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* AllJustADream: Hellflame having sex with [[spoiler:Kung Lao]].
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* TheDitz: Hellflame.
* FluffyTheTerrible: Bob and Paul the rotting hands.
* InformedDeformity: Kitana actually used the latter as a retort, so whether it is true or not is unknown.
* TheImmodestOrgasm: Hellflame was close to one in Chapter 8. [[spoiler:In a dream.]]
* FluffyTheTerrible: Bob and Paul the rotting hands.
* InformedDeformity: Kitana actually used the latter as a retort, so whether it is true or not is unknown.
* TheImmodestOrgasm: Hellflame was close to one in Chapter 8. [[spoiler:In a dream.]]
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* MrFanservice: Kung Lao. And he certainly doesn't enjoy it.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: How Quan Chi reacts to himself creating Hellflame.
* ParodySue: Hellflame.
* SchmuckBait: Hellflame is this to Kung Lao.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: How Quan Chi reacts to himself creating Hellflame.
* ParodySue: Hellflame.
* SchmuckBait: Hellflame is this to Kung Lao.
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* SugarBowl: Sueville.
* TakeThat: To almost all the OCs in the fandom.
* TakeThat: To almost all the OCs in the fandom.
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* GagBoobs: Nearly all the Sues have them. One Mary Sue even has ''J-Cups''.
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* WriteWhoYouKnow: WordOfGod says Hellflame is based on ''several'' OCs.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6398104/1/The-Sue-Rules The Sue Rules]] is a ''Franchise/MortalKombat'' fanfic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1823962/Mr-Havik Mr. Havik]], following the adventures of [[MarySue Hellflame]], along with Kung Lao and Kitana, who pursue after her.
The fanfic is known for its accurate rules on Mary Sue stories and the satire resulting from it.
The fanfic is known for its accurate rules on Mary Sue stories and the satire resulting from it.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6398104/1/The-Sue-Rules The Sue Rules]] is a ''Franchise/MortalKombat'' fanfic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1823962/Mr-Havik Mr. Havik]], following the adventures of [[MarySue Hellflame]], Hellflame, along with Kung Lao and Kitana, who pursue after her.
The fanfic is known for its accurate rules on Mary Sue stories and the satire resulting from it.
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The fanfic is known for its accurate rules on Mary Sue stories and the (awesome) satire resulting from it.
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The fanfic is known for its accurate rules on Mary Sue stories and the (awesome) satire resulting from it.
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** InformedDeformity: Kitana actually used the latter as a retort, so whether it is true or not is unknown.
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* [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone Elder Gods, What Have I Done?]]: How Quan Chi reacts to himself creating Hellflame.
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* [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone Elder Gods, What Have I Done?]]: MyGodWhatHaveIDone: How Quan Chi reacts to himself creating Hellflame.
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* ShipTease: Followed immediately by a ShipSink.
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-->And then they leapt into a fiery kiss.
->Nah, just kidding…
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->Nah, just kidding…
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* ShipTease: Followed immediately by a ShipSink.
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--> The monk's brows knit together in a deep furrow as the two locked eyes in a fearsome staringcontest.
-->Andcontest.\\
And then they leapt into a fierykiss.
->Nah,kiss.\\
Nah, just kidding…
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And then they leapt into a fiery
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Nah, just kidding…
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6398104/1/The-Sue-Rules The Sue Rules]] is a MortalKombat fanfic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1823962/Mr-Havik Mr. Havik]], following the adventures of [[MarySue Hellflame]], along with Kung Lao and Kitana, who pursue after her.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6398104/1/The-Sue-Rules The Sue Rules]] is a MortalKombat ''Franchise/MortalKombat'' fanfic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1823962/Mr-Havik Mr. Havik]], following the adventures of [[MarySue Hellflame]], along with Kung Lao and Kitana, who pursue after her.
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* AffectionateParody: The second chapter is a parody of the infamous ''TheLegendOfZelda'' CD-i game. Justified as [[CantHoldHisLiquor Kung Lao is drunk]].
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* AffectionateParody: The second chapter is a parody of the infamous ''TheLegendOfZelda'' CD-i game.''VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaCDiGames''. Justified as [[CantHoldHisLiquor Kung Lao is drunk]].
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* Deconstruction: Of the typical Mary Sue fanfic.
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* AffectionateParody: The second chapter is a parody of the infamous TheLegendOfZelda ''TheLegendOfZelda'' CD-i game. Justified as [[CantHoldHisLiquor Kung Lao is drunk]].
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* AffectionateParody: The second chapter is a parody of the infamous [[Videogame/TheLegendOfZelda]] TheLegendOfZelda CD-i game. Justified as [[CantHoldHisLiquor Kung Lao is drunk]].
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6398104/1/The-Sue-Rules The Sue Rules]] is a [[Videogame/MortalKombat]] fanfic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1823962/Mr-Havik Mr. Havik]], following the adventures of [[MarySue Hellflame]], along with Kung Lao and Kitana, who pursue after her.
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6398104/1/The-Sue-Rules The Sue Rules]] is a [[Videogame/MortalKombat]] MortalKombat fanfic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1823962/Mr-Havik Mr. Havik]], following the adventures of [[MarySue Hellflame]], along with Kung Lao and Kitana, who pursue after her.
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* TheImmodestOrgasm: Hellflame was close to one in Chapter 8. [[Spoiler:In a dream.]]
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* TheImmodestOrgasm: Hellflame was close to one in Chapter 8. [[Spoiler:In [[spoiler:In a dream.]]]]
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6398104/1/The-Sue-Rules The Sue Rules]] is a [[Videogame/MortalKombat]] fanfic by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1823962/Mr-Havik Mr. Havik]], following the adventures of [[MarySue Hellflame]], along with Kung Lao and Kitana, who pursue after her.
The fanfic is known for its accurate rules on Mary Sue stories and the (awesome) satire resulting from it.
!!This work contains examples of:
* AffectionateParody: The second chapter is a parody of the infamous [[Videogame/TheLegendOfZelda]] CD-i game. Justified as [[CantHoldHisLiquor Kung Lao is drunk]].
* AllJustADream: Hellflame having sex with [[spoiler:Kung Lao]].
* TheCameo: Among the many Mary Sues in Sueville, one of them is [[Fanfic/MyImmortal Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way]].
* ChickMagnet: Kung Lao, to the point where nearly all the Mary Sues ditch their "true loves" and chase after him.
* [[Main/Deconstruction]]: Of the typical Mary Sue fanfic.
* DidntThinkThisThrough: Quan Chi created Hellflame to destroy Scorpion. However, he didn't realize he would also doom the rest of the universe.
* TheDitz: Hellflame.
* FluffyTheTerrible: Bob and Paul the rotting hands.
* GagBoobs: Nearly all the Sues have them. One Mary Sue even has ''J-Cups''.
** InformedDeformity: Kitana actually used the latter as a retort, so whether it is true or not is unknown.
* TheImmodestOrgasm: Hellflame was close to one in Chapter 8. [[Spoiler:In a dream.]]
* MeaningfulName: Hellflame, as she was intended to show a connection to Scorpion's element.
* MrFanservice: Kung Lao. And he certainly doesn't enjoy it.
* [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone Elder Gods, What Have I Done?]]: How Quan Chi reacts to himself creating Hellflame.
* ParodySue: Hellflame.
* SchmuckBait: Hellflame is this to Kung Lao.
*ScrewThisImOutOfHere: [[spoiler:Kitana ditches Kung Lao because she does not want to pursue Hellflame anymore.]]
* ShipTease: Followed immediately by a ShipSink.
-> The monk's brows knit together in a deep furrow as the two locked eyes in a fearsome staring contest.
->And then they leapt into a fiery kiss.
->Nah, just kidding…
* SugarBowl: Sueville.
* TakeThat: To almost all the OCs in the fandom.
* WriteWhoYouKnow: WordOfGod says Hellflame is based on ''several'' OCs.
The fanfic is known for its accurate rules on Mary Sue stories and the (awesome) satire resulting from it.
!!This work contains examples of:
* AffectionateParody: The second chapter is a parody of the infamous [[Videogame/TheLegendOfZelda]] CD-i game. Justified as [[CantHoldHisLiquor Kung Lao is drunk]].
* AllJustADream: Hellflame having sex with [[spoiler:Kung Lao]].
* TheCameo: Among the many Mary Sues in Sueville, one of them is [[Fanfic/MyImmortal Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way]].
* ChickMagnet: Kung Lao, to the point where nearly all the Mary Sues ditch their "true loves" and chase after him.
* [[Main/Deconstruction]]: Of the typical Mary Sue fanfic.
* DidntThinkThisThrough: Quan Chi created Hellflame to destroy Scorpion. However, he didn't realize he would also doom the rest of the universe.
* TheDitz: Hellflame.
* FluffyTheTerrible: Bob and Paul the rotting hands.
* GagBoobs: Nearly all the Sues have them. One Mary Sue even has ''J-Cups''.
** InformedDeformity: Kitana actually used the latter as a retort, so whether it is true or not is unknown.
* TheImmodestOrgasm: Hellflame was close to one in Chapter 8. [[Spoiler:In a dream.]]
* MeaningfulName: Hellflame, as she was intended to show a connection to Scorpion's element.
* MrFanservice: Kung Lao. And he certainly doesn't enjoy it.
* [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone Elder Gods, What Have I Done?]]: How Quan Chi reacts to himself creating Hellflame.
* ParodySue: Hellflame.
* SchmuckBait: Hellflame is this to Kung Lao.
*ScrewThisImOutOfHere: [[spoiler:Kitana ditches Kung Lao because she does not want to pursue Hellflame anymore.]]
* ShipTease: Followed immediately by a ShipSink.
-> The monk's brows knit together in a deep furrow as the two locked eyes in a fearsome staring contest.
->And then they leapt into a fiery kiss.
->Nah, just kidding…
* SugarBowl: Sueville.
* TakeThat: To almost all the OCs in the fandom.
* WriteWhoYouKnow: WordOfGod says Hellflame is based on ''several'' OCs.
