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Queen Sunsparkle loosely rules over Ponyville, a small community of just under twelve ponies. There used to be more ponies but a plague killed most of the kingdom's ponies. Queen Sunsparkle may not be an important ruler - she was just a hedge princess prior to her coronation - but she takes her job seriously. With no unicorn or pegasi left in Ponyville, it's up to Sunsparkle to ensure her kingdom survives.
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Queen Sunsparkle loosely rules over the kingdom of Ponyville, a small community of just under twelve ponies. There used to be more ponies but a plague killed most of the kingdom's ponies.them. Queen Sunsparkle may not be an important ruler - she was just a hedge princess prior to her coronation - but she takes her job seriously. With no unicorn or pegasi left in Ponyville, it's up to Sunsparkle to ensure her kingdom survives.
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''Wishing Well'' is a ''Franchise/MyLittlePony'' fanfic by [=BlueSkyScribe=]. It is based on the early ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyG3'' toys.
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* RiteOfPassageNameChange:
Wishing Well: Foals are named "Baby [x]" and are born looking like their parents. Upon reaching adolescence, they are renamed during Naming Day. This correlates with ponies developing their adult colors.
Wishing Well: Foals are named "Baby [x]" and are born looking like their parents. Upon reaching adolescence, they are renamed during Naming Day. This correlates with ponies developing their adult colors.
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* RiteOfPassageNameChange:
Wishing Well:RiteOfPassageNameChange: Foals are named "Baby [x]" and are born looking like their parents. Upon reaching adolescence, they are renamed during Naming Day. This correlates with ponies developing their adult colors.
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** Razzaroo and Minty are brothers.
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** Razzaroo and Minty are brothers.brothers.
* RiteOfPassageNameChange:
Wishing Well: Foals are named "Baby [x]" and are born looking like their parents. Upon reaching adolescence, they are renamed during Naming Day. This correlates with ponies developing their adult colors.
* RiteOfPassageNameChange:
Wishing Well: Foals are named "Baby [x]" and are born looking like their parents. Upon reaching adolescence, they are renamed during Naming Day. This correlates with ponies developing their adult colors.
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Queen Sunsparkle loosely rules over Ponyville, a small community of just under twelve ponies. There used to be more ponies but a plague killed most of the kingdoms ponies. Queen Sunsparkle may not be an important ruler - she was just a hedge princess prior to her coronation - but she takes her job seriously. With no unicorn or pegasi left in Ponyville, it's up to Sunsparkle to ensure her kingdom survives.
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Queen Sunsparkle loosely rules over Ponyville, a small community of just under twelve ponies. There used to be more ponies but a plague killed most of the kingdoms kingdom's ponies. Queen Sunsparkle may not be an important ruler - she was just a hedge princess prior to her coronation - but she takes her job seriously. With no unicorn or pegasi left in Ponyville, it's up to Sunsparkle to ensure her kingdom survives.
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* DarkFic: The tone is much darker and more mature than the saccharine G3 toys, or even the G1 works. The story deals with issues such as politics and plagues,
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* DarkFic: The tone is much darker and more mature than the saccharine G3 toys, or even the G1 works. The story deals with issues such as politics and plagues,plagues.
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* TheDitz: Deconstructed with Rainbow Dash. He's described as "vapid and innocent", but this is essentially due to brain damage. He was fond of eating a fruit that later found out to cause short-term memory loss.
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* TheDitz: Deconstructed with Rainbow Dash. He's described as "vapid and innocent", but this is due to essentially due to brain damage. He was fond of eating a fruit that was later found out to cause short-term memory loss.loss. Rainbow Dash's memory issues and [[ManChild childish personality]] make him unpopular and awkward to be around.
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* HoldYourHippogriffs: The term didn't give a flying [[labelnote:clod of manure]]shit[[/labelnote]]" is used once.
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* HoldYourHippogriffs: The term didn't "didn't give a flying [[labelnote:clod of manure]]shit[[/labelnote]]" is used once.
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Queen Sunsparkle loosely rules over Ponyville, a small community of just under twelve ponies. There used to be more ponies but a plague killed most of the areas ponies. Queen Sunsparkle may not be an important ruler - she was just a hedge princess prior to her coronation - but she takes her job seriously. With no unicorn or pegasi left in Ponyville, it's up to Sunsparkle to ensure her kingdom survives.
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Queen Sunsparkle loosely rules over Ponyville, a small community of just under twelve ponies. There used to be more ponies but a plague killed most of the areas kingdoms ponies. Queen Sunsparkle may not be an important ruler - she was just a hedge princess prior to her coronation - but she takes her job seriously. With no unicorn or pegasi left in Ponyville, it's up to Sunsparkle to ensure her kingdom survives.
* BelligerentSexualTension Wysteria and Sparkleworks have a voltaile, sometimes [[DomesticAbuse physical]], relationship. They always argue and Sparkleworks sometimes ends up bruised, but they always make up in the end. During this make-up period they're SickeninglySweethearts.
* DeadFic: Both ''Wishing Well'' and ''Paste Tense'' are unfinished. The former hasn't been updated since March 2004, while the latter hasn't been updated since July 2009.
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* Really700YearsOld: Starshine is so old that there are [[LivingLegend legends about him]]. Myths even cite that he's older than the sun itself, but that's unlikely.
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* Really700YearsOld: Starshine is so old that there are [[LivingLegend legends about him]]. Myths even cite that he's [[TimeAbyss older than the sun itself, itself]], but that's unlikely.
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** Razzaroo and Minty are brothers.
* SlapSlapKiss: Wysteria and Sparkleworks have a voltaile, sometimes [[DomesticAbuse physical]], relationship. They always argue and Sparkleworks sometimes ends up bruised, but they always make up in the end.
* SlapSlapKiss: Wysteria and Sparkleworks have a voltaile, sometimes [[DomesticAbuse physical]], relationship. They always argue and Sparkleworks sometimes ends up bruised, but they always make up in the end.
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** Razzaroo and Minty are brothers.
* SlapSlapKiss: Wysteria and Sparkleworks have a voltaile, sometimes [[DomesticAbuse physical]], relationship. They always argue and Sparkleworks sometimes ends up bruised, but they always make up in the end.brothers.
* SlapSlapKiss: Wysteria and Sparkleworks have a voltaile, sometimes [[DomesticAbuse physical]], relationship. They always argue and Sparkleworks sometimes ends up bruised, but they always make up in the end.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2764849/1/Past-Tense Past Tense]]'' is an unrelated story set in the same universe. It's set prior to ''Wishing Well'' and is themed around Kimono visiting a graveyard, where he sees a family mourning the recent loss of their mother.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2764849/1/Past-Tense Past Tense]]'' is an unrelated story set in the same universe. It's set prior to ''Wishing Well'' and is themed around Kimono visiting a graveyard, where he sees a family mourning the recent loss of their mother. It takes place in the early stages of the plague mentioned in ''Wishing Well''.
** Minty calls Razaroo "Roo", but Razaroo doesn't like that.
* HoldYourHippogriffs: The term didn't give a flying [[labelnote:clod of manure]]shit[[/labelnote]]" is used once.
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* ThePlague: An illness known as the "Three-Day Drop" (named for its quickness) killed off all the unicorns and pegasi in Ponyville. It also killed most of the earthlings. Ponyville became cut off from the rest of Ponyland because no one wanted the potentially contagious ponies near them,
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Pinkie Pie's mother is given as Cotton Candy.
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Pinkie Pie's mother is given as Cotton Candy.
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* ThePlague: An illness known as the "Three-Day Drop" (named for its quickness) killed off all the unicorns and pegasi in Ponyville. It also killed most of the earthlings. Ponyville became cut off from the rest of Ponyland because no one wanted the potentially contagious ponies near them,
them.
*RelatedInTheAdaptation: Really700YearsOld: Starshine is so old that there are [[LivingLegend legends about him]]. Myths even cite that he's older than the sun itself, but that's unlikely.
* RelatedInTheAdaptation:
** Pinkie Pie's mother is given as CottonCandy.Candy.
** Razzaroo and Minty are brothers.
* SlapSlapKiss: Wysteria and Sparkleworks have a voltaile, sometimes [[DomesticAbuse physical]], relationship. They always argue and Sparkleworks sometimes ends up bruised, but they always make up in the end.
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation:
** Pinkie Pie's mother is given as Cotton
** Razzaroo and Minty are brothers.
* SlapSlapKiss: Wysteria and Sparkleworks have a voltaile, sometimes [[DomesticAbuse physical]], relationship. They always argue and Sparkleworks sometimes ends up bruised, but they always make up in the end.
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* CurseCutShort: In a past event, Sparkleworks called Sweetberry "a total bi-", but was cut off when Sweetberry entered the room. Rainbow Dash had understood what Sparkleworks was saying, but Sweetberry heard enough and gave him a black eye.
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* EmbarrassingNickname: Baby Tiger Lily hates being called "Baby" due to her nearing adolescence. However, her brother's nickname of "BLT" is even more embarrassing.
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* EmbarrassingNickname: DisabledInTheAdaptation: Rainbow Dash, now a [[GenderFlip male instead of a female]], suffers from short-term memory loss. In canon she has no such issue.
* TheDitz: Deconstructed with Rainbow Dash. He's described as "vapid and innocent", but this is essentially due to brain damage. He was fond of eating a fruit that later found out to cause short-term memory loss.
* EmbarrassingNickname:
** Baby Tiger Lily hates being called "Baby" due to her nearing adolescence. However, her brother's nickname of "BLT" is even moreembarrassing.embarrassing.
** Minty likes to call Kimono "Kimmy", which he hates.
* TheDitz: Deconstructed with Rainbow Dash. He's described as "vapid and innocent", but this is essentially due to brain damage. He was fond of eating a fruit that later found out to cause short-term memory loss.
* EmbarrassingNickname:
** Baby Tiger Lily hates being called "Baby" due to her nearing adolescence. However, her brother's nickname of "BLT" is even more
** Minty likes to call Kimono "Kimmy", which he hates.
* MamasBabyPapasMaybe: None of the stallions in Ponyville will admit to being the father of Cotton Candy's daughter Pinkie Pie, so there's much rumor on who it could be.
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* ThePlague: An illness known as the "Three-Day Drop" (named for its quickness) killed off all the unicorns and pegasi in Ponyville. It also killed most of the earthlings. Ponyville became cut off from the rest of Ponyland because no one wanted the potentially contagious ponies near them,
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* TheNondescript: Rainbow Dash is described as a very nice but incredibly forgettable pony.
* ThePlague: An illness known as the "Three-Day Drop" (named for its quickness) killed off all the unicorns and pegasi in Ponyville. It also killed most of the earthlings. Ponyville became cut off from the rest of Ponyland because no one wanted the potentially contagious ponies nearthem,them,
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Pinkie Pie's mother is given as Cotton Candy.
* ThePlague: An illness known as the "Three-Day Drop" (named for its quickness) killed off all the unicorns and pegasi in Ponyville. It also killed most of the earthlings. Ponyville became cut off from the rest of Ponyland because no one wanted the potentially contagious ponies near
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Pinkie Pie's mother is given as Cotton Candy.
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Queen Sunsparkle loosely rules over Ponyville, a small community of just under twelve ponies. There used to be more ponies but a plague killed most of the areas ponies. Queen Sunsparkle may not be an important ruler - she was just a hedge princess prior to her coronation - but she takes her job seriously.
seriously. With no unicorn or pegasi left in Ponyville, it's up to Sunsparkle to ensure her kingdom survives.
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* NamingCeremony: Foals all have the title "Baby" attached to their names, Upon reaching adolescence, they rename themselves on "Naming Day".
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* NamingCeremony: Foals all have the title "Baby" attached to their names, Upon reaching adolescence, they rename themselves on "Naming Day".Day".
* ThePlague: An illness known as the "Three-Day Drop" (named for its quickness) killed off all the unicorns and pegasi in Ponyville. It also killed most of the earthlings. Ponyville became cut off from the rest of Ponyland because no one wanted the potentially contagious ponies near them,
* ThePlague: An illness known as the "Three-Day Drop" (named for its quickness) killed off all the unicorns and pegasi in Ponyville. It also killed most of the earthlings. Ponyville became cut off from the rest of Ponyland because no one wanted the potentially contagious ponies near them,
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Queen Sunsparkle rules over Ponyville, a small community of just under twelve ponies.
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Queen Sunsparkle loosely rules over Ponyville, a small community of just under twelve ponies.
ponies. There used to be more ponies but a plague killed most of the areas ponies. Queen Sunsparkle may not be an important ruler - she was just a hedge princess prior to her coronation - but she takes her job seriously.
* DarkFic: The tone is much darker and more mature than the saccharine G3 toys, or even the G1 works. The story deals with issues such as politics and plagues,
* FamilyThemeNaming: Baby Star Shadow named herself Sunsparkle to signify independence from her mother, Star Shadow.
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* MythologyGag: The first letter Sunsparkle receives is from G1's Majesty.
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* MythologyGag: The first letter Sunsparkle receives is from G1's Majesty. G1's princess ponies are also referenced in passing.
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''Wishing Well'' is a ''Franchise/MyLittlePony'' fanfic by [=BlueSkyScribe=]. It is based on the early ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyG3'' toys.
Queen Sunsparkle rules over Ponyville, a small community of just under twelve ponies.
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2764849/1/Past-Tense Past Tense]]'' is an unrelated story set in the same universe. It's set prior to ''Wishing Well'' and is themed around Kimono visiting a graveyard, where he sees a family mourning the recent loss of their mother.
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!!These fanfics provide examples of:
* EmbarrassingNickname: Baby Tiger Lily hates being called "Baby" due to her nearing adolescence. However, her brother's nickname of "BLT" is even more embarrassing.
* GenderEqualsBreed: Colts are born resembling their father and fillies are born resembling their mother. As they age, they gain more individual colors.
* GenderFlip: G3 doesn't have any stallions. In order to introduce males to the story, some of the ponies are gender-flipped. For example, Kimono and Minty are now male.
* MythologyGag: The first letter Sunsparkle receives is from G1's Majesty.
* NamingCeremony: Foals all have the title "Baby" attached to their names, Upon reaching adolescence, they rename themselves on "Naming Day".
Queen Sunsparkle rules over Ponyville, a small community of just under twelve ponies.
''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2764849/1/Past-Tense Past Tense]]'' is an unrelated story set in the same universe. It's set prior to ''Wishing Well'' and is themed around Kimono visiting a graveyard, where he sees a family mourning the recent loss of their mother.
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!!These fanfics provide examples of:
* EmbarrassingNickname: Baby Tiger Lily hates being called "Baby" due to her nearing adolescence. However, her brother's nickname of "BLT" is even more embarrassing.
* GenderEqualsBreed: Colts are born resembling their father and fillies are born resembling their mother. As they age, they gain more individual colors.
* GenderFlip: G3 doesn't have any stallions. In order to introduce males to the story, some of the ponies are gender-flipped. For example, Kimono and Minty are now male.
* MythologyGag: The first letter Sunsparkle receives is from G1's Majesty.
* NamingCeremony: Foals all have the title "Baby" attached to their names, Upon reaching adolescence, they rename themselves on "Naming Day".
