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* TomatoInTheMirror: The fic opens with Shen Yuan being informed by his System that he never transmigrated. He ''reincarnated'', and thus has always been Shen Qingqiu.
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* ApatheticTeacher: One of the symptoms of Shen Qingqiu's depression before his qi deviation was increasing disinterest in his duties as peak lord of Qing Jing, leading to many of his educational standards being allowed to slip due to his inattention.

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* ApatheticTeacher: One of the symptoms of Shen Qingqiu's depression before his qi deviation was increasing disinterest in his duties as peak lord of Qing Jing, leading to many of his educational standards being allowed to slip due to his inattention. His junior teachers and hallmasters are caught very much off-guard when, after his qi deviation, Shen Qingqiu begins taking an active interest in the running of his peak again, and discovers what they've been getting away with due to his previous depressed apathy.

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* AmbiguousDisorder: It is heavily implied that Shen Qingqiu suffered from severe depression before the qi deviation that cost him his memories, leading to his neglect of his disciples and abuse of Luo Binghe.


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* AmbiguousDisorder: It is heavily implied that Shen Qingqiu suffered from severe depression before the qi deviation that cost him his memories, leading to his neglect of his disciples and abuse of Luo Binghe.
* ApatheticTeacher: One of the symptoms of Shen Qingqiu's depression before his qi deviation was increasing disinterest in his duties as peak lord of Qing Jing, leading to many of his educational standards being allowed to slip due to his inattention.
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: In addition to the canonical cast of ''Literature/RenZhaFanPaiZiJiuXiTong'', the ''Grand Unified Theory'' adds the canonically unnamed peak lords, and a wide variety of disciples from all the various peaks, as well as characters outside the sect, including a few characters and sects borrowed from ''Literature/MoDaoZuShi'' necessitating a dedicated FAQ page to keep everyone straight.

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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: In addition to the canonical cast of ''Literature/RenZhaFanPaiZiJiuXiTong'', the ''Grand Unified Theory'' adds the canonically unnamed peak lords, and a wide variety of disciples from all the various peaks, as well as characters outside the sect, including a few characters and sects borrowed from ''Literature/MoDaoZuShi'' ''Literature/MoDaoZuShi'', necessitating a dedicated FAQ page to keep everyone straight.
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: In addition to the canonical cast of ''Literature/RenZhaFanPaiZiJiuXiTong'', the ''Grand Unified Theory'' adds the canonically unnamed peak lords, and a wide variety of disciples from all the various peaks, as well as characters outside the sect, including a few characters and sects borrowed from ''Literature/MoDaoZhuShi'' necessitating a dedicated FAQ page to keep everyone straight.

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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: In addition to the canonical cast of ''Literature/RenZhaFanPaiZiJiuXiTong'', the ''Grand Unified Theory'' adds the canonically unnamed peak lords, and a wide variety of disciples from all the various peaks, as well as characters outside the sect, including a few characters and sects borrowed from ''Literature/MoDaoZhuShi'' ''Literature/MoDaoZuShi'' necessitating a dedicated FAQ page to keep everyone straight.
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: In addition to the canonical cast of ''Literature/RenZhaFanPaiZiJiuXiTong'', the ''Grand Unified Theory'' adds the canonically unnamed peak lords, and a wide variety of disciples from all the various peaks, as well as characters outside the sect, necessitating a dedicated FAQ page to keep everyone straight.

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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: In addition to the canonical cast of ''Literature/RenZhaFanPaiZiJiuXiTong'', the ''Grand Unified Theory'' adds the canonically unnamed peak lords, and a wide variety of disciples from all the various peaks, as well as characters outside the sect, including a few characters and sects borrowed from ''Literature/MoDaoZhuShi'' necessitating a dedicated FAQ page to keep everyone straight.
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: In addition to the canonical cast of ''Literature/RenZhaFanPaiZiJiuXiTong'', the ''Grand Unified Theory'' adds the canonically unnamed peak lords of peaks other than Qiong Ding, Qing Jing, Bai Zhan and An Ding, and a wide variety of disciples from all the various peaks, as well as characters outside the sect, necessitating a dedicated FAQ page to keep everyone straight.

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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: In addition to the canonical cast of ''Literature/RenZhaFanPaiZiJiuXiTong'', the ''Grand Unified Theory'' adds the canonically unnamed peak lords of peaks other than Qiong Ding, Qing Jing, Bai Zhan and An Ding, lords, and a wide variety of disciples from all the various peaks, as well as characters outside the sect, necessitating a dedicated FAQ page to keep everyone straight.


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* OCStandIn: The Peak Lords Lin Qingshui of Zhi Ji Peak (dedicated to feng shui and divination), Duan Qingze of Ling You Peak (dedicated to the taming, raising and study of spirit beasts), Ruan Qingruan of Zui Xian Peak (dedicated to brewing, elixir-making and the production of spiritual food), Gao Qinggao of Ku Xing Peak (mentioned in canon as the ascetic and talisman-making peak) and Xu Qingli of the still-unnamed Artefact Refining Peak (ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin) are unnamed and make no significant appearances in canon, but equivalents can be presumed to have existed as peak lords of the unnamed remaining peaks of Cang Qiong.

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* AlternatePersonalityPunishment: Shen Qingqiu subtly bullies and inconveniences Shang Qinghua as punishment for the first timeline's Shang Qinghua's utter botching of the Sun and Moon Seed and subsequent decision to reveal Shen Qingqiu's survival to Luo Binghe.

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* AlternatePersonalityPunishment: Shen Qingqiu subtly bullies and inconveniences Shang Qinghua as punishment for AllThereInTheManual: Extra details about the first timeline's Shang Qinghua's utter botching world of ''The Grand Unified Theory'' can be found in the author's [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/22756495/chapters/54375073 FAQ]], including the names of all the Peak Lords of the Sun An and Moon Seed Qing generations by seniority, a guide to all the original characters introduced in the fic, and subsequent decision to reveal Shen Qingqiu's survival to Luo Binghe.an explanation of the fic's crossover elements.



* DemonicPossession: In both timelines, it is initially assumed by his peers that Shen Qingqiu has become possessed by a demon, and repeated tests are done to make sure that he isn't. The reason for this is made hideously clear in the second NG+, where Shen Qingqiu and his fellow succeeding disciples stumble on a case of demonic possession that led to the deaths of an entire small village.


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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: In addition to the canonical cast of ''Literature/RenZhaFanPaiZiJiuXiTong'', the ''Grand Unified Theory'' adds the canonically unnamed peak lords of peaks other than Qiong Ding, Qing Jing, Bai Zhan and An Ding, and a wide variety of disciples from all the various peaks, as well as characters outside the sect, necessitating a dedicated FAQ page to keep everyone straight.


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* AlternatePersonalityPunishment: Shen Qingqiu subtly bullies and inconveniences Shang Qinghua as punishment for the first timeline's Shang Qinghua's utter botching of the Sun and Moon Seed and subsequent decision to reveal Shen Qingqiu's survival to Luo Binghe.

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* SustainedMisunderstanding: Due to his elegant demeanour and high-quality clothing and accessories, Liu Qingge assumes that Shen Qingqiu is a spoilt young master from a wealthy family and seems to regard him as his personal PrivilegedRival. In fact, Shen Qingqiu is an ex-slave who makes all his 'extravagant' clothes himself in order to keep up appearances as a PennyAmongDiamonds.


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* SustainedMisunderstanding: Due to his elegant demeanour and high-quality clothing and accessories, Liu Qingge assumes that Shen Qingqiu is a spoilt young master from a wealthy family and seems to regard him as his personal PrivilegedRival. In fact, Shen Qingqiu is an ex-slave who makes all his 'extravagant' clothes himself in order to keep up appearances as a PennyAmongDiamonds.
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* PennyAmongDiamonds: Downplayed during the second New Game Plus, as Shen Qingqiu gets a small stipend for his teaching duties and his teacher, Shen Anwei, offers a reasonably generous travelling allowance for his favourite student, but he still can't call upon the same sort of financial resources as his fellow students, with the exception of Yue Qingyuan, and his elegant appearance is mostly the result of his embellishing all his clothing himself in order to keep up appearances.

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* PennyAmongDiamonds: Downplayed during the second New Game Plus, as Shen Qingqiu gets a small stipend for his teaching duties and his teacher, Shen Anwei, offers a reasonably generous travelling allowance for his favourite student, but he still can't call upon the same sort of financial resources as his fellow students, with the exception of Yue Qingyuan, and his elegant appearance is mostly the result of his embellishing all his clothing himself in order to keep up appearances.appearances.
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* AdoptTheFood: After Liu Qingge brings Shen Qingqiu an unidentified short-furred monster as a thank-you gift for saving his life, Luo Binghe accidentally-on-purpose lets the creature go, leading to it being adopted as the Qing Jing Peak classroom pet and named 'Porkchop'.



* HanlonsRazor: Ming Fan is proven to be responsible for Luo Binghe's first, flawed cultivation manual, not out of any malicious intent, despite his bullying, but because he sincerely believed that he was helping by giving Luo Binghe a 'more efficient' manual, with all the exercises that didn't seem to do anything removed. Those exercises were, in fact, designed to smooth the flow of qi and prevent deviations and blockages. The lack of active malice is the only reason Ming Fan is not expelled from Cang Qiong outright, though he is still punished with two years of probation before being considered for head disciple duties or being allowed to try for his sword.
* IAlwaysWantedToSayThat: Shen Qingqiu introduces the ThereIsNoTry phrase when advising a student, partially out as geniune advice and mostly because he always wanted to use that phrase.
* ItAmusedMe: When Shen Qingqiu finds out Shang Qinghua going nuts trying to find the origin of the ThereIsNoTry phrase, Shen Qingqiu dedicates himself introducing Star Wars as a folktale simply to mess with him.
* KidnappedScientist: Shen Qingqiu is a talented cultivator in making and breaking arrays and a revolutionary librarian. The Huan Hua Palace master attempted to have Shen Qingqiu arrested and jailed in his sect's Water Prision to force the latter to break the array locking the Huan Hua Palace library.



* LyingToProtectYourFeelings: [[spoiler: Shen Qingqiu and Qiu Haitang's teacher Lu Zhiguang find out the truth of Shen Qingqiu's blood relation to Qiu Haitang. They both come to conclusion to hide the truth until Qiu Haitang is more mentally stable to not risk her going into Qi Deviation. When the truth is revealed anyway due to the Old Palace Master's machinations, this fear is proved to be entirely founded, as Qiu Haitang goes into a qi deviation at the news.]]



* ParentalSubstitute: Old Master Shen Anwei and his husband Zhao Yunlan for Shen Qingqiu, the only positive parental figures Shen Jiu had in his life (although Shen ''Yuan'' is implied to have had quite a good relationship with his own parents), who are only mentioned in the first part, but become prominent characters in the second New Game Plus.
* ParentsAsPeople: A mentorly version. Shen Anwei and Zhao Yunlan clearly love Shen Qingqiu as their own, but Shen Anwei being very close to ascension, and under a time crunch from his martial siblings to get his succeeding disciple trained up in time for them to ascend within the century meant that, in the original timeline, Shen Anwei focused on Shen Qingqiu's cultivation and artistic skills to the exclusion of any form of social development, leaving him desperately isolated and without a support system and leading him to slide into depression after his teacher ascended, eventually leading to his withdrawing from all teaching and externalising his self-loathing onto Luo Binghe, which would, if not for his qi deviation awakening his memories of his previous life as Shen Yuan, have led to the destruction of the Cang Qiong Mountain Sect and, eventually, the whole cultivation world. To his credit, after Shen Qingqiu returns to his time as head disciple, Shen Anwei is quick to realise his mistake, and starts trying to encourage Shen Qingqiu to build up closer bonds with his fellow succeeding disciples to prevent it from happening again.
* PennyAmongDiamonds: Downplayed during the second New Game Plus, as Shen Qingqiu gets a small stipend for his teaching duties and his teacher, Shen Anwei, offers a reasonably generous travelling allowance for his favourite student, but he still can't call upon the same sort of financial resources as his fellow students, with the exception of Yue Qingyuan, and his elegant appearance is mostly the result of his embellishing all his clothing himself in order to keep up appearances.



* TrueCraftsman: Shen Qingqiu takes a great deal of pride in his artistic abilities, to the point where he's often accused of having extravagantly expensive tastes (most often by Liu Qingge) for wearing his own embroidery, and is deeply offended at the implication that he should compromise his standards for any reason.

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* TrueCraftsman: Shen Qingqiu takes a great deal of pride in his artistic abilities, to the point where he's often accused of having extravagantly expensive tastes (most often by Liu Qingge) for wearing his own embroidery, and is deeply offended at the implication that he should compromise his standards for any reason.reason.
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* AdoptTheFood: After Liu Qingge brings Shen Qingqiu an unidentified short-furred monster as a thank-you gift for saving his life, Luo Binghe accidentally-on-purpose lets the creature go, leading to it being adopted as the Qing Jing Peak classroom pet and named 'Porkchop'.
* HanlonsRazor: Ming Fan is proven to be responsible for Luo Binghe's first, flawed cultivation manual, not out of any malicious intent, despite his bullying, but because he sincerely believed that he was helping by giving Luo Binghe a 'more efficient' manual, with all the exercises that didn't seem to do anything removed. Those exercises were, in fact, designed to smooth the flow of qi and prevent deviations and blockages. The lack of active malice is the only reason Ming Fan is not expelled from Cang Qiong outright, though he is still punished with two years of probation before being considered for head disciple duties or being allowed to try for his sword.
* IAlwaysWantedToSayThat: Shen Qingqiu introduces the ThereIsNoTry phrase when advising a student, partially out as geniune advice and mostly because he always wanted to use that phrase.
* ItAmusedMe: When Shen Qingqiu finds out Shang Qinghua going nuts trying to find the origin of the ThereIsNoTry phrase, Shen Qingqiu dedicates himself introducing Star Wars as a folktale simply to mess with him.
* KidnappedScientist: Shen Qingqiu is a talented cultivator in making and breaking arrays and a revolutionary librarian. The Huan Hua Palace master attempted to have Shen Qingqiu arrested and jailed in his sect's Water Prision to force the latter to break the array locking the Huan Hua Palace library.
* LyingToProtectYourFeelings: [[spoiler: Shen Qingqiu and Qiu Haitang's teacher Lu Zhiguang find out the truth of Shen Qingqiu's blood relation to Qiu Haitang. They both come to conclusion to hide the truth until Qiu Haitang is more mentally stable to not risk her going into Qi Deviation. When the truth is revealed anyway due to the Old Palace Master's machinations, this fear is proved to be entirely founded, as Qiu Haitang goes into a qi deviation at the news.]]
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* ParentalSubstitute: Old Master Shen Anwei and his husband Zhao Yunlan for Shen Qingqiu, the only positive parental figures Shen Jiu had in his life (although Shen ''Yuan'' is implied to have had quite a good relationship with his own parents), who are only mentioned in the first part, but become prominent characters in the second New Game Plus.
* ParentsAsPeople: A mentorly version. Shen Anwei and Zhao Yunlan clearly love Shen Qingqiu as their own, but Shen Anwei being very close to ascension, and under a time crunch from his martial siblings to get his succeeding disciple trained up in time for them to ascend within the century meant that, in the original timeline, Shen Anwei focused on Shen Qingqiu's cultivation and artistic skills to the exclusion of any form of social development, leaving him desperately isolated and without a support system and leading him to slide into depression after his teacher ascended, eventually leading to his withdrawing from all teaching and externalising his self-loathing onto Luo Binghe, which would, if not for his qi deviation awakening his memories of his previous life as Shen Yuan, have led to the destruction of the Cang Qiong Mountain Sect and, eventually, the whole cultivation world. To his credit, after Shen Qingqiu returns to his time as head disciple, Shen Anwei is quick to realise his mistake, and starts trying to encourage Shen Qingqiu to build up closer bonds with his fellow succeeding disciples to prevent it from happening again.
* PennyAmongDiamonds: Downplayed during the second New Game Plus, as Shen Qingqiu gets a small stipend for his teaching duties and his teacher, Shen Anwei, offers a reasonably generous travelling allowance for his favourite student, but he still can't call upon the same sort of financial resources as his fellow students, with the exception of Yue Qingyuan, and his elegant appearance is mostly the result of his embellishing all his clothing himself in order to keep up appearances.
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* PennyAmongDiamonds: Downplayed during the second New Game Plus, as Shen Qingqiu gets a small stipend for his teaching duties and his teacher, Shen Anwei, offers a reasonably generous travelling allowance for his favourite student, but he still can't call upon the same sort of financial resources as his fellow students, with the exception of Yue Qingyuan, and his elegant appearance is mostly the result of his embellishing all his clothing himself in order to keep up appearances.


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* SustainedMisunderstanding: Due to his elegant demeanour and high-quality clothing and accessories, Liu Qingge assumes that Shen Qingqiu is a spoilt young master from a wealthy family and seems to regard him as his personal PrivilegedRival. In fact, Shen Qingqiu is an ex-slave who makes all his 'extravagant' clothes himself in order to keep up appearances as a PennyAmongDiamonds.
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* PracticallyDifferentGenerations: Liu Qingge and Liu Mingyan's exact age difference isn't specified, but during the second New Game Plus, Liu Mingyan has not yet been born when Liu Qingge is in his late twenties or possibly very early thirties. Justified, as cultivators' eternal youth and extended lifespans would make large gaps between siblings more possible.
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* AdoptiveNameChange: The street urchin 'Jiu' received the courtesy name of 'Shen Qingqiu' upon being named as succeeding disciple to Qing Jing Peak, which is ordinary enough. The 'Shen' part of his name, however, was given to him because it was the name of his mentor, Shen Anwei, who viewed Shen Qingqiu as practically his own son.
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* HanlonsRazor: Ming Fan is proven to be responsible for Luo Binghe's first, flawed cultivation manual, not out of any malicious intent, despite his bullying, but because he sincerely believed that he was helping by giving Luo Binghe a 'more efficient' manual, with all the exercises that didn't seem to do anything removed. Those exercises were, in fact, designed to smooth the flow of qi and prevent deviations and blockages. The lack of active malice is the only reason Ming Fan is not expelled from Cang Qiong outright, though he is still punished with two years of probation before being considered for head disciple duties or being allowed to try for his sword.
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* ParentsAsPeople: A mentorly version. Shen Anwei and Zhao Yunlan clearly love Shen Qingqiu as their own, but Shen Anwei being very close to ascension, and under a time crunch from his martial siblings to get his succeeding disciple trained up in time for them to ascend within the century meant that, in the original timeline, Shen Anwei focused on Shen Qingqiu's cultivation and artistic skills to the exclusion of any form of social development, leaving him desperately isolated and without a support system and leading him to slide into depression after his teacher ascended, eventually leading to his withdrawing from all teaching and externalising his self-loathing onto Luo Binghe, which would, if not for his qi deviation awakening his memories of his previous life as Shen Yuan, have led to the destruction of the Cang Qiong Mountain Sect and, eventually, the whole cultivation world. To his credit, after Shen Qingqiu returns to his time as head disciple, Shen Anwei is quick to realise his mistake, and starts trying to encourage Shen Qingqiu to build up closer bonds with his fellow succeeding disciples to prevent it from happening again.
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* SplitPersonalityMerge: Shen Qingqiu goes through a very slow one throughout the story, though even when he first awakens back in his bamboo house at the beginning of the first New Game Plus, he is clearly much closer to Shen Jiu than he was at the beginning of the original novel. Over the course of the story, he begins gathering memory markers pointed out to him by the System, as well as carrying out an extended quest, leading to a more balanced fusion between his Shen Yuan and Shen Jiu incarnations.
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* AMasterMakesTheirOwnTools: The fused Shen Qingqiu is a great believer in this, both crafting all his own instruments and insisting that his students do the same, so that both their ability as musicians and the quality of their instruments will improve with time. He also crafts his own brushes for both painting and calligraphy.
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* DemonicPossession: In both timelines, it is initially assumed by his peers that Shen Qingqiu has become possessed by a demon, and repeated tests are done to make sure that he isn't. The reason for this is made hideously clear in the second NG+, where Shen Qingqiu and his fellow succeeding disciples stumble on a case of demonic possession that led to the deaths of an entire small village.
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* ItAmusedMe: When Shen Qingqiu finds out Shang Qingqiu going nuts trying to find the origin of the ThereIsNoTry phrase, Shen Qingqiu dedicates himself introducing Star Wars as a folktale simply to mess with him.

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* ItAmusedMe: When Shen Qingqiu finds out Shang Qingqiu Qinghua going nuts trying to find the origin of the ThereIsNoTry phrase, Shen Qingqiu dedicates himself introducing Star Wars as a folktale simply to mess with him.
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* GiverOfLameNames: Shen Qingqiu is a gifted poet and writes very eloquent essays, but he cannot apply any of that eloquence to titling his paintings, most of which are titled things like [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin 'Happy Tortoise Eating a Melon' and 'Broken Jar in a Window']].
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* SurpriseIncest: [[spoiler: While Shen Qingqiu never had feelings for her, he is still horrified that he was nearly forced into marrying his twin sister.]]

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* SurpriseIncest: [[spoiler: While Shen Qingqiu never had feelings for her, he is still horrified that he was nearly forced into marrying his twin sister.]]]]
* TrueCraftsman: Shen Qingqiu takes a great deal of pride in his artistic abilities, to the point where he's often accused of having extravagantly expensive tastes (most often by Liu Qingge) for wearing his own embroidery, and is deeply offended at the implication that he should compromise his standards for any reason.
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* AlternatePersonalityPunishment: Shen Qingqiu subtly bullies and inconveniences Shang Qinghua as punishment for the first timeline's Shang Qinghua's utter botching of the Sun and Moon Seed and subsequent revealing of Shen Qingqiu's survival to Luo Binghe.

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* AlternatePersonalityPunishment: Shen Qingqiu subtly bullies and inconveniences Shang Qinghua as punishment for the first timeline's Shang Qinghua's utter botching of the Sun and Moon Seed and subsequent revealing of decision to reveal Shen Qingqiu's survival to Luo Binghe.
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* LyingToProtectYourFeelings: [[spoiler: Shen Qingqiu and Qiu Haitang's teacher Lu Zhiguang find out the truth of Shen Qingqiu's blood relation to Qiu Haitang. They both come to conclusion to hide the truth until Qiu Haitang is more mentally stable to not risk her going into Qi Deviation.]]

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* LyingToProtectYourFeelings: [[spoiler: Shen Qingqiu and Qiu Haitang's teacher Lu Zhiguang find out the truth of Shen Qingqiu's blood relation to Qiu Haitang. They both come to conclusion to hide the truth until Qiu Haitang is more mentally stable to not risk her going into Qi Deviation. When the truth is revealed anyway due to the Old Palace Master's machinations, this fear is proved to be entirely founded, as Qiu Haitang goes into a qi deviation at the news.]]
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* AlternatePersonalityPunishment: Shen Qingqiu subtly bullies and inconveniences Shang Qinghua as punishment for the first timeline!Shang Qinghua's utter botching of the Sun and Moon Seed.

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* AlternatePersonalityPunishment: Shen Qingqiu subtly bullies and inconveniences Shang Qinghua as punishment for the first timeline!Shang timeline's Shang Qinghua's utter botching of the Sun and Moon Seed.Seed and subsequent revealing of Shen Qingqiu's survival to Luo Binghe.

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* AccidentalIncest: [[spoiler: While Shen Qingqiu never had feelings for her, he is still horrified that he was nearly forced into marrying his twin sister.]]



* SternTeacher: Post-New Game Plus Shen Qingqiu is much stricter with his disciples than he was as Shen Yuan, but lacks Shen Jiu's cruelty towards them. This is best illustrated by an incident early in the fic, in which a visiting disciple comes to him asking for a reduction in teaching duties, after he cracks down on the practice of cutting lessons short to free up time for the teachers' own research. Questioning quickly reveals that the true problem is an unreasonably broad research topic, which Shen Qingqiu deals with by [[CruelToBeKind reducing the teacher's library access by one section for every week, until she can come up with an outline based on the remaining sections available to her.]] When the teacher reappears in a later chapter, it is revealed that this was actually very helpful in refining her research proposal.

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* SternTeacher: Post-New Game Plus Shen Qingqiu is much stricter with his disciples than he was as Shen Yuan, but lacks Shen Jiu's cruelty towards them. This is best illustrated by an incident early in the fic, in which a visiting disciple comes to him asking for a reduction in teaching duties, after he cracks down on the practice of cutting lessons short to free up time for the teachers' own research. Questioning quickly reveals that the true problem is an unreasonably broad research topic, which Shen Qingqiu deals with by [[CruelToBeKind reducing the teacher's library access by one section for every week, until she can come up with an outline based on the remaining sections available to her.]] When the teacher reappears in a later chapter, it is revealed that this was actually very helpful in refining her research proposal.proposal.
* SurpriseIncest: [[spoiler: While Shen Qingqiu never had feelings for her, he is still horrified that he was nearly forced into marrying his twin sister.]]

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