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* The ''entire mechanic''. If you're anything like me, you got about ten minutes into the game before realizing that you just made every Royal Soldier in the game unjust, stole the wisdom of a young girl (and then gave her Illness), and entirely rewrote the relationship between two siblings before running out of MP.
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* The ''entire mechanic''. If you're anything like me, you got You've probably gotten about ten minutes into the game before realizing that you just made every Royal Soldier in the game unjust, stole the wisdom of a young girl (and then gave her Illness), and entirely rewrote the relationship between two siblings before running out of MP.
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* The ice spirit, Neaky, has her voice sealed so she can only speak in a rasp, to reflect the quiet harshness of winter. However, it takes a moment to realize that her voice isn't magically sealed, but instead her throat is being physically crushed by her neck brace.
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* How did Olly know about the spirits' WeaksauceWeakness? [[spoiler:Rex]] makes sense since he was under Kullervo's orders, but she's just a random villain who shouldn't know anything about the Book of Prophecy! The whole sequence just reads like a DiablousExMachina.
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* How did Olly know about the spirits' WeaksauceWeakness? [[spoiler:Rex]] makes sense since he was under Kullervo's orders, but she's just a random villain who shouldn't know anything about the Book of Prophecy! The whole sequence just reads like a DiablousExMachina.DiabolusExMachina.
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* How did Olly know about the spirits' WeaksauceWeakness? [[spoiler:Rex]] makes sense since he was under Kullervo's orders, but she's just a random villain who shouldn't know anything about the Book of Prophecy! The whole sequence just reads like a DiablousExMachina.
* Related to the above, but, why doesn't Olly take the Book of Prophecy while the PlayerCharacter is unconscious? She tries to grab it, the spirits stop her, then she neutralizes the spirits and...throws the PlayerCharacter in a CardboardPrison ''without'' taking the book? Why?
* Related to the above, but, why doesn't Olly take the Book of Prophecy while the PlayerCharacter is unconscious? She tries to grab it, the spirits stop her, then she neutralizes the spirits and...throws the PlayerCharacter in a CardboardPrison ''without'' taking the book? Why?
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* What on Earth is Werman trying to do? He wants to TakeOverTheWorld, okay, but how is summoning a demon going to help him with that? He doesn't appear to have any control over Kullervo at all -- he's just a lackey. Even if Kullervo succeeds in his plan, it'll be ''Kullervo'' who takes over the world, not him. This is especially suspect considering that Kullervo hates humans -- why does he think Kullervo would be willing to give him anything once he'd outlived his usefulness? Even Didja Redo's rewrite doesn't address this one.
* What on Earth is Werman trying to do? He wants to TakeOverTheWorld, okay, but how is summoning a demon going to help him with that? He doesn't appear to have any control over Kullervo at all -- he's just a lackey. Even if Kullervo succeeds in his plan, it'll be ''Kullervo'' who takes over the world, not him. This is especially suspect considering that Kullervo hates humans -- why does he think Kullervo would be willing to give him anything once he'd outlived his usefulness? Even Didja Redo's rewrite doesn't address this one.
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** Of course, this is somewhat cheapened by the fact that dismantling peoples' personalities has no effect on them in the slightest. It ''should'' lead to horrific warping that gives the player a MyGodWhatHaveIDone moment, but...it doesn't. [[GameplayAndStorySegregation Guess they didn't really need those personality codes after all!]]
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* The ''entire mechanic''. If you're anything like me, you got about ten minutes into the game before realizing that you just made every Royal Soldier in the game unjust, stole the wisdom of a young girl (and then gave her Illness), and entirely rewrote the relationship between two siblings before running out of MP.MP.
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* The ''entire mechanic''. If you're anything like me, you got about ten minutes into the game before realizing that you just made every Royal Soldier in the game unjust, stole the wisdom of a young girl (and then gave her Illness), and entirely rewrote the relationship between two siblings before running out of MP.
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* The ''entire mechanic''. If you're anything like me, you got about ten minutes into the game before realizing that you just made every Royal Soldier in the game unjust, stole the wisdom of a young girl (and then gave her Illness), and entirely rewrote the relationship between two siblings before running out of MP.
