and I liked them...\\
'''Pameel:''' And that's to say nothing of that nest of poisonous spiders I found in the attic! I had to shoo them away, because they were stealing food!\\
'''Marisa:''' Those were my spiders and I liked them...
-->'''Marisa:''' ...It was my clutter, and I liked it...\\
'''Pameel:''' And things never catch on fire anymore!\\
'''Marisa:''' Those were my fires and I liked them...\\
'''Pameel:''' And that's to say nothing of that nest of poisonous spiders I found in the attic! I had to shoo them away, because they were stealing food!\\
'''Marisa:''' Those were my spiders and I liked them...
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* Meiling's girls night out into the underground city with Koakuma, Reisen, Shou, Iku and Tenshi naturally went awry when alcohol entered the equation, leaving much of what happened a blur for much of the arc. Most of the cast (Meiling and Yuugi) is wearing each-other's clothing, the city has a trail of ruins (though the Oni seem to not care much about that), Parsee's in a red PlayboyBunny outfit retching into a toilet, Reisen's found BoundAndGagged in a large spider web courtesy of a sleepy and nearly-naked Yamame's who's cuddling up to her, a sleeping underwyrm rests atop a pile of glass bottles (with Meiling vaguely remember ''riding'' the thing), Iku is competely without her clothes -- only having a tablecloth for modesty, and Shou is legally married to Koishi Komeiji. And that's all from just waking up in the morning.
** Reisen, when she loses her gag, begs the others to get her out of the spider web before Yamame gets any more frisky with her.
--->'''Reisen:''' I'm stuck here, and this spider is getting frisky in her sleep! [[ExplosiveBreeder Spider youkai are really fertile, and I'm a rabbit!]] I don't wanna be a mother!\\
'''Meiling:''' ''Is that even possible? It might be possible.''
** Reisen, when she loses her gag, begs the others to get her out of the spider web before Yamame gets any more frisky with her.
--->'''Reisen:''' I'm stuck here, and this spider is getting frisky in her sleep! [[ExplosiveBreeder Spider youkai are really fertile, and I'm a rabbit!]] I don't wanna be a mother!\\
'''Meiling:''' ''Is that even possible? It might be possible.''
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* Meiling's girls night out into the underground city with Koakuma, Reisen, Shou, Iku and Tenshi naturally went awry when alcohol entered the equation, leaving much of what happened a blur for much of the arc. Most of the cast (Meiling and Yuugi) is wearing each-other's clothing, the city has a trail of ruins (though the Oni seem to not care much about that), Parsee's in a red PlayboyBunny outfit retching into a toilet, Reisen's found BoundAndGagged in a large spider web courtesy of a sleepy and nearly-naked Yamame's who's cuddling up to her, a sleeping underwyrm rests atop a pile of glass bottles (with Meiling vaguely remember ''riding'' the thing), Iku is competely without her clothes -- only having a tablecloth for modesty, and Shou is legally married to Koishi Komeiji. And that's all from just waking up in the morning.
**Reisen, when she loses her gag, begs Poor Reisen being at the mercy of the spider youkai, begging the others to get her out of the spider web before Yamame gets any more frisky with her.
her, not wanting to become [[NoodleIncident "Master's science experiment again"]].
--->'''Reisen:'''I'm stuck here, and this SOMEBODY DO SOMETHING!\\
'''Koakuma:''' Here ya go. ''[lobs a box of condoms at the spideris getting frisky in her sleep! [[ExplosiveBreeder Spider youkai are really fertile, and I'm a rabbit!]] I don't wanna be a mother!\\
'''Meiling:''' ''Is thatweb]'' ...What? It'll prevent pregnancy!\\
'''Shou:''' ...Can she evenpossible? get pregnant? I mean, they're both girls.\\
'''Iku:''' Magic. Youkai are involved. Who knows?\\
'''Reisen:''' LESS DEBATING, MORE HELPING!
** Meiling's attempt at apologizing to Satori results in the mind reader ranting about the very city she lives in:
--->'''Satori:''' You know what they would call this in any other city in the world? They would call this a calamity. A disaster of unprecedented proportions. Do you know what the Oni call this? [[Film/StreetFighter Tuesday]].\\
'''Yuugi:''' Itmight be possible.''was a Wednesday evening.\\
'''Satori:''' Silence, Hoshiguma.\\
'''Yuugi:''' ...'Kay.
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--->'''Reisen:'''
'''Koakuma:''' Here ya go. ''[lobs a box of condoms at the spider
'''Meiling:''' ''Is that
'''Shou:''' ...Can she even
'''Iku:''' Magic. Youkai are involved. Who knows?\\
'''Reisen:''' LESS DEBATING, MORE HELPING!
** Meiling's attempt at apologizing to Satori results in the mind reader ranting about the very city she lives in:
--->'''Satori:''' You know what they would call this in any other city in the world? They would call this a calamity. A disaster of unprecedented proportions. Do you know what the Oni call this? [[Film/StreetFighter Tuesday]].\\
'''Yuugi:''' It
'''Satori:''' Silence, Hoshiguma.\\
'''Yuugi:''' ...'Kay.
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-->''"...Hey, what's that in the sky? Looks like someone riding a-"''\\
''"DAMN. DOUBLE DAMN. STUPID BLACK-WHITE. STUPID WITCH IT WAS SUCH A NICE DAY. SHE'S GONNA BLAST THROUGH AND I'M GONNA CATCH HELL."''\\
''"DAMN. DOUBLE DAMN. STUPID BLACK-WHITE. STUPID WITCH IT WAS SUCH A NICE DAY. SHE'S GONNA BLAST THROUGH AND I'M GONNA CATCH HELL."''\\
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''DAMN. DOUBLE DAMN. STUPID BLACK-WHITE. STUPID WITCH IT WAS SUCH A NICE DAY. SHE'S GONNA BLAST THROUGH AND I'M GONNA CATCH HELL."''\\
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'''Meiling:''' Urk!''Urk!''
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** Reisen, when she loses her gag, begs the others to get her out of the spider web before Yamame gets any more frisky with her.
--->'''Reisen:''' I'm stuck here, and this spider is getting frisky in her sleep! [[ExplosiveBreeder Spider youkai are really fertile, and I'm a rabbit!]] I don't wanna be a mother!\\
'''Meiling:''' ''Is that even possible? It might be possible.''
** Poor sexually frustrated succubus Koakuma thought she finally gotten laid with some Oni men, but completely forgotten her experience due to the hangover. Worse still, it's latter reveal that she still didn't get lucky.
** Reisen, when she loses her gag, begs the others to get her out of the spider web before Yamame gets any more frisky with her.
--->'''Reisen:''' I'm stuck here, and this spider is getting frisky in her sleep! [[ExplosiveBreeder Spider youkai are really fertile, and I'm a rabbit!]] I don't wanna be a mother!\\
'''Meiling:''' ''Is that even possible? It might be possible.''
** Poor sexually frustrated succubus Koakuma thought she finally gotten laid with some Oni men, but completely forgotten her experience due to the hangover. Worse still, it's latter reveal that she still didn't get lucky.
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** Flandre [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech tearing into the tengu for her tabloids]] may not necessarily be funny [[note]]Especially with ''Tengu of (Mis)Fortune'' [[HarsherInHindsight in mind]].[[/note]], but her comment on Aya [[SeriousBusiness ruining panties]] and her tengu attire certainly makes up for it.
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** Flandre [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech tearing into the tengu Aya for her tabloids]] may not necessarily be funny [[note]]Especially with ''Tengu of (Mis)Fortune'' [[HarsherInHindsight in mind]].[[/note]], but her comment on Aya the tengu [[SeriousBusiness ruining panties]] and her tengu taking the time to mock Aya's attire certainly makes up for it.
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* After an incident with Marisa drunk on mushrooms and vengeance against Meiling, the latter comes up with a plan to get back at her: [[ChekhovsGag Drunk Flandre]]. The vampire doesn't just settle for calling her out for her actions, but calling for her to settle down -- [[InsaneTrollLogic or be settled down, by someone]] -- which leads to Flan having the witch inexplicably engaged with a random fairy that walked in at the right time. Most of the cast are naturally confused about the hard left turn this situation took.
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* After an incident with Marisa drunk on mushrooms and vengeance against Meiling, the latter comes up with a plan to get back at her: [[ChekhovsGag Drunk Flandre]]. The vampire doesn't just settle for calling her out for her actions, but calling for her to settle down -- [[InsaneTrollLogic or be settled down, by someone]] -- which leads to Flan having the witch inexplicably engaged with a random fairy that walked in at the right time. Most of the cast are naturally confused about the hard left turn this situation took.took, [[BigWhat while Marisa...]]
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** Meiling in particular almost has a mental breakdown over learning of Aya's 'Cirno Wall'; including the pictures Aya's apparently taken of the fairy, [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything including those where she's given candy]].
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** Meiling in particular almost has a mental breakdown over learning of Aya's 'Cirno Wall'; including not helped by the detail of Aya taking various pictures Aya's apparently taken of the fairy, [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything including those where she's given candy]].
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* The way the fanfic [[EstablishingSeriesMoment establishes itself]] in the first few chapters with Meiling taking vengeance against Marisa. Doubles as an SugarWiki/AwesomeMoment.
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* The way the fanfic [[EstablishingSeriesMoment establishes itself]] in the first few chapters beginning with Meiling taking vengeance against Marisa. Doubles as an SugarWiki/AwesomeMoment.
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** Marisa barging into the Scarlet Devil Mansion is an inopportune time for Meiling... but it gave Flan the chance to voice her thoughts about Marisa derriere, with her bringing up her disappointment about her own figure again.
** [[FromBadToWorse Yuuka joins the scene to witness the out-of-context scenario before her]], with Flan immediately saying what she has on her mind regarding both her and Meiling, humiliating her by going too far in certain topics.
** [[FromBadToWorse Yuuka joins the scene to witness the out-of-context scenario before her]], with Flan immediately saying what she has on her mind regarding both her and Meiling, humiliating her by going too far in certain topics.
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** Marisa barging into the Scarlet Devil Mansion is an inopportune time for Meiling... but it gave Flan the chance to voice her thoughts about Marisa derriere, with her bringing up her disappointment about her own figure again. \n Marisa is naturally confused/concerned with the drunk Flandre, [[ATruceWhileWeGawk putting aside her intentions of barging in to take vengeance against Meiling]].
** [[FromBadToWorse Yuuka joins the scene to witness the out-of-context scenario before her]], with Flan immediately saying what she has on her mind regarding both her and Meiling,humiliating her embarrassing both girls by going too far in certain topics.
** [[FromBadToWorse Yuuka joins the scene to witness the out-of-context scenario before her]], with Flan immediately saying what she has on her mind regarding both her and Meiling,
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* After an incident with Marisa drunk on mushrooms and vengeance against Meiling, the latter comes up with a plan to get back at her: [[ChekhovsGag Drunk Flandre]]. The vampire doesn't just settle for calling her out for her actions, but settle down -- [[InsaneTrollLogic or be settled down, by someone]] -- which leads to Flan having the witch inexplicably engaged with a random fairy that walked in at the right time. Most of the cast are naturally confused about the hard left turn this situation took.
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* After an incident with Marisa drunk on mushrooms and vengeance against Meiling, the latter comes up with a plan to get back at her: [[ChekhovsGag Drunk Flandre]]. The vampire doesn't just settle for calling her out for her actions, but calling for her to settle down -- [[InsaneTrollLogic or be settled down, by someone]] -- which leads to Flan having the witch inexplicably engaged with a random fairy that walked in at the right time. Most of the cast are naturally confused about the hard left turn this situation took.
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* The whole Scarlet Devil group helping Remilia to have some personal time with Reimu. The scenario as a whole is mostly wholesome, but Flandre's expectation (and dedicated planning) of babies from this sets the recurring gag of Flandre being a third wheel in Reimu and Remilia's love affair.
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* Aya has an intervention over her creepy Aya's Cirno obsession. While a lot of the tengu's behaviour is just plain creepy, everyone's reactions to it are just gold.
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* Aya has an intervention over her creepy Aya's Cirno obsession. While a lot of the tengu's behaviour is just plain creepy, everyone's reactions to it are just gold.
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--->'''Meiling:''' I'm carrying knives.\\
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* Despite how creepy Aya's Cirno obsession is, everyone's reactions to it are just gold.
-->'''Drunk!Flandre:''' You still suck.\\
-->'''Drunk!Flandre:''' You still suck.\\
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* Despite how Aya has an intervention over her creepy Aya's Cirno obsession is, obsession. While a lot of the tengu's behaviour is just plain creepy, everyone's reactions to it are just gold.
-->'''Drunk!Flandre:'''gold.
** Meiling in particular almost has a mental breakdown over learning of Aya's 'Cirno Wall'; including the pictures Aya's apparently taken of the fairy, [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything including those where she's given candy]].
--->''"You're fulfilling all the stereotypes, you lolicon tengu predator!"''
** Yuuka joining the intervention late enough to witness Aya's obsession summarized in one hypothetical leaves her face blank with TranquilFury, followed by her deadpan death threat:
--->'''Yuuka:''' One blast. All I need is to hit her with one blast, and there will be no sign of her, no evidence.
** Later we get this summary from Yuuka, as well as a possible "cure":
--->'''Yuuka:''' Cirno is fantastic news, and that has combined horribly with her passionate nature and drive for success into an unhealthy obsession with the ice fairy. Throw in apparent closet masochism, and you have a perfect storm of perversion. Possible cures include punching her in the head for three days straight- with a gauntlet- [[ElectricTorture and massive induction of electricity]].\\
'''Remilia:''' And that will 'cure' her?\\
'''Yuuka:''' No, but it'll make me feel better.
** Weaponizing drunk Flandre [[RunningGag once again]] to handle Aya, with her first words towards the tengu:
--->'''Flandre:''' You still suck.\\
-->'''Drunk!Flandre:'''
** Meiling in particular almost has a mental breakdown over learning of Aya's 'Cirno Wall'; including the pictures Aya's apparently taken of the fairy, [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything including those where she's given candy]].
--->''"You're fulfilling all the stereotypes, you lolicon tengu predator!"''
** Yuuka joining the intervention late enough to witness Aya's obsession summarized in one hypothetical leaves her face blank with TranquilFury, followed by her deadpan death threat:
--->'''Yuuka:''' One blast. All I need is to hit her with one blast, and there will be no sign of her, no evidence.
** Later we get this summary from Yuuka, as well as a possible "cure":
--->'''Yuuka:''' Cirno is fantastic news, and that has combined horribly with her passionate nature and drive for success into an unhealthy obsession with the ice fairy. Throw in apparent closet masochism, and you have a perfect storm of perversion. Possible cures include punching her in the head for three days straight- with a gauntlet- [[ElectricTorture and massive induction of electricity]].\\
'''Remilia:''' And that will 'cure' her?\\
'''Yuuka:''' No, but it'll make me feel better.
** Weaponizing drunk Flandre [[RunningGag once again]] to handle Aya, with her first words towards the tengu:
--->'''Flandre:''' You still suck.\\
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* The story arc of Meiling and Sakuya [[SwappedRoles swapping jobs for the day]], with the inevitable consequences that followed for both parties:
** Sakuya prepares to go outside for gate-keeping duty with a bold look... and gets greeted with a raging thunderstorm outside. All Sakuya could do was stand there mouth agape until Meiling hands her an umbrella and some encouragement.
--->'''Meiling:''' Remember to hurry to the gate, or you'll be struck by lightning~!\\
'''Sakuya:''' What, wa- ''[gets pushed outside, door closes]''
** Meiling has a general hard time with the fairy maids. With the highlights include one pyromaniac of a fairy trying to roast marshmallows for herself and causes a fire several times, and trying to wake up a large group of them for breakfast, with her efforts being met with resistance from the tired group, until...
--->'''Meiling:''' I'm carrying knives.
''[cue all fairies in the room rushing out]]''
** Sakuya's attempt at gardening results in her getting tangled and scratched in a rose bush, [[EpicFail with her situation somehow getting worse and worse with the repeated use of her time-stop]].
** Sakuya prepares to go outside for gate-keeping duty with a bold look... and gets greeted with a raging thunderstorm outside. All Sakuya could do was stand there mouth agape until Meiling hands her an umbrella and some encouragement.
--->'''Meiling:''' Remember to hurry to the gate, or you'll be struck by lightning~!\\
'''Sakuya:''' What, wa- ''[gets pushed outside, door closes]''
** Meiling has a general hard time with the fairy maids. With the highlights include one pyromaniac of a fairy trying to roast marshmallows for herself and causes a fire several times, and trying to wake up a large group of them for breakfast, with her efforts being met with resistance from the tired group, until...
--->'''Meiling:''' I'm carrying knives.
''[cue all fairies in the room rushing out]]''
** Sakuya's attempt at gardening results in her getting tangled and scratched in a rose bush, [[EpicFail with her situation somehow getting worse and worse with the repeated use of her time-stop]].
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* The fact that, out of all five of the Scarlet Devil group, [[{{Hikikomori}} Patchouli]] has the capabilities of finding a man for a one-night stand. In contrast: Sakuya and Koakuma came off too aggressive in their attempts, while Remilia and Meiling end up picking the wrong person to talk to (Remi in particular also had to contend with those treating her like a child [[OlderThanTheyLook because of her appearance]]). The sight of Patchi displaying [[OutOfCharacterMoment uncharacteristic charisma to get laid]] made the group decide to go back to DrowningTheirSorrows.
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* The fact that, out of all five of the Scarlet Devil group, [[{{Hikikomori}} Patchouli]] has the capabilities of finding a man for a one-night stand. In contrast: Sakuya and Koakuma came off too aggressive in their attempts, while Remilia and Meiling end up picking the wrong person to talk to (Remi in particular also had to contend with those treating her like a child [[OlderThanTheyLook because of her appearance]]). The sight of Patchi [[HiddenDepths displaying [[OutOfCharacterMoment uncharacteristic charisma to get laid]] made the group decide to go back to DrowningTheirSorrows.
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* The fact that, out of all five of the Scarlet Devil group, [[{{Hikikomori}} Patchouli]] has the capabilities of finding a man for a one-night stand. In contrast: Sakuya and Koakuma came off too aggressive in their attempts, while Remilia and Meiling end up picking the wrong person to talk to (Remi in particular also had to contend with those treating her like a child [[OlderThanTheyLook because of her appearance]]). The end result is everyone else going sight of Patchi displaying [[OutOfCharacterMoment uncharacteristic charisma to get laid]] made the group decide to go back to the original plan of DrowningTheirSorrows.
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-->'''Flandre''': I'm already trying to visualize how this all worked. And I don't want to, Meiling. I really, really don't want to.
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-->'''Flandre''': I'm already trying to visualize how this all worked. And I don't want to, Meiling. I really, really don't want to.to.
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* Weaponizing Drunk Flandre against Marisa, which leads to her getting engaged with a random fairy named Pameel.
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* Weaponizing Drunk Flandre After an incident with Marisa drunk on mushrooms and vengeance against Marisa, Meiling, the latter comes up with a plan to get back at her: [[ChekhovsGag Drunk Flandre]]. The vampire doesn't just settle for calling her out for her actions, but settle down -- [[InsaneTrollLogic or be settled down, by someone]] -- which leads to her getting Flan having the witch inexplicably engaged with a random fairy named Pameel.that walked in at the right time. Most of the cast are naturally confused about the hard left turn this situation took.
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** Flandre [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech tearing into the tengu for her tabloids]] may not necessarily be funny [[note]]Especially with ''Tengu of (Mis)Fortune'' [[HarsherInHindsight in mind]].[[/note]], except for her comment on Aya [[SeriousBusiness ruining panties]] as well as her comment about their attire.
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** Flandre [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech tearing into the tengu for her tabloids]] may not necessarily be funny [[note]]Especially with ''Tengu of (Mis)Fortune'' [[HarsherInHindsight in mind]].[[/note]], except for but her comment on Aya [[SeriousBusiness ruining panties]] as well as and her comment about their attire.tengu attire certainly makes up for it.
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* The fact that, out of all five of the Scarlet Devil group, [[{{Hikkomori}} [[{{Hikikomori}} Patchouli]] has the capabilities of finding a man for a one-night stand. In contrast: Sakuya and Koakuma came off too aggressive in their attempts, while Remilia and Meiling end up picking the wrong person to talk to (Remi in particular also had to contend with those treating her like a child [[OlderThanTheyLook because of her appearance]]). The end result is everyone else going back to the original plan of DrowningTheirSorrows.
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** Flandre [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech tearing into the tengu for her tabloids]] may not necessarily be funny [[note]]Especially with ''Tengu of (Mis)Fortune'' [[HarsherInHindsight in mind]].[[/note]], except for her comment on Aya [[SeriousBusiness ruining panties]] as well as her comment about their attire
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** Flandre [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech tearing into the tengu for her tabloids]] may not necessarily be funny [[note]]Especially with ''Tengu of (Mis)Fortune'' [[HarsherInHindsight in mind]].[[/note]], except for her comment on Aya [[SeriousBusiness ruining panties]] as well as her comment about their attireattire.
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* Special mention has to go to her instigating a fake wedding between Marisa and a random fairy Pameel.
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* Special mention Cirno making an ice mecha for herself, leading to the idea of becoming a superhero thanks to Meiling trying to teach her WithGreatPowerComesGreatResponsibility. After reading a news article about Cirno's latest deeds the following morning, Meiling has to go a startling revelation late after reading through said news article: it's from '''[[ImmoralJournalist Bunbunmaru]]''', and she's reading it because of Cirno.
* Weaponizing Drunk Flandre against Marisa, which leads to herinstigating a fake wedding between Marisa and getting engaged with a random fairy named Pameel.
* Weaponizing Drunk Flandre against Marisa, which leads to her
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--->'''Flandre:''' Even that flower youkai who wants your breasts.
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--->'''Flandre:''' Even that flower youkai who wants your breasts.\\
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* Drunk Flandre, with everything that follows:
** The sheer OhCrap from much of the cast upon realizing that the young PersonOfMassDestruction Flandre Scarlet is intoxicated.
** Special mention has to go to the fake wedding between Marisa and Pameel, though.
** The sheer OhCrap from much of the cast upon realizing that the young PersonOfMassDestruction Flandre Scarlet is intoxicated.
** Special mention has to go to the fake wedding between Marisa and Pameel, though.
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* The introduction of Drunk Flandre, with and everything that follows:
** Flandre believes that BuxomIsBetter, as demonstrated by her long spiel over everyone she knows who's gifted, with the exception of her and her sister, which [[ACupAngst she sees as an injustice]]. The casual "what the heck" attitude and way of speaking is what really sells this.
--->'''Flandre:''' Even that flower youkai who wants your breasts.
'''Meiling:''' Urk!
** The sheer OhCrap frommuch of the cast Meiling (and later Marisa) upon realizing that the young PersonOfMassDestruction Flandre Scarlet is intoxicated.
** When first discover in this state, she's been casually creating holes in the walls by just walking through with little to no care. By her logic, the door was locked (As Meiling immediately points out, most of the hallway doors don't have locks), so she decided to use the wall instead.
** Marisa barging into the Scarlet Devil Mansion is an inopportune time for Meiling... but it gave Flan the chance to voice her thoughts about Marisa derriere, with her bringing up her disappointment about her own figure again.
** [[FromBadToWorse Yuuka joins the scene to witness the out-of-context scenario before her]], with Flan immediately saying what she has on her mind regarding both her and Meiling, humiliating her by going too far in certain topics.
--->'''Flandre:''' If you want to bang Meiling, she's busy.\\
''"OHGODFLANWHAT."''\\
'''Yuuka:''' WHAAAAAAA?!
** Flandre [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech tearing into the tengu for her tabloids]] may not necessarily be funny [[note]]Especially with ''Tengu of (Mis)Fortune'' [[HarsherInHindsight in mind]].[[/note]], except for her comment on Aya [[SeriousBusiness ruining panties]] as well as her comment about their attire
--->'''Flandre:''' Also, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking your shoes and hat are dumb]].\\
'''Aya:''' Hey! These are traditional tengu garb-\\
'''Flandre:''' They're dumb.
** After Flandre passes out with her epiphany about being a mean drunk, Remilia finally joins late to the party to see the absolute mess this event ends on, with the vampire resigning herself with a "Nope" and [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere immediately making her leave]].
* Special mention has to go tothe her instigating a fake wedding between Marisa and Pameel, though.a random fairy Pameel.
** Flandre believes that BuxomIsBetter, as demonstrated by her long spiel over everyone she knows who's gifted, with the exception of her and her sister, which [[ACupAngst she sees as an injustice]]. The casual "what the heck" attitude and way of speaking is what really sells this.
--->'''Flandre:''' Even that flower youkai who wants your breasts.
'''Meiling:''' Urk!
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** When first discover in this state, she's been casually creating holes in the walls by just walking through with little to no care. By her logic, the door was locked (As Meiling immediately points out, most of the hallway doors don't have locks), so she decided to use the wall instead.
** Marisa barging into the Scarlet Devil Mansion is an inopportune time for Meiling... but it gave Flan the chance to voice her thoughts about Marisa derriere, with her bringing up her disappointment about her own figure again.
** [[FromBadToWorse Yuuka joins the scene to witness the out-of-context scenario before her]], with Flan immediately saying what she has on her mind regarding both her and Meiling, humiliating her by going too far in certain topics.
--->'''Flandre:''' If you want to bang Meiling, she's busy.\\
''"OHGODFLANWHAT."''\\
'''Yuuka:''' WHAAAAAAA?!
** Flandre [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech tearing into the tengu for her tabloids]] may not necessarily be funny [[note]]Especially with ''Tengu of (Mis)Fortune'' [[HarsherInHindsight in mind]].[[/note]], except for her comment on Aya [[SeriousBusiness ruining panties]] as well as her comment about their attire
--->'''Flandre:''' Also, [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking your shoes and hat are dumb]].\\
'''Aya:''' Hey! These are traditional tengu garb-\\
'''Flandre:''' They're dumb.
** After Flandre passes out with her epiphany about being a mean drunk, Remilia finally joins late to the party to see the absolute mess this event ends on, with the vampire resigning herself with a "Nope" and [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere immediately making her leave]].
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* Two words: Drunk Flandre.
* Special mention has to go to the fake wedding between Marisa and Pameel, though.
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''Being Meiling'', and to a lesser extent its associated sequels, is full of many comedic moments.
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!!In General
*Two words: Drunk Flandre.This being mostly if not all narrated in first-person, any moment where the lead character cuts themselves off for MoodWhiplash.
-->''"...Hey, what's that in the sky? Looks like someone riding a-"''\\
''"DAMN. DOUBLE DAMN. STUPID BLACK-WHITE. STUPID WITCH IT WAS SUCH A NICE DAY. SHE'S GONNA BLAST THROUGH AND I'M GONNA CATCH HELL."''\\
'''Marisa:''' Heeeeeey, China!\\
''"IT'S MEILING YOU BRAINDEAD YUTZ."''
!!''Being Meiling''
* The way the fanfic [[EstablishingSeriesMoment establishes itself]] in the first few chapters with Meiling taking vengeance against Marisa. Doubles as an SugarWiki/AwesomeMoment.
** Meiling, having already endured enough of the "unable to stop Marisa from entering the mansion" {{Fanon}} throughout her past, takes a stand against Marisa by snatching the Mini-hakkero out of her hand just before she could attempt to cast a Master Spark. The sheer confusion Marisa displays at suddenly not having her trinket, followed by outrage at the martial-artist for their stunt.
** And Meiling doesn't settle there, practically {{Troll}}ing Marisa the whole time, culminating in Meiling (and Sakuya) tossing the Hakkero, broom, and hat back and forth as Marisa tries in vein to get it all back, with Aya snapping pictures of Marisa's humiliation being the absolute kicker.
* Drunk Flandre, with everything that follows:
** The sheer OhCrap from much of the cast upon realizing that the young PersonOfMassDestruction Flandre Scarlet is intoxicated.
** Special mention has to go to the fake wedding between Marisa and Pameel, though.
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-->''"...Hey, what's that in the sky? Looks like someone riding a-"''\\
''"DAMN. DOUBLE DAMN. STUPID BLACK-WHITE. STUPID WITCH IT WAS SUCH A NICE DAY. SHE'S GONNA BLAST THROUGH AND I'M GONNA CATCH HELL."''\\
'''Marisa:''' Heeeeeey, China!\\
''"IT'S MEILING YOU BRAINDEAD YUTZ."''
!!''Being Meiling''
* The way the fanfic [[EstablishingSeriesMoment establishes itself]] in the first few chapters with Meiling taking vengeance against Marisa. Doubles as an SugarWiki/AwesomeMoment.
** Meiling, having already endured enough of the "unable to stop Marisa from entering the mansion" {{Fanon}} throughout her past, takes a stand against Marisa by snatching the Mini-hakkero out of her hand just before she could attempt to cast a Master Spark. The sheer confusion Marisa displays at suddenly not having her trinket, followed by outrage at the martial-artist for their stunt.
** And Meiling doesn't settle there, practically {{Troll}}ing Marisa the whole time, culminating in Meiling (and Sakuya) tossing the Hakkero, broom, and hat back and forth as Marisa tries in vein to get it all back, with Aya snapping pictures of Marisa's humiliation being the absolute kicker.
* Drunk Flandre, with everything that follows:
** The sheer OhCrap from much of the cast upon realizing that the young PersonOfMassDestruction Flandre Scarlet is intoxicated.
** Special mention has to go to the fake wedding between Marisa and Pameel, though.
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--> '''Drunk!Flandre:''' You still suck.
--> '''Aya:''' Not agaaaaain!
--> '''Aya:''' Not agaaaaain!
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'''Aya:''' Not agaaaaain!
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* Special mention has to go to the fake wedding between Marisa and Pameel, though.
* Despite how creepy Aya's Cirno obsession is, everyone's reactions to it are just gold.
--> '''Drunk!Flandre:''' You still suck.
--> '''Aya:''' Not agaaaaain!
* Meiling beating up a perving Koishi - and being ''completely unaware of it'' until she wakes up to a strange girl lying unconscious on the ground.
* After eight threads of Flandre bugging her sister and Reimu about BABIES!, her reaction to finding [[PowerPerversionPotential Meiling, Yuuka, and Sakuya]] curled up in bed is hilarious in its contrast.
--> '''Flandre''': I'm already trying to visualize how this all worked. And I don't want to, Meiling. I really, really don't want to.
* Special mention has to go to the fake wedding between Marisa and Pameel, though.
* Despite how creepy Aya's Cirno obsession is, everyone's reactions to it are just gold.
--> '''Drunk!Flandre:''' You still suck.
--> '''Aya:''' Not agaaaaain!
* Meiling beating up a perving Koishi - and being ''completely unaware of it'' until she wakes up to a strange girl lying unconscious on the ground.
* After eight threads of Flandre bugging her sister and Reimu about BABIES!, her reaction to finding [[PowerPerversionPotential Meiling, Yuuka, and Sakuya]] curled up in bed is hilarious in its contrast.
--> '''Flandre''': I'm already trying to visualize how this all worked. And I don't want to, Meiling. I really, really don't want to.
