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** Then there's when first sees Maud:
---> '''Sarge:''' (''in a strongly soft voice'') ...that is the most adorable mining tool I've ever seen.
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** Then there's And when Sarge first sees Maud:
---> '''Sarge:''' (''in astrongly strangely soft voice'') ...that is the most adorable mining tool I've ever seen.
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--> '''Sarge:''' (''to Church'') Why didn't you tell me there was a minor with you before I started cussing you out, dam dirty Blue? (''to Maud'') Dam as in the construction used to block a river, which is what I'm going to use the bodies of my Blue enemies to build, which is why it applies!
--> '''Sarge:''' What 'n (''sees Maud'') Helllllllllll's name is going on here? Hel being the Norse Goddess of the Dead, and short for Helheim, the Norse Underworld. Not a bad word, and totally alright to swear by if you're of Nordic decent, and you can't prove I'm not at least 5% Nordic!
* When Sarge threatens to shoot Church, he can't bring himself to do it with Maud watching. So, he begins to ask them to wait while he go gets Grif to do it for him. Maud punches him in the ankle for his troubles.
--> '''Sarge:''' OH MY ACHILLES!
** Church notices that Maud punched Tucker full forced, while she held back when she punched Sarge. Maud's response is that "family should know better." Church then notes that she's so much like Tex.
* Maud apparently has more in common with Pinkie Pie then she knows, as after meeting Sarge, she [[OffscreenTeleportation somehow ends up in Red Base.]]
** At Red Base, [[ThoseTwoGuys Grif and Simmons]] are standing around and talking, like always. Then Grif says that a pony just broke it.
---> '''Simmons:''' Pony? What pony?
---> '''Maud:''' Me.
---> '''Simmons:''' (''looks down and see Maud'') Grif, there's a talking pony in the base! How did that happen?
---> '''Grif:''' You're asking me? I thought I was making it up to mess with you!
** Maud continues to [[OffscreenTeleportation teleport]] while in Red Base, appearing in Simmons locker and then in front of Grif's. She's also getting agitated, wanting her "Dad".
---> '''Maud:''' I don't like it. I want Dad.
---> '''Simmons:''' Look, I don't even know what you are, let alone- (''Maud now standing in front of Grif's locker'') Wha?
---> '''Maud:''' I want Dad.
---> '''Simmons:''' I told you, I don't-
---> '''Maud:''' (''suddenly kicks Grif locker. It goes through several walls before vanishing into the sky. Then a satellite, with one of its stabilizing wings torn off, falls to the ground in a fiery ball of death'') [[PunctuatedForEmphasis I. Want. Dad.]]
---> '''Simmons:''' (''scared shitless'') ...that doesn't seem physically possible...
---> '''Grif''' Simmons, as loath as I am to suggest working hard, I think we should drop everything and find her Dad before we learn what else she can do that should be physically impossible...say, to ''us''?
--> '''Sarge:''' (''to Church'') Why didn't you tell me there was a minor with you before I started cussing you out, dam dirty Blue? (''to Maud'') Dam as in the construction used to block a river, which is what I'm going to use the bodies of my Blue enemies to build, which is why it applies!
--> '''Sarge:''' What 'n (''sees Maud'') Helllllllllll's name is going on here? Hel being the Norse Goddess of the Dead, and short for Helheim, the Norse Underworld. Not a bad word, and totally alright to swear by if you're of Nordic decent, and you can't prove I'm not at least 5% Nordic!
* When Sarge threatens to shoot Church, he can't bring himself to do it with Maud watching. So, he begins to ask them to wait while he go gets Grif to do it for him. Maud punches him in the ankle for his troubles.
--> '''Sarge:''' OH MY ACHILLES!
** Church notices that Maud punched Tucker full forced, while she held back when she punched Sarge. Maud's response is that "family should know better." Church then notes that she's so much like Tex.
* Maud apparently has more in common with Pinkie Pie then she knows, as after meeting Sarge, she [[OffscreenTeleportation somehow ends up in Red Base.]]
** At Red Base, [[ThoseTwoGuys Grif and Simmons]] are standing around and talking, like always. Then Grif says that a pony just broke it.
---> '''Simmons:''' Pony? What pony?
---> '''Maud:''' Me.
---> '''Simmons:''' (''looks down and see Maud'') Grif, there's a talking pony in the base! How did that happen?
---> '''Grif:''' You're asking me? I thought I was making it up to mess with you!
** Maud continues to [[OffscreenTeleportation teleport]] while in Red Base, appearing in Simmons locker and then in front of Grif's. She's also getting agitated, wanting her "Dad".
---> '''Maud:''' I don't like it. I want Dad.
---> '''Simmons:''' Look, I don't even know what you are, let alone- (''Maud now standing in front of Grif's locker'') Wha?
---> '''Maud:''' I want Dad.
---> '''Simmons:''' I told you, I don't-
---> '''Maud:''' (''suddenly kicks Grif locker. It goes through several walls before vanishing into the sky. Then a satellite, with one of its stabilizing wings torn off, falls to the ground in a fiery ball of death'') [[PunctuatedForEmphasis I. Want. Dad.]]
---> '''Simmons:''' (''scared shitless'') ...that doesn't seem physically possible...
---> '''Grif''' Simmons, as loath as I am to suggest working hard, I think we should drop everything and find her Dad before we learn what else she can do that should be physically impossible...say, to ''us''?
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* When Tucker, being [[LovableSexMachine being Tucker]], first Maud, he continues to say innuendos followed by his infamous "[[CatchPhrase Bow-chika-bow-wow!]]". Maud then calmly walks up to him and casually threatens him with a groan attack. Tucker doesn't buy it and [[TemptingFate asks how she could hurt him through his armor]]. She then punches his ankle, shattering the metal, along with the ankle itself.
--> '''Tucker:''' (''While holding his anger in pain'') Medic!
--> '''Tucker:''' (''While holding his anger in pain'') Medic!
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* When Tucker, being [[LovableSexMachine [[LovableSexManiac being Tucker]], first meets Maud, he continues to say starts saying innuendos followed by his infamous "[[CatchPhrase Bow-chika-bow-wow!]]".Bow Chika Bow Wow!]]" in no time. Maud then calmly walks up to him and casually threatens him with a groan attack. Tucker doesn't buy it and [[TemptingFate asks how she could hurt him through his armor]]. She then punches his ankle, shattering the metal, along with the ankle itself.
itself. Church certainly enjoyed it.
--> '''Tucker:''' (''Whileholding clutching his anger ankle in pain'') Medic!-OH MY GOD! Medic!
* When Church takes Maud to explore the cliffs, she begins to dig a hole to get to the caves (with Captain Flowers told them not to go until Maud was old enough). Then [[AxeCrazy Sage]] shows up.
** Then there's when first sees Maud:
---> '''Sarge:''' (''in a strongly soft voice'') ...that is the most adorable mining tool I've ever seen.
---> '''Maud:''' Thanks.
---> '''Sarge:''' It talks! (''points his shotgun at her, only for Church to grab it'')
---> '''Church:''' Point that thing at me all you want! [[PapaWolf But don't you ''dare'' point it at my daughter!]]
---> '''Sarge:''' Your...daughter?
---> '''Church:''' That's right. And she's a living, thinking being, not a mining tool...
---> '''Maud:''' (''Maud picked a rock out of her mane, finds gem fragments within it, splits it open and [[ExtremeOmnivore licks the gem vein before crunching on the two halves]]'')
---> '''Church:''' ...however effective she is as one...
---> '''Sarge:''' [[LampshadeHanging Did...did she just eat a rock?]]
---> '''Church:''' Yeah, I was pretty surprised by that, too.
* There's also Sarge's attempts to not curse whenever Maud's around. Like when he first sees her eat a rock, he [[
--> '''Tucker:''' (''While
* When Church takes Maud to explore the cliffs, she begins to dig a hole to get to the caves (with Captain Flowers told them not to go until Maud was old enough). Then [[AxeCrazy Sage]] shows up.
** Then there's when first sees Maud:
---> '''Sarge:''' (''in a strongly soft voice'') ...that is the most adorable mining tool I've ever seen.
---> '''Maud:''' Thanks.
---> '''Sarge:''' It talks! (''points his shotgun at her, only for Church to grab it'')
---> '''Church:''' Point that thing at me all you want! [[PapaWolf But don't you ''dare'' point it at my daughter!]]
---> '''Sarge:''' Your...daughter?
---> '''Church:''' That's right. And she's a living, thinking being, not a mining tool...
---> '''Maud:''' (''Maud picked a rock out of her mane, finds gem fragments within it, splits it open and [[ExtremeOmnivore licks the gem vein before crunching on the two halves]]'')
---> '''Church:''' ...however effective she is as one...
---> '''Sarge:''' [[LampshadeHanging Did...did she just eat a rock?]]
---> '''Church:''' Yeah, I was pretty surprised by that, too.
* There's also Sarge's attempts to not curse whenever Maud's around. Like when he first sees her eat a rock, he [[
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* The fact that this story involves the characters from Machinima/RedVsBlue guarantees that there will be plenty of funny moments in this story.
* In the first chapter, when Church first find filly! Maud, she clings onto his arm so tightly that the she the armor was crushed, establishing her as a PintSizePowerhouse.
--> '''Church:''' And Captain, I'm going to need a replacement arm for my armor. Maud kind of crushed it.
--> '''Captain Flowers:''' ...she did what now?
* When Tucker, being [[LovableSexMachine being Tucker]], first Maud, he continues to say innuendos followed by his infamous "[[CatchPhrase Bow-chika-bow-wow!]]". Maud then calmly walks up to him and casually threatens him with a groan attack. Tucker doesn't buy it and [[TemptingFate asks how she could hurt him through his armor]]. She then punches his ankle, shattering the metal, along with the ankle itself.
--> '''Tucker:''' (''While holding his anger in pain'') Medic!
* In the first chapter, when Church first find filly! Maud, she clings onto his arm so tightly that the she the armor was crushed, establishing her as a PintSizePowerhouse.
--> '''Church:''' And Captain, I'm going to need a replacement arm for my armor. Maud kind of crushed it.
--> '''Captain Flowers:''' ...she did what now?
* When Tucker, being [[LovableSexMachine being Tucker]], first Maud, he continues to say innuendos followed by his infamous "[[CatchPhrase Bow-chika-bow-wow!]]". Maud then calmly walks up to him and casually threatens him with a groan attack. Tucker doesn't buy it and [[TemptingFate asks how she could hurt him through his armor]]. She then punches his ankle, shattering the metal, along with the ankle itself.
--> '''Tucker:''' (''While holding his anger in pain'') Medic!
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* Coco questions why [[WesternAnimation/SWATKats her uncles T-Bone and Razor]] have [[AbnormalAmmo have a missile that repairs bridges]]. Several fans snickered that she clearly has no idea [[CityOfAdventure what their city is like]] nor [[WeirdnessMagnets what kind of trouble they get up to]].
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* Coco questions why [[WesternAnimation/SWATKats her uncles T-Bone and Razor]] have [[AbnormalAmmo have a missile that repairs bridges]]. Several fans snickered that she clearly has no idea [[CityOfAdventure what their city is like]] nor [[WeirdnessMagnets [[WeirdnessMagnet what kind of trouble they get up to]].
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* Apparently Coopers [[HasAType have a type]]: women who look like, and to various extents act like, Carmelita. So Sly has to deal with all of his ancestors flirting with his girl.
** Humorously this lead to Tats having to state that Tex's love interest Valina is ''not'' remotely related to Carmelita and her being a fox/raccoon cross was ''just a joke''.
** Humorously this lead to Tats having to state that Tex's love interest Valina is ''not'' remotely related to Carmelita and her being a fox/raccoon cross was ''just a joke''.
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* When the choice of "Jade's play vs. dig with Uncle" comes up, Jackie chooses to use the Tiger talisman of his own volition. Not only is Springheel Jack repetrified without a fight but it turns out ''no one'' was fooled.
** Viper blackmails Kitten!Jackie (Kitten and Tiger are now canon for the two halves of Jackie) into him and Tiger doing something with her and Sharaka in exchange for her keeping her mouth shut. Tiger is pleased at first but then he and Kitten both run out of the bedroom in nothing but boxer shorts (themed for who's wearing them) yelling "Bad Day!" Back in her room, Viper is...let's let the text do the talking.
--> Back in her room, Viper glanced down at what - to her - were the 'tamer' magical 'tools' she'd sought to introduce the Jackies to...including one that had several wriggling protrusions waiting to be extended. "...think I overdid it, Sharaka?" she asked the Armor she still wore.
** Viper blackmails Kitten!Jackie (Kitten and Tiger are now canon for the two halves of Jackie) into him and Tiger doing something with her and Sharaka in exchange for her keeping her mouth shut. Tiger is pleased at first but then he and Kitten both run out of the bedroom in nothing but boxer shorts (themed for who's wearing them) yelling "Bad Day!" Back in her room, Viper is...let's let the text do the talking.
--> Back in her room, Viper glanced down at what - to her - were the 'tamer' magical 'tools' she'd sought to introduce the Jackies to...including one that had several wriggling protrusions waiting to be extended. "...think I overdid it, Sharaka?" she asked the Armor she still wore.
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** Then when she gets her wish in the form of Starlight Glimmer being adopted by Twilight through complicated time-travel shenanigans, she immediately freaks out about being a great-grandmother because Starlight and Sunburst have a son, even complaining that "this is not the flank of a great-grandmother!"
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* Sunset's attempts to get her own Ar-Wing don't go well.
** Krystal not only flat-out refuses but she refuses to help Sunset convince anyone else; Sunset pouts.
** Slippy just repeatedly says no. Then when she switches to asking "Why?", he scares her into waiting.
** Peppy first distracts her with stories and then when she insists that she doesn't want a story, [[WoundedGazelleGambit feigns being hurt]]. Sunset immediately changes her tune and stops asking Peppy for an Ar-Wing. The old buck is very smug about it.
** Fox says "Maybe when you're older" and when Sunset whines that she doesn't want a maybe, asks "Would you like to go for no?"
--> Sunset: "Maybe good."
** Falco goes into a [[GoshDarnItToHeck pseudo-swear]] filled rant when Sunset asks and calls her out on her CrocodileTears, saying that she yells and screams when actually upset; [[NotHelpingYourCase she kicks him in the leg.]]
--> Falco: "Yeah...Like that. ...fighting good form there, though."
** Krystal not only flat-out refuses but she refuses to help Sunset convince anyone else; Sunset pouts.
** Slippy just repeatedly says no. Then when she switches to asking "Why?", he scares her into waiting.
** Peppy first distracts her with stories and then when she insists that she doesn't want a story, [[WoundedGazelleGambit feigns being hurt]]. Sunset immediately changes her tune and stops asking Peppy for an Ar-Wing. The old buck is very smug about it.
** Fox says "Maybe when you're older" and when Sunset whines that she doesn't want a maybe, asks "Would you like to go for no?"
--> Sunset: "Maybe good."
** Falco goes into a [[GoshDarnItToHeck pseudo-swear]] filled rant when Sunset asks and calls her out on her CrocodileTears, saying that she yells and screams when actually upset; [[NotHelpingYourCase she kicks him in the leg.]]
--> Falco: "Yeah...Like that. ...fighting good form there, though."
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* Jackie finally starts flirting back with Viper, countering her question about following her up a mountain being about staring at her "fanny pack" with "It's certainly not a hardship" only to be thrown when she muses that she thought she'd have to crawl into bed with him for him to take the hint. Then a [[ShesNotMyGirlfriend "He's not my boyfriend"]] RunningGag starts for Jade, complete with fan counter.
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* While it could be considered DudeNotFunny, when Pyro's gender is revealed, it's [[StayInTheKitchen immediately joked about.]]
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* From chapter 207:
-->'''Celestia''': "So I ask again. How is Sunset?"
-->'''Twilight''': "Your daughter's hot."
-->'''Celestia''' (whimpering): "Are you ''trying'' to give me a nervous breakdown?"
* When Twilight Velvet meets her daughter's boyfriend, she has only one question: [[IWantGrandKids "Grandfoals!"]] When he points out that's not a question, she responds "Well, it's certainly not a request."
* When the group gets ready to fight Tirek, Pinkie uses the CatchPhrase of [[TheMagicSchoolBus a certain]] CrazyAwesome [[TheMagicSchoolBus school teacher]]. Spike and Nefarious then reference the [[TheMagicSchoolBus show's]] opening theme.
--> Pinkie: Seat belts, Everyone!
--> Spike: Can't this be just an ordinary field trip-I mean, final battle?
--> Nefarious: With pink frizz? NO WAY!
* From chapter 207:
-->'''Celestia''': "So I ask again. How is Sunset?"
-->'''Twilight''': "Your daughter's hot."
-->'''Celestia''' (whimpering): "Are you ''trying'' to give me a nervous breakdown?"
* When Twilight Velvet meets her daughter's boyfriend, she has only one question: [[IWantGrandKids "Grandfoals!"]] When he points out that's not a question, she responds "Well, it's certainly not a request."
* When the group gets ready to fight Tirek, Pinkie uses the CatchPhrase of [[TheMagicSchoolBus a certain]] CrazyAwesome [[TheMagicSchoolBus school teacher]]. Spike and Nefarious then reference the [[TheMagicSchoolBus show's]] opening theme.
--> Pinkie: Seat belts, Everyone!
--> Spike: Can't this be just an ordinary field trip-I mean, final battle?
--> Nefarious: With pink frizz? NO WAY!
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* While it could be considered DudeNotFunny, when Pyro's gender is revealed, it's [[StayInTheKitchen immediately joked about.]]
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*While it could be considered DudeNotFunny, Hulk becomes Rainbow's nanny...[[WholesomeCrossdresser with the appropriate attire]]. Bruce Banner is NOT pleased with this when Pyro's gender is revealed, it's [[StayInTheKitchen immediately joked about.]]he finally regains control.
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* At one point Pinkie tries to destroy a statue ''WesternAnimation/LooneyTunes'' style. [[NoSell It doesn't even budge.]]
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--> Gilda folded her wing. "None of that!" she scolded. "Self-recrimination is a wasteful, pointless endeavor, not befitting a Johnson. You know what you're supposed to do when life gives you lemons."
--> Chell managed a wan smile. "This is still a pretty big lemon," she pointed out dryly.
--> "Then it will make a very satisfying explosion once combustible,"
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--> Gilda folded her wing. "None of that!" she scolded. "Self-recrimination is a wasteful, pointless endeavor, not befitting a Johnson. You know what you're supposed to do when life gives you lemons."
--> Chell managed a wan smile. "This is still a pretty big lemon," she pointed out dryly.
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--> Gilda folded her wing. "None of that!" she scolded. "Self-recrimination is a wasteful, pointless endeavor, not befitting a Johnson. You know what you're supposed to do when life gives you lemons."
--> Chell managed a wan smile. "This is still a pretty big lemon," she pointed out dryly.
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--> Gilda folded her wing. "None of that!" she scolded. "Self-recrimination is a wasteful, pointless endeavor, not befitting a Johnson. You know what you're supposed to do when life gives you lemons."
--> Chell managed a wan smile. "This is still a pretty big lemon," she pointed out dryly.
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--> Gilda folded her wing. "None of that!" she scolded. "Self-recrimination is a wasteful, pointless endeavor, not befitting a Johnson. You know what you're supposed to do when life gives you lemons."
--> Chell managed a wan smile. "This is still a pretty big lemon," she pointed outby Deadpool sometimes, and at one point Tatsurou even alludes to his growing headache.
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--> Gilda folded her wing. "None of that!" she scolded. "Self-recrimination is a wasteful, pointless endeavor, not befitting a Johnson. You know what you're supposed to do when life gives you lemons."
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-->'''Celestia''': "So I ask again. How is Sunset?"
-->'''Twilight''': "Your daughter's hot."
-->'''Celestia''' (whimpering): "Are you ''trying'' to give me a nervous breakdown?"
* When Twilight Velvet meets her daughter's boyfriend, she has only one question: [[IWantGrandKids "Grandfoals!"]] When he points out that's not a question, she responds "Well, it's certainly not a request."
* When the group gets ready to fight Tirek, Pinkie uses the CatchPhrase of [[TheMagicSchoolBus a certain]] CrazyAwesome [[TheMagicSchoolBus school teacher]]. Spike and Nefarious then reference the [[TheMagicSchoolBus show's]] opening theme.
--> Pinkie: Seat belts, Everyone!
--> Spike: Can't this be just an ordinary field trip-I mean, final battle?
--> Nefarious: With pink frizz? NO WAY!
* From chapter 207:
-->'''Celestia''': "So I ask again. How is Sunset?"
-->'''Twilight''': "Your daughter's hot."
-->'''Celestia''' (whimpering): "Are you ''trying'' to give me a nervous breakdown?"
* When Twilight Velvet meets her daughter's boyfriend, she has only one question: [[IWantGrandKids "Grandfoals!"]] When he points out that's not a question, she responds "Well, it's certainly not a request."
* When the group gets ready to fight Tirek, Pinkie uses the CatchPhrase of [[TheMagicSchoolBus a certain]] CrazyAwesome [[TheMagicSchoolBus school teacher]]. Spike and Nefarious then reference the [[TheMagicSchoolBus show's]] opening theme.
--> Pinkie: Seat belts, Everyone!
--> Spike: Can't this be just an ordinary field trip-I mean, final battle?
--> Nefarious: With pink frizz? NO WAY!
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My Own Wings]]
*From chapter 207:
-->'''Celestia''': "So I ask again. How is Sunset?"
-->'''Twilight''': "Your daughter's hot."
-->'''Celestia''' (whimpering): "Are you ''trying'' to give me a nervous breakdown?"
* When Twilight Velvet meets her daughter's boyfriend, she has only one question: [[IWantGrandKids "Grandfoals!"]] When he points out that's not a question, she responds "Well, it's certainly not a request."
* When the group gets ready to fight Tirek, Pinkie uses the CatchPhrase of [[TheMagicSchoolBus a certain]] CrazyAwesome [[TheMagicSchoolBus school teacher]]. Spike and Nefarious then reference the [[TheMagicSchoolBus show's]] opening theme.
--> Pinkie: Seat belts, Everyone!
--> Spike: Can't this be just an ordinary field trip-I mean, final battle?
--> Nefarious: With pink frizz? NO WAY!
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-->'''Celestia''': "So I ask again. How is Sunset?"
-->'''Twilight''': "Your daughter's hot."
-->'''Celestia''' (whimpering): "Are you ''trying'' to give me a nervous breakdown?"
* When Twilight Velvet meets her daughter's boyfriend, she has only one question: [[IWantGrandKids "Grandfoals!"]] When he points out that's not a question, she responds "Well, it's certainly not a request."
* When the group gets ready to fight Tirek, Pinkie uses the CatchPhrase of [[TheMagicSchoolBus a certain]] CrazyAwesome [[TheMagicSchoolBus school teacher]]. Spike and Nefarious then reference the [[TheMagicSchoolBus show's]] opening theme.
--> Pinkie: Seat belts, Everyone!
--> Spike: Can't this be just an ordinary field trip-I mean, final battle?
--> Nefarious: With pink frizz? NO WAY!
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* Also leaning towards awesome territory, Max uses a stun gun as a defibrillator in the very first chapter.
* Trixie's psychoanalysis.
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* Trixie's psychoanalysis.
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* The beginnings of the J Team involve El Toro being confused with a burglar before mistaking Audrey III for an enemy, Paco randomly showing up with El Toro and Jackie's annoyance with the situation being followed by him [[ScrewThisImOutOfHere running like a mad man when he realizes]] [[EatingTheEyeCandy he's shirtless in front of a ''very'' a]] ''[[EatingTheEyeCandy very]]'' [[EatingTheEyeCandy enthusiastic Viper]].
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--> Chell managed a wan smile. "This is still a pretty big lemon," she pointed out dryly.
--> "Then it will make a very satisfying explosion once combustible,"
--> Gilda folded her wing. "None of that!" she scolded. "Self-recrimination is a wasteful, pointless endeavor, not befitting a Johnson. You know what you're supposed to do when life gives you lemons."
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--> Pinkie: Seat belts, Everyone!
--> Spike: Can't this be just an ordinary field trip-I mean, final battle?
--> Nefarious: With pink frizz? NO WAY!
--> Pinkie: Seat belts, Everyone!
--> Spike: Can't this be just an ordinary field trip-I mean, final battle?
--> Nefarious: With pink frizz? NO WAY!
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-->'''Celestia''': "So I ask again. How is Sunset?"
-->'''Twilight''': "Your daughter's hot."
-->'''Celestia''' (whimpering): "Are you ''trying'' to give me a nervous breakdown?"
-->'''Celestia''': "So I ask again. How is Sunset?"
-->'''Twilight''': "Your daughter's hot."
-->'''Celestia''' (whimpering): "Are you ''trying'' to give me a nervous breakdown?"
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* Trixie's psychoanalysis.
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* The author gets called out by Deadpool sometimes, and at one point Tatsurou even alludes to his growing headache.
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* The fight with Toad Man ends up involving Megaman [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext pulling a flamethrower out of nowhere, chanting]] "KillItWithFire" and [[TroubledFetalPosition crying on the ground at the end of it all.]]
* Vinyl's Wub Masters. [[TakeThat She got them off of]] [[Website/FourChan]]
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* [[RunningGag "Woof."]]
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* Later on, during Agnus' hammy performance, Applejack begins to judge it. It eventually devolves into EightPointEight territory.
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* While it could be considered DudeNotFunny, when Pyro's gender is revealed, it's [[StayInTheKitchen immediately joked about.]]
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* Trixie's psychoanalysis.
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* The author gets called out by Deadpool sometimes, and at one point Tatsurou even alludes to his growing headache.
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* The fight with Toad Man ends up involving Megaman [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext pulling a flamethrower out of nowhere, chanting]] "KillItWithFire" and [[TroubledFetalPosition crying on the ground at the end of it all.]]
* Vinyl's Wub Masters. [[TakeThat She got them off of]] [[Website/FourChan]]
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* At one point Pinkie tries to destroy a statue [[WesternAnimation/LooneyTunes]] style. [[NoSell It doesn't even budge.]]
