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Derpy Hoove is a diligent mailmare but on this particular day she's decided to take a day off from work. It's too important a day to miss. On this day, she's decided to throw her daughter Dinky a birthday party. When Dinky comes home she's immediately suspicious (especially since her birthday isn't for several months). As it turns out, Dinky is being taken away by Foal Protections Services that day.
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Derpy Hoove Hooves is a diligent mailmare but on this particular day she's decided to take a day off from work. It's too important a day to miss. On this day, she's decided to throw her daughter Dinky a birthday party. When Dinky comes home she's immediately suspicious (especially since her birthday isn't for several months). As it turns out, Dinky is being taken away by Foal Protections Services that day.
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* HappilyAdopted: One year later, Dinky sees happy with her new foster parents.
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* HappilyAdopted: One year later, Dinky sees seems happy with her new foster parents.
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* DepartmentOfChildDisservices: Derpy's daughter is taken by child services because, according to them, her mental disability makes her an unfit parent. The problem is that the only issue Derpy seems to have is a [[SpeechImpediment speech disorder]]. There's nothing to suggest that she's having any issue taking care of her daughter or that her disabilities impede her life somehow.
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* DepartmentOfChildDisservices: Derpy's daughter is taken by child services because, according to them, her mental disability makes her an unfit parent. The problem is that the only issue Derpy seems to have is a [[SpeechImpediment speech disorder]]. There's nothing to suggest that she's having any issue taking care of her daughter or that her disabilities impede impair her life somehow.
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Derpy Hoove is a diligent mailmare but on this particular day she's decided to take a day off from work. It's too important a day to miss. On this day, she's decided to throw her daughter Dinky a birthday party. When Dinky comes home she's immediately suspicious (especially since her birthday isn't for several months). As it turns out, Dinky is being taken away by Foal Protections Services that day.
''Today, Tomorrow, and Forever'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic by [=ChoppersTopHat=]. It can be read [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/272465/today-tomorrow-and-forever here]].
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* BittersweetEnding: Dinky is taken away and put into a foster home, and Derpy quits her job, but the two keep in touch through letters.
* DepartmentOfChildDisservices: Derpy's daughter is taken by child services because, according to them, her mental disability makes her an unfit parent. The problem is that the only issue Derpy seems to have is a [[SpeechImpediment speech disorder]]. There's nothing to suggest that she's having any issue taking care of her daughter or that her disabilities impede her life somehow.
* DisabledInTheAdaptation: This fanfic was written during season 1. Derpy has a speech disorder, which was later disproven in canon.
* GlassShatteringSound: It's mentioned that Scootaloo tried to hit a high note and broke a window.
* HappilyAdopted: One year later, Dinky sees happy with her new foster parents.
* MeaningfulRename: Dinky Hooves ends up fostered and renamed Dinky Daybreaker.
* ParentalTitleCharacterization: Dinky uses "Mom" and "Dad" for her foster parents, but only her biological mother Derpy is "Mommy" to her.
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Derpy is Dinky's mother. In canon, this hasn't been proven.
* ShoutOut: One of Derpy's lines is "It's dangerous to go alone" from ''VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaI''.
''Today, Tomorrow, and Forever'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic by [=ChoppersTopHat=]. It can be read [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/272465/today-tomorrow-and-forever here]].
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* BittersweetEnding: Dinky is taken away and put into a foster home, and Derpy quits her job, but the two keep in touch through letters.
* DepartmentOfChildDisservices: Derpy's daughter is taken by child services because, according to them, her mental disability makes her an unfit parent. The problem is that the only issue Derpy seems to have is a [[SpeechImpediment speech disorder]]. There's nothing to suggest that she's having any issue taking care of her daughter or that her disabilities impede her life somehow.
* DisabledInTheAdaptation: This fanfic was written during season 1. Derpy has a speech disorder, which was later disproven in canon.
* GlassShatteringSound: It's mentioned that Scootaloo tried to hit a high note and broke a window.
* HappilyAdopted: One year later, Dinky sees happy with her new foster parents.
* MeaningfulRename: Dinky Hooves ends up fostered and renamed Dinky Daybreaker.
* ParentalTitleCharacterization: Dinky uses "Mom" and "Dad" for her foster parents, but only her biological mother Derpy is "Mommy" to her.
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Derpy is Dinky's mother. In canon, this hasn't been proven.
* ShoutOut: One of Derpy's lines is "It's dangerous to go alone" from ''VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaI''.
