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* OneOfUs: Index, surprisingly.
-->'''Touma''' (testing Index's eidetic memory): “[[MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail Air speed of an unladen swallow—]]”
-->'''Index''': “African or European? Honestly, I’m English. I’m more surprised you’ve seen it. About 11 metres per second, either way.”
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** In the fourth chapter, Touma asks Index if she knows the [[MontyPythonAndTheHolyGrail airspeed velocity of an unladen swallow]].
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* BlatantLies: Index is not a very good liar.
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** In-universe, Touma is now considered to be a Level 1 esper. This is not because he's more powerful, but rather because the esper ranking system has been changed to make more sense.

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** In-universe, Touma is now considered to be a Level 1 esper. This is not because he's more powerful, but rather because the esper ranking system has been changed to make more sense. On the other hand, he doesn't have a natural knack for picking up street fighting skills like his canon counterpart; instead of being completely self-taught, [[BoxingLessonsForSuperman he takes self-defense lessons like everyone else]].
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* IJustWantToBeFree: Index. Free to jump off buildings in this case.
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* LoopholeAbuse: The geis that seals Index's magical knowledge unlocks whenever it senses that she's in danger as a self-defense measure. What it ''doesn't'' sense is whether Index ''[[GuileHero deliberately]]'' placed herself in danger specifically to unlock the seal.
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* MundaneUtility: It's implied Uiharu uses her [[WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway power]] to keep her giant computer rig cool.
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* LastSecondWordSwap: Mikoto does this fairly frequently to try to make herself sound more refined.
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The [=ToAruverse=] Rewrite Project is a planned series of {{Fix Fic}}s for ''ACertainMagicalIndex/[[ACertainScientificRailgun Railgun]]'' [[TheRemake that rebuild the story and setting from the ground up]].

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The [=ToAruverse=] Rewrite Project is a planned series of {{Fix Fic}}s for ''ACertainMagicalIndex/[[ACertainScientificRailgun Railgun]]'' [[TheRemake that rebuild rebuilds the story and setting from the ground up]].

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* IconicOutfit: Averted on two counts. Index does not wear a habit. Maika has also traded in her maid uniform for casual duds as part of the remake's emphasis on smiting violations of common sense...and [[ValuesDissonance Values Dissonant]] {{Fanservice}}



* IconicOutfit: Averted on two counts. Index does not wear a habit. Maika has also traded in her maid uniform for casual duds as part of the remake's emphasis on smiting violations of common sense...and [[ValuesDissonance Values Dissonant]] {{Fanservice}}
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** Uiharu's moment is covered under TheGadfly. As for Saten, when she's introduced Mikoto spends a paragraph describing how [[YamatoNadeshiko traditionally beautiful]] she is...and then Saten promptly [[{{Fangirl}} fan]][[{{Squee}} gasms]] over meeting Mikoto.
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* TheGadfly: Uiharu. When she first meets Mikoto she proceeds to unnerve her by using increasingly more respectful JapaneseHonorifics until Kuroko [[DopeSlap whacks her on the head]]...and then Mikoto sees that Uiharu was trying to hold back laughter. She's also willing to tease Kuroko. And see the entry under SinisterSurveillance.

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* TheGadfly: Uiharu. When she first meets Mikoto she proceeds to unnerve her by using increasingly more respectful JapaneseHonorifics until Kuroko [[DopeSlap whacks her Uiharu on the head]]...and then Mikoto sees that Uiharu was trying to hold back laughter. She's also willing to tease Kuroko. And see the entry under SinisterSurveillance.
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** Similarly, [[{{Engrish}} Level Upper]] has been changed to "Level Plus", Meltdowner is now just "Meltdown" and "An Involuntary Movement", the full canon name for AIM, has been changed to "Involuntary Physical Distortion", or IPD.

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** Similarly, [[{{Engrish}} Level Upper]] has been changed to "Level Plus", Meltdowner is now just "Meltdown" "Meltdown", and "An Involuntary Movement", the full canon name for AIM, has been changed to "Involuntary Physical Distortion", or IPD.
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The second chapter has [[AdaptationalBadass Index]] leap out of a moving car, jump off a highway bridge, [[ItMakesSenseInContext jury-rig a portable church]], and sneak into Academy City just by using her [[GuileHero wits]], [[AwesomenessByAnalysis analytical skills]], [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers and two magical spells.

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The second chapter has [[AdaptationalBadass Index]] leap out of a moving car, jump off a highway bridge, [[ItMakesSenseInContext jury-rig a portable church]], and sneak into Academy City just by using her [[GuileHero wits]], [[AwesomenessByAnalysis analytical skills]], [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers and two magical spells.spells]].
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The second chapter has [[AdaptationalBadass Index]] leap out of a moving car, jump off a highway bridge, [[ItMakesSenseInContext jury-rig a portable church]], and sneak into Academy City just by using her [[GuileHero wits]], [[AwesomenessByAnalysis analytical skills]], and two magical spells.

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The second chapter has [[AdaptationalBadass Index]] leap out of a moving car, jump off a highway bridge, [[ItMakesSenseInContext jury-rig a portable church]], and sneak into Academy City just by using her [[GuileHero wits]], [[AwesomenessByAnalysis analytical skills]], [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers and two magical spells.
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** In the first chapter, Touma says he has reason to believe he was going to ranked at Level 0.

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** In the first chapter, Touma says he has reason to believe he was going to be ranked at Level 0.

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* DiscontinuityNod:
** In the first chapter, Touma says he has reason to believe he was going to ranked at Level 0.
** In the third chapter, Mikoto notes that she does not have hacking skills, and actually isn't a computer person.



* IconicOutfit: Averted on two counts. Index does not wear a habit. Maika has also traded in her maid uniform for casual duds as part of the remake's emphasis on smiting violations of common sense.

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* IconicOutfit: Averted on two counts. Index does not wear a habit. Maika has also traded in her maid uniform for casual duds as part of the remake's emphasis on smiting violations of common sense.sense...and [[ValuesDissonance Values Dissonant]] {{Fanservice}}



* LudicrousPrecision: Touma's narration can sometimes dip into this. Apparently, his ability extends to precisely 6.39 millimeters above the skin of his right hand and forearm.



* MythologyGag:
** In "Daily Life, in a Thousand Parallel Worlds", Touma says he has reason to believe he was going to ranked at Level 0.
** Mikoto talking about her lack of hacking abilities in "With Friends Like These".



* TheStationsOfTheCanon: The first chapter, "Daily Life, in a Thousand Parallel Worlds". ''Technically'' the second chapter "Free; Run" doesn't derail from canon, though the train comes in from a very different station. And the third chapter "With Friends Like These"...well it has the Railgun cast go to Seventh Mist, at least.
* SimultaneousArcs: ''In Memoriam'' roughly adapts ''Index''[='s=] Index arc and ''Railgun''[='s=] Level Upper arc. And simutaneous means Index is present at the Seventh Mist bombings.

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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: The first chapter, "Daily Life, in a Thousand Parallel Worlds". chapter. ''Technically'' the second chapter "Free; Run" chapter doesn't derail from canon, though the train comes in from a very different station. And the third chapter "With Friends Like These"...chapter...well it has the Railgun cast go to Seventh Mist, at least.
* SimultaneousArcs: ''In Memoriam'' roughly adapts ''Index''[='s=] Index arc and ''Railgun''[='s=] Level Upper arc. And simutaneous simultaneous means [[spoiler: Index is present at the Seventh Mist bombings.bombings]].



** In "Free; Run" Miaka is wearing a shirt with the [[ThereAreTwoKindsOfPeopleInTheWorld old binary joke]]. She can also set Academy City robots to "[[Series/DoctorWho Dalek]]".
* SinisterSurveillance: Mikoto wonders about this when she sees just what Judgement can spy on. Uiharu makes a shocked SuspiciouslySpecificDenial...and then tell Mikoto her pajamas are adorable.
* TemptingFate: Touma, at the end of "Daily Life, in a Thousand Parallel Worlds"

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** In "Free; Run" Miaka the second chapter Maika is wearing a shirt with the [[ThereAreTwoKindsOfPeopleInTheWorld old binary joke]]. She can also set Academy City robots to "[[Series/DoctorWho Dalek]]".
* SinisterSurveillance: Mikoto wonders about this when she sees just what Judgement can spy on. Uiharu makes a shocked SuspiciouslySpecificDenial...and then tell tells Mikoto her pajamas are adorable.
* TemptingFate: Touma, at the end of "Daily Life, in a Thousand Parallel Worlds"the first chapter.

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** There are now ''eight'' Level 5 espers. In addition, [[{{Engrish}} Meltdowner]]...err, [[[[AdaptationNameChange Meltdown]] is now ranked third, Gunha is now ranked sixth, and in an inversion, Mikoto is now ranked fourth.

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** There are now ''eight'' Level 5 espers. In addition, [[{{Engrish}} Meltdowner]]...Meltdowner...err, [[[[AdaptationNameChange [[AdaptationNameChange Meltdown]] is now ranked third, Gunha is now ranked sixth, and in an inversion, Mikoto is now ranked fourth.



** While she's not older, Komoe-sensei now looks like she's 15 [[LegalJailbait for the same reasons]].

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** While she's not older, Komoe-sensei For similar reasons, [[OlderThanTheyLook Komoe-sensei]] now looks like she's 15 [[LegalJailbait for the same reasons]].15. She's not actually older though.



* BoxingLessonsForSuperman: In this fic Touma has been learning self-defense under Yomikawa-sensei for eight years. (Granted, his only ability is AntiMagic; in fact that's why he's learning self-defense).

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* BoxingLessonsForSuperman: In this fic Touma has been learning self-defense under Yomikawa-sensei for eight years. (Granted, his only ability is AntiMagic; in fact AntiMagic, but that's why he's learning self-defense).



* NoOntologicalInertia: Notably averted in regards to how Touma's ability works, in contrast to canon. It stops powers from acting within its area of nullfication, but it does nothing to prevent their secondary effects.

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* NoOntologicalInertia: Notably averted in regards In contrast to how canon, Touma's ability works, in contrast to canon. averts this. It stops powers from acting within its area of nullfication, nullification, but it does nothing to prevent their secondary effects.




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* XMeetsY: At this point it's looking like ''ComicBook/XMen'' meets ''Literature/TheDresdenFiles''.



* BuffySpeak: Mikoto in her narration during "With Friends Like These".
-->''I mean, you’d think I could be some kind of super-hacker with my powers, but that kind of requires understanding how the whole machine...code...stuff works first.''
* TheCameo: Sadao and Emi from ''LightNovel/HatarakuMaousama'' [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial definitely do not]] appear in "Free; Run" while Index is at McDonalds. (After all, Sadao works at ''[[BlandNameProduct MgRonalds]]''.)
* ChekhovsGunman: When Touma is talking about the weird things in Academy City at the end of "Daily Life, in a Thousand Parallel Worlds", he mentions "middle-schoolers with robot armies". The next chapter introduces PlayfulHacker Maika, who has hacked into half of Academy City's robots.

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* BuffySpeak: Mikoto sometimes slips into this in her narration during "With Friends Like These".
-->''I mean, you’d think I could be some kind of super-hacker with my powers, but that kind of requires understanding how the whole machine...code...stuff works first.''
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* TheCameo: Sadao and Emi from ''LightNovel/HatarakuMaousama'' [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial definitely do not]] appear in "Free; Run" the second chapter while Index is at McDonalds. (After all, Sadao works at ''[[BlandNameProduct MgRonalds]]''.)
* ChekhovsGunman: When Touma is talking about the weird things in Academy City at the end of "Daily Life, in a Thousand Parallel Worlds", the first chapter, he mentions "middle-schoolers with robot armies". The next chapter introduces PlayfulHacker Maika, who has hacked into half of Academy City's robots.



** In "Daily Life, in a Thousand Parallel Worlds" Mikoto thinks of several of the other Level 5 espers.

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** In "Daily Life, in a Thousand Parallel Worlds" the first chapter Mikoto thinks of several mentally ticks off some of the other Level 5 espers.



** "With Friends Like These" references Konori Mii, though she doesn't actually appear.

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** "With Friends Like These" The third chapter references Konori Mii, though she doesn't actually appear.



* TheGadfly: Uiharu has signs of this. When she first meets Mikoto she proceeds to use increasingly more respectful JapaneseHonorifics until Kuroko [[DopeSlap whacks her on the head]]...and then Mikoto sees that Uiharu was trying to hold back laughter. And see the entry under SinisterSurveillance.

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* TheGadfly: Uiharu has signs of this. Uiharu. When she first meets Mikoto she proceeds to use unnerve her by using increasingly more respectful JapaneseHonorifics until Kuroko [[DopeSlap whacks her on the head]]...and then Mikoto sees that Uiharu was trying to hold back laughter. She's also willing to tease Kuroko. And see the entry under SinisterSurveillance.



-->''I get up to try and get a closer look, or maybe just say hi. [[spoiler:That’s right about when the first bomb goes off.]]''
* XMeetsY: At this point it's looking like ''ComicBook/XMen'' meets ''Literature/TheDresdenFiles''.

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-->''I get up to try and get a closer look, or maybe just say hi. [[spoiler:That’s right about when the first bomb goes off.]]''
* XMeetsY: At this point it's looking like ''ComicBook/XMen'' meets ''Literature/TheDresdenFiles''.
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** Similarly, [[{{Engrish}} Level Upper]] has been changed to "Level Plus", and "An Involuntary Movement", the full canon name for AIM has been changed to "Involuntary Physical Distortion", or IPD.

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** Similarly, [[{{Engrish}} Level Upper]] has been changed to "Level Plus", Meltdowner is now just "Meltdown" and "An Involuntary Movement", the full canon name for AIM AIM, has been changed to "Involuntary Physical Distortion", or IPD.



** There are now ''eight'' Level 5 espers - and in an inversion, Mikoto is now ranked fourth. Additionally, Mikoto doesn't have her canon [[HollywoodHacking hacking]] [[{{Technopath}} abilities]]...because she needs to know how computers and programming work in detail, and she's not a computer person.

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** There are now ''eight'' Level 5 espers - espers. In addition, [[{{Engrish}} Meltdowner]]...err, [[[[AdaptationNameChange Meltdown]] is now ranked third, Gunha is now ranked sixth, and in an inversion, Mikoto is now ranked fourth. Additionally, fourth.
*** On that note,
Mikoto doesn't have her canon [[HollywoodHacking hacking]] [[{{Technopath}} abilities]]...because abilities]]. The in-universe explanation is that she needs to know how computers and programming work in detail, and she's not a computer person.person. The out-of-universe reason is probably to avoid CastSpeciation with Uiharu.
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* IconicOutfit: Averted on two counts. Index gets a set of casual clothes from a thrift store and tosses her signature habit into a dumpster because it's an easy vector for tracking spells. Maika has also traded in her maid uniform for casual duds as part of the remake's emphasis on smiting violations of common sense.

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* IconicOutfit: Averted on two counts. Index gets does not wear a set of casual clothes from a thrift store and tosses her signature habit into a dumpster because it's an easy vector for tracking spells.habit. Maika has also traded in her maid uniform for casual duds as part of the remake's emphasis on smiting violations of common sense.
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: Touma's narration at a couple points.
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* IconicOutfit: Averted on two counts. Index gets a set of casual clothes from a thrift store and tosses her signature habit into a dumpster because it's an easy vector for tracking spells. Maika has also traded in her maid uniform for casual duds as part of the remake's emphasis on smiting violations of common sense.
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* {{Cliffhanger}}: The third chapter ends with [[spoiler:a bomb going off.]]
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* MacGyvering: To protect herself from searching spells, Index jury-rigs a portable church with a crucifix, a broken music box, a can of juice, a water bottle, a serving tray from McDonalds, and a piece of a Big Mac's bun.

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* MacGyvering: To protect herself from searching spells, Index jury-rigs a portable church with a crucifix, a broken music box, a can of grape juice, a water bottle, a serving tray from McDonalds, and a piece of a Big Mac's bun.
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** Similarly, [[{{Engrish}} Level Upper]] has been changed to "Level Plus".

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** Similarly, [[{{Engrish}} Level Upper]] has been changed to "Level Plus".Plus", and "An Involuntary Movement", the full canon name for AIM has been changed to "Involuntary Physical Distortion", or IPD.
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* NoOntologicalInertia: Notably averted in regards to how Touma's ability works, in contrast to canon. It stops powers from acting within its area of nullfication, but it does nothing to prevent their secondary effects.
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The series is written by Shockz. The first story ''In Memoriam'', can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9442823/1/In-Memoriam here]] or [[http://archiveofourown.org/series/49420 here]]. A dicussion thread for the story can be found [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/in-memoriam-a-certain-magical-index-scientific-railgun-au.262608/ here]].

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The series is written by Shockz. The first story ''In Memoriam'', can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9442823/1/In-Memoriam here]] or [[http://archiveofourown.org/series/49420 here]]. A dicussion discussion thread for the story can be found [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/in-memoriam-a-certain-magical-index-scientific-railgun-au.262608/ here]].



** Index's narration is detailed and straightfoward. Even her [[BigEater love of food]] is done in the same tone.

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** Index's narration is detailed and straightfoward.straightforward. Even her [[BigEater love of food]] is done in the same tone.



* DelayedReaction: Mikoto's narration when she first meets Uiharu. After getting over Uiharu's [[FlowerInHerHair headband]], she then describes her age, size, hair color, eye color, bare feet, clothing...and then does a mental DoubleTake at the bare feet. It then happens again when Uiharu comments on Mikoto's pijamas.

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* DelayedReaction: Mikoto's narration when she first meets Uiharu. After getting over Uiharu's [[FlowerInHerHair headband]], she then describes her age, size, hair color, eye color, bare feet, clothing...and then does a mental DoubleTake at the bare feet. It then happens again when Uiharu comments on Mikoto's pijamas.pajamas.



* MerchandiseDriven: In-universe, there are trading cards for many of the Level 4 and 5 espers. This is news to Mikoto, who wasn't aware she signed away the rights to use her likeness. When she finds out, she makes a mental note to ask her mother if she knows a good lawyer, and then wonders if there will be [[ShoddyKnockoffProduct made-in-China knockoffs]] next.

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* MerchandiseDriven: In-universe, there are trading cards for many of the Level 4 and Level 5 espers. This is news to Mikoto, who wasn't aware she signed away the rights to use her likeness. When she finds out, she makes a mental note to ask her mother if she knows a good lawyer, and then wonders if there will be [[ShoddyKnockoffProduct made-in-China knockoffs]] next.made-in-China]] [[{{Foreshadowing}} knockoffs next]].



* TheStationsOfTheCanon: The first chapter, "Daily Life, in a Thousand Parallel Worlds". ''Technically'' the second chapter "Free; Run" dosen't derail from canon, though the train comes in from a very different station. And the third chapter "With Friends Like These"...well it has the Railgun cast go to Seventh Mist, at least.

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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: The first chapter, "Daily Life, in a Thousand Parallel Worlds". ''Technically'' the second chapter "Free; Run" dosen't doesn't derail from canon, though the train comes in from a very different station. And the third chapter "With Friends Like These"...well it has the Railgun cast go to Seventh Mist, at least.



* SinisterSurveillance: Mikoto wonders about this when she sees just what Judgement can spy on. Uiharu makes a shocked SuspiciouslySpecificDenial...and then tell Mikoto her pijamas are adorable.

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* SinisterSurveillance: Mikoto wonders about this when she sees just what Judgement can spy on. Uiharu makes a shocked SuspiciouslySpecificDenial...and then tell Mikoto her pijamas pajamas are adorable.
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** There are now ''eight'' Level 5 espers - and in an inversion, Mikoto is now ranked fourth. Additionally, Mikoto doesn't have her canon [[HollywoodHacking hacking]] [[{{Technopath}} abilities]]...because she needs to know how computers work, and she's not a computer person.

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** There are now ''eight'' Level 5 espers - and in an inversion, Mikoto is now ranked fourth. Additionally, Mikoto doesn't have her canon [[HollywoodHacking hacking]] [[{{Technopath}} abilities]]...because she needs to know how computers work, and programming work in detail, and she's not a computer person.
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** There are now ''eight'' Level 5 espers - and in an inversion, Mikoto is now ranked fourth. Additionally, Mikoto also doesn't have her canon [[HollywoodHacking hacking]] [[{{Technopath}} abilities]]...because she needs to know how computers work, and she's not a computer person.

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** There are now ''eight'' Level 5 espers - and in an inversion, Mikoto is now ranked fourth. Additionally, Mikoto also doesn't have her canon [[HollywoodHacking hacking]] [[{{Technopath}} abilities]]...because she needs to know how computers work, and she's not a computer person.
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->''We are now approaching the C2 junction at Itabashi...This is ideal. I almost take a deep breath. Suppress it. This must be as unexpected as possible.\\
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Then, in one smooth motion, I yank the door latch, shove the door open, and fling myself out of the car...\\
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I hit the pavement arms-first...and skid, leaving not blood and torn flesh but sparks in my wake, as a torrent of stored mana floods all but a few square inches of my skin. I spring to my feet and press myself against the side wall of the highway, just in time for a car to miss hitting me by barely a centimetre...I look down: the drop is nearly twenty metres into the city below. I hope I am not overestimating the strength of this spell as I leap forward.\\
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I have never been skydiving, or ridden a roller coaster, or done anything much more exciting than ride a fast elevator. As I go into free fall, as my entire body floods with adrenaline and my every sense tells me I am about to die, I feel something amazing, something ''indescribable.\\
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Is this what it feels like to be free?\\


The [=ToAruverse=] Rewrite Project is a planned series of {{Fix Fic}}s for ''ACertainMagicalIndex/[[ACertainScientificRailgun Railgun]]'' [[TheRemake that rebuild the story and setting from the ground up]].

To explain, the first chapter of the first story is [[TheStationsOfTheCanon much like canon]], where Touma provokes some thugs to try and save them from Mikoto.

The second chapter has [[AdaptationalBadass Index]] leap out of a moving car, jump off a highway bridge, [[ItMakesSenseInContext jury-rig a portable church]], and sneak into Academy City just by using her [[GuileHero wits]], [[AwesomenessByAnalysis analytical skills]], and two magical spells.

And ''then'' she falls onto Touma's balcony and eats all his food.

The series is written by Shockz. The first story ''In Memoriam'', can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9442823/1/In-Memoriam here]] or [[http://archiveofourown.org/series/49420 here]]. A dicussion thread for the story can be found [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/in-memoriam-a-certain-magical-index-scientific-railgun-au.262608/ here]].
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!!General series tropes:
* AdaptationNameChange: Although it hasn't been mentioned in the story, [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/in-memoriam-a-certain-magical-index-scientific-railgun-au.262608/#post-11134897 a note from the author]] suggests Touma's ability has been renamed to "Illusion Breaker"
** Similarly, [[{{Engrish}} Level Upper]] has been changed to "Level Plus".
* AdaptationalBadass: Part of the point is that many of the characters get a competence boost.
** In-universe, Touma is now considered to be a Level 1 esper. This is not because he's more powerful, but rather because the esper ranking system has been changed to make more sense.
** There are now ''eight'' Level 5 espers - and in an inversion, Mikoto is now ranked fourth. Additionally, Mikoto also doesn't have her canon [[HollywoodHacking hacking]] [[{{Technopath}} abilities]]...because she needs to know how computers work, and she's not a computer person.
** [[AwesomenessByAnalysis In]][[GuileHero dex]].
** Maika is now a PlayfulHacker...and she says that she's hacked into half the robots in Academy City. Tellingly, Uiharu thinks she might have esper powers.
* AgeLift: In the fic series, Touma is about 17-18, Mikoto is about 16-17, and Kuroko, Saten, and Uiharu are about 15-16. [[WordOfGod As the author puts it: ]]
-->''I may have had a minor freakout when it suddenly hit me that Kuroko--[[LovableSexManiac freaking Kuroko]]--may be as young as ''[[UnfortunateImplications 12]]'' in canon.''
** While she's not older, Komoe-sensei now looks like she's 15 [[LegalJailbait for the same reasons]].
* AwesomenessByAnalysis:
** Touma had this in canon, but this fanfic series emphasizes it more.
** In canon, Index only had this ability when it came to magic. In this series, [[AdaptationalBadass she has no]] [[GuileHero such limitation.]]
* BoxingLessonsForSuperman: In this fic Touma has been learning self-defense under Yomikawa-sensei for eight years. (Granted, his only ability is AntiMagic; in fact that's why he's learning self-defense).
* FirstPersonSmartass: Touma. Mikoto to a lesser extent.
* FixFic[=/=]TheRemake: Some of the Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn tags used for ''In Memoriam'' include: "Full Rewrite", "Fix-It", "And By 'It' I Mean Everything".
-->''[[WordOfGod I'm not so pretentious or egotistical as to say that this will be the story Index should have been, but it's the story I wanted Index to be]]''
* GuileHero: Touma, as in canon. Index, ''not'' as in canon.
* PlayfulHacker: Uiharu, as in canon. Maika, ''not'' as in canon. This also makes her a...
** ChildProdigy: Uiharu bluntly states Maika is smarter than her.
* SwitchingPOV: At the moment, between Touma, Mikoto, and Index. Each character also adds their own touches to the narration.
** Touma, as noted above, is a FirstPersonSmartass, snarkily bemoaning his bad luck and the circumstances it gets him into.
** Mikoto also makes snarky observations, but her narration usually portrays her thoughts as italicized InnerMonologue.
** Index's narration is detailed and straightfoward. Even her [[BigEater love of food]] is done in the same tone.

!!Tropes specific to ''In Memoriam''
* AndThenWhat: Index planned on escaping into Academy City, but once she's there she realizes that she didn't think about what to do next.
* BeethovenWasAnAlienSpy: One of Index's grimoires was written by Archimedes, while another was a training manual for the {{OSS}}
* BuffySpeak: Mikoto in her narration during "With Friends Like These".
-->''I mean, you’d think I could be some kind of super-hacker with my powers, but that kind of requires understanding how the whole machine...code...stuff works first.''
* TheCameo: Sadao and Emi from ''LightNovel/HatarakuMaousama'' [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial definitely do not]] appear in "Free; Run" while Index is at McDonalds. (After all, Sadao works at ''[[BlandNameProduct MgRonalds]]''.)
* ChekhovsGunman: When Touma is talking about the weird things in Academy City at the end of "Daily Life, in a Thousand Parallel Worlds", he mentions "middle-schoolers with robot armies". The next chapter introduces PlayfulHacker Maika, who has hacked into half of Academy City's robots.
* DelayedReaction: Mikoto's narration when she first meets Uiharu. After getting over Uiharu's [[FlowerInHerHair headband]], she then describes her age, size, hair color, eye color, bare feet, clothing...and then does a mental DoubleTake at the bare feet. It then happens again when Uiharu comments on Mikoto's pijamas.
* EarlyBirdCameo:
** In "Daily Life, in a Thousand Parallel Worlds" Mikoto thinks of several of the other Level 5 espers.
** When she arrives in Academy City, Index passes by Accelerator. Maika's introduction later in the chapter can also be considered this.
** "With Friends Like These" references Konori Mii, though she doesn't actually appear.
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Index's escape.
* {{Fangirl}}: Saten is introduced in this series as a fan of Mikoto herself.
* TheGadfly: Uiharu has signs of this. When she first meets Mikoto she proceeds to use increasingly more respectful JapaneseHonorifics until Kuroko [[DopeSlap whacks her on the head]]...and then Mikoto sees that Uiharu was trying to hold back laughter. And see the entry under SinisterSurveillance.
* TheGlomp: Kuroko's default greeting to Mikoto, who has learned to duck.
* HardWorkHardlyWorks: Saten's problem.
* InHarmsWay: It's suggested Index might be enjoying jumping off high places.
* LimitedWardrobe: In her narration, Index claims most of her outfits consisted of the same white dress.
* MacGyvering: To protect herself from searching spells, Index jury-rigs a portable church with a crucifix, a broken music box, a can of juice, a water bottle, a serving tray from McDonalds, and a piece of a Big Mac's bun.
* MerchandiseDriven: In-universe, there are trading cards for many of the Level 4 and 5 espers. This is news to Mikoto, who wasn't aware she signed away the rights to use her likeness. When she finds out, she makes a mental note to ask her mother if she knows a good lawyer, and then wonders if there will be [[ShoddyKnockoffProduct made-in-China knockoffs]] next.
* MythologyGag:
** In "Daily Life, in a Thousand Parallel Worlds", Touma says he has reason to believe he was going to ranked at Level 0.
** Mikoto talking about her lack of hacking abilities in "With Friends Like These".
* PlaceOfProtection: Being on holy ground generally protects against magic. Index [[MacGyvering MacGyvers]] a portable church to protect herself from searching spells.
* PostModernMagick: Index uses an {{Invisibility}} spell [[BeethovenWasAnAlienSpy developed by the]] {{OSS}}, which has the incantation "''Let Liberty be my cloak in the night.''"
* PowerLimiter: Index's {{geis}} only allows her to use magic when she's in danger. It's sensitive enough to activate just by [[EarlyBirdCameo Accelerator]] looking at her.
* TheStationsOfTheCanon: The first chapter, "Daily Life, in a Thousand Parallel Worlds". ''Technically'' the second chapter "Free; Run" dosen't derail from canon, though the train comes in from a very different station. And the third chapter "With Friends Like These"...well it has the Railgun cast go to Seventh Mist, at least.
* SimultaneousArcs: ''In Memoriam'' roughly adapts ''Index''[='s=] Index arc and ''Railgun''[='s=] Level Upper arc. And simutaneous means Index is present at the Seventh Mist bombings.
* ShoutOut:
** In "Free; Run" Miaka is wearing a shirt with the [[ThereAreTwoKindsOfPeopleInTheWorld old binary joke]]. She can also set Academy City robots to "[[Series/DoctorWho Dalek]]".
* SinisterSurveillance: Mikoto wonders about this when she sees just what Judgement can spy on. Uiharu makes a shocked SuspiciouslySpecificDenial...and then tell Mikoto her pijamas are adorable.
* TemptingFate: Touma, at the end of "Daily Life, in a Thousand Parallel Worlds"
* WhamLine:
** "With Friends Like These":
-->''I get up to try and get a closer look, or maybe just say hi. [[spoiler:That’s right about when the first bomb goes off.]]''
* XMeetsY: At this point it's looking like ''ComicBook/XMen'' meets ''Literature/TheDresdenFiles''.

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