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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Due to having to go to [[spoiler:Spargus]] to get Light Eco, [[spoiler:Damas and Seems]] make appearances in this story.
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* CallBack: When she starts to get despite for the King of Spargus help to get Light Eco, she starts to list off all her skills like she did to get into the Underground.
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* CallBack: When she starts to get despite for the King [[spoiler:King of Spargus Spargus]] help to get Light Eco, she starts to list off all her skills like she did to get into the Underground.
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* TheCameo: Seem makes a very brief appearance to hand Keira a jar of Light Eco and then promptly leaves.
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* TheCameo: Seem [[spoiler:Seem]] makes a very brief appearance to hand Keira a jar of Light Eco and then promptly leaves.
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* WhamLine: Onin's response to where Keira needs to go to find light eco. "You must travel now across the sands to the hidden jewel of the Wasteland, the city of warriors – Spargus."
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* WhamLine: Onin's response to where Keira needs to go to find light eco. "You "[[spoiler:You must travel now across the sands to the hidden jewel of the Wasteland, the city of warriors – Spargus."]]"
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* AllMythsAreTrue: When Keira declares her intent to go outside Haven to get Light Eco to cure Jak, everyone else thinks she is crazy as Light Eco is something of a fairy tale. When she returns with Light Eco in hand they are all shocked.
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* CallBack: When she starts to get despite for the King of Spargus help to get Light Eco, she starts to list off all her skills like she did to get into the Underground.
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* TheCameo: Seem makes a very brief appearance to hand Keira a jar of Light Eco and then promptly leaves.
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** Light Eco being thought of nothing more than a fairy tale, some of the members of the Underground find out that it does exist when Keira brings back a jar full of it to cure Jak.
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* NotInThisForYourRevolution: At first Keira only joined the Underground to get Jak back from the Baron. Once she does and heads out to get Light Eco to cure him from his latest round of Dark Eco injections, she begins to question herself as what she will do now. All she really wanted was to get Jak back and go home, but she has made so many connections, and so has Daxter, she doesn't really know what she will do now.
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* ProperlyParanoid: Keira doesn't trust Kor at all and is careful with what she says around him. When the Shadow brushes off her concerns she starts to choose only to share things with those she has grown close to in the Underground.
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* BreakTheCutie: Jak has been broken down and turned into a loyal warrior for the Baron after being tortured and experimented on for two years.
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* BreakTheCutie: BreakTheCutie:
** Jak has been broken down and turned into a loyal warrior for the Baron after being tortured and experimented on for twoyears.years. He goes through other round that messes him up badly.
** By chapter 18 Keira is so wound up that she is willing the threaten people to get the things she needs. Daxter calls her out on this and how she is throwing away the contacts they have built up and doing things she would never do. She ends up breaking down and express all of her fears over possibly failing to save Jak.
** Jak has been broken down and turned into a loyal warrior for the Baron after being tortured and experimented on for two
** By chapter 18 Keira is so wound up that she is willing the threaten people to get the things she needs. Daxter calls her out on this and how she is throwing away the contacts they have built up and doing things she would never do. She ends up breaking down and express all of her fears over possibly failing to save Jak.
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* ColdBloodedTorture: Vin gives Keira and Daxter a data chip that allows them to see the experiments and torture that Jak was put through and it makes them sick. The Baron plans for the scientists to put Jak through another round because he has been acting to freely.
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* ColdBloodedTorture: Vin gives Keira and Daxter a data chip that allows them to see the experiments and torture that Jak was put through and it makes them sick. The Baron plans for the scientists to put Jak through another round because he has been acting to freely. When Jak is subject to another round its described from his groggy perspective and its not pretty.
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* GreatEscape: With a good chunk of the leadership captured, Keira and Daxter enter the Fortress and let everyone out (Underground or not) before the Baron can execute Torn and the Shadow.
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* GreatEscape: GreatEscape:
** With a good chunk of the leadership captured, Keira and Daxter enter the Fortress and let everyone out (Underground or not) before the Baron can execute Torn and theShadow.Shadow.
** She does it again with her mission to get Jak out of the palace. Though it's told from the groggy perspective of Jak, Keira, Daxter and their team fought their way through a lot of guards to get to him and back out to the getaway van.
** With a good chunk of the leadership captured, Keira and Daxter enter the Fortress and let everyone out (Underground or not) before the Baron can execute Torn and the
** She does it again with her mission to get Jak out of the palace. Though it's told from the groggy perspective of Jak, Keira, Daxter and their team fought their way through a lot of guards to get to him and back out to the getaway van.
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* OhCrap: Jinx gets this expression when Keira points out that the job she wants him for is hitting the palace. Really starts to crap his pants when he finds out that they are stealing the Warrior, while on the job.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: When Keira calls in the favors she has built up to capture Jak, Torn agrees to help her in any way he can. It helps that she has long since gain his, and much of the Underground’s, respect. Also, unlike the Shadow and her father, he is more willing to take her at her word over her suspicion that Kor is the traitor.
* TheReveal: Jinx is the relative that Tess has mentioned several times.
* TheReveal: Jinx is the relative that Tess has mentioned several times.
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* WhamLine: Onin’s response to where Keira needs to go to find light eco. “You must travel now across the sands to the hidden jewel of the Wasteland, the city of warriors – Spargus.”
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** [[spoiler:When Erol is close to strangling Keira to death, Jak shows up and saves her]]
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** [[spoiler:When Erol is close to strangling Keira to death, Jak shows up and saves her]]her]].
** Keira gets to be one herself when she breaks everyone out of the Fortress gaining the respect of just about everyone in the Underground.
** Keira gets to be one herself when she breaks everyone out of the Fortress gaining the respect of just about everyone in the Underground.
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* BrokenPedestal: Keira and Erol seem to have something of a friendship and good working relationship, to the point that when he begins to flirt with her, her only reservations come from her work with the Underground. Then she sees video of him torturing Jak and any illusion she had of him shatters. Even more so when he [[spoiler:confronts her after beating him in the race and finds out she's working with the rebels]].
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* BrokenPedestal: BrokenPedestal:
** Keira and Erol seem to have something of a friendship and good working relationship, to the point that when he begins to flirt with her, her only reservations come from her work with the Underground. Then she sees video of him torturing Jak and any illusion she had of him shatters. Even more so when he [[spoiler:confronts her after beating him in the race and finds out she's working with therebels]].rebels]].
** Keira views of her father takes a hit when Daxter reveals just how abuse he was to him. Then takes another hit when she reunites with her father only for him to tell her to stay focused on the Rift Rider and stay out of other affairs despite all the work she has done.
* CallingTheOldManOut: Keira lays into her father for not telling them anything that was going to happen, insulting Daxter and, insisting that they try to set things to how they should be going and not on how they are going.
** Keira and Erol seem to have something of a friendship and good working relationship, to the point that when he begins to flirt with her, her only reservations come from her work with the Underground. Then she sees video of him torturing Jak and any illusion she had of him shatters. Even more so when he [[spoiler:confronts her after beating him in the race and finds out she's working with the
** Keira views of her father takes a hit when Daxter reveals just how abuse he was to him. Then takes another hit when she reunites with her father only for him to tell her to stay focused on the Rift Rider and stay out of other affairs despite all the work she has done.
* CallingTheOldManOut: Keira lays into her father for not telling them anything that was going to happen, insulting Daxter and, insisting that they try to set things to how they should be going and not on how they are going.
* {{Jerkass}}: Both Samoses come off as rude and unsavory. The Shadow treating Keira injuries as unfortunate but couldn’t be helped. And older Samos insulting Daxter right off the bat.
* JerkassHasAPoint: Despite coming off as a hardass with his insistence that they get things back on track on how they should happen, Samos does have a point that if the loop isn’t completed then a devastating paradox could happen.
* JerkassHasAPoint: Despite coming off as a hardass with his insistence that they get things back on track on how they should happen, Samos does have a point that if the loop isn’t completed then a devastating paradox could happen.
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* ShameIfSomethingHappened: Krew uses the threat of this when he tells Keira not to get too good at racing. It doesn’t stick, and Keira declares she intends to win.
* ShockCollar: This is possibly what the Baron has put on the Dark Warrior as of chapter 16.
* ShockCollar: This is possibly what the Baron has put on the Dark Warrior as of chapter 16.
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* ShameIfSomethingHappened: Krew uses the threat of this when he tells Keira not to get too good at racing. It doesn’t stick, and Keira declares she intends to win.
win. Krew makes good on his threat after the race and has her garage trashed and steals the Precursor Key.
* ShockCollar:This is possibly what Not a shock collar but a collar that allows the Baron has put on Barron to keep track of the Dark Warrior as of chapter 16.after the latter has been running off one to many times.
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* StableTimeLoop: An interesting example, there is a lot of indication in the story that things should have been playing out like they did in canon, being an actual case of a stable time loop. Why they haven’t in this story is unknown at this time. The Oracle does tell Keira that she must complete the loop.
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* StableTimeLoop: An interesting example, there is a lot of indication in the story that things should have been playing out like they did in canon, being an actual case of a stable time loop. Why they haven’t in this story is unknown at this time. The Oracle does tell Keira that she must complete the loop. Samos is rather insistent that they get things back on track, but Keira points out that Onin and the Oracles have been able to come up with solutions to the problem and keep things going.
* StayInTheKitchen: Samos telling Keira to stay focused on the Rift Rider and nothing else only pisses her off because not only has she been working on the Rift Rider but doing everything she can to help the Underground and rescue Jak.
* StayInTheKitchen: Samos telling Keira to stay focused on the Rift Rider and nothing else only pisses her off because not only has she been working on the Rift Rider but doing everything she can to help the Underground and rescue Jak.
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* GreenThumb: [[spoiler:Keira starts to become aware that she has some kind of power when she is able to commune with a tree.]]
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* GreenThumb: [[spoiler:Keira starts to become aware that she has some kind of power (implied to be sage power over green eco) when she is able to commune with a tree.]]
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* VerbalJudo: Keira is able to convince the Oracle in Mar's Tomb to hand over the Precursor Stone because things aren't going the way they should have gone, and the Baron is on his way to take it anyways.
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* GreenThumb: [[spoiler:Keira starts to become aware that she has some kind of power when she is able to commune with a tree.]]
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* LoopholeAbuse: Keira and Daxter get around the Test of Manhood in Mar's Tomb by having Daxter climb into the locking mechanism and pulling a bunch of levers to unlock the door. The Oracle isn't too happy about that.
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* * GreatEscape: With a good chunk of the leadership captured, Keira and Daxter enter the Fortress and let everyone out (Underground or not) before the Baron can execute Torn and the Shadow.
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* AbusiveParents: Having raised all three of [[spoiler:Keira, Jak and Daxter, Samos was in particular verbally abusive to Daxter]].
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* ColdBloodedTorture: Vin gives Keira and Daxter a data chip that allows them to see the experiments and torture that Jak was put through and it makes them sick.
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* ColdBloodedTorture: Vin gives Keira and Daxter a data chip that allows them to see the experiments and torture that Jak was put through and it makes them sick. The Baron plans for the scientists to put Jak through another round because he has been acting to freely.
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* DefectorFromDecadence: Some of the Guard don’t agree with the Baron, especially with sending The Dark Warrior on the people. One such guard helps Keira get away from the carnage in the Water Slums.
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* DefectorFromDecadence: Some of the Guard don’t agree with the Baron, especially with sending The Dark Warrior on the people. One such guard helps Keira get away from the carnage in the Water Slums. He returns in a later chapter and allows Keira and Daxter to go on with their prison break and states he is only staying with the Gaud to protect those like him.
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* InTheBack: Keira is shot just as she makes it through the portal after she sets free the prisoners in the Fortress. It's very likely she was hit in the back.
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* ShockCollar: This is possibly what the Baron has put on the Dark Warrior as of chapter 16.
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* RapidFireNo: Daxter lets out a couple of quick nos at Keira when its clears she going to make a run for the tomb when the doors are closing.
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* HiddenWire: Keira make several drones she let loose during her tour in the palace and they plug into the system.
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* SuicideMission: [[spoiler:Praxis reveals to Keira that he intends to send his Dark Warrior on a mission to the nest to make way for a weapon to destroy it and has no intention of pull the Dark Warrior.]]
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* SuicideMission: [[spoiler:Praxis reveals to Keira that he intends to send his Dark Warrior on a mission to the nest to make way for a weapon to destroy it and has no intention of pull pulling the Dark Warrior.Warrior out.]]
