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* On the train ride home, Coach [=McGovern=] ends up reading {{Theatre/TheTempest}}.
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* On the train ride home, Coach [=McGovern=] ends up reading {{Theatre/TheTempest}}.''Theatre/TheTempest''.
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-->'''Bass''': ''Will I win, will I win, will I winwinwin?! (''turns over Magic 8 ball that reads "No"'')Aww. (''shakes it again, then reads the bottom which says "Maybe"'') YEAH!
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-->'''Bass''': ''Will I win, will I win, will I winwinwin?! winwinwin?! (''turns over Magic 8 ball that reads "No"'')Aww."No"'') Aww. (''shakes it again, then reads the bottom which says "Maybe"'') YEAH!
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** Just the photo session itself. Roger and Knox standing next to each other with dead serious faces, since neither wants to be there.
--->'''Photographer:''' It looks like a prison photo.
--->'''Photographer:''' It looks like a prison photo.
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** Just the photo session itself. Roger and When readying the photo of Knox standing next to each other with dead serious faces, since neither wants to be there.
--->'''Photographer:''' Itand Roger, the photographer notes how uncomfortable they all look and deadpans, ''"It looks like a prison photo."'' JP [[BrickJoke makes the same remark]] when he sees it for himself.
--->'''Photographer:''' It
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* When readying the photo of Knox and Roger, the photographer notes how uncomfortable they all look and deadpans, "It looks like a prison photo." JP [[BrickJoke makes the same remark]] when he sees it for himself.
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** Just the photo session itself. Roger and Knox standing next to each other with dead serious faces, since neither wants to be there.
--->'''Photographer:''' It looks like a prison photo.
--->'''Photographer:''' It looks like a prison photo.
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* "You popped Al!" Like the above, [[ItMakesSenseInContext it's not as weird as it sounds.]] It also establishes Al as a lover of both crazy entries ''and'' crazy sendoffs.
--> '''JP''': Who's Al?
--> '''JP''': Who's Al?
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* Knox sucker punching the interviewer during a pregame report.
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* Knox sucker punching the interviewer Wilder during a the pregame report.
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* Roger tells Knox, "I dunno. It's your team," when Knox tries to make small talk and ask Roger if the Angels will win that day. Cue Danny Hemmerling "practicing" his swing, which is to say, waving a bat around like he'd never held one in his life. (Hemmerling even swings the bat completely backwards.) An exasperated "Don't remind me," is all Knox can muster.
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** Knox's completely unconcealed contempt of the whole exercise...followed by him plopping his hand on Roger's head and David moving it to Roger's shoulder instead.
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trope split
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* Uh oh, seems the (other) Angels may be sponsors of PoliticalCorrectnessGoneMad!
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* Uh oh, seems the (other) Angels may be sponsors of PoliticalCorrectnessGoneMad!PoliticalOvercorrectness!
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* How Michael the Archangel gets Coach McGovern to stop his profanity:
--> '''McGovern''': Don't I get a chance to talk back?
--> '''McGovern''': Don't I get a chance to talk back?
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* How Michael the Archangel gets Coach McGovern [=McGovern=] to stop his profanity:
-->'''McGovern''': '''[=McGovern=]''': Don't I get a chance to talk back?
-->
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--> '''McGovern''': I'll be tongue tied.
--> '''Michael''': Shakespeare wasn't, nor Milton or Robert Burns. Study, McGovern. Study.
* On the train ride home, Coach McGovern ends up reading {{Theatre/TheTempest}}.
* Later, the next time Coach McGovern gets into a fight with the umpire, Coach McGovern's vocabulary became a lot more... "flowery".
--> '''Michael''': Shakespeare wasn't, nor Milton or Robert Burns. Study, McGovern. Study.
* On the train ride home, Coach McGovern ends up reading {{Theatre/TheTempest}}.
* Later, the next time Coach McGovern gets into a fight with the umpire, Coach McGovern's vocabulary became a lot more... "flowery".
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--> '''McGovern''': '''[=McGovern=]''': I'll be tongue tied.
--> '''Michael''': Shakespeare wasn't, nor Milton or Robert Burns. Study,McGovern.[=McGovern=]. Study.
* On the train ride home, CoachMcGovern [=McGovern=] ends up reading {{Theatre/TheTempest}}.
* Later, the next time CoachMcGovern [=McGovern=] gets into a fight with the umpire, Coach McGovern's [=McGovern=]'s vocabulary became a lot more... "flowery".
--> '''Michael''': Shakespeare wasn't, nor Milton or Robert Burns. Study,
* On the train ride home, Coach
* Later, the next time Coach
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* Uh oh, seems the (other) Angel's may be sponsors of PoliticalCorrectnessGoneMad!
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* Uh oh, seems the (other) Angel's Angels may be sponsors of PoliticalCorrectnessGoneMad!
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-->'''Bass:''' uh, I thought the game started at 1.
-->'''Knox:''' [''fuming'']It ''does'' start at 1! And you're a jackass!
-->'''Bass:''' No, I'm a pitcher.
-->'''Knox:''' [''fuming'']It ''does'' start at 1! And you're a jackass!
-->'''Bass:''' No, I'm a pitcher.
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-->'''Bass:''' uh, I thought the game started at 1.
-->'''Knox:''' [''fuming'']It ''does'' start at 1! And you're a jackass!
-->'''Bass:''' No, I'm a pitcher.
-->'''Knox:''' [''fuming'']It ''does'' start at 1! And you're a jackass!
-->'''Bass:''' No, I'm a pitcher.
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I needed IMDB and a transcripts wikia.
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[[AC:1951 Original Version]]
* How Michael the Archangel gets Coach McGovern to stop his profanity:
--> '''McGovern''': Don't I get a chance to talk back?
--> '''Michael''': Certainly. The English language has a total of 698,000 words. We ask you to avoid a hundredth of one percent of these... which at the moment seems to be your entire vocabulary.
--> '''McGovern''': I'll be tongue tied.
--> '''Michael''': Shakespeare wasn't, nor Milton or Robert Burns. Study, McGovern. Study.
* On the train ride home, Coach McGovern ends up reading {{Theatre/TheTempest}}.
* Later, the next time Coach McGovern gets into a fight with the umpire, Coach McGovern's vocabulary became a lot more... "flowery".
--> Why, thou knave, thou dolt!
--> Thou hast eyes but seest not!
--> You heard him, he said fair.
--> Fie, fie upon you and a pox upon you too.
--> Thou art blind, thou black-livered bat!
* "Hey, Hamlet, blow."
* How Michael the Archangel gets Coach McGovern to stop his profanity:
--> '''McGovern''': Don't I get a chance to talk back?
--> '''Michael''': Certainly. The English language has a total of 698,000 words. We ask you to avoid a hundredth of one percent of these... which at the moment seems to be your entire vocabulary.
--> '''McGovern''': I'll be tongue tied.
--> '''Michael''': Shakespeare wasn't, nor Milton or Robert Burns. Study, McGovern. Study.
* On the train ride home, Coach McGovern ends up reading {{Theatre/TheTempest}}.
* Later, the next time Coach McGovern gets into a fight with the umpire, Coach McGovern's vocabulary became a lot more... "flowery".
--> Why, thou knave, thou dolt!
--> Thou hast eyes but seest not!
--> You heard him, he said fair.
--> Fie, fie upon you and a pox upon you too.
--> Thou art blind, thou black-livered bat!
* "Hey, Hamlet, blow."
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-->'''Knox''': SAVE IT MAPEL! (''Knox stomps over to the snack table, then tips it over in a rage, sending all the food rolling on the floor'')
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-->'''Knox''': SAVE IT IT, MAPEL! (''Knox stomps over to the snack table, then tips it over in a rage, sending all the food rolling on the floor'')
