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* [[https://comicaurora.com/aurora/2-1-13/ 2.1.13]]: When Dainix compliments Falst, the Ferin blushes and immediately tries to leave. When [[https://comicaurora.com/aurora/2-1-16/ Alinua returns a few pages later]], we see the others trying to keep him from leaping out the window, with everyone going bug-eyed. Falst then pretends that he was just stretching while Dainax falls to the floor.
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* [[https://comicaurora.com/aurora/2-1-13/ 2.1.13]]: When Dainix compliments Falst, the Ferin blushes and immediately tries to leave. When [[https://comicaurora.com/aurora/2-1-16/ Alinua returns a few pages later]], we see the others Kendal and Dainix trying to keep him from leaping out the window, with everyone going bug-eyed. Falst then pretends that he was just stretching while Dainax Dainix falls to the floor.floor.
* [[https://comicaurora.com/aurora/2-1-20/ 2.1.20]]: Later, when they're alone, Dainix tries to bring up how [[spoiler: Falst somehow used Light magic to save him from the BlobMonster down in the Ancient lab.]] Falst... wildly misinterprets it. HilarityEnsues.
* [[https://comicaurora.com/aurora/2-1-20/ 2.1.20]]: Later, when they're alone, Dainix tries to bring up how [[spoiler: Falst somehow used Light magic to save him from the BlobMonster down in the Ancient lab.]] Falst... wildly misinterprets it. HilarityEnsues.
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* [[https://comicaurora.com/aurora/2-1-13/ 2.1.13]]: When Dainax compliments Falst, the Ferin blushes and tries to leave. When [[https://comicaurora.com/aurora/2-1-16/ Alinua returns a few comics later]], we see the others trying to keep him from leaping out the window, with everyone going bug-eyed. Falst then pretends that he was just stretching while Dainax falls to the floor.
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* [[https://comicaurora.com/aurora/2-1-13/ 2.1.13]]: When Dainax Dainix compliments Falst, the Ferin blushes and immediately tries to leave. When [[https://comicaurora.com/aurora/2-1-16/ Alinua returns a few comics pages later]], we see the others trying to keep him from leaping out the window, with everyone going bug-eyed. Falst then pretends that he was just stretching while Dainax falls to the floor.
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* [[https://comicaurora.com/aurora/2-1-33/ 2.1.33]]: Erin ''tries'' to make a dramatic entrance when he returns from his trip to the harbor.
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---> '''Kria''': Great work, guys. [[ShamingTheMob Attacking terrified refugees]]. ''Great'' look for us.
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---> '''Ilia''': [[MajorInjuryUnderreaction Oop]].
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-->'''Falst:''' Hunger is a bad feeling in your stomach that turns into pain if you don't eat. Ringing any bells?\\
'''Kendal:''' I did recently stab myself there.\\
'''Falst:''' Wrong bell.
!!Other:
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* [[https://comicaurora.com/aurora/1-17-32/ 1.17.32]]: The Void Dragon's face on seeing Dainix in Crucible mode can basically be summarised as "...huh"
--> '''The Void Dragon:''' I certainly didn't design humans to do [[BurningWithAnger that]].
--> '''The Void Dragon:''' I certainly didn't design humans to do [[BurningWithAnger that]].
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* [[https://comicaurora.com/aurora/1-17-32/ 1.17.32]]: The Void Dragon's face on reaction to seeing Dainix in Crucible mode can basically best be summarised as "...huh"
summarized by "condescending fascination".
--> '''The Void Dragon:''' I certainly didn't design humans to do [[BurningWithAnger that]]. Really, who would?
** The AltText takes this last remark personally:
---> '''Alt text:''' "who would?" listen asshole I'm right here
--> '''The Void Dragon:''' I certainly didn't design humans to do [[BurningWithAnger that]]. Really, who would?
** The AltText takes this last remark personally:
---> '''Alt text:''' "who would?" listen asshole I'm right here
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--> '''Falst:''' SOMEONE has to be tactical about this.
--> '''Dainix:''' Well, right now, our survival strongly depends on you being awake, healthy and functional in a fight. So tactically speaking, I need you to be completely honesty with me about how you're feeling and how I can help you. You know. For tactical reasons.
--> '''Dainix:''' Well, right now, our survival strongly depends on you being awake, healthy and functional in a fight. So tactically speaking, I need you to be completely honesty with me about how you're feeling and how I can help you. You know. For tactical reasons.
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--> '''Falst:''' SOMEONE has to be tactical about this.
-->this.\\
'''Dainix:''' Well, right now, our survival strongly depends on you being awake, healthy and functional in a fight. So tactically speaking, I need you to be completely honesty with me about how you're feeling and how I can help you. You know. For tactical reasons.
-->
'''Dainix:''' Well, right now, our survival strongly depends on you being awake, healthy and functional in a fight. So tactically speaking, I need you to be completely honesty with me about how you're feeling and how I can help you. You know. For tactical reasons.
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--> '''Erin:''' If [Kendal] wakes up while we're gone - Well, please don't let him do anything stupid.
--> '''Tess:''' Stupid by [[BoisterousBruiser my standards]] or [[TooCleverByHalf yours]]?
--> '''Beat'''
--> '''Erin:''' Stupid by my mother's standards.
--> '''Tess:''' Smart. He'll live longer.
--> '''Tess:''' Stupid by [[BoisterousBruiser my standards]] or [[TooCleverByHalf yours]]?
--> '''Beat'''
--> '''Erin:''' Stupid by my mother's standards.
--> '''Tess:''' Smart. He'll live longer.
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--> '''Erin:''' If [Kendal] wakes up while we're gone - Well, please don't let him do anything stupid.
-->stupid.\\
'''Tess:''' Stupid by [[BoisterousBruiser my standards]] or [[TooCleverByHalfyours]]?
--> '''Beat'''
-->yours]]?\\
'''Beat'''\\
'''Erin:''' Stupid by my mother'sstandards.
-->standards.\\
'''Tess:''' Smart. He'll live longer.
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'''Tess:''' Stupid by [[BoisterousBruiser my standards]] or [[TooCleverByHalf
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'''Erin:''' Stupid by my mother's
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'''Tess:''' Smart. He'll live longer.
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--> '''Tess, to Alinua:''' Leave the sword. I won't let [Kendal] do anything dumb with it.
--> '''Erin:''' Tess.
--> '''Tess:''' I ALSO will not do anything dumb with it.
--> '''Erin:''' Correct.
--> '''Erin:''' Tess.
--> '''Tess:''' I ALSO will not do anything dumb with it.
--> '''Erin:''' Correct.
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'''Erin:'''
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'''Tess:''' I ALSO will not do anything dumb with
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* [[https://comicaurora.com/aurora/1-22-45/ 1.22.45]]: After curing Falst's cave corruption, something considered impossible until now, Erin starts to enthusiastically cheer and explain to a heavily injured and grumpy Falst what he accomplished:
--> '''Falst:''' explain when I'm not dying as much\\
'''Erin:''' As if you'll listen to me when you can actually move.
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--> '''Erin:''' Shut your eyes. Keep them closed. Steady your breathing. Let your thoughts go quiet.
-->'''A few beats later...'''
-->'''Kendal:''' AAGH!
-->'''Erin:''' AH! WHAT!
-->'''Kendal:''' It - it felt like I was falling!
-->'''Erin, clutching his chest like he just had a heart attack:''' YES that happens sometimes it is PERFECTLY SAFE AND FINE.
-->'''A few beats later...'''
-->'''Kendal:''' AAGH!
-->'''Erin:''' AH! WHAT!
-->'''Kendal:''' It - it felt like I was falling!
-->'''Erin, clutching his chest like he just had a heart attack:''' YES that happens sometimes it is PERFECTLY SAFE AND FINE.
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--> '''Erin:''' Shut your eyes. Keep them closed. Steady your breathing. Let your thoughts go quiet.
-->'''Aquiet.\\
''(A few beats later...'''
-->'''Kendal:''' AAGH!
-->'''Erin:''')''\\
'''Kendal:''' AAGH!\\
'''Erin:''' AH!WHAT!
-->'''Kendal:'''WHAT!\\
'''Kendal:''' It - it felt like I wasfalling!
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'''Erin, clutching his chest like he just had a heart attack:''' YES that happens sometimes it is PERFECTLY SAFE AND FINE.
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-->'''Kendal:''' AAGH!
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'''Kendal:''' AAGH!\\
'''Erin:''' AH!
-->'''Kendal:'''
'''Kendal:''' It - it felt like I was
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'''Erin, clutching his chest like he just had a heart attack:''' YES that happens sometimes it is PERFECTLY SAFE AND FINE.
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--> '''Tess, to Alinua:''' Leave the sword. I won't let [Kendal] do anything dumb with it.
--> '''Erin:''' Tess.
--> '''Tess:''' I ALSO will not do anything dumb with it.
--> '''Erin:''' Correct.
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* [[https://comicaurora.com/aurora/1-21-7/ 1.21.7]]: Dainix gets an ActuallyPrettyFunny moment from Falst, who is resisting medical care, by turning his own arguments against him:
--> '''Falst:''' SOMEONE has to be tactical about this.
--> '''Dainix:''' Well, right now, our survival strongly depends on you being awake, healthy and functional in a fight. So tactically speaking, I need you to be completely honesty with me about how you're feeling and how I can help you. You know. For tactical reasons.
--> '''Falst:''' SOMEONE has to be tactical about this.
--> '''Dainix:''' Well, right now, our survival strongly depends on you being awake, healthy and functional in a fight. So tactically speaking, I need you to be completely honesty with me about how you're feeling and how I can help you. You know. For tactical reasons.
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--> '''Tess:''' Stupid by [[BoisterousBruiser my standards]] or [[InsufferableGenius yours]]?
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--> '''Erin:''' If [Kendal] wakes up while we're gone - Well, please don't let him do anything stupid.
--> '''Tess:''' Stupid by [[BoisterousBruiser my standards]] or [[InsufferableGenius yours]]?
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--> '''Erin:''' Stupid by my mother's standards.
--> '''Tess:''' Smart. He'll live longer.
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* [[https://comicaurora.com/aurora/1-11-4/ Kendal learning how to sleep]] is hilarious. Step one, poke the pillows with a single figure. Step two, collapse face-forward onto the bed. Step three, give up two seconds later.
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* [[https://comicaurora.com/aurora/1-11-4/ Kendal learning how to sleep]] is hilarious. Step one, poke the pillows with a single figure.finger. Step two, collapse face-forward onto the bed. Step three, instantly give up two seconds later.up.
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* [[https://comicaurora.com/aurora/1-12-9/ 1.12.9]]: Caliban asks [[TheTrickster Tahraim]] if he can help them or not.
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* [[https://comicaurora.com/aurora/1-12-9/ 1.12.9]]: After an entire conversation of asking straight-forward questions and getting cryptic answers, Caliban asks [[TheTrickster Tahraim]] if he can help them or not.
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** '''Erin, to Alinua later:''' Okay. He's resting. We'll see if he figures out actual sleeping.
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* [[https://comicaurora.com/aurora/1-11-4/ Kendal learning how to sleep in the first place sleep]] is hilarious. Step one, poke the pillows with a single figure. Step two, collapse face-forward onto the bed. Step three, give up three two seconds later.
** After he gets [[https://comicaurora.com/aurora/1-11-6/ some coaching from Erin]]:
--> '''Erin:''' Shut your eyes. Keep them closed. Steady your breathing. Let your thoughts go quiet.
-->'''A few beats later...'''
-->'''Kendal:''' AAGH!
-->'''Erin:''' AH! WHAT!
-->'''Kendal:''' It - it felt like I was falling!
-->'''Erin, clutching his chest like he just had a heart attack:''' YES that happens sometimes it is PERFECTLY SAFE AND FINE.
--> '''Erin:''' Shut your eyes. Keep them closed. Steady your breathing. Let your thoughts go quiet.
-->'''A few beats later...'''
-->'''Kendal:''' AAGH!
-->'''Erin:''' AH! WHAT!
-->'''Kendal:''' It - it felt like I was falling!
-->'''Erin, clutching his chest like he just had a heart attack:''' YES that happens sometimes it is PERFECTLY SAFE AND FINE.
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--> '''The Void Dragon:''' "I certainly didn't design humans to do [[BurningWithAnger that]]."
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--> '''The Void Dragon:''' "I I certainly didn't design humans to do [[BurningWithAnger that]]."
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'''Erin:''' That's because you're not DOING it right!\\
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'''Erin:''' That's because you're not DOING it right!\\right!
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--> '''Kendal:''' I don't think it's working.\\
'''Erin:''' That's because you're not DOING it right!\\
--> '''Kendal:''' I don't think it's working.\\
'''Erin:''' That's because you're not DOING it right!\\
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* [[https://comicaurora.com/aurora/1-12-9/ 1.12.9]]: Caliban asks [[TheTrickster Tahraim]] if he can help them or not.
--> '''Caliban:''' IT IS A SIMPLE YES-OR-NO QUESTION.
--> '''Caliban:''' IT IS A SIMPLE YES-OR-NO QUESTION.
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** Even the premise for this scene is quite funny: Erin tells Dainix the ruins they've settled in is an hour or so away from Zuurith, suggesting that the group made their way there with Dainix trailing along like a giant, fiery puppy.
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** Even the premise for this scene is quite funny: Erin tells Dainix the ruins they've settled in is an hour or so away from Zuurith, suggesting which implies that the group made their way there with Dainix trailing along like a giant, fiery puppy.
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* [[https://comicaurora.com/aurora/1-13-28/ 1.13.28]]: Erin examining the rips in his cape, after specifically [[TemptingFate asking Falst not to rip his cape]], with a 'What did I expect?' expression.
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* [[https://comicaurora.com/aurora/1-11-3/ 1.11.3]]: Possibly unintentional, but Kendal’s response to being told he needs to sleep comes across as amusingly sulky or hilariously dense.
--> '''Falst:''' Even I need to sleep every couple days or I get all fuzzy.\\
'''Kendal:''' You’re always fuzzy.\\
'''Falst:''' I’m gonna let that one slide because you’re very tired.
--> '''Falst:''' Even I need to sleep every couple days or I get all fuzzy.\\
'''Kendal:''' You’re always fuzzy.\\
'''Falst:''' I’m gonna let that one slide because you’re very tired.
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** Even the premise for this scene is quite funny: Erin tells Dainix the ruins they've settled in is an hour or so away from Zuurith, suggesting that the group made their way there with Dainix following them trailing along like a giant, fiery puppy.
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* [[https://comicaurora.com/aurora/1-17-32/ 1.17.32]]: The Void Dragon's face on seeing Dainix in Crucible mode can basically be summarised as "...huh."
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* [[https://comicaurora.com/aurora/1-17-32/ 1.17.32]]: The Void Dragon's face on seeing Dainix in Crucible mode can basically be summarised as "...huh."huh"
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* [[https://comicaurora.com/aurora/1-17-32/] com/aurora/1-17-32/ 1.17.32]: 32]]: The Void Dragon's face on seeing Dainix in Crucible mode can basically be summarised as "...huh."
--> '''The Void Dragon:''' "I certainly didn't design humans to do [[BurningWithAnger that]]."
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