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* ChekhovsGunman: Nyma gets an expanded role in the second season after a brief appearance for her canon theft of the Blue Lion.
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* ChekhovsGunman: ChekovMIA: [[spoiler: Keith's not-really-deceased mother Keena returns]]
** Sam Holt has been missing since being taken by the Galra [[spoiler: and then he appears as Rollo's cellmate in the final Project Robeast labs in the final chapter of ''Someplace Like Home''. ''Shadows of Stars'' gives him several scenes focusing on his efforts to sabotage the labs and free the other prisoners]].
* ChekovsGun:
** Project Balmera is only mentioned in passing in ''Another Word for Never'' before becoming a major subplot in ''Someplace Like Home''
** New Altea is mentioned throughout the first two stories, and finally appears in ''Shadows of Stars''.
** Unfired as of Chapter 8, but in ''Shadows of Stars'', [[spoiler: Keith's mother gives him a secret mission that the audience thus far is not privy to. The only things known are that hearing the details makes Matt furious with Keith's mom, and the idea that his mother thinks he can do it causes Keith to question whether or not he's a good person]].
* ChekhovsGunman:
** Nyma gets an expanded role in the second season after a brief appearance for her canon theft of the BlueLion.Lion.
** Commander Iverson has a more direct role in the plot after the end of the first story.
** Sam Holt has been missing since being taken by the Galra [[spoiler: and then he appears as Rollo's cellmate in the final Project Robeast labs in the final chapter of ''Someplace Like Home''. ''Shadows of Stars'' gives him several scenes focusing on his efforts to sabotage the labs and free the other prisoners]].
* ChekovsGun:
** Project Balmera is only mentioned in passing in ''Another Word for Never'' before becoming a major subplot in ''Someplace Like Home''
** New Altea is mentioned throughout the first two stories, and finally appears in ''Shadows of Stars''.
** Unfired as of Chapter 8, but in ''Shadows of Stars'', [[spoiler: Keith's mother gives him a secret mission that the audience thus far is not privy to. The only things known are that hearing the details makes Matt furious with Keith's mom, and the idea that his mother thinks he can do it causes Keith to question whether or not he's a good person]].
* ChekhovsGunman:
** Nyma gets an expanded role in the second season after a brief appearance for her canon theft of the Blue
** Commander Iverson has a more direct role in the plot after the end of the first story.
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* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/11632725 Kiss, Fake it Better]]: Another backstory fic focused on [[spoiler: Mel's time on Earth babysitting Lance and preparing him for the opssibility of becoming the Blue Paladin one day.]]
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* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/11632725 Kiss, Fake it Better]]: Another backstory fic focused on [[spoiler: Mel's Meri's time on Earth babysitting Lance and preparing him for the opssibility of becoming the Blue Paladin one day.]]
* AmbiguousSyntax: Thace and Nadezda talk about Keith's dead mother without ever specificly say dead. [[spoiler: It turns out her death was faked when her cover was blown]].
* DaddyHadAGoodReasonForAbandoningYou: Keith's dad died shortly before he first met Shiro. [[spoiler: His mom faked her death and fled to New Altea when her cover was blown]].
* MoleInCharge: Nadezda is an agent of The Accords undercover as head of the Galra Empire's StateSec
* OocIsSeriousBusiness: Coran is absolutely terrified when he learns that there was [[spoiler: a viable Vkullor egg buried beneath Earth's surface]].
* OperationBlank: Project Robeast, Project CORE, and Project Balmera.
* OperationBlank: Project Robeast, Project CORE, and Project Balmera.
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** Commander Anamuri, leader of the Kera Sector RebellionRebellion.
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** Mel, a close friend of Allura's who became the Blue Paladin temporarily after the death of Allura's mother. [[spoiler: And has been living in hiding as Lance's babysitter and CoolAunt]].
* OocIsSeriousBusiness: Coran is absolutely terrified when he learns that there was [[spoiler: a viable Vkullor egg buried beneath Earth's surface]].
* OperationBlank: Project Robeast, Project CORE, and Project Balmera.
* OocIsSeriousBusiness: Coran is absolutely terrified when he learns that there was [[spoiler: a viable Vkullor egg buried beneath Earth's surface]].
* OperationBlank: Project Robeast, Project CORE, and Project Balmera.
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** Mel, Meri, a close friend of Allura's who became the Blue Paladin temporarily after the death of Allura's mother. [[spoiler: And has been living in hiding as Lance's babysitter and CoolAunt]].
* OocIsSeriousBusiness: Coran is absolutely terrified when he learns that there was [[spoiler: a viable Vkullor egg buried beneath Earth's surface]].** Nadezda, an agent of The Accords and Thace's S.O.
*OperationBlank: Project Robeast, Project CORE, ParentalAbandonment: [[spoiler: When her cover as a spy for the Accords was blown, Keith's mom left him with his father, a die-hard Zarkon loyalist, faked her death, and Project Balmera.fled to New Altea]].
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* {{Transsexual}}: Pidge is non-binary, and Akira is a transgender.
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* {{Transsexual}}: Pidge is non-binary, and Akira is a transgender.transgender.
* TwoAliasesOneCharacter: The Spymaster, the leader of the Accords [[spoiler: is Keith's mother, Keena]].
* TwoAliasesOneCharacter: The Spymaster, the leader of the Accords [[spoiler: is Keith's mother, Keena]].
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* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/7638178/chapters/17390476 Another Word For Never]]: The first "season of this alternate universe.
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/8465635 Mama Holt's Army]]: A side story focusing on the efforts of Pidge's mom, Shiro's brother, Hunk's uncle, and Lance's cousin to uncover the truth about what happened to their loved ones that serves to set up their roles in the second season.
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/8811013 Someplace Like Home]]: The second season, focusing on the team as they adjust to [[spoiler: having multiple people chosen as Paladins at the same time]]
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/8465635 Mama Holt's Army]]: A side story focusing on the efforts of Pidge's mom, Shiro's brother, Hunk's uncle, and Lance's cousin to uncover the truth about what happened to their loved ones that serves to set up their roles in the second season.
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/8811013 Someplace Like Home]]: The second season, focusing on the team as they adjust to [[spoiler: having multiple people chosen as Paladins at the same time]]
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* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/7638178/chapters/17390476 Another Word For Never]]: The first "season "season" of this alternate universe.
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/8465635 Mama Holt's Army]]: A side story focusing on the efforts of Pidge's mom, Shiro's brother, Hunk's uncle, and Lance's cousin to uncover the truth about what happened to their loved ones that serves to set up their roles in the secondseason."season".
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/8811013 Someplace Like Home]]: The secondseason, "season", focusing on the team as they adjust to [[spoiler: having multiple people chosen as Paladins at the same time]]
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/8465635 Mama Holt's Army]]: A side story focusing on the efforts of Pidge's mom, Shiro's brother, Hunk's uncle, and Lance's cousin to uncover the truth about what happened to their loved ones that serves to set up their roles in the second
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/8811013 Someplace Like Home]]: The second
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* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/12231306 Shadows of Stars]]: The third season. Ongoing and 3 chapters in as of October 16th, 2017.
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* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/12231306 Shadows of Stars]]: The third season. "season". Ongoing and 3 8 chapters in as of October 16th, December 18th, 2017.
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* LockedIntoStrangeness: Besides Shiro's skunk stripe, Matt [[spoiler ends up with crystaline scars on the side of his face and one of his eyes turns electric blue]].
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* LockedIntoStrangeness: Besides Shiro's skunk stripe, Matt [[spoiler [[spoiler: ends up with crystaline scars on the side of his face and one of his eyes turns electric blue]].
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** Commander Anamuri, leader of the Kera Sector Rebellion
** Jaya, one of the younger members of the Kera Rebellion.
** Jaya, one of the younger members of the Kera Rebellion.
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* Hunk has Anxiety disorder, Lance has ADHD
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* Hunk has Anxiety disorder, GAD and Lance has ADHD ADHD, while Pidge and Keith are both Autistc.
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** Commander Orgul in ''Another Word for Never''.
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** Commander Orgul serves as the main villain of Shiro and Keith's storyline in ''Another Word for Never''.
* BigBadDuumvirate: Zarkon and Haggar, with Haggar being the most direct threat Team Voltron faces on a semi-regular basis, while Zarkon serves as a GreaterScopeVillain.
*** Shiro and Keith are their own separete group in the first "season" before being folded into Team Voltron in the final chapters.
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** Resistance fighters such as Thace and Rollo
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** Resistance fighters such as Thace Thace, Rollo, and Rollo Nyma.
* CatapultNightmare: Matt has one in ''Another Word for Never'' after a dream about what Shiro's going through.
* CatapultNightmare: Matt has one in ''Another Word for Never'' after a dream about what Shiro's going through.
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** While the Paladins' age is never addressed in the actual show, here, the fact that Shiro and Matt are the only adult humans in the group [[spoiler: until Val becomes a Paladin at least]], is a source of tension with everyone's families back on Earth.
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** While the Paladins' age is never addressed in the actual show, here, the fact that Shiro and Matt are the only adult humans in the group [[spoiler: until Val becomes a Paladin at least]], is a source of tension with everyone's families back on Earth.Earth in ''Shadows of Stars''.
* GreaterScopeVillain: Zarkon is this, having only fought the Paladins once at the conclusion of ''Someplace Like Home'' while Haggar serves as a more direct antagonist.
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* ProperlyParanoid: [[spoiler: The people of New Altea are hesitant to get directly involved in the war, but they have valid arguments for their position.]]
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* ProperlyParanoid: [[spoiler: The people of New Altea are hesitant to get directly involved in the war, but they have valid arguments for their position.]]position]].
* PsychicDreamsForEveryone: Matt has a dream about Shiro's ordeals, as mentioned above under CatapultNightmare.
* PsychicDreamsForEveryone: Matt has a dream about Shiro's ordeals, as mentioned above under CatapultNightmare.
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* PartyScattering: The ambush on Vel-17 results in Lance, Allura, and Matt being wormholed across the galaxy, with no way to contact the others, or for the others to know if they're still alive. [[spoiler: They reunite at the battle of Beroul at the end of the fic.]]
* PostPeakOil: A sci-fi version. Balmerans across the universe have become an endangered species thanks to Galra mining efforts, and Zarkon needs to find a new source of crystals to keep his war machine together. [[spoiler: Project Balmera is an attempt to remedy this by harvesting humans a living crystal farms]].
* PostPeakOil: A sci-fi version. Balmerans across the universe have become an endangered species thanks to Galra mining efforts, and Zarkon needs to find a new source of crystals to keep his war machine together. [[spoiler: Project Balmera is an attempt to remedy this by harvesting humans a living crystal farms]].
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* PartyScattering: The ambush on Vel-17 results in Lance, Allura, and Matt being wormholed across the galaxy, with no way to contact the others, or for the others to know if they're still alive. [[spoiler: They reunite at the battle of Beroul at the end of the fic.]]
first fic]].
* PlayingWithFire: [[spoiler: Matt's newfound ability to manipulate Quintessence manifests as fire powers]].
* PostPeakOil: A sci-fi version. Balmerans across the universe have become an endangered species thanks to Galra mining efforts, and Zarkon needs to find a new source of crystals to keep his war machinetogether. going. [[spoiler: Project Balmera is an attempt to remedy this by harvesting humans a as living crystal farms]].
* PlayingWithFire: [[spoiler: Matt's newfound ability to manipulate Quintessence manifests as fire powers]].
* PostPeakOil: A sci-fi version. Balmerans across the universe have become an endangered species thanks to Galra mining efforts, and Zarkon needs to find a new source of crystals to keep his war machine
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** Meri, the previous blue Paladin, was 140 when she died. [[spoiler: And now she's 5 years older than Allura after the time she's spent on Earth taking care of Lance.]]
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** Meri, the previous blue Paladin, was 140 when she died. [[spoiler: And now she's 5 years older than Allura after the time she's spent on Earth taking care of Lance.]]Lance]].
* RescueRomance: [[spoiler: Nyma and Val hook up a few days after the latter is rescued from Commander Vanda's prison ship]].
* RescueRomance: [[spoiler: Nyma and Val hook up a few days after the latter is rescued from Commander Vanda's prison ship]].
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* OocIsSeriosBusiness: Coran is absolutely terrified when he learns that there was [[spoiler: a viable Vkullor egg buried beneath Earth's surface]].
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* OocIsSeriosBusiness: OocIsSeriousBusiness: Coran is absolutely terrified when he learns that there was [[spoiler: a viable Vkullor egg buried beneath Earth's surface]].
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-->System X-9-Y was indicated as the base of operations for Project Balmera. [[note]] The designation used by the Galra to refer to Earth's solar system in the series. [[/note]]
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-->System X-9-Y was indicated as the base of operations for Project Balmera. [[note]] The designation used by the Galra to refer to Earth's solar system in the series. [[/note]]
-->System X-9-Y was indicated as the base of operations for Project Balmera. [[note]] The designation used by the Galra to refer to Earth's solar system in the series. [[/note]]
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* AdaptationOriginConnection: [[spoiler: Thace is Keith's uncle.]]
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* AdaptationOriginConnection: [[spoiler: Thace is Keith's uncle.]] uncle]].
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* AscendedExtra: [[spoiler: Nyma]], Shay, and [[spoiler: Reyner]] end up joining the team full time. Rollo also features as an important character as well.
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* BadassInDistress: [[spoiler: Shiro is captured by Haggar halfway through ''Someplace Like Home'']]. [[spoiler: And then Allura is captured when they try to rescue him.]]
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* BadassInDistress: [[spoiler: Shiro is captured by Haggar halfway through ''Someplace Like Home'']]. [[spoiler: And then Allura is captured when they try to rescue him.]]him]].
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* BeAllMySinsRemembered: Shiro has a habit of blaming himself for the things he did to maintain his cover in ''Another Word for Never'' [[spoiler: Especially while he and Allura are under Haggar's control in ''Someplace Like Home'']].
* BetaCouple: Nyma and [[spoiler: Val]]
** Also Allura and [[spoiler: Mel]].
* BetaCouple: Nyma and [[spoiler: Val]]
** Also Allura and [[spoiler: Mel]].
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* BeAllMySinsRemembered: Shiro has a habit of blaming himself for the things he did to maintain his cover in ''Another Word for Never'' [[spoiler: Especially Even more so while he and Allura are under Haggar's control in ''Someplace Like Home'']].
* BetaCouple: Nyma and [[spoiler:Val]]
Val]].
** Also Allura and [[spoiler:Mel]].Meri]].
* BetaCouple: Nyma and [[spoiler:
** Also Allura and [[spoiler:
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Shiro and Allura midway through ''Someplace Like Home''.]]
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Shiro and Allura midway through ''Someplace Like Home''.]]Home'']].
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** Thace, Deza, and the agents of The Accords.
* CerebusRetcon: [[spoiler: In this fic, the Galaxy Garrison already knew about the Galra, and had offered up the Kerberos crew as a sacrifice.]]
* CerebusRetcon: [[spoiler: In this fic, the Galaxy Garrison already knew about the Galra, and had offered up the Kerberos crew as a sacrifice.]]
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** Thace, Deza, Resistance fighters such as Thace and the agents of The Accords.
Rollo
* CerebusRetcon: [[spoiler: In this fic, the Galaxy Garrison already knew about the Galra, and had offered up the Kerberos crew as asacrifice.]]sacrifice]].
* CerebusRetcon: [[spoiler: In this fic, the Galaxy Garrison already knew about the Galra, and had offered up the Kerberos crew as a
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* TheChosenMany: [[spoiler: At the climax of ''Another Word for Never'', the Lions start picking up multiple Paladins]]. ''Someplace Like Home'' reveals that this is because over the last several generations of Paladins, no single pilot has ever been able to take their lion to its full potential on their own, so the lions have decided on multiple paladins as a way to maximize Voltron's power.]]
* CynicismCatalyst: The rest of their crew dying in a SenselessSacrifice is the reason Nyla is so cynical.
* DarkerAndEdgier: While the fics still maintain the comedic elements of the show, the dramatic moments of the Duality verse are much more intense, and the action sequences more violent, than in canon, with several chapters focused on the huma characters dealing with the fact that they've still technically kids thrown into a war and the fact that they're going to have to take lives to win.
* CynicismCatalyst: The rest of their crew dying in a SenselessSacrifice is the reason Nyla is so cynical.
* DarkerAndEdgier: While the fics still maintain the comedic elements of the show, the dramatic moments of the Duality verse are much more intense, and the action sequences more violent, than in canon, with several chapters focused on the huma characters dealing with the fact that they've still technically kids thrown into a war and the fact that they're going to have to take lives to win.
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* ChildSoldiers: A consequence of the Galra empire spreading across the universe is that few childen have the luxury of ''not'' fighting.
** While the Paladins' age is never addressed in the actual show, here, the fact that Shiro and Matt are the only adult humans in the group [[spoiler: until Val becomes a Paladin at least]], is a source of tension with everyone's families back on Earth.
** Keith in particular, as he tells Lance the children of Galra officers start training at the age of 8.
** There's also Jeya, a rebel fighter whose parents died when she was a younger, leaving her in the rebellion alone.
* TheChosenMany: [[spoiler: At the climax of ''Another Word for Never'', the Lions start picking up multiple Paladins]]. [[spoiler: ''Someplace Like Home'' reveals that this is becauseover the last several generations of Paladins, no single pilot has ever been able to take Paladin is physically capable of taking their lion to its full potential on their own, so the lions have decided on multiple paladins as a way to maximize Voltron's power.]]
power]].
* CynicismCatalyst: The rest oftheir her crew dying in a SenselessSacrifice is the reason Nyla Nyma is so bitter and cynical.
* DarkerAndEdgier: While the fics still maintain the comedic elements of the show, the dramatic moments of the Duality verse are much more intense, and the action sequences more violent, than in canon, with several chapters focused on thehuma human characters dealing with the fact that they've still technically kids thrown into a war and the fact that they're going to have to take lives to win.
** While the Paladins' age is never addressed in the actual show, here, the fact that Shiro and Matt are the only adult humans in the group [[spoiler: until Val becomes a Paladin at least]], is a source of tension with everyone's families back on Earth.
** Keith in particular, as he tells Lance the children of Galra officers start training at the age of 8.
** There's also Jeya, a rebel fighter whose parents died when she was a younger, leaving her in the rebellion alone.
* TheChosenMany: [[spoiler: At the climax of ''Another Word for Never'', the Lions start picking up multiple Paladins]]. [[spoiler: ''Someplace Like Home'' reveals that this is because
* CynicismCatalyst: The rest of
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** ''Another Word for Never'' has the Battle of Beroul, where Voltron makes it's official debut in the war against the Galra and [[spoiler: turns a doomed stalemate into an outright victory for resistance forces.]]
** ''Someplace Like Home'' ends with a climactic battle to defend Earth against Zarkon's main fleet, [[spoiler: completely destroying everything related to Project: Balmera.]]
** ''Someplace Like Home'' ends with a climactic battle to defend Earth against Zarkon's main fleet, [[spoiler: completely destroying everything related to Project: Balmera.]]
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** ''Another Word for Never'' has the Battle of Beroul, where Voltron makes it's official debut in the war against the Galra and [[spoiler: turns a doomed stalemate last stand into an outright victory for resistance forces.]]
forces]].
** ''Someplace Like Home'' ends with a climactic battle to defend Earth against Zarkon's main fleet, [[spoiler: completely destroying everything related toProject: Balmera.]]Project Balmera]].
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* FacialHorror: [[spoiler: Matt develops crystal scars on his face after he's blasted with Quintessence by a brainwashed Shiro in ''Someplace Like Home.'']]
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* LesCollaborateurs: [[spoiler: Iverson and most of the senior officers of Galaxy Garrison are willingly collaberating with the Galra in Project Balmera.]]
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* LesCollaborateurs: [[spoiler: Iverson and most of the senior officers of Galaxy Garrison are willingly collaberating with the Galra in Project Balmera.]]Balmera]].
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* LockedIntoStrangeness: Besides Shiro's skunk stripe, Matt [[spoiler ends up with Quintessance-infused scars on the side of his face and one of his eyes turns the color of Balmeran crystals]].
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* LockedIntoStrangeness: Besides Shiro's skunk stripe, Matt [[spoiler ends up with Quintessance-infused crystaline scars on the side of his face and one of his eyes turns the color of Balmeran crystals]].electric blue]].
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: [[spoiler: The team's attempt to rescue Shiro from Haggar in ''Someplace Like Home'' results in Allura getting captured, Keith and Lance in critical condition, and the Black Lion captured by Zarkon.]]
* NonIndicativeName: Zarkon's princes. Since he's 10,000 years old, Zarkon never had an biological children. His inner circle have taken to calling themselves his Princes because he can't be everywhere at once.
* NonIndicativeName: Zarkon's princes. Since he's 10,000 years old, Zarkon never had an biological children. His inner circle have taken to calling themselves his Princes because he can't be everywhere at once.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: [[spoiler: The team's attempt to rescue Shiro from Haggar in ''Someplace Like Home'' results in Allura getting captured, Keith and Lance in critical condition, and the Black Lion captured by Zarkon.]]
Zarkon]].
* NonIndicativeName: Zarkon's princes. Since he's 10,000 years old, Zarkon never had an biological children. His inner circle have taken to calling themselves his Princes because he can't be everywhere at once.
* NonIndicativeName: Zarkon's princes. Since he's 10,000 years old, Zarkon never had an biological children. His inner circle have taken to calling themselves his Princes because he can't be everywhere at once.
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* OperationBlank: Project: Robeast, Project: CORE, and Project: Balmera.
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* OperationBlank: Project: Project Robeast, Project: Project CORE, and Project: Project Balmera.
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* ShaggyDogStory: Shiro and Keith's efforts to sabotage and undermine the Galra invasion of Yaltin end in vain when Zarkon grows frustrated with the drain on the empire's resources and sends Haggar to [[WorldWreckingWave harvest the Quintessance of the planet, killing every living thing on the surface.]]
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* ShaggyDogStory: Shiro and Keith's efforts to sabotage and undermine the Galra invasion of Yaltin end in vain when Zarkon grows frustrated with the drain on the empire's resources and sends Haggar to [[WorldWreckingWave harvest the Quintessance of the planet, killing every living thing on the surface.]]surface]].
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** ''Someplace Like Home'' ends with a climactic battle to defend Earth against Zarkon's main fleet, completely destroying everything related to Project: Balmera.
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** ''Someplace Like Home'' ends with a climactic battle to defend Earth against Zarkon's main fleet, [[spoiler: completely destroying everything related to Project: Balmera. Balmera.]]
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* Hunk has Anxiety disorder, Lance has ADHD
* AmbiguouslyGay: ''One Week to Say Goodbye'' reveals that Coran had an unrequited crush on King Alfor, but it's unclear whether or not he's exclusively attracted to men.
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* BadassGay: Nyma.
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* BadassAndChildDuo: Lance and [[spoiler: the Altean child he rescues from Haggar's flagship in ''Someplace Like Home'']].
* BadassGay: Nyma.
* BadassGay: Nyma.
* CastHerd: Because of the larger than canon ensemble cast, the characters are broken up as follows:
** Allura, Coran, and the Paladins.
** The Paladins' family members back on Earth.
** The Galra refugees liberated from the work camps of Revinor.
** Thace, Deza, and the agents of The Accords.
** Allura, Coran, and the Paladins.
** The Paladins' family members back on Earth.
** The Galra refugees liberated from the work camps of Revinor.
** Thace, Deza, and the agents of The Accords.
* ChekhovsGunman: Nyma gets an expanded role in the second season after a brief appearance for her canon theft of the Blue Lion.
* TheChosenMany: [[spoiler: At the climax of ''Another Word for Never'', the Lions start picking up multiple Paladins]]. ''Someplace Like Home'' reveals that this is because over the last several generations of Paladins, no single pilot has ever been able to take their lion to its full potential on their own, so the lions have decided on multiple paladins as a way to maximize Voltron's power.]]
* TheChosenMany: [[spoiler: At the climax of ''Another Word for Never'', the Lions start picking up multiple Paladins]]. ''Someplace Like Home'' reveals that this is because over the last several generations of Paladins, no single pilot has ever been able to take their lion to its full potential on their own, so the lions have decided on multiple paladins as a way to maximize Voltron's power.]]
* FacialHorror: [[spoiler: Matt develops crystal scars on his face after he's blasted with Quintessence by a brainwashed Shiro in ''Someplace Like Home.'']]
* FightingYourFriend: [[spoiler: The team is forced to fight a mind-controlled Shiro a total of three times in the first two stories. Along with Allura twice]].
* GemTissue: The test subjects of Project Balmera start growing crystals on their insides like Balmeras. Keeping the crystal growth in check requires specialized healing from Balmerans like Shay.
** [[spoiler: Matt Holt]] and [[spoiler: Lance's cousin Val]] are both victims of these experiments.
* HandicappedBadass: Matt becomes one once [[spoiler: the crystals start growing inside him]].
** [[spoiler: Matt Holt]] and [[spoiler: Lance's cousin Val]] are both victims of these experiments.
* HandicappedBadass: Matt becomes one once [[spoiler: the crystals start growing inside him]].
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* HeKnowsTooMuch: In Chapter 26 of ''Someplace Like Home'', [[spoiler: Iverson finally decides to send a hit squad after Karen Holt, Eli Kahale, and Akira Shirogane when they finally become too big of a thorn in his side for him to handle without risk of Galra intervention.]]
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* HeKnowsTooMuch: In Chapter 26 of ''Someplace Like Home'', [[spoiler: Iverson finally decides to send a hit squad after Karen Holt, Eli Kahale, and Akira Shirogane when they finally become too big of a thorn in his side for him to handle without risk of Galra intervention.]]intervention]].
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* LivingBattery: [[spoiler: Project Balmera is an attempt to harvest humans and turn them into organic crystal production facilities to provide easier access to fuel for the empire. Matt was their first human test subject.]]
* ManchurianAgent: [[spoiler: Shiro's arm has a function that allows Haggar to control him directly. She uses it once in the battle of Berlou in ''Another Word for Never'' and fails.]] [[spoiler: Then she does it successfully for a large portion of ''Someplace Like Home''.]]
* ManchurianAgent: [[spoiler: Shiro's arm has a function that allows Haggar to control him directly. She uses it once in the battle of Berlou in ''Another Word for Never'' and fails.]] [[spoiler: Then she does it successfully for a large portion of ''Someplace Like Home''.]]
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* LivingBattery: [[spoiler: Project Balmera [[spoiler: is an attempt to harvest humans and turn them into organic crystal production facilities to provide easier access to fuel for the empire. Matt was their first human test subject.]]
subject]].
* LockedIntoStrangeness: Besides Shiro's skunk stripe, Matt [[spoiler ends up with Quintessance-infused scars on the side of his face and one of his eyes turns the color of Balmeran crystals]].
* ManchurianAgent: [[spoiler: Shiro's arm has a function that allows Haggar to control him directly. She uses it once in the battle of Berlou in ''Another Word for Never'' andfails.]] fails]]. [[spoiler: Then she does it successfully for a large portion of ''Someplace Like Home''.]]]]
* TheMedic: Shay fills this role once she joins Team Voltron full-time.
* MismatchedEyes: Matt ends up with this after [[spoiler: being overloaded with Quintessence after the failed attempt to rescue Shiro]].
* LockedIntoStrangeness: Besides Shiro's skunk stripe, Matt [[spoiler ends up with Quintessance-infused scars on the side of his face and one of his eyes turns the color of Balmeran crystals]].
* ManchurianAgent: [[spoiler: Shiro's arm has a function that allows Haggar to control him directly. She uses it once in the battle of Berlou in ''Another Word for Never'' and
* TheMedic: Shay fills this role once she joins Team Voltron full-time.
* MismatchedEyes: Matt ends up with this after [[spoiler: being overloaded with Quintessence after the failed attempt to rescue Shiro]].
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* OriginalCharacter: Quite a fewfew.
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* {{Transsexual}}: Pidge is non-binary, and Akira is a transgender.
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* ShaggyDogStory: Shiro and Keith's efforts to sabotage and undermine the Galra invasion of Yaltin end in vain when Zarkon grows frustrated with the drain on the empire's resources and sends Haggar to [[WorldWreckingWave harvest the Quintessance of the planet, killing every living thing on the surface.]]
* SlumberParty: When Altean training proves to be ineffective at team bonding with the Paladins as stressed as they are, Pidge and Matt talk Allura into doing a group slumber party in the castle lounge as an alternative, and it works far better than Altean training does.
* ThirdLineSomeWaiting: With [[spoiler: Shiro and Keith now permanent members of Team Voltron]], ''Someplace Like Home'' adds two new plotlines: one detailing what the human paladins' family members are doing back on Earth, and another focusing on Thace's missions for The Accords.
* {{Transsexual}}: Pidge is non-binary, and Akira is atransgender. transgender.
* TwoLinesNoWaiting: ''Another Word for Never'' has one storyline focused on the new Paladins in the beginning of their fight against the Galra, and another focused on Shiro and Keith trying to sabotage the imperial war machine from within. The two plotlines intersect when Sendak captures the Castle of Lions [[spoiler: and again at the climax on Berlou when Shiro and Keith deliberately request Voltron's aid in fighting back against the Galra.]]
* SlumberParty: When Altean training proves to be ineffective at team bonding with the Paladins as stressed as they are, Pidge and Matt talk Allura into doing a group slumber party in the castle lounge as an alternative, and it works far better than Altean training does.
* ThirdLineSomeWaiting: With [[spoiler: Shiro and Keith now permanent members of Team Voltron]], ''Someplace Like Home'' adds two new plotlines: one detailing what the human paladins' family members are doing back on Earth, and another focusing on Thace's missions for The Accords.
* {{Transsexual}}: Pidge is non-binary, and Akira is a
* TwoLinesNoWaiting: ''Another Word for Never'' has one storyline focused on the new Paladins in the beginning of their fight against the Galra, and another focused on Shiro and Keith trying to sabotage the imperial war machine from within. The two plotlines intersect when Sendak captures the Castle of Lions [[spoiler: and again at the climax on Berlou when Shiro and Keith deliberately request Voltron's aid in fighting back against the Galra.]]
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** OOCIsSeriosBusiness: Coran is absolutely terrified when he learns that there was [[spoiler: a viable Vkullor egg buried beneath Earth's surface]].
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* AllLoveIsUnrequited: Coran had an unrequited crush on Alfor in their younger days.
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* ParentalSubstitute: Even before her parents' deaths, Coran was like a third parent to Allura.
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* AdaptationOriginConnection: [[spoiler: Thace is Keith's uncle.]]
* CynicismCatalyst: The rest of their crew dying in a SenselessSacrifice is the reason Nyla is so cynical.
* DecisiveBattle: So far, each "season" has ended with one.
** ''Another Word for Never'' has the Battle of Beroul, where Voltron makes it's official debut in the war against the Galra and [[spoiler: turns a doomed stalemate into an outright victory for resistance forces.]]
** ''Someplace Like Home'' ends with a climactic battle to defend Earth against Zarkon's main fleet, completely destroying everything related to Project: Balmera.
* DefrostingIceQueen: Nyma begins to lose her cynicism after [[spoiler: she becomes a Blue Paladin]].
** ''Another Word for Never'' has the Battle of Beroul, where Voltron makes it's official debut in the war against the Galra and [[spoiler: turns a doomed stalemate into an outright victory for resistance forces.]]
** ''Someplace Like Home'' ends with a climactic battle to defend Earth against Zarkon's main fleet, completely destroying everything related to Project: Balmera.
* DefrostingIceQueen: Nyma begins to lose her cynicism after [[spoiler: she becomes a Blue Paladin]].
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* FromBadToWorse: [[spoiler: The team rushes in with guns blazing to rescue Shiro in ''Someplace Like Home''. The mission ends with Allura captured and brainwashed as well, along with Keith and Matt in critical condition.]]
* HasTwoMommies: Hunk.
* HasTwoMommies: Hunk.
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* FromBadToWorse: [[spoiler: The team rushes in with guns blazing to rescue Shiro in ''Someplace Like Home''. The mission ends with Allura captured and brainwashed as well, along with Keith and Matt in critical condition.]]
condition]].
* HasTwoMommies:Hunk.Hunk has two mothers.
* HasTwoMommies:
* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: [[spoiler: Keith runs Sendak through with his mother's sword in ''Another Word for Never'']].
* InvoluntaryGroupSplit: Unlike the show, it's Hunk and Coran trapped on the Castle of Lions when Sendak attacks instead of Pidge, Shiro, and Lance.
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** [[spoiler: Sendak is killed off midway through ''Another Word for Never'']].
** [[spoiler: CommanderIverson]]Iverson dies in Chapter 27 of ''Someplace Like Home'']].
** [[spoiler: Commander
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: [[spoiler: The team's attempt to rescue Shiro from Haggar in ''Someplace Like Home'' results in Allura getting captured, Keith and Lance in critical condition, and the Black Lion captured by Zarkon.]]
* NonIndicativeName: Zarkon's princes. Since he's 10,000 years old, Zarkon never had an biological children. His inner circle have taken to calling themselves his Princes because he can't be everywhere at once.
* NonIndicativeName: Zarkon's princes. Since he's 10,000 years old, Zarkon never had an biological children. His inner circle have taken to calling themselves his Princes because he can't be everywhere at once.
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** Mel, a close friend of Allura's who became the Blue Paladin temporarily after the death of Allura's mother. [[spoiler: And has been living in hiding as Lance's babysitter and CoolAunt.]]
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** Mel, a close friend of Allura's who became the Blue Paladin temporarily after the death of Allura's mother. [[spoiler: And has been living in hiding as Lance's babysitter and CoolAunt.]]CoolAunt]].
** OOCIsSeriosBusiness: Coran is absolutely terrified when he learns that there was [[spoiler: a viable Vkullor egg buried beneath Earth's surface]].
** OOCIsSeriosBusiness: Coran is absolutely terrified when he learns that there was [[spoiler: a viable Vkullor egg buried beneath Earth's surface]].
* PartyScattering: The ambush on Vel-17 results in Lance, Allura, and Matt being wormholed across the galaxy, with no way to contact the others, or for the others to know if they're still alive. [[spoiler: They reunite at the battle of Beroul at the end of the fic.]]
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* {{Transsexual}}: Pidge is non-binary, and Akira is trans.
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* {{Transsexual}}: Pidge is non-binary, and Akira is trans. a transgender.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Commander Iverson is doing what he feels is necessary to defend Earth. [[spoiler: This includes offering up Shiro and the Holt men as sacrifices to Zarkon and covertly disappearing people in order to provide Commander Vanda with lab rats for Project Balmera.]]
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Commander Iverson is doing what he feels is necessary to defend Earth. [[spoiler: This includes offering up Shiro and the Holt men as sacrifices to Zarkon and covertly disappearing people in order to provide Commander Vanda with lab rats for Project Balmera.]]]]
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Shiro and Nyma have this conversation in ''Shadows of Stars'' Chapter 3.
* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Shiro and Nyma have this conversation in ''Shadows of Stars'' Chapter 3.
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** [[spoiler: Rollo is captured in the last half of ''Someplace Like Home'' and is being taken to one of the labs for Project: Robeast]].
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* BeAllMySinsRemembered: Shiro has a habit of blaming himself for the things he did to maintain his cover in ''Another Word for Never'' [[spoiler: and while under Haggar's control in ''Someplace Like Home'']].
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* BeAllMySinsRemembered: Shiro has a habit of blaming himself for the things he did to maintain his cover in ''Another Word for Never'' [[spoiler: and Especially while he and Allura are under Haggar's control in ''Someplace Like Home'']].
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** Coran forms one with and [[spoiler: the Galra refugees from Revinor.]] He also develops one with [[spoiler: Wyn, the young Altean child Lance rescues from Haggar's clutches]].
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** Coran forms one with and [[spoiler: the Galra refugees from Revinor.]] He also develops one with [[spoiler: Wyn, the young Altean child Lance rescues from Haggar's clutches]].
** One also forms between Pidge's mother, Hunk's uncle, Shiro's brother, and Lance's cousin.
* KilledOffForReal:
** [[spoiler: Commander Iverson]]
* KilledOffForReal:
** [[spoiler: Commander Iverson]]
* NonhumanHumanoidHybrid: Rollo is half-Galra.
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* ReviveKillsZombie: [[spoiler: The crystals growing inside Matt grow when exposed to the Quintessance of the Castle's healing pods.]]
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* ReviveKillsZombie: [[spoiler: The crystals growing inside Matt grow when exposed to the Quintessance of the Castle's healing pods.]] pods]].
* {{Transsexual}}: Pidge is non-binary, and Akira is trans.
* {{Transsexual}}: Pidge is non-binary, and Akira is trans.
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* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/12130050 Dungeons And Dwarf Stars ]]: An ongoing CurtainFic in which Team Voltron sits down to play a game of TableTopGame/Paranoia
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* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/12130050 Dungeons And Dwarf Stars ]]: An ongoing CurtainFic in which Team Voltron sits down to play a game of TabeltopGame/ParanoiaTabletopGame/Paranoia
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* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/12130050 Dungeons And Dwarf Stars ]]: An ongoing CurtainFic in which Team Voltron sits down to play a game of Franchise/DungeonsAndDragons
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* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/12130050 Dungeons And Dwarf Stars ]]: An ongoing CurtainFic in which Team Voltron sits down to play a game of Franchise/DungeonsAndDragonsTabeltopGame/Paranoia
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* Really700HundredYearsOld:
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* Really700HundredYearsOld: Really700YearsOld:
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** Earth plays a more significant role in the story than in canon.
* AdultFear: The parents of all the Paladins are all worried for their childrens' safety as soon as they all figure out they're alive.
* AngerBornOfWorry: Karen Holt is furious at the fact that her children are fighting in an intergalactic war, particularly Pidge, but it's because she's terrified for their safety.
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** Commander Vanda and [[spoiler: Mitch Iverson]] in ''Someplace Like Home''.
* ArtificialLimbs: [[spoiler: Shiro's second robot arm in ''Someplace Like Home''. Unlike his first one, this one doesn't come equipped with a weapon and isn't surgically grafted onto his body.]]
* AscendedExtra: Nyma, Shay, and Reyner end up joining the team full time.
** Allura's mother is also featured as the previous Blue Paladin.
* ArtificialLimbs: [[spoiler: Shiro's second robot arm in ''Someplace Like Home''. Unlike his first one, this one doesn't come equipped with a weapon and isn't surgically grafted onto his body.]]
* AscendedExtra: Nyma, Shay, and Reyner end up joining the team full time.
** Allura's mother is also featured as the previous Blue Paladin.
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** Commander Vanda and [[spoiler: Mitch Iverson]] the Galaxy Garrison]] in ''Someplace Like Home''.
* ArtificialLimbs: [[spoiler:Shiro's second Aside from the robot arm Haggar gave him, Shiro gets a second one in ''Someplace Like Home''.Home'', built by Matt. Unlike his first one, this one doesn't come equipped with a weapon and isn't surgically grafted onto his body.]]
* AscendedExtra:Nyma, [[spoiler: Nyma]], Shay, and Reyner [[spoiler: Reyner]] end up joining the team full time.
time. Rollo also features as an important character as well.
** Allura's mother is also featured as the previous BluePaladin. Paladin.
* BadassGay: Nyma.
* ArtificialLimbs: [[spoiler:
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* BadassGay: Nyma.
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: The reason Keith is willing to commit treason and help Shiro is because Shiro's compassion and refusal to kill when he can avoid it spits in the face of the Galra ideal and yet he continues to beat everyone who fights him in the arena.
* BiTheWay: Allura and Lance.
* BiTheWay: Allura and Lance.
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: The reason Keith is willing to commit treason and help Shiro is because Shiro's compassion and refusal to kill when he can avoid get away with it spits in the face of the Galra ideal ideals and yet he continues to beat everyone who fights him in the arena.
* BiTheWay:Allura Allura, Val, and Lance.
* BiTheWay:
* EndangeredSpecies: The Balmera are dying off one by one from Zarkon's constant mining efforts.
* FakingTheDead: [[spoiler: Keith's mother is still alive as the leader of The Accords]].
* FakingTheDead: [[spoiler: Keith's mother is still alive as the leader of The Accords]].
* HeKnowsTooMuch: In Chapter 26 of ''Someplace Like Home'', [[spoiler: Iverson finally decides to send a hit squad after Karen Holt, Eli Kahale, and Akira Shirogane when they finally become too big of a thorn in his side for him to handle without risk of Galra intervention.]]
* InterGenerationalFriendship:
** Coran forms one with and [[spoiler: the Galra refugees from Revinor.]] He also develops one with [[spoiler: Wyn, the young Altean child Lance rescues from Haggar's clutches]].
** ''Kiss, Fake it Better'' gives us one between Lance's mother Rosario and [[spoiler: Mari, the previous Blue Paladin]].
* LaResistance: The Accords
* InterGenerationalFriendship:
** Coran forms one with and [[spoiler: the Galra refugees from Revinor.]] He also develops one with [[spoiler: Wyn, the young Altean child Lance rescues from Haggar's clutches]].
** ''Kiss, Fake it Better'' gives us one between Lance's mother Rosario and [[spoiler: Mari, the previous Blue Paladin]].
* LaResistance: The Accords
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* PostPeakOil: A sci-fi version. Balmerans across the universe have become an endangered species thanks to Galra mining efforts, and Zarkon needs to find a new source of crystals to keep his war machine together. [[spoiler: Project Balmera is an attempt to remedy this by harvesting humans a living crystal farms.]]
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* PostPeakOil: A sci-fi version. Balmerans across the universe have become an endangered species thanks to Galra mining efforts, and Zarkon needs to find a new source of crystals to keep his war machine together. [[spoiler: Project Balmera is an attempt to remedy this by harvesting humans a living crystal farms.]]farms]].
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* ProperlyParanoid: [[spoiler: The people of New Altea are hesitant to get directly involved in the war, but they have valid arguments for their position.]]
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* Really700HundredYearsOld:
** Allura is about 150 years old.
** Meri, the previous blue Paladin, was 140 when she died. [[spoiler: And now she's 5 years older than Allura after the time she's spent on Earth taking care of Lance.]]
* TheReveal:
** [[spoiler: The Galra have been to Earth before the abduction of the Kerberos crew]].
** [[spoiler: Haggar's override and tracking functions in Shiro's arm aren't physical chips, because the arm itself is an ad hoc Bayard.]]
** [[spoiler: Matt's arrival on Earth at the beginning of the fic wasn't because he escaped. The Galaxy Garrison was willingly collaborating with the Galra, and they needed to extract the crystals growing inside him for Project: Balmera.]]
** [[spoiler: Keith's mother is alive and serving as the leader of The Accords.]]
** Allura is about 150 years old.
** Meri, the previous blue Paladin, was 140 when she died. [[spoiler: And now she's 5 years older than Allura after the time she's spent on Earth taking care of Lance.]]
* TheReveal:
** [[spoiler: The Galra have been to Earth before the abduction of the Kerberos crew]].
** [[spoiler: Haggar's override and tracking functions in Shiro's arm aren't physical chips, because the arm itself is an ad hoc Bayard.]]
** [[spoiler: Matt's arrival on Earth at the beginning of the fic wasn't because he escaped. The Galaxy Garrison was willingly collaborating with the Galra, and they needed to extract the crystals growing inside him for Project: Balmera.]]
** [[spoiler: Keith's mother is alive and serving as the leader of The Accords.]]
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1. Matt Holt was the one who returned to Earth in the first episode instead of Shiro.
2. Pidge is nonbinary.
3. Keith is a full-blooded Galra, as opposed to only being a HalfHumanHybrid as he is on the show, and as such, was raised among the Galra empire, meaning he and Lance do not have the shared rivalry at the beginning.
4. Shiro traded service to Zarkon's army in exchange for his release from the Arena, and he and Keith work to undermine the empire's expansion.
5. While Season 3 of the show establishes that Zarkon and Alfor were the first generation of Paladins, here Voltron and its Paladins have existed since the time of Allura's grandmother, and Alfor himself was never a Paladin.
2. Pidge is nonbinary.
3. Keith is a full-blooded Galra, as opposed to only being a HalfHumanHybrid as he is on the show, and as such, was raised among the Galra empire, meaning he and Lance do not have the shared rivalry at the beginning.
4. Shiro traded service to Zarkon's army in exchange for his release from the Arena, and he and Keith work to undermine the empire's expansion.
5. While Season 3 of the show establishes that Zarkon and Alfor were the first generation of Paladins, here Voltron and its Paladins have existed since the time of Allura's grandmother, and Alfor himself was never a Paladin.
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* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/10807746 Finding Family]]: A series of fluffy side scenes that were cut for time.
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* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/10807746 Finding Family]]: A series of fluffy side scenes that were cut for time.don't't fit in the main stories.
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** In addition, Thace's role as a spy in Zarkon's ranks is given more focus than in the show, providing us with more backstory, including the fact that [[spoiler: he's Keith's uncle.]]
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* FromBadToWorse: [[spoiler: The team rushes in guns blazing to rescue Shiro in ''Someplace Like Home''. The mission ends with Allura captured and brainwashed as well, along with Keith and Matt in critical condition.]]
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* FromBadToWorse: [[spoiler: The team rushes in with guns blazing to rescue Shiro in ''Someplace Like Home''. The mission ends with Allura captured and brainwashed as well, along with Keith and Matt in critical condition.]]
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* ManchurianAgent: [[spoiler: Shiro's arm has a function that allows Haggar to control him directly. She uses it once in the battle of Berlou in ''Another Word for Never'' and fails.]] [[Then she does it successfully for a large portion of ''Someplace Like Home''.]]
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* ManchurianAgent: [[spoiler: Shiro's arm has a function that allows Haggar to control him directly. She uses it once in the battle of Berlou in ''Another Word for Never'' and fails.]] [[Then [[spoiler: Then she does it successfully for a large portion of ''Someplace Like Home''.]]
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* CerberusRetcon: [[spoiler: In this fic, the Galaxy Garrison already knew about the Galra, and had offered up the Kerberos crew as a sacrifice.]]
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* CerberusRetcon: CerebusRetcon: [[spoiler: In this fic, the Galaxy Garrison already knew about the Galra, and had offered up the Kerberos crew as a sacrifice.]]
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The stories included in the series thus far:
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The stories included in the series thus far:far include:
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* LesCollaberateurs: [[spoiler: Iverson and most of the senior officers of Galaxy Garrison are willingly collaberating with the Galra in Project Balmera.]]
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* LesCollaberateurs: LesCollaborateurs: [[spoiler: Iverson and most of the senior officers of Galaxy Garrison are willingly collaberating with the Galra in Project Balmera.]]
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* WellIntentionedExtremists: Commander Iverson is doing what he feels is necessary to defend Earth. [[spoiler: This includes offering up Shiro and the Holt men as sacrifices to Zarkon and covertly disappearing people in order to provide Commander Vanda with lab rats for Project Balmera.
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* WellIntentionedExtremists: WellIntentionedExtremist: Commander Iverson is doing what he feels is necessary to defend Earth. [[spoiler: This includes offering up Shiro and the Holt men as sacrifices to Zarkon and covertly disappearing people in order to provide Commander Vanda with lab rats for Project Balmera.]]
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Voltron: Duality is a AlternateUniverseFic of WesternAnimation/VoltronLegendaryDefender. The series page can be found [[http://archiveofourown.org/series/572659 here]] on Archive of Our Own.
This alternate take on the show is built around a few key divergences from canon:
1. Matt Holt was the one who returned to Earth in the first episode instead of Shiro.
2. Pidge is nonbinary.
3. Keith is a full-blooded Galra, as opposed to only being a HalfHumanHybrid as he is on the show, and as such, was raised among the Galra empire, meaning he and Lance do not have the shared rivalry at the beginning.
4. Shiro traded service to Zarkon's army in exchange for his release from the Arena, and he and Keith work to undermine the empire's expansion.
5. While Season 3 of the show establishes that Zarkon and Alfor were the first generation of Paladins, here Voltron and its Paladins have existed since the time of Allura's grandmother, and Alfor himself was never a Paladin.
From there, the story explores TheButterflyEffect of how these changes affect the story, providing a DarkerAndEdgier take on the fight against Zarkon that fleshes out several of the characters who have not had much screen time in the series.
The stories included in the series thus far:
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/7638178/chapters/17390476 Another Word For Never]]: The first "season of this alternate universe.
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/8465635 Mama Holt's Army]]: A side story focusing on the efforts of Pidge's mom, Shiro's brother, Hunk's uncle, and Lance's cousin to uncover the truth about what happened to their loved ones that serves to set up their roles in the second season.
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/8811013 Someplace Like Home]]: The second season, focusing on the team as they adjust to [[spoiler: having multiple people chosen as Paladins at the same time]]
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/9301925 One Week to Say Goodbye]]: A flashback piece focusing on Coran's thoughts and emotions in the wake of Zarkon's betrayal before he joins Allura in cryosleep.
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/9640166 Twenty-five Days]]: A one-shot focusing on Val's mother's tense working relationship with Karen Holt.
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/10807746 Finding Family]]: A series of fluffy side scenes that were cut for time.
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/11106234 Stars Burn Out]]: An ElsewhereFic depicting how [[spoiler: Nyma and Val got from Earth to the Castle of Lions.]]
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/11593965 Something From Nothing]]: A backstory episode for Rollo and Beezer.
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/11632725 Kiss, Fake it Better]]: Another backstory fic focused on [[spoiler: Mel's time on Earth babysitting Lance and preparing him for the opssibility of becoming the Blue Paladin one day.]]
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/12130050 DungeonsAndDwarfStars ]]: An ongoing CurtainFic in which Team Voltron sits down to play a game of Franchise/DungeonsAndDragons
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/12231306 Shadows of Stars]]: The third season. Ongoing and 3 chapters in as of October 16th, 2017.
! Tropes included in these fics:
* AdaptationExpansion: These fanfics expand on many things not covered in the show (at the time of being posted) such as the history of Altea, the minutia of Zarkon's army, and what's happening back on Earth while the Paladins are in space.
* AdaptationalIntelligence: While on the show the lions' level of sentience is unclear, in this universe they're fully sentient.
* AnArmAndALeg: Besides the canonical loss of his right arm, Shiro loses his Galra arm in ''Someplace Like Home'' when [[spoiler: Matt cuts it off in order to break Haggar's hold over him]].
* ArcVillain:
** Commander Orgul in ''Another Word for Never''.
** Commander Vanda and [[spoiler: Mitch Iverson]] in ''Someplace Like Home''.
* ArtificialLimbs: [[spoiler: Shiro's second robot arm in ''Someplace Like Home''. Unlike his first one, this one doesn't come equipped with a weapon and isn't surgically grafted onto his body.]]
* AscendedExtra: Nyma, Shay, and Reyner end up joining the team full time.
** Allura's mother is also featured as the previous Blue Paladin.
* BadassInDistress: [[spoiler: Shiro is captured by Haggar halfway through ''Someplace Like Home'']]. [[spoiler: And then Allura is captured when they try to rescue him.]]
* BadassGrandma: Reyner was already one as a leader of the Olkari resistance. [[spoiler: Doubly so when she becomes the second Green Paladin]].
* BeAllMySinsRemembered: Shiro has a habit of blaming himself for the things he did to maintain his cover in ''Another Word for Never'' [[spoiler: and while under Haggar's control in ''Someplace Like Home'']].
* BetaCouple: Nyma and [[spoiler: Val]]
** Also Allura and [[spoiler: Mel]].
* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: The reason Keith is willing to commit treason and help Shiro is because Shiro's compassion and refusal to kill when he can avoid it spits in the face of the Galra ideal and yet he continues to beat everyone who fights him in the arena.
* BiTheWay: Allura and Lance.
* BigDamnKiss: Shiro and Matt's reunion on Berlou.
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Shiro and Allura midway through ''Someplace Like Home''.]]
* CerberusRetcon: [[spoiler: In this fic, the Galaxy Garrison already knew about the Galra, and had offered up the Kerberos crew as a sacrifice.]]
* DarkerAndEdgier: While the fics still maintain the comedic elements of the show, the dramatic moments of the Duality verse are much more intense, and the action sequences more violent, than in canon, with several chapters focused on the huma characters dealing with the fact that they've still technically kids thrown into a war and the fact that they're going to have to take lives to win.
* FromBadToWorse: [[spoiler: The team rushes in guns blazing to rescue Shiro in ''Someplace Like Home''. The mission ends with Allura captured and brainwashed as well, along with Keith and Matt in critical condition.]]
* HasTwoMommies: Hunk.
* LesCollaberateurs: [[spoiler: Iverson and most of the senior officers of Galaxy Garrison are willingly collaberating with the Galra in Project Balmera.]]
* LivingBattery: [[spoiler: Project Balmera is an attempt to harvest humans and turn them into organic crystal production facilities to provide easier access to fuel for the empire. Matt was their first human test subject.]]
* ManchurianAgent: [[spoiler: Shiro's arm has a function that allows Haggar to control him directly. She uses it once in the battle of Berlou in ''Another Word for Never'' and fails.]] [[Then she does it successfully for a large portion of ''Someplace Like Home''.]]
* OfficialCouple: While the fics don't place much focus on romance, the story and tags make it clear that Shiro and Matt are one, along with Keith and Lance, and Hunk and Shay.
* OriginalCharacter: Quite a few
** Shiro's twin brother Akira.
** Hunk's uncle Eli.
** Lance's cousin Valerie.
** Mel, a close friend of Allura's who became the Blue Paladin temporarily after the death of Allura's mother. [[spoiler: And has been living in hiding as Lance's babysitter and CoolAunt.]]
* OperationBlank: Project: Robeast, Project: CORE, and Project: Balmera.
* PostPeakOil: A sci-fi version. Balmerans across the universe have become an endangered species thanks to Galra mining efforts, and Zarkon needs to find a new source of crystals to keep his war machine together. [[spoiler: Project Balmera is an attempt to remedy this by harvesting humans a living crystal farms.]]
* PoweredByAForsakenChild: [[spoiler: The crystals created by Project Balmera are grown and harvested from unknowing human hosts.]]
* PsychicLink: The lions can form one with their Paladins, and all the Paladins can form one with each other as part of Voltron.
* ReverseMole: Despite pledging allegiance to Zarkon's army, Shiro does what he can to undermine the Galran war machine with Keith's help.
* ReviveKillsZombie: [[spoiler: The crystals growing inside Matt grow when exposed to the Quintessance of the Castle's healing pods.]]
* WarIsHell: Even without Shiro and Keith's chapters in ''Another Word for Never'' giving readers a look at the front lines of Zarkon's conquests, this verse takes much grittier look at what the war against the Galra entails.
* WellIntentionedExtremists: Commander Iverson is doing what he feels is necessary to defend Earth. [[spoiler: This includes offering up Shiro and the Holt men as sacrifices to Zarkon and covertly disappearing people in order to provide Commander Vanda with lab rats for Project Balmera.
This alternate take on the show is built around a few key divergences from canon:
1. Matt Holt was the one who returned to Earth in the first episode instead of Shiro.
2. Pidge is nonbinary.
3. Keith is a full-blooded Galra, as opposed to only being a HalfHumanHybrid as he is on the show, and as such, was raised among the Galra empire, meaning he and Lance do not have the shared rivalry at the beginning.
4. Shiro traded service to Zarkon's army in exchange for his release from the Arena, and he and Keith work to undermine the empire's expansion.
5. While Season 3 of the show establishes that Zarkon and Alfor were the first generation of Paladins, here Voltron and its Paladins have existed since the time of Allura's grandmother, and Alfor himself was never a Paladin.
From there, the story explores TheButterflyEffect of how these changes affect the story, providing a DarkerAndEdgier take on the fight against Zarkon that fleshes out several of the characters who have not had much screen time in the series.
The stories included in the series thus far:
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/7638178/chapters/17390476 Another Word For Never]]: The first "season of this alternate universe.
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/8465635 Mama Holt's Army]]: A side story focusing on the efforts of Pidge's mom, Shiro's brother, Hunk's uncle, and Lance's cousin to uncover the truth about what happened to their loved ones that serves to set up their roles in the second season.
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/8811013 Someplace Like Home]]: The second season, focusing on the team as they adjust to [[spoiler: having multiple people chosen as Paladins at the same time]]
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/9301925 One Week to Say Goodbye]]: A flashback piece focusing on Coran's thoughts and emotions in the wake of Zarkon's betrayal before he joins Allura in cryosleep.
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/9640166 Twenty-five Days]]: A one-shot focusing on Val's mother's tense working relationship with Karen Holt.
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/10807746 Finding Family]]: A series of fluffy side scenes that were cut for time.
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/11106234 Stars Burn Out]]: An ElsewhereFic depicting how [[spoiler: Nyma and Val got from Earth to the Castle of Lions.]]
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/11593965 Something From Nothing]]: A backstory episode for Rollo and Beezer.
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/11632725 Kiss, Fake it Better]]: Another backstory fic focused on [[spoiler: Mel's time on Earth babysitting Lance and preparing him for the opssibility of becoming the Blue Paladin one day.]]
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/12130050 DungeonsAndDwarfStars ]]: An ongoing CurtainFic in which Team Voltron sits down to play a game of Franchise/DungeonsAndDragons
* [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/12231306 Shadows of Stars]]: The third season. Ongoing and 3 chapters in as of October 16th, 2017.
! Tropes included in these fics:
* AdaptationExpansion: These fanfics expand on many things not covered in the show (at the time of being posted) such as the history of Altea, the minutia of Zarkon's army, and what's happening back on Earth while the Paladins are in space.
* AdaptationalIntelligence: While on the show the lions' level of sentience is unclear, in this universe they're fully sentient.
* AnArmAndALeg: Besides the canonical loss of his right arm, Shiro loses his Galra arm in ''Someplace Like Home'' when [[spoiler: Matt cuts it off in order to break Haggar's hold over him]].
* ArcVillain:
** Commander Orgul in ''Another Word for Never''.
** Commander Vanda and [[spoiler: Mitch Iverson]] in ''Someplace Like Home''.
* ArtificialLimbs: [[spoiler: Shiro's second robot arm in ''Someplace Like Home''. Unlike his first one, this one doesn't come equipped with a weapon and isn't surgically grafted onto his body.]]
* AscendedExtra: Nyma, Shay, and Reyner end up joining the team full time.
** Allura's mother is also featured as the previous Blue Paladin.
* BadassInDistress: [[spoiler: Shiro is captured by Haggar halfway through ''Someplace Like Home'']]. [[spoiler: And then Allura is captured when they try to rescue him.]]
* BadassGrandma: Reyner was already one as a leader of the Olkari resistance. [[spoiler: Doubly so when she becomes the second Green Paladin]].
* BeAllMySinsRemembered: Shiro has a habit of blaming himself for the things he did to maintain his cover in ''Another Word for Never'' [[spoiler: and while under Haggar's control in ''Someplace Like Home'']].
* BetaCouple: Nyma and [[spoiler: Val]]
** Also Allura and [[spoiler: Mel]].
* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: The reason Keith is willing to commit treason and help Shiro is because Shiro's compassion and refusal to kill when he can avoid it spits in the face of the Galra ideal and yet he continues to beat everyone who fights him in the arena.
* BiTheWay: Allura and Lance.
* BigDamnKiss: Shiro and Matt's reunion on Berlou.
* BrainwashedAndCrazy: [[spoiler: Shiro and Allura midway through ''Someplace Like Home''.]]
* CerberusRetcon: [[spoiler: In this fic, the Galaxy Garrison already knew about the Galra, and had offered up the Kerberos crew as a sacrifice.]]
* DarkerAndEdgier: While the fics still maintain the comedic elements of the show, the dramatic moments of the Duality verse are much more intense, and the action sequences more violent, than in canon, with several chapters focused on the huma characters dealing with the fact that they've still technically kids thrown into a war and the fact that they're going to have to take lives to win.
* FromBadToWorse: [[spoiler: The team rushes in guns blazing to rescue Shiro in ''Someplace Like Home''. The mission ends with Allura captured and brainwashed as well, along with Keith and Matt in critical condition.]]
* HasTwoMommies: Hunk.
* LesCollaberateurs: [[spoiler: Iverson and most of the senior officers of Galaxy Garrison are willingly collaberating with the Galra in Project Balmera.]]
* LivingBattery: [[spoiler: Project Balmera is an attempt to harvest humans and turn them into organic crystal production facilities to provide easier access to fuel for the empire. Matt was their first human test subject.]]
* ManchurianAgent: [[spoiler: Shiro's arm has a function that allows Haggar to control him directly. She uses it once in the battle of Berlou in ''Another Word for Never'' and fails.]] [[Then she does it successfully for a large portion of ''Someplace Like Home''.]]
* OfficialCouple: While the fics don't place much focus on romance, the story and tags make it clear that Shiro and Matt are one, along with Keith and Lance, and Hunk and Shay.
* OriginalCharacter: Quite a few
** Shiro's twin brother Akira.
** Hunk's uncle Eli.
** Lance's cousin Valerie.
** Mel, a close friend of Allura's who became the Blue Paladin temporarily after the death of Allura's mother. [[spoiler: And has been living in hiding as Lance's babysitter and CoolAunt.]]
* OperationBlank: Project: Robeast, Project: CORE, and Project: Balmera.
* PostPeakOil: A sci-fi version. Balmerans across the universe have become an endangered species thanks to Galra mining efforts, and Zarkon needs to find a new source of crystals to keep his war machine together. [[spoiler: Project Balmera is an attempt to remedy this by harvesting humans a living crystal farms.]]
* PoweredByAForsakenChild: [[spoiler: The crystals created by Project Balmera are grown and harvested from unknowing human hosts.]]
* PsychicLink: The lions can form one with their Paladins, and all the Paladins can form one with each other as part of Voltron.
* ReverseMole: Despite pledging allegiance to Zarkon's army, Shiro does what he can to undermine the Galran war machine with Keith's help.
* ReviveKillsZombie: [[spoiler: The crystals growing inside Matt grow when exposed to the Quintessance of the Castle's healing pods.]]
* WarIsHell: Even without Shiro and Keith's chapters in ''Another Word for Never'' giving readers a look at the front lines of Zarkon's conquests, this verse takes much grittier look at what the war against the Galra entails.
* WellIntentionedExtremists: Commander Iverson is doing what he feels is necessary to defend Earth. [[spoiler: This includes offering up Shiro and the Holt men as sacrifices to Zarkon and covertly disappearing people in order to provide Commander Vanda with lab rats for Project Balmera.