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** Luo Binghe suffers from Xin Mo's backlash, almost dying from an excess of ''yang'' energy when he stumbles upon Shen Yuan. Unless he betters his cultivation, it will continue.
** Shen Yuan being an albino means he's rather sensitive to sunlight.
** Luo Binghe suffers from Xin Mo's backlash, almost dying from an excess of ''yang'' energy when he stumbles upon Shen Yuan. Unless he betters his cultivation, it will continue.
** Shen Yuan being an albino means he's rather sensitive to sunlight.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/26989948/chapters/65881711 The Untold Tale]]'' is a ''Literature/RenZhaFanPaiZiJiuXiTong'' fanfic written by [=PhoenixTakaramono=] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/26989948/chapters/65881711 The Untold Tale]]'' is a ''Literature/RenZhaFanPaiZiJiuXiTong'' ''Literature/TheScumVillainsSelfSavingSystemRenZhaFanpaiZijiuXitong'' fanfic written by [=PhoenixTakaramono=] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn.
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* FallingIntoHisArms: How Binghe meets Shen Yuan. Bonus points for mournfully wondering if he would ever get to find a nice shizun of his own right before.
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* AlwaysABiggerFish: Meng Mo gets ''extremely'' nervous around Celestials, warning Binghe to tread on eggshells when he's dealing with Shen Yuan.
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** Divorce is ''not'' a possibility in Imperial China, unless the woman has behaved in a shameful manner and needs to be thoroughly humiliated.
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* EtTuBrute: Luo Binghe is very much horrified and infuriated when he learns the whole extent of the Old Palace Master's manipulations.
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* MiseryBuildsCharacter: Discussed when Luo Binghe gets furious at Airplane Shooting Towards the Sky for inflicting him a crappy life, with Shen Yuan explaining Binghe wouldn't have been driven to achieve greatness if he had been satisfied with the current society. Binghe stays pissed off.
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** Luo Binghe suffers from Xin Mo's backlash, almost dying from an excess of ''yang'' energy when he stumbles upon Shen Yuan. Unless he betters his cultivation, it will continue.
** Shen Yuan being an albino means he's rather sensitive to sunlight.
** Luo Binghe suffers from Xin Mo's backlash, almost dying from an excess of ''yang'' energy when he stumbles upon Shen Yuan. Unless he betters his cultivation, it will continue.
** Shen Yuan being an albino means he's rather sensitive to sunlight.
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* RescuedFromTheScrappyHead: InUniverse, Airplane Shooting Towards the Sky rewriting ''Proud Immortal Demon Way'' to be more in line with ''Scumbag System'' made his readers much more empathetic towards Shen Qingqiu. This is also what Shen Yuan plans to do with the original Luo Binghe.
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* RescuedFromTheScrappyHead: RageAgainstTheHeavens: Luo Binghe is rather mightily upset to learn his entire life was engineered by an otherworldly being for amusement purposes and would have ''words'' with said entity. It's this instead of RageAgainstTheAuthor as the System's filter gave him the information in a form he would easily relate to.
* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: InUniverse, Airplane Shooting Towards the Sky rewriting ''Proud Immortal Demon Way'' to be more in line with ''Scumbag System'' made his readers much more empathetic towards Shen Qingqiu. This is also what Shen Yuan plans to do with the original Luo Binghe.
* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: InUniverse, Airplane Shooting Towards the Sky rewriting ''Proud Immortal Demon Way'' to be more in line with ''Scumbag System'' made his readers much more empathetic towards Shen Qingqiu. This is also what Shen Yuan plans to do with the original Luo Binghe.
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** As his wandering in the dream realm takes him to a spider lily field, Shen Yuan remembers the flower is associated with death, the underworld and resurrection.
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ScrewDestiny: After being informed of his original fate of dying alone and despised in the original novel, Luo Binghe swears to ruin his creator's plans for him.
*ShipperOnDeck
{{Seers}}: Shen Yuan took "Fortuneteller" as a class job. He used palmistry on Luo Binghe, but also received visions in the dream realm.
*StarCrossedLoversShipperOnDeck: The System is rooting for their Esteemed Host's romantic success with Luo Binghe!
* StarCrossedLovers:
** After meeting Shen Yuan, Luo Binghe quickly decides the other man is his fated match but never was allowed to meet him by virtue of their different species.
** Su Xiyan and Tianlang-jun played the trope fully straight. Their son is rather anguished to learn this little fact.
* YouCantGoHomeAgain: As the System explains their Esteemed Host he just transmigrated into his own novel, Shen Yuan realizes he's dead in his original world and asks if there's no way for him to return. There's not.
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* StarCrossedLovers:
** After meeting Shen Yuan, Luo Binghe quickly decides the other man is his fated match but never was allowed to meet him by virtue of their different species.
** Su Xiyan and Tianlang-jun played the trope fully straight. Their son is rather anguished to learn this little fact.
* YouCantGoHomeAgain: As the System explains their Esteemed Host he just transmigrated into his own novel, Shen Yuan realizes he's dead in his original world and asks if there's no way for him to return. There's not.
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** Shen Yuan's day robes are trimmed with white fur on the collar, and Luo Binghe is immediately stunned on their meeting.
** Luo Binghe appears in the dream realm only wearing a divine tiger's pelt, which is noted to confer him a barbarian allure.
*RescuedFromTheScrappyHead
PurpleProse: Luo Binghe's narrative is just as flowery and dramatic as befits an epic ''xianxia'' protagonist.
*RevengeBeforeReason
RescuedFromTheScrappyHead: InUniverse, Airplane Shooting Towards the Sky rewriting ''Proud Immortal Demon Way'' to be more in line with ''Scumbag System'' made his readers much more empathetic towards Shen Qingqiu. This is also what Shen Yuan plans to do with the original Luo Binghe.
*RuleOfSymbolismRevengeBeforeReason: Shen Yuan is aghast when he receives a premonition of four women killing him for looking like Shen Qingqiu -- not only Luo Binghe would go berserk from losing someone under his protection to his own wives' treachery, the Heavens themselves wouldn't take kindly to one of their residents' murder.
* RuleOfSymbolism:
** The vision of the dragon and the phoenix, on two levels. The first meaning is that Shen Yuan's support will help Luo Binghe to ascend as the Sacred Ruler of Three Realms, just as the phoenix is intended to herald a new Emperor's rule. The second meaning is from the romantic bent, as phoenix and dragon imagery often features in weddings.
** Shen Yuan's day robes are trimmed with white fur on the collar, and Luo Binghe is immediately stunned on their meeting.
** Luo Binghe appears in the dream realm only wearing a divine tiger's pelt, which is noted to confer him a barbarian allure.
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** The vision of the dragon and the phoenix, on two levels. The first meaning is that Shen Yuan's support will help Luo Binghe to ascend as the Sacred Ruler of Three Realms, just as the phoenix is intended to herald a new Emperor's rule. The second meaning is from the romantic bent, as phoenix and dragon imagery often features in weddings.
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* JerkassGods
JerkassGods: Because of his system's filter, Shen Yuan presents Airplane Shooting Towards the Sky as one, and it rather fits -- he ''is'' the one who created the setting and forced his protagonist to suffer unending trials and misery, just because he wanted to write something exciting without considering Luo Binghe's feelings on the matter.
*MamaBear
MamaBear: Su Xiyan won't let death stop her to beg for Shen Yuan to rescue her son from the self-destructing path he's currently engaged on.
*MysticalWhiteHair
MysticalWhiteHair: Shen Yuan's celestial appearance is an albino one.
*OlderAndWiser
ObliviousToLove: Shen Yuan wouldn't be Shen Yuan without his brain-breaking denseness regarding his love life. He ''knows'' Binghe is bisexual, he ''knows'' he just transmigrated within a BoysLove story, his system is giving him ''hints'' and he still doesn't register Binghe's thirst for him.
*OppositesAttractOlderAndWiser: This iteration of Shen Yuan is around forty years old, so he had time to study and become a serious novelist instead of being a floundering twenty-something.
* OppositesAttract: Heavenly Demon-Human hybrid Luo Binghe and Celestial Shen Yuan. Even their physical appearances contrast, as Luo Binghe dresses in black while Shen Yuan is an albino.
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** Luo Binghe is tremendously excited when Shen Yuan (a powerful celestial being) declares his intent to help the half-demon to become the Sacred Ruler. From his viewpoint, he just obtained the Mandate of Heaven -- a true Chinese Emperor being unable to rule without the Heavens' blessing.
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EntertaininglyWrong:
** Shen Yuan believes he's fated to become Luo Binghe's sworn brother. ''Oy vey''...
** Luo Binghe decided the Heavens disapproved one of them being destined to fall in love with a lowly demon so they tried to make Binghe hate his fated match through Shen Qingqiu's abuse, courtesy of the human being an IdenticalStranger to the celestial.
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FantasticRacism: Neither humans nor celestials are open to like the demons.
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{{Foreshadowing}}: A whole sequence is actually named "Loading ChekhovsGun".
** The resurrection lilies.
** The Heavenly Officials disapproving of Shen Yuan's support for Luo Binghe.
** Luo Binghe's main wives being potentially hostile towards Shen Yuan.
*IdenticalStrangerIdenticalStranger: Shen Yuan rather looks like Shen Qingqiu. It's hinted it will give him trouble with some of Luo Binghe's wives.
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** Luo Binghe decided the Heavens disapproved one of them being destined to fall in love with a lowly demon so they tried to make Binghe hate his fated match through Shen Qingqiu's abuse, courtesy of the human being an IdenticalStranger to the celestial.
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** The Heavenly Officials disapproving of Shen Yuan's support for Luo Binghe.
** Luo Binghe's main wives being potentially hostile towards Shen Yuan.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/26989948/chapters/65881711 The Untold Tale]]'' is a ''Literature/RenZhaFanPaiZiJiuTong'' fanfic written by [=PhoenixTakaramono=] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/26989948/chapters/65881711 The Untold Tale]]'' is a ''Literature/RenZhaFanPaiZiJiuTong'' ''Literature/RenZhaFanPaiZiJiuXiTong'' fanfic written by [=PhoenixTakaramono=] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn.
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AdaptationalNiceGuy: This iteration of the System is much more helpful and not as sadistic as the canon one.
*AwfulTruth
AwfulTruth: Several of these for Binghe.
** First and foremost, his entire existence has been puppetered by a faceless, godlike entity on a whim.
** How exactly the Old Palace Master interfered with his life by hurting his birth parents.
*BadassBookworm
BadassBookworm: Shen Yuan is a fortuneteller and historian with a passion for war stories and tactical strategies -- one of his jobs actually is ''Warlord''.
*BenevolentBoss
BenevolentBoss: Shen Yuan treats his servants as sweet little kids and worries about Luo Binghe hurting them.
*BunniesForCuteness
BunniesForCuteness: Several of Shen Yuan's attendants, to fit with his lunar motifs. He internally squees over them and muses that his younger sister would adore them.
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CosmicMotifs: The Moon for Shen Yuan -- he's an albino with several MoonRabbit servants.
*DeliberateValuesDissonanceDeliberateValuesDissonance:
** Exploited by Shen Yuan when he picks fortunetelling as one of his class jobs. In a superstitious xianxia setting, any prophet worth their salt is highly esteemed and often becomes TheManBehindTheMan instead of being derided as a quack.
** He also briefly muses that the educational system is completely in shambles, relying on apprenticeships instead of a standardized curriculum.
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** He also briefly muses that the educational system is completely in shambles, relying on apprenticeships instead of a standardized curriculum.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/26989948/chapters/65881711 The Untold Tale]]'' is a ''Literature/RenZhaFanPaiZiJiuTong'' fanfic written by [=PhoenixTakaramono=] on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn.
Let it not be said that Shen Yuan didn’t know how to be an accomplished—arguably better—writer than Airplane Shooting Towards the Sky! A middle-aged author in his hubris, he’d unknowingly triggered his fate and had his consciousness whisked away into an unfathomable mystical world that he would later learn to be based on ''Proud Immortal Demon Way'' and his very own work-in-progress. When given the opportunity to customize his character’s stats and to design his one remaining Customizable Skill Slot, as a veteran reader of transmigration stories and their tropes, Shen Yuan demanded, “Grant me the protagonist’s halo of course!”
Only to learn that he was going to share said unique skill with one Luo Binghe -- the same sadistic “Bing gē” from the released Extra short story. It was also too bad that Shen Yuan, in his mortal form, resembled Shen Qingqiu by a good thirty-to-forty percent.
!Contains the following tropes
* AdaptationalNiceGuy
* AwfulTruth
* BadassBookworm
* BenevolentBoss
* BunniesForCuteness
* CosmicMotifs
* DeliberateValuesDissonance
* EntertaininglyWrong
* FantasticRacism
* {{Foreshadowing}}
* IdenticalStranger
* JerkassGods
* MamaBear
* MysticalWhiteHair
* OlderAndWiser
* OppositeAttracts
* PrettyInMink
* RescuedFromTheScrappyHead
* RevengeBeforeReason
* RuleOfSymbolism
* {{Seers}}
* ShipperOnDeck
* StarCrossedLovers
Let it not be said that Shen Yuan didn’t know how to be an accomplished—arguably better—writer than Airplane Shooting Towards the Sky! A middle-aged author in his hubris, he’d unknowingly triggered his fate and had his consciousness whisked away into an unfathomable mystical world that he would later learn to be based on ''Proud Immortal Demon Way'' and his very own work-in-progress. When given the opportunity to customize his character’s stats and to design his one remaining Customizable Skill Slot, as a veteran reader of transmigration stories and their tropes, Shen Yuan demanded, “Grant me the protagonist’s halo of course!”
Only to learn that he was going to share said unique skill with one Luo Binghe -- the same sadistic “Bing gē” from the released Extra short story. It was also too bad that Shen Yuan, in his mortal form, resembled Shen Qingqiu by a good thirty-to-forty percent.
!Contains the following tropes
* AdaptationalNiceGuy
* AwfulTruth
* BadassBookworm
* BenevolentBoss
* BunniesForCuteness
* CosmicMotifs
* DeliberateValuesDissonance
* EntertaininglyWrong
* FantasticRacism
* {{Foreshadowing}}
* IdenticalStranger
* JerkassGods
* MamaBear
* MysticalWhiteHair
* OlderAndWiser
* OppositeAttracts
* PrettyInMink
* RescuedFromTheScrappyHead
* RevengeBeforeReason
* RuleOfSymbolism
* {{Seers}}
* ShipperOnDeck
* StarCrossedLovers
