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* The Clans interrogate [=ComStar’s=] Precentor Martial on the damage the [=FedCom=] is doing to the Clans, when one of the officers stated that the AFFC forces are using Clan technology, down to complete compatibility. When accused of [[EnemyMine collusion with the Commonwealth]], Focht states, “When I inform Primus Waterly that Hanse Davion has armed his forces with weapons equal to yours, it is entirely possible [[AtomicFBomb you will hear her outrage from here without an HPG.]]”
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* The Clans interrogate [=ComStar’s=] Precentor Martial on the damage the [=FedCom=] is doing to the Clans, when one of the officers stated that the AFFC forces are using Clan technology, down to complete compatibility. When accused of [[EnemyMine collusion with the Commonwealth]], Focht states, “When I inform Primus Waterly that Hanse Davion has armed his forces with weapons equal to yours, it is entirely possible [[AtomicFBomb you will hear her outrage from here without an HPG.]]”]]”
* Kai is ordered to deal with the aftermath of a fight between his [[DefeatEqualsFriendship former bondswoman, Diana]], and [[MythologyGag Dr. Dierdre]] [[SinsOfTheFather Lear]]. After ordering the latter to observe the former clean the head with a toothbrush, he wanders off, thinking that the two fighting is not going to help with flagging morale, unless [[AllMenArePerverts it involved bikinis]] and [[MudWrestling a mud pit.]] He tells himself [[GetYourMindOutOfTheGutter to get his mind out of the gutter]]... then realizes he needs a new toothbrush.
* Kai is ordered to deal with the aftermath of a fight between his [[DefeatEqualsFriendship former bondswoman, Diana]], and [[MythologyGag Dr. Dierdre]] [[SinsOfTheFather Lear]]. After ordering the latter to observe the former clean the head with a toothbrush, he wanders off, thinking that the two fighting is not going to help with flagging morale, unless [[AllMenArePerverts it involved bikinis]] and [[MudWrestling a mud pit.]] He tells himself [[GetYourMindOutOfTheGutter to get his mind out of the gutter]]... then realizes he needs a new toothbrush.
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* In the first chapter's ending, a [=ComStar=] briefing has their organization as well as others baffled by [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness the new FedCom giving away worlds to the St. Ives Compact and Free Rasalhague Republic]], leaving them wondering if Janos Marik was right in thinking [[BlackMail "Clearly Liao has pictures of Davion molesting goats."]]
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* In the first chapter's ending, a [=ComStar=] briefing has their organization as well as others baffled by [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness the new FedCom giving away worlds to the St. Ives Compact and Free Rasalhague Republic]], leaving them wondering if Janos Marik was right in thinking [[BlackMail "Clearly Liao has pictures of Davion molesting goats."]]"]]
* The Clans interrogate [=ComStar’s=] Precentor Martial on the damage the [=FedCom=] is doing to the Clans, when one of the officers stated that the AFFC forces are using Clan technology, down to complete compatibility. When accused of [[EnemyMine collusion with the Commonwealth]], Focht states, “When I inform Primus Waterly that Hanse Davion has armed his forces with weapons equal to yours, it is entirely possible [[AtomicFBomb you will hear her outrage from here without an HPG.]]”
* The Clans interrogate [=ComStar’s=] Precentor Martial on the damage the [=FedCom=] is doing to the Clans, when one of the officers stated that the AFFC forces are using Clan technology, down to complete compatibility. When accused of [[EnemyMine collusion with the Commonwealth]], Focht states, “When I inform Primus Waterly that Hanse Davion has armed his forces with weapons equal to yours, it is entirely possible [[AtomicFBomb you will hear her outrage from here without an HPG.]]”
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* In the first chapter's ending, a [=ComStar=] briefing has their organization as well as others baffled by [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness the new FedCom giving away worlds to the St. Ives Compact and Free Rasalhague Republic]], leaving them wondering if Janos Marik was right in thinking [[BlackMail "Clearly Liao has pictures of Davion molesting goats."]]
* In the first chapter's ending, a [=ComStar=] briefing has their organization as well as others baffled by [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness the new FedCom giving away worlds to the St. Ives Compact and Free Rasalhague Republic]], leaving them wondering if Janos Marik was right in thinking [[BlackMail "Clearly Liao has pictures of Davion molesting goats."]]
