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* AngstySurvivingTwin: Implied to be the case with Minato. He [[SuspiciouslySpecificTense had]] a sister (although he doesn't specify twin), and Theodore says the guest he was supposed to attend died when she was young, suggesting that [=FeMC=] existed but died in the Moonlight Bridge accident.
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* AngstySurvivingTwin: Implied to be the case with Minato. He [[SuspiciouslySpecificTense had]] a sister (although he doesn't specify twin), sister, and Theodore says the guest he was supposed to attend died when she was young, suggesting that [=FeMC=] the female protagonist[[note]]commonly interpreted as Minato's twin based on material like [[Theatre/Persona3TheWeirdMasquerade the stageplay]][[/note]] existed but died in the Moonlight Bridge accident.accident. She's never named, but Minato talks about her sometimes, like when he suggests building sandcastles at Yakushima or when explaining his hesitation over not killing Ryoji.
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* ButterflyOfTransformation: A black butterfly sometimes watches the Persona-users; there's one on the window sill on Akechi's first day of class in Iwatodai, and much later there's one watching Yukiko and Yosuke discuss whether Yu could be the killer. An AllThereInTheManual case of DramaticIrony is in play here: a savvy reader knows that [[BigBad Nyarlathotep]] is often represented by black butterflies.
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* ButterflyOfTransformation: A black butterfly sometimes watches the Persona-users; Persona-users when there's a chance they'll do something morally dubious; there's one on the window sill on Akechi's first day of class in Iwatodai, and much later there's one watching Yukiko and Yosuke discuss whether Yu could be the killer.killer based on [[RedHerring what his shadow said]]. An AllThereInTheManual case of DramaticIrony is in play here: a savvy reader knows that [[BigBad Nyarlathotep]] is often represented by black butterflies.
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* ElephantInTheLivingRoom: The fox.
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* ElephantInTheLivingRoom: The fox.Akechi doesn't know why there's a fox in the TV World, and the Investigation Team have no answers for him.
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Goro wanted to question it. He wanted to question it so badly.\\
'''Yu:''' I do ema requests for him. He gives us magical leaves if we pay him a small fortune.\\
'''Yu:''' I do ema requests for him. He gives us magical leaves if we pay him a small fortune.\\
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'''Yukiko:''' We don't really know.\\
Goro stopped questioning it. The fox seemed to nod in approval at Goro's resignation.
Goro stopped questioning it. The fox seemed to nod in approval at Goro's resignation.
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'''Yukiko:''' We don't really know.\\
Goro stopped questioning it. The fox seemed to nod in approval at Goro's resignation.
Goro stopped questioning it. The fox seemed to nod in approval at Goro's resignation.
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* InnocentAwkwardQuestion: Akechi asks a lot of questions about the "[[LiesToChildren fun hotels]]" to embarrass Junpei and Yukari. Of course, Akechi knows full well what love hotels are, and is only asking to mess with them.
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* InnocentAwkwardQuestion: Akechi asks a lot of questions about the "[[LiesToChildren fun hotels]]" to embarrass Junpei and Yukari. Of course, Akechi knows full well what love hotels LoveHotels are, and is only asking to mess with them.
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* InternalReveal: Akechi reveals his murders, death, and subsequent time-travel [[spoiler: to Shinjiro and Ken during the October full moon, and inadvertently to SEES the next day.]]
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* InternalReveal: Akechi reveals his murders, death, and subsequent time-travel [[spoiler: to Shinjiro and Ken during the October full moon, and inadvertently to SEES the next day.]]day]]. Much later, he explains the same set of events to the Investigation Team after [[spoiler: his TV World dungeon]] leaves them with a ''lot'' of unanswered questions.
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* TheLethalConnotationOfGunsAndOthers: {{Downplayed|Trope}} compared to ''Persona 3'' canon: Takaya's revolver shoots multiple people although only one person dies from it.
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* TheLethalConnotationOfGunsAndOthers: {{Downplayed|Trope}} {{Downplayed}} compared to ''Persona 3'' canon: Takaya's revolver shoots multiple people although several more people, but only one person dies from it.named character ever succumbs to their wounds.
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* OriginalGeneration: Yamamoto Emiko, a GenkiGirl who sits next to Akechi in elementary school. She serves as his Strength arcana.
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* OriginalGeneration: Yamamoto Emiko, a GenkiGirl who sits next to Akechi in elementary school. She at Gekkoukan Elementary School and serves as his Strength arcana. Arcana social link. She acts as a {{Foil}} to Akechi and Ken, highlighting their TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior with her [[ChildrenAreInnocent far brighter outlook]].
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* SleepParalysisCreature: Minato calls Pharos his sleep paralysis demon in explanation to a slightly baffled Akechi.
* SociallyAwkwardHero: Minato may be SEES' Wildcard-having field leader, but he'll phone-call Akechi to ask if he wants to go to the movies because knocking on his door is "awkward", or [[spoiler: feel the need to "fill the silence" with his [[PityTheKidnapper kidnapper]]]], or run away from Ryoji flirting with him.
* SociallyAwkwardHero: Minato may be SEES' Wildcard-having field leader, but he'll phone-call Akechi to ask if he wants to go to the movies because knocking on his door is "awkward", or [[spoiler: feel the need to "fill the silence" with his [[PityTheKidnapper kidnapper]]]], or run away from Ryoji flirting with him.
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* SleepParalysisCreature: Minato calls Pharos explains to a baffled and more than a little concerned Akechi that the conversation he was having in his room in the middle of the night was with Pharos, [[FantasticallyIndifferent his sleep paralysis demon in explanation to demon]]. It's only {{discussed}} though; Pharos isn't ''actually'' a slightly baffled Akechi.
sleep paralysis demon.
* SociallyAwkwardHero: Minato may be SEES'Wildcard-having Wildcard-wielding field leader, but he'll phone-call Akechi to ask if he wants to go to the movies because knocking on his door is "awkward", or [[spoiler: feel the need to "fill the silence" with his [[PityTheKidnapper kidnapper]]]], or near-literally run away from Ryoji [[ImpliedLoveInterest Ryoji]] flirting with him.
* SociallyAwkwardHero: Minato may be SEES'
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* StandardFemaleGrabArea: RareMaleExample; both times [[spoiler: Akechi is kidnapped, he's initially grabbed by the shoulder]]. Downplayed by him still struggling (if ineffectually) after being grabbed, and {{justified|Trope}} by [[spoiler: Tsuyoshi being supernaturally strong and the Midnight Channel kidnapper immediately drugging him]].
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* StandardFemaleGrabArea: RareMaleExample; both times [[spoiler: Akechi is kidnapped, kidnapped]], he's initially grabbed by the shoulder]].shoulder. Downplayed by him still struggling (if ineffectually) after being grabbed, and {{justified|Trope}} by [[spoiler: Tsuyoshi being supernaturally strong and the Midnight Channel kidnapper immediately drugging him]].
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How To Alphabetize Things: alphabetize by display name over database name, and numbers go before letters
* ThousandOrigamiCranes: Ryoji gives Akechi some origami paper from Kyoto and the suggestion that if they and Minato work together, they'll only need to fold 333 cranes each and then they can share the wish. Akechi folds three from the paper he's given; [[spoiler: after Nyx is sealed, Ryoji tells Akechi that between him and Minato they folded 997 cranes, including the one Ryoji gave to Akechi. Although Akechi doesn't say anything, Ryoji assumes that Akechi folded the last three]]. Later, when Akechi goes missing in the Midnight Channel, Minato says that Ryoji has been "stress folding cranes".
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* JokeAndReceive: Why asked by Adachi if he has any idea of who could be behind the murders, Akechi - mostly to screw with Adachi - suggests that it could be a member of the police force, maybe even Adachi himself as no-one would suspect the killer of actually being someone investigating the crimes, and the motive could be as simple as being bored with life in Inaba; unbeknownst to Akechi, he just correctly guessed the killer and the motive.
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* JokeAndReceive: Why When asked by Adachi if he has any idea ideas of who could be behind the murders, Akechi - mostly to screw with Adachi - suggests that it could be a member of the police force, maybe even Adachi himself as no-one would suspect the killer of actually being someone investigating the crimes, and with the motive could be as simple as of being bored with life in Inaba; unbeknownst Inaba, mostly to mess with him. Unbeknownst to Akechi, he just correctly guessed the killer and the motive.
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* ThousandOrigamiCranes: Ryoji gives Akechi some origami paper from Kyoto and the suggestion that if they and Minato work together, they'll only need to fold 333 cranes each and then they can share the wish. Akechi folds three from the paper he's given; [[spoiler: after Nyx is sealed, Ryoji tells Akechi that between him and Minato they folded 997 cranes, including the one Ryoji gave to Akechi. Although Akechi doesn't say anything, Ryoji assumes that Akechi folded the last three]]. Later, when Akechi goes missing in the Midnight Channel, Minato says that Ryoji has been "stress folding cranes".
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* OneSteveLimit: Averted. Minato sees that he can fuse what seems to be Akechi's persona Loki, asking Akechi why he can do that. It turns out to be a completely separate persona different from Akechi's that happened to share a name.
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* BeachEpisode: SEES' trip to Yakushima, complete with beach volleyball, Operation [[NotInFrontOfTheKid Friend]] Hunt, sandcastles, and an [[BreadsEggsMilkSquick Anti-Shadow Suppression Weapon]].
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* BeachEpisode: SEES' trip to Yakushima, complete with beach volleyball, Operation [[NotInFrontOfTheKid Friend]] Hunt, sandcastles, and an [[BreadsEggsMilkSquick [[BreadEggsMilkSquick Anti-Shadow Suppression Weapon]].
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** Ryoji brings [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall max social link]] presents for Akechi and Minato; the scarf he planned to give Minato for the former, and the ring he wore for the latter.
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** Ryoji brings [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall max social link]] presents for Akechi and Minato; the scarf he planned to give Minato for the former, and the ring he wore for the latter. [[spoiler: Ultimately subverted as Ryoji was SparedByTheAdaptation.]]
