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** Tanto as well as the diplomat Sean Smith are seen playing two different ''VideoGame/CallOfDuty'' games on their consoles during their downtimes; ''VideoGame/CallOfDutyAdvancedWarfare'' (2014) and ''VideoGame/CallOfDutyGhosts'' (2013) respectively. Neither games were released at the time, their latest game then being ''[[VideoGame/ModernWarfare Modern Warfare 3]]'' (2011). To compound on that, the copy of ''Advanced Warfare'' used is played on a UsefulNotes/Playstation4, which wasn't released or even announced until the following year.
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** Tanto as well as the diplomat Sean Smith are seen playing two different ''VideoGame/CallOfDuty'' games on their consoles during their downtimes; ''VideoGame/CallOfDutyAdvancedWarfare'' (2014) and ''VideoGame/CallOfDutyGhosts'' (2013) respectively. Neither games were released at the time, their latest game then being ''[[VideoGame/ModernWarfare Modern Warfare 3]]'' (2011). To compound on that, the copy of ''Advanced Warfare'' used is played on a UsefulNotes/Playstation4, Platform/Playstation4, which wasn't released or even announced until the following year.
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* IncrediblyLamePun: When they mention "training [=SEALs=]," one comments "How'd you get them to balance the ball on their nose?"
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* {{Pun}}: When they mention "training [=SEALs=]," one comments "How'd you get them to balance the ball on their nose?"
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False statement. The difficulty in recognizing who is who is because everyone wears civilian clothing, and locals are of the same ethnicity. Several times this is commented and hostile forces are shown not engaging combat to retreat or flee during the first attack on the ambassador.
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* FaceHeelRevolvingDoor: The 17-Feb militia or the random vigilantes seem to change allegiances by the ''seconds'' and as such, the American combatants have a hard time determining who is friend and who is foe throughout the battle.
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* GrenadeLauncher: When the GRS team take off to go save the Americans who are under attack at the compound, Tig brings a HK69A1 grenade launcher with him and puts it to good use when he uses it to take out an enemy Dushka.
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* GrenadeLauncher: When the GRS team take off to go save the Americans who are under attack at the compound, Tig brings a HK69A1 [=HK69A1=] grenade launcher with him and puts it to good use when he uses it to take out an enemy Dushka.
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* GrenadeLauncher: When the GRS team take off to go save the Americans who are under attack at the compound, Tig brings a HK69A1 grenade launcher with him and puts it to good use when he uses it to take out an enemy Dushka.
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I don't understand how this is a "downplayed" example when it was the American contractors who did the bulk of the fighting. Not to mention the 17 Feb fighters were incredibly unreliable and the Libyan army arrives after several Americans have been killed and the majority of the fighting had already finished.
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* AmericaSavesTheDay: Downplayed. It's primarily the efforts of the American GRS that resulted in the safe evacuation of any survivors rather than a complete slaughter. But it's made clear that a friendly militia "17 Feb" do provide some assistance and [[spoiler: it's the arrival of Libyan army reinforcements that confirms they are in the clear and can make it to the airport]].
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* AmericaSavesTheDay: Downplayed. It's primarily the efforts of the American GRS that resulted in the safe evacuation of any survivors rather than a complete slaughter. But it's made clear that a friendly militia "17 Feb" do provide some assistance and [[spoiler: it's the arrival of Libyan army reinforcements that confirms they are in the clear and can make it to the airport]].slaughter.
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grammar (need minor edit button to check)
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* SpiritualSuccessor: ''13 Hours'' was Michael Bay's attempt to create his own ''Film/BlackHawkDown''. How successful he was depends on the viewer. Film editor Pietro Scalia, who won an Oscar for Black Hawk Down, also edited 13 hours.
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* SpiritualSuccessor: ''13 Hours'' was Michael Bay's attempt to create his own ''Film/BlackHawkDown''. How successful he was depends on the viewer. Film editor Pietro Scalia, who won an Oscar for Black Hawk Down, also edited 13 hours.''13 Hours''.
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* ArcWords: "All the gods, all the heavens, all the hells, are within you."
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* ArcWords: Joseph Campbell's quote "All the gods, all the heavens, all the hells, are within you."
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* ArcWords: "All the gods, all the heavens, all the hells, are within you."