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* TragicMonster: The husks. [[spoiler: Dwayne and Lisa's mother is one of them.]]
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* TragicMonster: The husks.husks, which are dead dragons brought back as mindless thralls. [[spoiler: Dwayne and Lisa's mother is one of them.]]
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* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: [[spoiler:At first Koria hates Dwayne for being a coward, but after Dwayne kills Rikor, she slowly starts to realise that she loves him]].
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* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: [[spoiler:At first Koria hates Dwayne for being a coward, but after Dwayne kills Rikor, she slowly starts to realise realize that she loves him]].
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Being Lisa's older brother, Dwayne cares very much for her safety. He defends her during several fights through the story.
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* BigBrotherInstinct: Being Lisa's older brother, Dwayne cares very much for her safety. He defends her during several fights through at multiple points in the story.story and is constantly worrying about her well-being, especially after she first arrives in Warfang.
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* CruelToBeKind: Overlappes with *ToughLove. Lisa is only a twelve year old, meek kid but has to be taught to defend herself. Though Cynder says harsh things to her, its only to drive her to overcome her meekness and fight better. Somewhat deconstruce,d however, as this harsh training technique lands both them in the infmriay and Cynder is scolded by Blaze for going to hard on Lisa.
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* CruelToBeKind: Overlappes with *ToughLove. Lisa is only a twelve year old, twelve-year-old, meek kid but has to be taught to defend herself. Though herself because of how dangerous the conflict with the main villain is. Cynder says is rather harsh things to her, its with her but it's only to drive her to overcome her meekness and fight better. Somewhat deconstruce,d deconstructed, however, as this harsh training technique lands both of them in the infmriay infirmary and Cynder is scolded by Blaze for going to hard on Lisa.
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* JerkAssHasAPoint: Not really "jerk" so much as "stern, hotheaded, overprotective father" but Blaze raises plenty of valid points about things during the story. Of note is when he chastise Cynder for going overboard with Lisa's combat training, to the point both Lisa and Cynder end up the infirmary. Though Lisa needs to learn to fight, there was no need to cause actual such injury in a practice match, especially not on Lisa's first time. Plus she is only a twelve-year-old kid, so Cynder did not have to be so harsh on her.
** [[spoiler: in the final battle of Warfang, Cynder lets Lisa, a twelve-year-old kid with only one previous session of self-defense training, fight in what is basically a Warzone. Lisa does fine against a few mages but gets ambushed and suffers a nearly fatal or at least grievous wound. It's completely understandable that Blaze would be pissed about Cynder letting Lisa into such a situation in the first place, regardless of how dire things may be.]]
** [[spoiler: in the final battle of Warfang, Cynder lets Lisa, a twelve-year-old kid with only one previous session of self-defense training, fight in what is basically a Warzone. Lisa does fine against a few mages but gets ambushed and suffers a nearly fatal or at least grievous wound. It's completely understandable that Blaze would be pissed about Cynder letting Lisa into such a situation in the first place, regardless of how dire things may be.]]
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* JerkAssHasAPoint: Not really "jerk" so much as "stern, hotheaded, overprotective father" but Blaze raises plenty of valid points about things during the story. Of note is when he chastise chastises Cynder for going overboard with Lisa's combat training, to the point both Lisa and Cynder end up in the infirmary. Though Lisa needs to learn to fight, there was no need to cause actual such injury in a practice match, especially not on Lisa's first time. Plus she is only a twelve-year-old kid, so Cynder did not have to be so harsh on her.
** [[spoiler:in In the final battle of Warfang, Cynder lets Lisa, a twelve-year-old kid with only one previous session of self-defense training, fight in what is basically a Warzone.warzone. Lisa does fine against a few mages but gets ambushed and suffers a nearly fatal or at least grievous wound. It's completely understandable that Blaze would be pissed about Cynder letting Lisa into such a situation in the first place, regardless of how dire things may be.]]
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*CruelToBeKind: Overlappes with *ToughLove. Lisa is only a twelve year old, meek kid but has to be taught to defend herself. Though Cynder says harsh things to her, its only to drive her to overcome her meekness and fight better. Somewhat deconstruce,d however, as this harsh training technique lands both them in the infmriay and Cynder is scolded by Blaze for going to hard on Lisa.
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* TheLegendOfX
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*JerkAssHasAPoint: Not really "jerk" so much as "stern, hotheaded, overprotective father" but Blaze raises plenty of valid points about things during the story. Of note is when he chastise Cynder for going overboard with Lisa's combat training, to the point both Lisa and Cynder end up the infirmary. Though Lisa needs to learn to fight, there was no need to cause actual such injury in a practice match, especially not on Lisa's first time. Plus she is only a twelve-year-old kid, so Cynder did not have to be so harsh on her.
**[[spoiler: in the final battle of Warfang, Cynder lets Lisa, a twelve-year-old kid with only one previous session of self-defense training, fight in what is basically a Warzone. Lisa does fine against a few mages but gets ambushed and suffers a nearly fatal or at least grievous wound. It's completely understandable that Blaze would be pissed about Cynder letting Lisa into such a situation in the first place, regardless of how dire things may be.]]
*TheLegendOfXTheLegendOfX: Right there in the title. In this case, of Dwayne and Lisa.
**[[spoiler: in the final battle of Warfang, Cynder lets Lisa, a twelve-year-old kid with only one previous session of self-defense training, fight in what is basically a Warzone. Lisa does fine against a few mages but gets ambushed and suffers a nearly fatal or at least grievous wound. It's completely understandable that Blaze would be pissed about Cynder letting Lisa into such a situation in the first place, regardless of how dire things may be.]]
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* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: [[spoiler:At first Koria hates Dawyne for being a coward, but after Dwayne kills Rikor, she slowly starts to realise that she loves him]].
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* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: [[spoiler:At first Koria hates Dawyne Dwayne for being a coward, but after Dwayne kills Rikor, she slowly starts to realise that she loves him]].
