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* GhostlyAnimals: The main character is rescued by the ghosts of the loyal guard dogs of a monastery that the villain's nephew had burned down. They're completely harmless to mortals, but since the villain is a spirit himself..
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''[[http://theninemuses.net/archive/viewstory.php?sid=238 The Fable of Joyful Wing]]'' is a ''Literature/TheDresdenFiles'' and ''Literature/BridgeOfBirds'' crossover fanfic by shiplizard, transporting Dresden-verse characters to the fairy-tale Chinese setting of ''Bridge of Birds''. It can be read [[http://theninemuses.net/archive/viewstory.php?sid=238 here.]]
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** ''"or how Lightning Scar nearly killed the Dread Warlord and Slow Son had to finish the job for him"'': Refers to 'Literature/HarryPotter'', and specially Neville, Voldermort and Harry.
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** ''"or how Lightning Scar nearly killed the Dread Warlord and Slow Son had to finish the job for him"'': Refers to 'Literature/HarryPotter'', ''Literature/HarryPotter'', and specially Neville, Voldermort Voldemort and Harry.
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** Alfhind refuses to go anywhere near the monastery Long Dog encounters early in his journey. Though Dog tries to convince himself that it’s just that she’s a ''pagan'' horse and thus is uncomfortable around a Buddhist monastery, it’s his first tip-off that something evil is lurking there.
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** Alfhind refuses to go anywhere near the monastery Long Dog encounters early in his journey. Though Dog tries to convince himself that it’s it's just that she’s she's a ''pagan'' horse and thus is uncomfortable around a Buddhist monastery, it’s it's his first tip-off that something evil is lurking there.
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** Alfhind refuses to go anywhere near the monastery Long Dog encounters early in his journey. Though Dog tries to convince himself that it’s just that she’s a ''pagan'' horse that makes her uncomfortable around it, it’s his first tip-off that something evil is lurking there.
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** Alfhind refuses to go anywhere near the monastery Long Dog encounters early in his journey. Though Dog tries to convince himself that it’s just that she’s a ''pagan'' horse that makes her and thus is uncomfortable around it, a Buddhist monastery, it’s his first tip-off that something evil is lurking there.
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* FakingTheDead: The Wolf Queen pretends to die in front of Long Dog in order to motivate him to fulfill her "dying" wish to stop her cursed husband from harming the children nearby. Dog is understandably annoyed to find her alive, well, and eating his food when he barely survives battle with the Wolf King and staggers back to his campsite.
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* FakingTheDead: The Wolf Queen pretends to die in front of Long Dog in order to motivate him to fulfill her "dying" wish to stop of stopping her cursed husband from harming the children nearby. Dog is understandably annoyed to find her alive, well, and eating his food when after he barely survives battle with the Wolf King and staggers back to his campsite.campsite.
* FeedItABomb: How Dog defeats the snake demon. Realizing that its scales are too thick for his usual tactics to work, he resorts to throwing a makeshift Molotov cocktail into its mouth and running like hell.
* FeedItABomb: How Dog defeats the snake demon. Realizing that its scales are too thick for his usual tactics to work, he resorts to throwing a makeshift Molotov cocktail into its mouth and running like hell.
* IdentityAmnesia: The map woman can't remember anything prior to being enslaved by the captain of the guard, but knows that something important to her was taken and that she needs to find it again.
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* PeoplePuppets: The Wolf King has been turned into one, with silver jewelry that he'd been given actually magical puppet strings that turn him into a living puppet, with his controller forcing him to attack his wife and students. Dog frees him of them by burning them and cutting them off with a silver knife.
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* PeoplePuppets: The Wolf King has been turned into one, one when Dog meets him, with silver jewelry that he'd been given as a gift actually magical puppet strings that turn him into a living puppet, with control his controller forcing him to attack his wife and students. body. Dog frees him of them by burning them off and cutting them off with a silver knife.knife, though once he gets the collar off his neck the Wolf King is able to help by gnawing them off himself.
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* ScaledUp: The snake demon who posed as a monk abandons his human disguise once Dog realizes what he is and attacks him, returning to his true form: a giant demonic snake with scales so thick that the only way to harm him is to FeedItABomb.
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* EvilDetectingDog: Alfhind refuses to go anywhere near the monastery Long Dog encounters early in his journey. Though Dog tries to convince himself that it’s just that she’s a pagan horse that makes her uncomfortable around it, it’s his first tip-off that something evil is lurking there.
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** Alfhind refuses to go anywhere near the monastery Long Dog encounters early in his journey. Though Dog tries to convince himself that it’s just that she’s apagan ''pagan'' horse that makes her uncomfortable around it, it’s his first tip-off that something evil is lurking there.there.
** Mouse is able to sense which voices in the spirit world are real and which are lures from hostile beings meant to lead Dog off course, and prevents him from following the false ones.
* FakingTheDead: The Wolf Queen pretends to die in front of Long Dog in order to motivate him to fulfill her "dying" wish to stop her cursed husband from harming the children nearby. Dog is understandably annoyed to find her alive, well, and eating his food when he barely survives battle with the Wolf King and staggers back to his campsite.
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** Mouse is able to sense which voices in the spirit world are real and which are lures from hostile beings meant to lead Dog off course, and prevents him from following the false ones.
* FakingTheDead: The Wolf Queen pretends to die in front of Long Dog in order to motivate him to fulfill her "dying" wish to stop her cursed husband from harming the children nearby. Dog is understandably annoyed to find her alive, well, and eating his food when he barely survives battle with the Wolf King and staggers back to his campsite.
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* NotTooDeadToSaveTheDay: The ghosts of Mouse's family temporarily return to protect him, Long Dog, and Joyous Wing when they're fleeing for their lives from the captain of the guard and his family. Long Dog thinks of it as them returning to protect their youngest and smallest child from the family of the monster that killed all of them, as the spirit who killed them and destroyed their monastery turned out to be related to the captain of the guard.
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* NotTooDeadToSaveTheDay: The ghosts of Mouse's family temporarily return to protect him, Long Dog, and Joyous Wing when they're fleeing for their lives from the captain of the guard and his family. Long Dog thinks of it as them returning to protect their youngest and smallest child from the family of the monster that killed all of them, as the spirit who killed them and destroyed their monastery turned out to be related to was the nephew of the captain of the guard.
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* PowerNullifier: Running water negates magic for both human magicians and non-human creatures.
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* SupernaturalGoldEyes: The wolf king and queen both have golden eyes no matter what form they're taking, marking them as spirits instead of ordinary animals or humans.
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* EvilDetectingDog: Alfhind refuses to go anywhere near the monastery Long Dog encounters early in his journey. Though Dog tries to convince himself that it’s just that she’s a pagan horse that makes her uncomfortable around it, it’s his first tip-off that something evil is lurking there.
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Accompanied only by a horse loaned to him by Sigrun, a barbarian-witch employed by Little Tiger the bandit and a guardian dog puppy that Long Dog rescued from a destroyed monastery, he sets out to the land of the dead to find Joyful Wing and bring her home. During his journey he encounters many strange and dangerous beings, many of whom fans of the Dresden files will recognize.
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* AndThatLittleGirlWasMe: It is only at the end of his story about Joyful Wing and her husband's tragic fates that Bone Cage admits that the husband is him, and that his skull was eventually passed down from the sage who originally plotted his death to Long Dog's uncle and from him to Long Dog.
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* AndThatLittleGirlWasMe: It is only at the end of his story about Joyful Wing and her husband's tragic fates that Bone Cage admits that the husband is him, and that his skull was eventually passed down from the sage who originally plotted his death to Long Dog's uncle father and from him to Long Dog.
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* BackFromTheDead: Said to be impossible in this universe when attempted by a mortal, as it would require stealing either the pills of immortality, the elixir of life, or the peaches of immortality, and no moral has ever succeeded in doing so. [[spoiler: However Yama, as the god of the dead, has the ability to bring them back to life, and does so to both Bone Cage and Joyful Wing]] at the end of the story once he's seen that they were innocent of the crimes he'd been told they'd been enduring fates worse than death for.
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* BackFromTheDead: Said to be impossible in this universe when attempted by a mortal, as it would require stealing either the pills of immortality, the elixir of life, or the peaches of immortality, and no moral mortal has ever succeeded in doing so. [[spoiler: However Yama, as the god of the dead, has the ability to bring them back to life, and does so to both Bone Cage and Joyful Wing]] at the end of the story once he's seen that they were innocent of the crimes he'd been told they'd been enduring fates worse than death for.
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* {{Animorphism}}: The Wolf King and the Wolf Queen are spirits who can change between the forms of humans and enormous wolves at will, and their students can take the forms of foxes.
* ChronicHeroSyndrome: Dog has the same urge to help people in trouble that Harry does in canon, and his journey ends up side-tracked multiple times by him stopping to help those in need. This pays off in the end, as all the people Dog helped on his journey reappear to aid him in escaping from the captain of the guard.
* OverlyLongName: The Princess Sage of Eternal Memory of Everything Written, who Dog privately thinks has a very large name for such a small girl. She doesn't mind being nicknamed Flower Poem, though.
* PeoplePuppets: The Wolf King has been turned into one, with silver jewelry that he'd been given actually magical puppet strings that turn him into a living puppet, with his controller forcing him to attack his wife and students. Dog frees him of them by burning them and cutting them off with a silver knife.
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** ''"how the ugliest and blackest-hearted soldier in the country lost his heart to two cousins-- fortunately one of them was the fabled Red Ribbon Monk, who mended his heart and his head and made him a hero of China and the protector of wounded men"'': Refers to the book series ''Under Jurisdiction''.
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** ''"how the ugliest and blackest-hearted soldier in the country lost his heart to two cousins-- fortunately one of them was the fabled Red Ribbon Monk, who mended his heart and his head and made him a hero of China and the protector of wounded men"'': Refers to the book series ''Under Jurisdiction''.Jurisdiction''.
* SilentSnarker: Alfhild the horse, whom Dog becomes adapt at the translating the disdainful body language of. She makes it clear she thinks Dog is foolish in the extreme, but nonetheless obeys her master's orders to help him get to Hell and back again.
* ToHellAndBack: Dog's main journey is to the Hell, with the excuse given to the guards that he's delivering a message from Odin to Yama. In actuality, the letter was written specifically so that he'd be allowed an audience with Yama, allowing him to hopefully gain his help in locating Joyful Wing once Yama is convinced that her soul is missing.
* SilentSnarker: Alfhild the horse, whom Dog becomes adapt at the translating the disdainful body language of. She makes it clear she thinks Dog is foolish in the extreme, but nonetheless obeys her master's orders to help him get to Hell and back again.
* ToHellAndBack: Dog's main journey is to the Hell, with the excuse given to the guards that he's delivering a message from Odin to Yama. In actuality, the letter was written specifically so that he'd be allowed an audience with Yama, allowing him to hopefully gain his help in locating Joyful Wing once Yama is convinced that her soul is missing.
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''[[http://theninemuses.net/archive/viewstory.php?sid=238 The Fable of Joyful Wing]]'' is a ''Literature/TheDresdenFiles'' and ''Literature/BridgeOfBirds'' crossover fanfic by shiplizard, transporting Dresden-verse characters to the fairy-tale Chinese setting of ''Bridge of Birds''. It can be read [[http://theninemuses.net/archive/viewstory.php?sid=238 here.]]
Du Hui Rui (more commonly known as Long Dog, due to his height and PerpetualPoverty) is a poor magician/detective in the city of Peking, taking cases for people who can't afford to hire more respected sages. The story proper begins when his ghostly mentor Bone Cage recounts to him the story of the witch Joyful Wing and her husband, who was a skilled magician and sage. After her husband had stolen a peach of immortality from paradise to try and save Joyful Wing's life when she was dying of poison, the two of them were sentenced by the immortal captain of the guard to a FateWorseThanDeath until they could find each other again.
Realizing that the husband of this story is none other than Bone Cage, Long Dog vows to find Joyful Wing and reunite them after nearly a thousand years of suffering, no matter the danger or that no one believes it's possible.
Accompanied only by a horse loaned to him by Sigrun, a barbarian-witch employed by Little Tiger the bandit and a guardian dog puppy that Long Dog rescued from a destroyed monastery, he sets out to the land of the dead to find Joyful Wing and bring her home. During his journey he encounters many strange and dangerous beings, many of whom fans of the Dresden files will recognize.
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!!Tropes in this fanfic include:
* AndThatLittleGirlWasMe: It is only at the end of his story about Joyful Wing and her husband's tragic fates that Bone Cage admits that the husband is him, and that his skull was eventually passed down from the sage who originally plotted his death to Long Dog's uncle and from him to Long Dog.
* BackFromTheDead: Said to be impossible in this universe when attempted by a mortal, as it would require stealing either the pills of immortality, the elixir of life, or the peaches of immortality, and no moral has ever succeeded in doing so. [[spoiler: However Yama, as the god of the dead, has the ability to bring them back to life, and does so to both Bone Cage and Joyful Wing]] at the end of the story once he's seen that they were innocent of the crimes he'd been told they'd been enduring fates worse than death for.
* BadassNormal: Little Tiger has a hold over the entire city, despite having no magical skills or lineage himself. He's even bold enough to go out in person try and bargain with the immortal guard captain when he comes to Peking, and manages to escape with his life.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Yama, the god of the dead. Despite his terrifying demonic appearance and ruling Hell itself, he's actually very reasonable for an immortal, and helps Long Dog in his quest once it's revealed to him that his records have been altered and Joyous Wing's soul was stolen from the normal cycle of reincarnation.
* HeroOfAnotherStory: Many characters of ''Literature/TheDresdenFiles'' are mentioned in passing as having stories of their own that Long Dog will tell at another time. Mentioned specifically are how Little Shield (Murphy) became the first female captain of Peking's city guard, how Pious Sword (Michael) rescued Iron Hammer Maiden (Charity) from a dragon, how Little Tiger (Johnny Marcone) went from a common bandit to nobility, and how the half-demon Thirsty Heart (Thomas) found his brother and eventually fell in love with a human woman.
* HeroicSacrifice: Joyful Wing knowingly drank poison meant for her husband in order to save him from it, and died slowly and painfully for it.
* IOweYouMyLife: Little Tiger owes Long Dog for his discretion about knowledge that both know Long Dog could have used to utterly destroy him. This is why he's willing to order his guard Sigrun to help him get to Hell, though Long Dog insists that he'll pay him back a favor in return for it, as he's disgusted at the thought of using that knowledge to force even someone like Little Tiger to help him, comparing it to holding a knife to Little Tiger's throat.
* ImmortalityInducer: The peaches in the garden of paradise give eternal life to a moral who eats them. Bone Cage is the only mortal who came close to succeeding in stealing them, though they were recovered before they could actually be eaten.
* NotTooDeadToSaveTheDay: The ghosts of Mouse's family temporarily return to protect him, Long Dog, and Joyous Wing when they're fleeing for their lives from the captain of the guard and his family. Long Dog thinks of it as them returning to protect their youngest and smallest child from the family of the monster that killed all of them, as the spirit who killed them and destroyed their monastery turned out to be related to the captain of the guard.
* ParentalSubstitute: Bone Cage is one for Long Dog after his father died, to such an extent that he thinks of him as his second father and Bone Cage calls him his son at the end of the story.
* ShoutOut: Though not as numerous as in [[Literature/TheDresdenFiles the source material]], there's still a fair few references to pop culture in the form of fables.
** ''"or how Lightning Scar nearly killed the Dread Warlord and Slow Son had to finish the job for him"'': Refers to 'Literature/HarryPotter'', and specially Neville, Voldermort and Harry.
** ''"how the silver-eyed demon named Sun Blindness led a little girl and a Buddhist Monk across the deadly desert of night, and was converted to Buddhism"'': Refers to the movie ''Film/PitchBlack''.
** ''"I could tell you how the spirit called String of Pearls seduced a husband and wife on their wedding night"'': Refers to ''Film/TheRockyHorrorPictureShow''.
** ''"how Golden Stallion nearly ended the world over the matter of a cursed ring, and how his brother Number Two Stag put it right again"'': Refers to ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings'', and specifically the characters Boromir and Faramir.
** ''"how the ugliest and blackest-hearted soldier in the country lost his heart to two cousins-- fortunately one of them was the fabled Red Ribbon Monk, who mended his heart and his head and made him a hero of China and the protector of wounded men"'': Refers to the book series ''Under Jurisdiction''.
Du Hui Rui (more commonly known as Long Dog, due to his height and PerpetualPoverty) is a poor magician/detective in the city of Peking, taking cases for people who can't afford to hire more respected sages. The story proper begins when his ghostly mentor Bone Cage recounts to him the story of the witch Joyful Wing and her husband, who was a skilled magician and sage. After her husband had stolen a peach of immortality from paradise to try and save Joyful Wing's life when she was dying of poison, the two of them were sentenced by the immortal captain of the guard to a FateWorseThanDeath until they could find each other again.
Realizing that the husband of this story is none other than Bone Cage, Long Dog vows to find Joyful Wing and reunite them after nearly a thousand years of suffering, no matter the danger or that no one believes it's possible.
Accompanied only by a horse loaned to him by Sigrun, a barbarian-witch employed by Little Tiger the bandit and a guardian dog puppy that Long Dog rescued from a destroyed monastery, he sets out to the land of the dead to find Joyful Wing and bring her home. During his journey he encounters many strange and dangerous beings, many of whom fans of the Dresden files will recognize.
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!!Tropes in this fanfic include:
* AndThatLittleGirlWasMe: It is only at the end of his story about Joyful Wing and her husband's tragic fates that Bone Cage admits that the husband is him, and that his skull was eventually passed down from the sage who originally plotted his death to Long Dog's uncle and from him to Long Dog.
* BackFromTheDead: Said to be impossible in this universe when attempted by a mortal, as it would require stealing either the pills of immortality, the elixir of life, or the peaches of immortality, and no moral has ever succeeded in doing so. [[spoiler: However Yama, as the god of the dead, has the ability to bring them back to life, and does so to both Bone Cage and Joyful Wing]] at the end of the story once he's seen that they were innocent of the crimes he'd been told they'd been enduring fates worse than death for.
* BadassNormal: Little Tiger has a hold over the entire city, despite having no magical skills or lineage himself. He's even bold enough to go out in person try and bargain with the immortal guard captain when he comes to Peking, and manages to escape with his life.
* DarkIsNotEvil: Yama, the god of the dead. Despite his terrifying demonic appearance and ruling Hell itself, he's actually very reasonable for an immortal, and helps Long Dog in his quest once it's revealed to him that his records have been altered and Joyous Wing's soul was stolen from the normal cycle of reincarnation.
* HeroOfAnotherStory: Many characters of ''Literature/TheDresdenFiles'' are mentioned in passing as having stories of their own that Long Dog will tell at another time. Mentioned specifically are how Little Shield (Murphy) became the first female captain of Peking's city guard, how Pious Sword (Michael) rescued Iron Hammer Maiden (Charity) from a dragon, how Little Tiger (Johnny Marcone) went from a common bandit to nobility, and how the half-demon Thirsty Heart (Thomas) found his brother and eventually fell in love with a human woman.
* HeroicSacrifice: Joyful Wing knowingly drank poison meant for her husband in order to save him from it, and died slowly and painfully for it.
* IOweYouMyLife: Little Tiger owes Long Dog for his discretion about knowledge that both know Long Dog could have used to utterly destroy him. This is why he's willing to order his guard Sigrun to help him get to Hell, though Long Dog insists that he'll pay him back a favor in return for it, as he's disgusted at the thought of using that knowledge to force even someone like Little Tiger to help him, comparing it to holding a knife to Little Tiger's throat.
* ImmortalityInducer: The peaches in the garden of paradise give eternal life to a moral who eats them. Bone Cage is the only mortal who came close to succeeding in stealing them, though they were recovered before they could actually be eaten.
* NotTooDeadToSaveTheDay: The ghosts of Mouse's family temporarily return to protect him, Long Dog, and Joyous Wing when they're fleeing for their lives from the captain of the guard and his family. Long Dog thinks of it as them returning to protect their youngest and smallest child from the family of the monster that killed all of them, as the spirit who killed them and destroyed their monastery turned out to be related to the captain of the guard.
* ParentalSubstitute: Bone Cage is one for Long Dog after his father died, to such an extent that he thinks of him as his second father and Bone Cage calls him his son at the end of the story.
* ShoutOut: Though not as numerous as in [[Literature/TheDresdenFiles the source material]], there's still a fair few references to pop culture in the form of fables.
** ''"or how Lightning Scar nearly killed the Dread Warlord and Slow Son had to finish the job for him"'': Refers to 'Literature/HarryPotter'', and specially Neville, Voldermort and Harry.
** ''"how the silver-eyed demon named Sun Blindness led a little girl and a Buddhist Monk across the deadly desert of night, and was converted to Buddhism"'': Refers to the movie ''Film/PitchBlack''.
** ''"I could tell you how the spirit called String of Pearls seduced a husband and wife on their wedding night"'': Refers to ''Film/TheRockyHorrorPictureShow''.
** ''"how Golden Stallion nearly ended the world over the matter of a cursed ring, and how his brother Number Two Stag put it right again"'': Refers to ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings'', and specifically the characters Boromir and Faramir.
** ''"how the ugliest and blackest-hearted soldier in the country lost his heart to two cousins-- fortunately one of them was the fabled Red Ribbon Monk, who mended his heart and his head and made him a hero of China and the protector of wounded men"'': Refers to the book series ''Under Jurisdiction''.
