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Countless tries against the Blade of Miquella, a Tarnished of no reknown with his pride in shambles wanders the Consecrated Snowfields until stumboling into the portal to Moghwyn Palace. After fighting his way through the bloody swamp and reaching the Lord of Blood, thanks to the blessed shackle, the Tarnished manages to pull out from the cocoon the being inside and discover Miquella, brother of his most difficult opponent to date, and snatch him away from Mohg's clutches.
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** [[spoiler: Turns out Miquella found an injured Torrent when it was a foal and he nursed it back to health. He wasn't allowed to keep it and had to give it to Ranni for further healing; she promised to release the foal so he would found a new master. Torrent then went to choose the Tarnished, and it has been supporting both of its masters now.]]
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** [[spoiler: Turns out Miquella found an injured Torrent when it was a foal and he nursed takes it back with him to health. nurse it. He wasn't allowed to keep it and had to give it to Ranni for further healing; she promised to release the foal so he it would found find a new master. Torrent then went to choose the Tarnished, and it has been supporting both of its masters now.]]
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* BadassInDistress: [[spoiler:The Tarnished]] is captured by Mogh at the end of "Chapter 7" and tortured at "Chapter 8".
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* BadassInDistress: [[spoiler:The Tarnished]] is captured by Mogh Mohg at the end of "Chapter 7" and tortured at "Chapter 8".
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* EmotionlessGirl: Melina. To the point she feels nothing over killing Leyndell soldiers efficiently quick; she doesn't feel shame, guilt, or pleasure doing it, she just does what she has to and moves on. The ruthlessness makes Miquella wary.
* EvenTheLovingHeroHasHatedOnes: Miquella hates Ranni with a passion after her masterminding of the Night of the Black Knives caused Godwyn's half death. "Chapter 34" makes the betrayal harder once it reveals Miquella and Ranni used to be close. He also hates all outer gods for the curses upon him and his sister, and of course there's also Mogh.
* EvenTheLovingHeroHasHatedOnes: Miquella hates Ranni with a passion after her masterminding of the Night of the Black Knives caused Godwyn's half death. "Chapter 34" makes the betrayal harder once it reveals Miquella and Ranni used to be close. He also hates all outer gods for the curses upon him and his sister, and of course there's also Mogh.
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* EmotionlessGirl: Melina. To the point she feels nothing over killing Leyndell soldiers efficiently quick; she doesn't feel shame, guilt, or pleasure doing it, she just does what she has to and moves on. The ruthlessness makes Miquella wary.
wary, and her stoic face and voice makes read her difficult for him.
* EvenTheLovingHeroHasHatedOnes: Miquella hates Ranni with a passion after her masterminding of the Night of the Black Knives caused Godwyn's half death. "Chapter 34" makes the betrayal harder once it reveals Miquella and Ranni used to be close. He also hates all outer gods for the curses upon him and his sister, and of course there's alsoMogh.Mohg.
* EvenTheLovingHeroHasHatedOnes: Miquella hates Ranni with a passion after her masterminding of the Night of the Black Knives caused Godwyn's half death. "Chapter 34" makes the betrayal harder once it reveals Miquella and Ranni used to be close. He also hates all outer gods for the curses upon him and his sister, and of course there's also
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* GrewASpine: Thanks to the Tarnished, Miquella is slowly but surely becoming bolder and assertive. Mogh notices it and he's pissed that [[LovingAShadow Miquella no longer behaves like the demure, helpless boy he saw him as]].
* HeartbrokenBadass: Malenia, regarding Finlay's death.
* HeartbrokenBadass: Malenia, regarding Finlay's death.
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* GrewASpine: Thanks to the Tarnished, Miquella is slowly but surely becoming bolder and assertive. Mogh Mohg notices it and he's pissed that [[LovingAShadow Miquella no longer behaves like the demure, helpless boy he saw him as]].
* HeartbrokenBadass: Malenia, regardingFinlay's Finley's death.
* HeartbrokenBadass: Malenia, regarding
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* IgnoredEnamoredUnderling: Cleanrot Rothel has obvious feelings for Malenia, but she is not in the mood to pursue any romance after Finlay's death. The fact that Finlay will forever be irreplaceable in Malenia's heart, both as right hand and love interest, is a source of frustration for him.
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* IgnoredEnamoredUnderling: Cleanrot Rothel has obvious feelings for Malenia, but she is not in the mood to pursue any romance after Finlay's Finley's death. The fact that Finlay Finley will forever be irreplaceable in Malenia's heart, both as right hand and love interest, is a source of frustration for him.
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* MirrorCharacter: The Tarnished and Malenia are surprisingly similar: both are prideful warriors of utmost skill who are willing to move heaven and earth for one person, have struggled in life due to higher powers outside their control, and valued their own determination to surpass any obstacles yet they've had to use something they hate when their strenght alone isn't enough. Lampshaded in chapter 24.
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* MirrorCharacter: The Tarnished and Malenia are surprisingly similar: both are prideful warriors of utmost skill who are willing to move heaven and earth for one person, have struggled in life due to higher powers outside their control, and valued their own determination to surpass any obstacles yet they've had to use something they hate when their strenght strength alone isn't enough. Lampshaded in chapter 24.
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* TheRival: The Tarnished and Malenia feel this way about each other; the Tarnished sees her as the meassure stick he has to surpass, while Malenia is afraid that he might take her place at her brother's side, seeing how close they're getting.
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* TheRival: The Tarnished and Malenia feel this way about each other; the Tarnished sees her as the meassure measure stick he has to surpass, while Malenia is afraid that he might take her place at her brother's side, seeing how close they're getting.
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* StormingTheCastle: [[spoiler:With the help of a snowy runebear, Miquella and Melina storm into Moghwyn Palace to rescue the Tarnished.]]
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* StormingTheCastle: [[spoiler:With the help of a snowy runebear, Miquella and Melina storm into Moghwyn Mohgwyn Palace to rescue the Tarnished.]]
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* EmotionlessGirl: Melina. To the point she feels nothing over killing Leyndell soldiers efficiently quick; she doesn't feel shame, guilt, or pleasure doing it, she just does what she has to and moves on. The ruthlessness makes Miquella wary.
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* LonelyAmongPeople: Miquella pounders how, despite knowing how to get people to his side, there's very little people he can trust and be understood by, even with his charm; actually, his powers just makes knowing who's genuine more difficult, and those he cannot persuade end up distrusting ''him''.
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* BigBrotherWorship: Godwyn is a source of inspiration for Miquella, and template of everything he himself wishes to become. Godwyn is literally enshrined at the Haligtree with his statue depicting him protecting the twins, and it was him who taught Miquella to never discriminate against those others by the Golden Order due to [[BigBrotherInstinct his care for his Omen brothers]].
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* PlatonicLifePartners: The Tarnished and Melina. She is his first ally and friend, and eternal companion especially with his constant dying threatening to leave him displaced in time. Meanwhile Melina learnt to trust the Tarnished and even grew to admire his determination against adversity, and she believes he's the kind of Elden Lord the Lands Between need.
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* PlatonicLifePartners: The Tarnished and Melina. She is his first ally and friend, ally, friend and eternal companion companion, especially with his constant dying threatening to leave him displaced in time. Meanwhile Melina learnt to trust the Tarnished and even grew to admire his determination against adversity, and she believes he's the kind of Elden Lord the Lands Between need.
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* MyGreatestFailure: The eruption of the Scarlet Aeonia at Caelid, and Radahn's state, is this for Malenia and the reason she feels she alone should be the one to put him down [[spoiler:once the group decides to start hunting down greater runes.]]
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* MyGreatestFailure: The eruption of the Scarlet Aeonia at Caelid, and Radahn's state, is this for Malenia and the reason she feels [[TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou she alone should be the one to put him down down]] [[spoiler:once the group decides to start hunting down greater runes.]]
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* StormingTheCastle: [[spoiler:With the help of a snowy runebear, Miquella and Melina storm into Moghwyn Palace to rescue the Tarnished.]]
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* SourOutsideSadInside: Miquella starts to suspect this is the truth behind the Tarnished's mask of confidence; he's hated and hunted just for being a Tarnished, and he's the only one who has to stain his hands bloody even when he comes in peace. Miquella decides to fight alongside him just to [[YouAreNotAlone make him feel less alone]].
* StormingTheCastle: [[spoiler:With the help of a snowy runebear, Miquella and Melina storm into Moghwyn Palace to rescue the Tarnished.]]
* SwordAndSorcerer: The Tarnished favours a claymore and hasn't invested in learning any spells, while Miquella is a master of incantations of all Erdtree teachings.
* StormingTheCastle: [[spoiler:With the help of a snowy runebear, Miquella and Melina storm into Moghwyn Palace to rescue the Tarnished.]]
* SwordAndSorcerer: The Tarnished favours a claymore and hasn't invested in learning any spells, while Miquella is a master of incantations of all Erdtree teachings.
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Countless tries against the Blade of Miquella, a Tarnished of no reknown with his pride in shambles wanders the Consecrated Snowfields until stumboling into the portal to Moghwyn Palace. After fighting his way through the bloody swamp and reaching the Lord of Blood, thanks to the blessed shackle, the Tarnished manages to pull out from the cocoon the being inside and discover Miquella, brother of his most difficult opponent to date, and snatch him away from Mogh's Mohg's clutches.
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* AstralProjection: "Chapter 22" implies that Miquella's power over dreams is more this than {{Dream Walk|er}}ing.
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* AstralProjection: "Chapter 22" Chapter 22 implies that Miquella's power over dreams is more this than {{Dream Walk|er}}ing.
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* BodyHorror: [[spoiler:Mogh's torture of the Tarnished turns him into a flaming pulp of flesh, described as a malformed corpse of flesh flipped inside out.]]
* BloodKnight: The Tarnished is portrayed as a bloodlusting brute who loves killing stuff in a good fight.
* ColdBloodedTorture: [[spoiler:Mogh turns the Tarnished's blood into flames that slowly burns him from the inside out for ''hours'' until he's at an inch of his life, only for Mogh to come and (badly) put him back together and repeat it all over again.]]
* BloodKnight: The Tarnished is portrayed as a bloodlusting brute who loves killing stuff in a good fight.
* ColdBloodedTorture: [[spoiler:Mogh turns the Tarnished's blood into flames that slowly burns him from the inside out for ''hours'' until he's at an inch of his life, only for Mogh to come and (badly) put him back together and repeat it all over again.]]
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* BodyHorror: [[spoiler:Mogh's [[spoiler:Mohg's torture of the Tarnished turns him into a flaming pulp of flesh, described as a malformed corpse of flesh flipped inside out.]]
* BloodKnight: The Tarnished is portrayed as abloodlusting bloodthirsty brute who loves killing stuff in a good fight.
* ColdBloodedTorture:[[spoiler:Mogh [[spoiler:Mohg turns the Tarnished's blood into flames that slowly burns him from the inside out for ''hours'' until he's at an inch of his life, only for Mogh to come and (badly) put him back together and repeat it all over again.]]
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* ImproperlyParanoid: "Chapter 35" begins with Miquella's creeping doubts about the Tarnished after remembering they encountered Ranni in the past; despite all the proofs the Tarnished gave that his friendship is trustworthy, the addition of Ranni makes Miquella wary, after all he used to trust her as half-sister and she still betrayed him. The Tarnished quickly put such doubts to rest.
* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: Miquella outwardly projects an air of competence and confidence on his abilities but that's because he's very self conscious over his lack of physical strength, and how it makes him look lesser in his very martial oriented family; after all, "a crown is won by strength" is the Golden Lineage's creed. And having Malenia as his sister doesn't help that at all.
* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: Miquella outwardly projects an air of competence and confidence on his abilities but that's because he's very self conscious over his lack of physical strength, and how it makes him look lesser in his very martial oriented family; after all, "a crown is won by strength" is the Golden Lineage's creed. And having Malenia as his sister doesn't help that at all.
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* ImproperlyParanoid: "Chapter 35" Chapter 35 begins with Miquella's creeping doubts about the Tarnished after remembering they encountered Ranni in the past; despite all the proofs the Tarnished gave that his friendship is trustworthy, the addition of Ranni makes Miquella wary, after all wary given he used to trust her as half-sister and she still betrayed him.before her betrayal. The Tarnished quickly put such doubts to rest.
* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: Miquella outwardly projects an air of competence and confidence on his abilities but that's because he's very self conscious over his lack of physical strength, and how it makes him look lesser in his very martial oriented family; after all, "a crown is won by strength" is the Golden Lineage's creed. And havingMalenia [[WorldsStrongestWoman Malenia]] as his sister doesn't help that at all.
* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: Miquella outwardly projects an air of competence and confidence on his abilities but that's because he's very self conscious over his lack of physical strength, and how it makes him look lesser in his very martial oriented family; after all, "a crown is won by strength" is the Golden Lineage's creed. And having
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* LoopholeAbuse: Mogh understands the workings of the Tarnished's ResurrectiveImmortality so he [[spoiler:settles with capturing and torturing him instead.]]
* MirrorCharacter: The Tarnished and Malenia are surprisingly similar: both are prideful warriors of utmost skill who are willing to move heaven and earth for one person, have struggled in life due to higher powers outside their control, and valued their own determination to surpass any obstacles yet they've had to use something they hate when their strenght alone isn't enough. Lampshaded in "Chapter 24".
* MirrorCharacter: The Tarnished and Malenia are surprisingly similar: both are prideful warriors of utmost skill who are willing to move heaven and earth for one person, have struggled in life due to higher powers outside their control, and valued their own determination to surpass any obstacles yet they've had to use something they hate when their strenght alone isn't enough. Lampshaded in "Chapter 24".
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* LoopholeAbuse: Mogh Mohg understands the workings of the Tarnished's ResurrectiveImmortality so he [[spoiler:settles with capturing and torturing him instead.]]
* MirrorCharacter: The Tarnished and Malenia are surprisingly similar: both are prideful warriors of utmost skill who are willing to move heaven and earth for one person, have struggled in life due to higher powers outside their control, and valued their own determination to surpass any obstacles yet they've had to use something they hate when their strenght alone isn't enough. Lampshaded in"Chapter 24".chapter 24.
* MirrorCharacter: The Tarnished and Malenia are surprisingly similar: both are prideful warriors of utmost skill who are willing to move heaven and earth for one person, have struggled in life due to higher powers outside their control, and valued their own determination to surpass any obstacles yet they've had to use something they hate when their strenght alone isn't enough. Lampshaded in
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* TwinDesynch: Downplayed. Miquella and Malenia are slowly starting to drift apart; when before they would blindly trust eachother, they're starting to harbor secrets and insecurities that they no longer share.
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* TwinDesynch: Downplayed. Miquella and Malenia are slowly starting to drift apart; when before they would blindly trust eachother, each other, they're starting to harbor secrets and insecurities that they no longer share.
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* BloodMagic: Miquella's blood has the capacity of making plants grow, becoming the cornerstone of restoring the Haligtree's agricultural endeavours once he returns.
* FertileBlood: Miquella's blood has the capacity of making plants grow, becoming the cornerstone of restoring the Haligtree's agricultural endeavours once he returns.
* GoodIsNotDumb: Miquella is optimistic, yes, but he isn't a naive idealist; he's aware of the cruelty in the world and he knows there's battles he can't win diplomatically, but if he can avoid unnecessary violence he will do so, and when he cannot he'll fight in any way he can. He's also aware he can't save everyone, so he focuses on those he cares about. This hidden edge in Miquella's eyes is what makes the Tarnished see him in a better light.
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* IntimateHealing: Downplayed. The Tarnished and Miquella begin their journey just when a [[BravingTheBlizzard snowstorm]] began to fall in the Consecrated Snowfields. Miquella's lean body is incapable of creating enough body heat, so the Tarnished recommends he gets closer to him while they ride on Torrent.
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* IntimateHealing: Downplayed. The Tarnished and Miquella begin their journey just when a [[BravingTheBlizzard snowstorm]] began to fall in the Consecrated Snowfields. Miquella's lean body is incapable of creating enough body heat, so the Tarnished recommends he gets closer to snuggles him while they ride on Torrent.
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* LoopholeAbuse: Mogh understands the workings of the Tarnished's ResurrectiveImmortality so he [[spoiler:ups with capturing and torturing him instead.]]
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* LoopholeAbuse: Mogh understands the workings of the Tarnished's ResurrectiveImmortality so he [[spoiler:ups [[spoiler:settles with capturing and torturing him instead.]]
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* MoralityPet: Thanks to his new found attachment to Miquella, the Tarnished felt guilty for invading the Haligtree and killing a bunch of his soldiers, and so starts to see their humanity. However, he recognises it's not out of an awakening sense of empathy, but more out his personal relationship with Miquella and hating to upset him.
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* MoralityPet: Thanks to his new found attachment to Miquella, the Tarnished felt guilty for invading the Haligtree and killing a bunch of his soldiers, and so starts to see their humanity.soldiers. However, he recognises it's not out of an awakening sense of empathy, but more out his personal relationship with Miquella and hating to upset him.
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* SilkHidingSteel: Miquella is optimistic, yes, but he isn't a naive idealist; he's aware of the cruelty in the world and he knows there's battles he can't win diplomatically, but if he can avoid unnecessary violence he will do so, and when he cannot, he'll fight in any way he can. He's also aware he can't save everyone, so he focuses on those he cares about. This hidden edge in Miquella's eyes is what makes the Tarnished see him in a better light.
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* AndroclesLion: Miquella tames a snow runebear, and later stops the Tarnished from killing it. The runebear later becomes instrumental for [[spoiler:the Tarnished's rescue, to the point of giving its life.]]
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** Miquella tames a snow runebear, and later stops the Tarnished from killing it. The runebear later becomes instrumental for [[spoiler:the Tarnished's rescue, to the point of giving its life.]]
** [[spoiler: Turns out Miquella found an injured Torrent when it was a foal and he nursed it back to health. He wasn't allowed to keep it and had to give it to Ranni for further healing; she promised to release the foal so he would found a new master. Torrent then went to choose the Tarnished, and it has been supporting both of its masters now.]]
** Miquella tames a snow runebear, and later stops the Tarnished from killing it. The runebear later becomes instrumental for [[spoiler:the Tarnished's rescue, to the point of giving its life.]]
** [[spoiler: Turns out Miquella found an injured Torrent when it was a foal and he nursed it back to health. He wasn't allowed to keep it and had to give it to Ranni for further healing; she promised to release the foal so he would found a new master. Torrent then went to choose the Tarnished, and it has been supporting both of its masters now.]]
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* BeyondTheImpossible: The tarnished managed to sucker punch the dung eater while ''inside the Roundtable Hold''; he ended with a broken arm but the mere fact he managed to do it out of sheer HeroicWillpower is an amazing feat.
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* BeyondTheImpossible: The tarnished Tarnished managed to sucker punch the dung eater Dung Eater while ''inside the Roundtable Hold''; he ended with a broken arm but the mere fact he managed to do it out of sheer HeroicWillpower is an amazing feat.
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* TheRival: The Tarnished and Malenia feel this way about each other; the Tarnished sees her as the measure stick he has to surpass, while Malenia is afraid that he might take her place at her brother's side, seeing how close they're getting.
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* TheRival: The Tarnished and Malenia feel this way about each other; the Tarnished sees her as the measure meassure stick he has to surpass, while Malenia is afraid that he might take her place at her brother's side, seeing how close they're getting.getting.
* SilkHidingSteel: Miquella is optimistic, yes, but he isn't a naive idealist; he's aware of the cruelty in the world and he knows there's battles he can't win diplomatically, but if he can avoid unnecessary violence he will do so, and when he cannot, he'll fight in any way he can. He's also aware he can't save everyone, so he focuses on those he cares about. This hidden edge in Miquella's eyes is what makes the Tarnished see him in a better light.
* SilkHidingSteel: Miquella is optimistic, yes, but he isn't a naive idealist; he's aware of the cruelty in the world and he knows there's battles he can't win diplomatically, but if he can avoid unnecessary violence he will do so, and when he cannot, he'll fight in any way he can. He's also aware he can't save everyone, so he focuses on those he cares about. This hidden edge in Miquella's eyes is what makes the Tarnished see him in a better light.
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* MirrorCharacter: The Tarnished and Malenia are surprisingly similar: both are prideful warriors of utmost skill who are willing to move heaven and earth for one person, have struggled in life due to higher powers outside their control, and valued their own determination to surpass any obstacles yet they've had to use something they hate when their strenght alone isn't enough. Lampshaded in "Chapter 24".
-->''"She was him. And he was her."''
-->''"She was him. And he was her."''
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* MoreThanMindControl: Miquella is aware of his [[CharmPerson bewitching powers]], but he still treats everyone around him well and doesn't abuse it. So it's difficult to discern whether Miquella wins over people with his power or just because [[PolitenessJudo he's just so]] [[NiceGuy goddamn nice]].
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* MoreThanMindControl: Miquella is aware of his [[CharmPerson bewitching powers]], but he still treats everyone around him well and doesn't abuse it. So it's difficult to discern whether Miquella wins over people with his power or just because [[PolitenessJudo he's just so]] [[NiceGuy goddamn nice]].
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* PlatonicLifePartners: The Tarnished and Melina. She is his first ally and friend, and eternal companion especially with his constant dying threatening to leave him displaced in time. Meanwhile Melina learnt to trust the Tarnished and even grew to admire his determination against adversity, and she believes he's the symbol that the Lands Between need.
* {{Protectorate}}: Malenia allowed Miquella to journey without her as long as he remained close to the Tarnished, and the Tarnished protected him.
* TheRival: The Tarnished and Malenia feel this way about each other; they would never admit it outright but they can recognize their mutual warrior respect.
* {{Protectorate}}: Malenia allowed Miquella to journey without her as long as he remained close to the Tarnished, and the Tarnished protected him.
* TheRival: The Tarnished and Malenia feel this way about each other; they would never admit it outright but they can recognize their mutual warrior respect.
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* PlatonicLifePartners: The Tarnished and Melina. She is his first ally and friend, and eternal companion especially with his constant dying threatening to leave him displaced in time. Meanwhile Melina learnt to trust the Tarnished and even grew to admire his determination against adversity, and she believes he's the symbol that kind of Elden Lord the Lands Between need.
* {{Protectorate}}: Malenia allowed Miquella to journey without her as long as he remained close to the Tarnished, and the Tarnished protected him.
* TheRival: The Tarnished and Malenia feel this way about each other; they would never admit it outright but they can recognize their mutual warrior respect.the Tarnished sees her as the measure stick he has to surpass, while Malenia is afraid that he might take her place at her brother's side, seeing how close they're getting.
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* EvenTheLovingHeroHasHatedOnes: Miquella hates Ranni with a passion after her masterminding of the Night of the Black Knives caused Godwyn's half death. "Chapter 34" makes the betrayal harder once it reveals Miquella and Ranni used to be close. He also hates all outer gods for the curses upon him and his sister, and of course Mogh.
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* EvenTheLovingHeroHasHatedOnes: Miquella hates Ranni with a passion after her masterminding of the Night of the Black Knives caused Godwyn's half death. "Chapter 34" makes the betrayal harder once it reveals Miquella and Ranni used to be close. He also hates all outer gods for the curses upon him and his sister, and of course there's also Mogh.
* GrewASpine: Thanks to the Tarnished, Miquella is slowly but surely becoming bolder and assertive. Mogh notices it and he's pissed that [[LovingAShadow Miquella no longer behaves like the demure, helpless boy he saw him as]].
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* HiddenHeartOfGold: The Tarnished is a brute loner, yes, but he has lent help to most people than he acknowledged, and those that know him can see virtue in him.
* IgnoredEnamoredUnderling: Cleanrot Rothel has obvious feelings for Malenia, but she is not in the mood to pursue any romance after Finley's death. The fact that Finley will forever be irreplaceable in Malenia's heart, both as right hand and love interest, is a source of frustration for him.
* IgnoredEnamoredUnderling: Cleanrot Rothel has obvious feelings for Malenia, but she is not in the mood to pursue any romance after Finley's death. The fact that Finley will forever be irreplaceable in Malenia's heart, both as right hand and love interest, is a source of frustration for him.
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* HiddenHeartOfGold: The Tarnished is a brute loner, yes, but he has lent help to most more people than he acknowledged, and those that know him can see virtue in him.
* IgnoredEnamoredUnderling: Cleanrot Rothel has obvious feelings for Malenia, but she is not in the mood to pursue any romance afterFinley's Finlay's death. The fact that Finley Finlay will forever be irreplaceable in Malenia's heart, both as right hand and love interest, is a source of frustration for him.
* IgnoredEnamoredUnderling: Cleanrot Rothel has obvious feelings for Malenia, but she is not in the mood to pursue any romance after
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* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: The Tarnished is willing to embrace the Frenzied Flame in order to spare Melina's life, even if it's at the risk of the world. Thankfully, he met Miquella before he did so.
* BeyondTheImpossible: The tarnished managed to sucker punch the dung eater while ''inside the Roundtable Hold''; he ended with a broken arm but the mere fact he managed to do it out of sheer HeroicWillpower is an amazing feat.
* ImproperlyParanoid: "Chapter 35" begins with Miquella's creeping doubts about the Tarnished after remembering they encountered Ranni in the past; despite all the proofs the Tarnished gave that his friendship is trustworthy, the addition of Ranni makes Miquella wary, after all he used to trust her as half-sister and she still betrayed him. The Tarnished quickly put such doubts to rest.
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* MoralityPet: Thanks to his new found attachment to Miquella, the Tarnished felt guilty for invading the Haligtree and killing a bunch of his soldiers, and so starts to see their humanity.
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* MoralityPet: Thanks to his new found attachment to Miquella, the Tarnished felt guilty for invading the Haligtree and killing a bunch of his soldiers, and so starts to see their humanity. However, he recognises it's not out of an awakening sense of empathy, but more out his personal relationship with Miquella and hating to upset him.
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* PlatonicLifePartners: The Tarnished and Melina. She is his first ally and friend, and eternal companion especially with his constant dying threatening to leave him displaced in time. He's willing to [[spoiler: embrace the Frenzied Flame to keep her alive.]]
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* PlatonicLifePartners: The Tarnished and Melina. She is his first ally and friend, and eternal companion especially with his constant dying threatening to leave him displaced in time. He's willing Meanwhile Melina learnt to [[spoiler: embrace trust the Frenzied Flame Tarnished and even grew to keep her alive.]]admire his determination against adversity, and she believes he's the symbol that the Lands Between need.
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* IgnoredEnamoredUnderling: Cleanrot Rothel has obvious feelings for Malenia, but she is not in the mood to pursue any romance after Finley's death. The fact that Finley will forever be irreplaceable in Malenia's heart, both as right hand and love interest, is a source of frustration for him.
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* PlatonicLifePartners: The Tarnished and Melina. She is his first ally and friend, and eternal companion especially with his constant dying threatening to leave him displaced in time. He's willing to [[spoiler: embrace the Frenzied Flame to keep her alive.]]
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* WeakButSkilled: Miquella doesn't have the raw power for martial combat nor the stamina to cast multiple spells one after the other, but his mastery of Incantations (from Fundamentalist to Crucible) makes him quite the unpredictable fighter, and able to hold his own against an ambush of Omen Nobles.
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* WeakButSkilled: Miquella doesn't have the raw power for martial combat nor the stamina to cast multiple spells one after the other, but his mastery and vast repertoire of Incantations (from Fundamentalist to Crucible) makes him quite the unpredictable fighter, and able to hold his own against an ambush of Omen Sanguine Nobles.
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* MyGreatestFailure: The eruption of the Aeonian Bloom at Caelid, and Radahn's state, is this for Malenia and the reason she feels she alone should be the one to put him down [[spoiler:once the group decides to start hunting down greater runes.]]
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* MyGreatestFailure: The eruption of the Aeonian Bloom Scarlet Aeonia at Caelid, and Radahn's state, is this for Malenia and the reason she feels she alone should be the one to put him down [[spoiler:once the group decides to start hunting down greater runes.]]
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* BloodKnight: The Tarnished is portrayed as a bloodlusting brute who loves killing stuff in a good fight.
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* EvenTheLovingHeroHasHatedOnes: Miquella hates Ranni with a passion after her masterminding of the Night of the Black Knives caused Godwyn's half death. "Chapter 34" makes the betrayal harder once it reveals Miquella and Ranni used to be close.
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* EvenTheLovingHeroHasHatedOnes: Miquella hates Ranni with a passion after her masterminding of the Night of the Black Knives caused Godwyn's half death. "Chapter 34" makes the betrayal harder once it reveals Miquella and Ranni used to be close. He also hates all outer gods for the curses upon him and his sister, and of course Mogh.
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* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Miquella is very self conscious over his lack of physical strength, and how it makes him look lesser in his very martial oriented family; after all, "a crown is won by strength" is the Golden Lineage's creed. He also feel very guilty over failing to fulfill all the promises he has made, and so was initially doubtful of returning to the Haligtree empty-handed.
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* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: Miquella outwardly projects an air of competence and confidence on his abilities but that's because he's very self conscious over his lack of physical strength, and how it makes him look lesser in his very martial oriented family; after all, "a crown is won by strength" is the Golden Lineage's creed. And having Malenia as his sister doesn't help that at all.
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* SleepDeprivation: Miquella has the bad habit of pulling continuous all-nighters when he has his mind set on solving a problem, like weaving a new unalloyed needle for Malenia for what it's implied to be a week, or [[spoiler:thinking for a third option for the Tarnished's dilemma.]]
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* ColdBloodedTortured: [[spoiler:Mogh turns the Tarnished's blood into flames that slowly burns him from the inside out for ''hours'' until he's at an inch of his life, only for Mogh to come and (badly) put him back together and repeat it all over again.]]
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* ColdBloodedTortured: ColdBloodedTorture: [[spoiler:Mogh turns the Tarnished's blood into flames that slowly burns him from the inside out for ''hours'' until he's at an inch of his life, only for Mogh to come and (badly) put him back together and repeat it all over again.]]
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Countless tries against the Blade of Miquella, a Tarnished of no reknown with his pride in shambles wanders the Consecrated Snowfields until reaching stumboling into the portal to Moghwyn Palace. After fighting his way through the bloody swamp and reaching the Lord of Blood, thanks to the blessed shackle, the Tarnished manages to pull out from the cocoon the being inside and discover Miquella, brother of his most difficult opponent to date, and snatch him away from Mogh's clutches.
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* BodyHorror: [[spoiler:Mogh's torture of the Tarnished turns him into a bloody pulp of flesh, described as a malformed corpse of flesh flipped inside out and flaming blood.]]
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* BodyHorror: [[spoiler:Mogh's torture of the Tarnished turns him into a bloody flaming pulp of flesh, described as a malformed corpse of flesh flipped inside out and flaming blood.out.]]
* ColdBloodedTortured: [[spoiler:Mogh turns the Tarnished's blood into flames that slowly burns him from the inside out for ''hours'' until he's at an inch of his life, only for Mogh to come and (badly) put him back together and repeat it all over again.]]
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* ImmuneToMindControl: Downplayed. The Tarnished can be influenced by Miquella's charming aura but he doesn't become a mindless follower of Miquella, instead just feeling a strong impulse to protect him.
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* ImmuneToMindControl: Downplayed. The Tarnished can be influenced by resist Miquella's charming aura but he doesn't become a mindless follower of Miquella, instead just feeling still feels a strong impulse to protect fondness for him.
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* LoopholeAbuse: Mogh understands the workings of the Tarnished's ResurrectiveImmortality so he [[spoiler:ups to torture him until an inch of his life, without killing him, and (painfully) heal him with his blood magic, while keeping the Tarnished from killing himself. Lather, rinse, repeat.]]
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* LoopholeAbuse: Mogh understands the workings of the Tarnished's ResurrectiveImmortality so he [[spoiler:ups to torture him until an inch of his life, without killing him, and (painfully) heal him with his blood magic, while keeping the Tarnished from killing himself. Lather, rinse, repeat.capturing and torturing him instead.]]
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Now, Tarnished and Demigod, find themselves forging an unlikely friendship that might be the key to solve their individual goals and protect those they care about. The Lands Between crushes everyone equally. So perhaps together they can get through it while holding on to those they care for. Or maybe, they will become just another tragic tale.
* HiddenHeartOfGold: The Tarnished is a brute loner, yes, but he has lent help to most people than he acknowledged, and those that know him can see virtue in him.
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* LoopholeAbuse: Mogh understands the workings of the Tarnished's ResurrectiveImmortality so he [[spoiler:ups to torture them until an inch of his life, without killing him, and (painfully) heal him with his blood magic, while keeping the Tarnished from killing himself. Lather, rinse, repeat.]]
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* LoopholeAbuse: Mogh understands the workings of the Tarnished's ResurrectiveImmortality so he [[spoiler:ups to torture them him until an inch of his life, without killing him, and (painfully) heal him with his blood magic, while keeping the Tarnished from killing himself. Lather, rinse, repeat.]]]]
* MoralityPet: Thanks to his new found attachment to Miquella, the Tarnished felt guilty for invading the Haligtree and killing a bunch of his soldiers, and so starts to see their humanity.
* MoralityPet: Thanks to his new found attachment to Miquella, the Tarnished felt guilty for invading the Haligtree and killing a bunch of his soldiers, and so starts to see their humanity.
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* TakeAThirdOption: In order to remove the thorns blocking the Erdtree, either the Tarnished sacrifices Melina or embraces the Frenzied Flame. After much thinking, Miquella suggests [[spoiler:he removes the thorns with his power over plants.]]
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* BeautifulDreamer: Once outside the cocoon, Miquella regains his youthful appeareance, and the Tarnished is momentarily stunned by his cherubic appereance.
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* BeautifulDreamer: Once outside the cocoon, Miquella regains his youthful appeareance, appearance, and the Tarnished is momentarily stunned by his cherubic appereance. stunned.
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* GottaCatchEmAll: [[spoiler:Miquella's plan to remove the throns from the Erdtree require him to grow stronger, so he would need to hunt down and adquire the other demigods' great runes.]]
* GreenThumb: Miquella has the power to control the roots of his Haligtree, which retroactively means [[spoiler: he could remove the throns from the Erdtree, since his Haligtree is an offshoot of it, without the need of sacrificing Melina.]]
* GreenThumb: Miquella has the power to control the roots of his Haligtree, which retroactively means [[spoiler: he could remove the throns from the Erdtree, since his Haligtree is an offshoot of it, without the need of sacrificing Melina.]]
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* GottaCatchEmAll: [[spoiler:Miquella's plan to remove the throns thorns from the Erdtree require him to grow stronger, so he would need to hunt down and adquire the other demigods' great runes.]]
* GreenThumb: Miquella has the power to control the roots of his Haligtree, which retroactively means [[spoiler: he could remove thethrons thorns from the Erdtree, since his Haligtree is an offshoot of it, without the need of sacrificing Melina.]]
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* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Miquella is very self concious over his lack of physical strength, and how it makes him look lesser in his very martial oriented family; after all, "a crown is won by strength" is the Golden Lineage's creed. He also feel very guilty over failing to fulfill all the promises he has made, and so was initially doubful of returning to the Haligtree empty-handed.
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* HeroicSelfDeprecation: Miquella is very self concious conscious over his lack of physical strength, and how it makes him look lesser in his very martial oriented family; after all, "a crown is won by strength" is the Golden Lineage's creed. He also feel very guilty over failing to fulfill all the promises he has made, and so was initially doubful doubtful of returning to the Haligtree empty-handed.
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* MoreThanMindControl: Miquella is aware of his [[CharmPerson bewitching powers]], but he still treats everyone around him well and doesn't abuse it. So it's difficult to disern whether Miquella wins over people with his power or just because [[PolitenessJudo he's just so]] [[NiceGuy goddamn nice]].
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* MoreThanMindControl: Miquella is aware of his [[CharmPerson bewitching powers]], but he still treats everyone around him well and doesn't abuse it. So it's difficult to disern discern whether Miquella wins over people with his power or just because [[PolitenessJudo he's just so]] [[NiceGuy goddamn nice]].
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* BodyHorror: [[spoiler:Mogh's torture of the Tarnished turns him into a bloody pulp of flesh, described as a malformed corpse of flesh flipped inside out and flaming blood.]]
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* ImmuneToMindControl: Downplayed. The Tarnished can be influenced by Miquella's charming aura, but he doesn't become a mindless follower of Miquella, instead just feeling a strong impulse to protect him.
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* MoreThanMindControl: Miquella is aware of his [[CharmPerson bewitching powers]], but he still treats everyone around him well and doesn't abuse it. So it's difficult to disern whether Miquella wins over people with his power or just because [[PolitenessJudo he's just so]] [[NiceGuy goddamn nice]].
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* AndroclesLion: Miquella tames a snow runebear, and later stops the Tarnished from killing it. The runebear later becomes instrumental for [[spoiler:the Tarnished's reacue, to the point of giving its life.]]
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* AndroclesLion: Miquella tames a snow runebear, and later stops the Tarnished from killing it. The runebear later becomes instrumental for [[spoiler:the Tarnished's reacue, rescue, to the point of giving its life.]]
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-->''Their face was hauntingly beautiful, a strange mix of feminine and masculine features. They had incredibly long, golden hair with many small braids intertwined throughout, it was almost brighter than the Erdtree itself. They seemed extremely delicate, as if a gentle breeze could blow them away. But more than anything they looked, no, they felt youthful, like their very body was brimming with new life. For the first time since the tarnished gazed upon the Erdtree, he felt that sense of divine wonder. The tarnished lost his sense of time for a moment and just stared at them, watching them sleep, watching them breathe peacefully.''
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* EvenTheLovingHeroHasHatedOnes: Miquella hates Ranni with a passion after her masterminding of the Night of the Black Knives and Godwyn's half death. "Chapter 34" makes the betrayal harder once it reveals Miquella and Ranni used to be close.
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* EvenTheLovingHeroHasHatedOnes: Miquella hates Ranni with a passion after her masterminding of the Night of the Black Knives and caused Godwyn's half death. "Chapter 34" makes the betrayal harder once it reveals Miquella and Ranni used to be close.
* ForgivenButNotForgotten: The Haligtree is willing to accept the Tarnished; after all he rescued their Lord (twice) and brought him back to them, but they won't forget he killed and injured a great deal of their people. The Tarnished wouldn't have it any other way.
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* IOweYouMyLife: Miquella feels this way towards the Tarnished.
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* IntimateHealing: Downplayed. The Tarnished and Miquella begin their journey just when a [[BravingTheBlizzard snowstorm]] began to fall in the Consecrated Snowfields. Miquella's lean body is incapable of creating enough body heat, so the Tarnished recommends he gets closer to him while they ride on Torrent.
* IOweYouMyLife: Miquella feels this way towards the Tarnished.
* IOweYouMyLife: Miquella feels this way towards the Tarnished.
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* MoreThanMindControl: Miquella is aware of his [[CharmPerson bewitching powers]], but he still treats everyone around him well and doesn't abuse it.
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* AstralProjection: "Chapter 22" implies that Miquella's power over dreams is more this than {{Dream Walk}}ing.
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* PlatonicLifePartners: The Tarnished and Melina.
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* AndroclesLion: Miquella tames a snow runebear, and later stops the Tarnished from killing it. The runebear later becomes instrumental for [[spoiler:the Tarnished's reacue, to the point of giving its life.]]
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* BloodMagic: Miquella's blood has the capacity of making plants grow, becoming the cornerstone of restoring the Haligtree's agricultural endeavours once he returns.
* FireForgedFriends: Miquella and the Tarnished.
* FireForgedFriends: Miquella and the Tarnished.
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* GottaCatchEmAll: [[spoiler:Miquella's plan to remove the throns from the Erdtree require him to grow stronger, so he would need to hunt down and adquire the other demigods' great runes.]]
* GreenThumb: Miquella has the power to control the roots of his Haligtree, which retroactively means [[spoiler: he could remove the throns from the Erdtree, since his Haligtree is an offshoot of it, without the need of sacrificing Melina.]]
* GreenThumb: Miquella has the power to control the roots of his Haligtree, which retroactively means [[spoiler: he could remove the throns from the Erdtree, since his Haligtree is an offshoot of it, without the need of sacrificing Melina.]]
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After countless tries against the Blade of Miquella, a Tarnished of no reknown with his pride in shambles wanders the Consecrated Snowfields until reaching the portal to Moghwyn Palace. After fighting his way through the bloody swamp and reaching the Lord of Blood, thanks to the blessed shackle, the Tarnished manages to pull out from the cocoon the being inside and discover Miquella, brother of his most difficult opponent to date, and snatch him away from Mogh's clutches.
Now, Tarnished and Demigod, find themselves forging an unlikely friendship that might be the key to solve their individual goals and protect those they care about. The Lands Between crushes everyone equally. So perhaps together they can get through it while holding on to those they care for. Or maybe, they will become just another tragic tale.
''The Most Fearsome Empyrean'' is an ''VideoGame/EldenRing'' fanfic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Smokynight/pseuds/Smokynight Smokynight]]. It can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/45617134/chapters/114786151?view_adult=true here]].
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* BadassInDistress: [[spoiler:The Tarnished]] is captured by Mogh at the end of "Chapter 7" and tortured at "Chapter 8".
* BeautifulDreamer: Once outside the cocoon, Miquella regains his youthful appeareance, and the Tarnished is momentarily stunned by his cherubic appereance.
-->''Their face was hauntingly beautiful, a strange mix of feminine and masculine features. They had incredibly long, golden hair with many small braids intertwined throughout, it was almost brighter than the Erdtree itself. They seemed extremely delicate, as if a gentle breeze could blow them away. But more than anything they looked, no, they felt youthful, like their very body was brimming with new life. For the first time since the tarnished gazed upon the Erdtree, he felt that sense of divine wonder. The tarnished lost his sense of time for a moment and just stared at them, watching them sleep, watching them breathe peacefully.''
* FriendToAllLivingThings: Miquella's CharmPerson aura works better on animals and beasts, to the point he's able to tame a huge snow runebear.
* HeartbrokenBadass: Malenia, regarding Finlay's death.
* LoopholeAbuse: Mogh understands the workings of the Tarnished's ResurrectiveImmortality so he [[spoiler:ups to torture them until an inch of his life, without killing him, and (painfully) heal him with his blood magic, while keeping the Tarnished from killing himself. Lather, rinse, repeat.]]
* MyGreatestFailure: The eruption of the Aeonian Bloom at Caelid, and Radahn's state, is this for Malenia and the reason she feels she alone should be the one to put him down [[spoiler:once the group decides to start hunting down greater runes.]]
* TheRival: The Tarnished and Malenia feel this way about each other; they would never admit it outright but they can recognize their mutual warrior respect.
* StormingTheCastle: [[spoiler:With the help of a snowy runebear, Miquella and Melina storm into Moghwyn Palace to rescue the Tarnished.]]
* WeakButSkilled: Miquella doesn't have the raw power for martial combat nor the stamina to cast multiple spells one after the other, but his mastery of Incantations (from Fundamentalist to Crucible) makes him quite the unpredictable fighter, and able to hold his own against an ambush of Omen Nobles.
Now, Tarnished and Demigod, find themselves forging an unlikely friendship that might be the key to solve their individual goals and protect those they care about. The Lands Between crushes everyone equally. So perhaps together they can get through it while holding on to those they care for. Or maybe, they will become just another tragic tale.
''The Most Fearsome Empyrean'' is an ''VideoGame/EldenRing'' fanfic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Smokynight/pseuds/Smokynight Smokynight]]. It can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/45617134/chapters/114786151?view_adult=true here]].
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!!This fanfic provides examples of:
* BadassInDistress: [[spoiler:The Tarnished]] is captured by Mogh at the end of "Chapter 7" and tortured at "Chapter 8".
* BeautifulDreamer: Once outside the cocoon, Miquella regains his youthful appeareance, and the Tarnished is momentarily stunned by his cherubic appereance.
-->''Their face was hauntingly beautiful, a strange mix of feminine and masculine features. They had incredibly long, golden hair with many small braids intertwined throughout, it was almost brighter than the Erdtree itself. They seemed extremely delicate, as if a gentle breeze could blow them away. But more than anything they looked, no, they felt youthful, like their very body was brimming with new life. For the first time since the tarnished gazed upon the Erdtree, he felt that sense of divine wonder. The tarnished lost his sense of time for a moment and just stared at them, watching them sleep, watching them breathe peacefully.''
* FriendToAllLivingThings: Miquella's CharmPerson aura works better on animals and beasts, to the point he's able to tame a huge snow runebear.
* HeartbrokenBadass: Malenia, regarding Finlay's death.
* LoopholeAbuse: Mogh understands the workings of the Tarnished's ResurrectiveImmortality so he [[spoiler:ups to torture them until an inch of his life, without killing him, and (painfully) heal him with his blood magic, while keeping the Tarnished from killing himself. Lather, rinse, repeat.]]
* MyGreatestFailure: The eruption of the Aeonian Bloom at Caelid, and Radahn's state, is this for Malenia and the reason she feels she alone should be the one to put him down [[spoiler:once the group decides to start hunting down greater runes.]]
* TheRival: The Tarnished and Malenia feel this way about each other; they would never admit it outright but they can recognize their mutual warrior respect.
* StormingTheCastle: [[spoiler:With the help of a snowy runebear, Miquella and Melina storm into Moghwyn Palace to rescue the Tarnished.]]
* WeakButSkilled: Miquella doesn't have the raw power for martial combat nor the stamina to cast multiple spells one after the other, but his mastery of Incantations (from Fundamentalist to Crucible) makes him quite the unpredictable fighter, and able to hold his own against an ambush of Omen Nobles.