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* A large part of Jonathan's problems with not being able to intimidate anyone HardboiledDetective style is due to the fact he doesn't have any sort of weapon like a fictional private eye would. Which is due to New York's strict gun laws and the fact that, well, he's Jonathan.
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* A large part of Jonathan's problems with not being able to intimidate anyone HardboiledDetective style is due to the fact he doesn't have any sort of weapon like a fictional private eye would. Which is due to New York's strict gun laws and the fact that, well, he's Jonathan.
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* A large part of Jonathan's problems with not being able to intimidate anyone HardboiledPrivateDetective style is due to the fact he doesn't have any sort of weapon like a fictional private eye would. Which is due to New York's strict gun laws and the fact that, well, he's Jonathan.
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* A large part of Jonathan's problems with not being able to intimidate anyone HardboiledPrivateDetective HardboiledDetective style is due to the fact he doesn't have any sort of weapon like a fictional private eye would. Which is due to New York's strict gun laws and the fact that, well, he's Jonathan.
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* A large part of Jonathan's problems with not being able to intimidate anyone HardboiledPrivateEye HardboiledPrivateDetective style is due to the fact he doesn't have any sort of weapon like a fictional private eye would. Which is due to New York's strict gun laws and the fact that, well, he's Jonathan.
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* A large part of Jonathan's problems with not being able to intimidate anyone HardboiledPrivateEye style is due to the fact he doesn't have any sort of weapon like a fictional private eye would. Which is due to New York's strict gun laws and the fact that, well, he's Jonathan.
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!! FridgeBrilliance
* Jonathan never quite articulates why he decided to become an unlicensed private detective. However, given his girlfriend's reasons for breaking up with him, it seems he was motivated by a desire to be tougher.
* White wine is certainly not the kind of drink that most private eyes would drink and helps illustrate why Jonathan is not a HardboiledDetective.
!! FridgeHorror
* Given the number of brothers and sisters Jonathan must have for many relationships currently in progress started because the couples had so much in common with each other.
* Jonathan keeping the fact he's the biological brother of Rose from her while they engage in a sexual relationship should probably count as rape by deception.
* Jonathan never quite articulates why he decided to become an unlicensed private detective. However, given his girlfriend's reasons for breaking up with him, it seems he was motivated by a desire to be tougher.
* White wine is certainly not the kind of drink that most private eyes would drink and helps illustrate why Jonathan is not a HardboiledDetective.
!! FridgeHorror
* Given the number of brothers and sisters Jonathan must have for many relationships currently in progress started because the couples had so much in common with each other.
* Jonathan keeping the fact he's the biological brother of Rose from her while they engage in a sexual relationship should probably count as rape by deception.
