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* BoomHeadshot: [[spoiler: When the Empire ''and'' the Teeth attack Autobot City, Taylor blasts Fenja's head off when the Empire Cape tries to attack a down Arcee]].
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** [[spoiler: Taylor blasts Fenja's head off before the villainous Valkyrie can kill Arcee.]]
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** The people examining the [[spoiler: ground-bridge]] technology are a downplayed example.
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* SlaveryIsASpecialKindOfEvil: [[spoiler: In 16-1, Taylor and the Autobots break up a human trafficking operation the Empire was running]].
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* EntertaininglyWrong: Danny and Hannah are worried that Taylor is upset about their relationship, possibly that Taylor might even resent Hannah for replacing Annette. Taylor fires back that no, she's been avoiding them because a) she's busy and b) she was ''really'' embarrassed that she found out about said relationship when they walked out of the shower together... naked. It doesn't help that [[CelebCrush Taylor used to have a crush on Ms. Militia.]]
** Capes tend to nearly-instantly give up on their non-powered forces, such as Oil Slick leaving his workers to die in a fire ''he'' started, or Leet being honestly confused about his non-Uber companions wanting to escape with them and not go to jail.
** For a specific example, when this trope is namedropped for why Lung keeps breaking a loyal lieutenant out of jail, Taylor instantly shoots it down, pointing out that rewarding loyalty keeps the man loyal and makes the men fight harder- likely, Lung not only doesn't care about the man but ultimately doesn't care about much other than himself.
** For a specific example, when this trope is namedropped for why Lung keeps breaking a loyal lieutenant out of jail, Taylor instantly shoots it down, pointing out that rewarding loyalty keeps the man loyal and makes the men fight harder- likely, Lung not only doesn't care about the man but ultimately doesn't care about much other than himself.
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* StatingTheSimpleSolution: Taylor bemoans that there's no way to teleport humans using their current system in the aftermath of the Docks Riots, saying that while it's fine for Autobots or machines, humans tend to come out of it with the consistency of wet ground beef. Wheeljack points out that there really isn't any reason why they can't spend some time figuring out how to make it human-safe, and they could probably work something out really quickly. A few hours later, Taylor is using it to meet with Kaiser.
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** Treble. Who thinks that taunting Hookwolf is a good idea. Also a case of AlcoholInducedStupidity.
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** Treble. Who thinks that taunting Hookwolf is a good idea.idea, while being a black man. Also a case of AlcoholInducedStupidity.
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* TheCorrupter: The "Red Text Voice" being. What it is is unknown (though it is mostly thought to be either Shard conflict influence or Unicron), but what it does is it speaks to capes subconsciously, implanting thoughts that nudge them into a worse headspace, and make them do bad things. Coil is urged to push his plan to greater heights, [[spoiler: Josie]] is pushed into obsessing over vengeance for [[spoiler: Saint's]] death, [[spoiler: Alexandria is encouraged to keep sacrificing her morality for the sake of the 'greater good', Eidolon has his insecurities about his power reinforced, Legend gets told that the others think of him as naive but ignores it, and what it did to Contessa is unknown, but she's basically a puppet for the Voice by now.]]
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* TheCorrupter: The "Red Text Voice" being. What it is is unknown (though it is mostly thought to be either Shard conflict influence or Unicron), but what it does is it speaks to capes subconsciously, implanting thoughts that nudge them into a worse headspace, and make them do bad things. Coil is urged to push his plan to greater heights, heights and take greater risks, like [[spoiler: attacking Autobot City]], [[spoiler: Josie]] is pushed into obsessing over vengeance for [[spoiler: Saint's]] death, [[spoiler: Alexandria is encouraged to keep sacrificing her morality for the sake of the 'greater good', Eidolon has his insecurities about his power reinforced, Legend gets told that the others think of him as naive but ignores it, and what it did to Contessa is unknown, but she's basically a puppet for the Voice by now.]]
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** It's implied, but not shown, that one of Leet's Go-Bots turns into a tank. This particular machine is destroyed by Cyclonus before it can show this off.
** Warpath turns into a bright red tank.
** It's implied, but not shown, that one of Leet's Go-Bots turns into a tank. This particular machine is destroyed by Cyclonus before it can show this off.
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** In the wake of the disaster of [[spoiler: Armsmaster accidentally killing Oni Lee with forbidden tinkertech]], Ratchet manages to order both members of the ABB and the E88 to help him set up a triage station.
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* ButtMonkey: It's a [[{{Crossover}} different universe,]] he's now a [[AdaptationalHeroism good guy,]] and people actually like him, but Waspinator can't help but be the universe's chew toy.
* CanonCharacterAllAlong:Multiplayer Multiplayer, a cape working with Uber and Leet with MesACrowd powers [[spoiler: turns out to be Spree of the Teeth.]]
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*** Once Taylor constructs the Matrix, it constantly charges from the radiation that Taylor naturally emits now and stores it in greater amounts than Taylor can safely generate. This allows her to spark human-sized 'bots.
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** Overusing her power can take a toll on Taylor's health. Sparking Predaqueen from a Dragon suit would have killed her had Panacea not been on the
*** This is implied to have been what happened in the locker, and why she had a heart attack- she accidentally sparked her first bot, Rewind, and suffered a heart attack as a result.
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* {{Fembot}}: Windblade, Arcee and Predaqueen all identify as female, especially the latter when [[spoiler: she becomes Dragon's main body]].
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*** [[spoiler: The next chapter has Windblade and Wheeljack hooked up to Taylor, and more stable, with Amy doing something to boost their sparks, but Krieg is confirmed to be dead]].dead via Leviathan]].
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* TheStarscream: Oddly for this sort of crossover, not ''the'' Starscream (WordOfGod confirms he won't be appearing); Bakuda joined the ABB with full intent on killing the leadership and taking the helm, only for Lung to be too powerful to usurp. [[spoiler: She does eventually succeed though.]]
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* TheStarscream: Oddly for this sort of crossover, not ''the''Starscream [[TropeNamer Starscream]] (WordOfGod confirms he won't be appearing); Bakuda joined the ABB with full intent on killing the leadership and taking the helm, only for Lung to be too powerful to usurp. [[spoiler: She does eventually succeed though.]]
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* AdaptationalWimp: Taylor's robots from their canon iteration. Their stats in the story make them go from about the size of a cell phone to maybe the size of an adult human at max. Their canon selves tended to range in size from "Large Adult" to "Building."
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* IShouldHaveBeenBetter: Taylor's thoughts after the Merchant raid, where Vista got badly shot up. [[spoiler: Primus gives her powers a boost.]]
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* IShouldHaveBeenBetter: Taylor's thoughts after the Merchant raid, where Vista got badly shot up. [[spoiler: Primus gives her powers a boost.boost as a result, making her TheSleepless as well.]]
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** [[spoiler:Mags of the Dragonslayers]] died some time before the start of the story.
** [[spoiler:Mags of the Dragonslayers]] died some time before the start of the story.
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** [[spoiler:Eligos gets a hole shot through his chest by Arcee in 15.6.]]
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** [[spoiler:Valefor gets shot by Taylor in 15.8.]]
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Confirmed to be why Regent abandoned Bitch. [[FreudianExcuse His nasty upbringing by Heartbreaker trained him to believe that it was every man for himself]] and so when Lung, an opponent the Undersiders couldn't possibly face, showed up, he basically put the 'I don't have to outrun the bear, I only have to outrun ''you''' joke in practice. He tripped up Matrix (who was trying to help them) in order to escape, thinking that Grue and Tattletale would be doing the same thing. Instead, they saw what he'd done as a betrayal of the team, and when he came back, made it very clear that he was unwelcome. unwelcome.
** When Saint captured Taylor, he immediately demanded the self-destruct codes for every single one of her creations. A nonplussed Taylor told him she'd never programmed anything like that, causing him to turn violent, screaming there was no way the PRT would have allowed her to deploy unchained {{AI}}s.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Victoria lays into her mum for not loving Amy more, since the reason she was at the hospital and healing everyone so much was an attempt to gain her approval. [[spoiler:And as a result, she was inside when Bakuda blew it up.]]
* TattooAsCharacterType: Some art made by the author shows that [[https://www.deviantart.com/zero-metallix/art/Amy-Dallon-More-than-Meets-the-Eye-790002719 Amy]] has a tattoo of the Autobot symbol on her upper thigh.
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** The ward that bumps into Valefor is based on [[Manga/MyHeroAcademia Katsuki Bakugo]].
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** [[spoiler:Mama Mathers get her skull crushed by Predaqueen in 15.6]].
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** [[spoiler: Taylor has to deal with the post-Leviathan situation... only for the Fallen to show up]].
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: [[spoiler: In a presumablyMatrix induced Matrix-induced dream, Solus Prime reminds Amy that she chose to use her powers for good]].good when it would have been easy to go down a dark path with them or try and pretend that they didn't exist, and gives Amy the shield she had been forging]].
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