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* InSpiteOfANail: The Hoares are all killed off at Harrenhal, despite the fact that the Targaryens never invaded Westeros [[spoiler:until Jon and Sansa forge a kingdom from the ashes of the Stormlands and make vague, long-term plans about invading the rest of Westeros.]]
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* InSpiteOfANail: InSpiteOfANail:
** The Hoares are all killed off at Harrenhal, despite the fact that the Targaryens never invaded Westeros [[spoiler:until Jon and Sansa forge a kingdom from the ashes of the Stormlands and make vague, long-term plans about invading the rest of Westeros.]]
** The Hoares are all killed off at Harrenhal, despite the fact that the Targaryens never invaded Westeros [[spoiler:until Jon and Sansa forge a kingdom from the ashes of the Stormlands and make vague, long-term plans about invading the rest of Westeros.]]
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* PlotTriggeringDeath: Eddard's murder is what ends up bringing the Targaryens and their armies to Westeros.
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** Eddard's murder is what ends up bringing the Targaryens and their armies to Westeros.
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* ShellShockedVeteran: Jon is heavily traumatized by all the warfare he's seen.
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** Jon is heavily traumatized by all the warfare he's seen.
** Jon is heavily traumatized by all the warfare he's seen.
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''Three hundred years after Aegon the Conqueror built a new empire on the ashes of the Valyrian Freehold the known world is a place of war. The Targaryen Empire is pressed by enemies, the Seven Kingdoms war amongst themselves and forces contrive to pull them all apart. Amidst all this are a prince and princess who fear themselves ruined by the horrors they've endured. Together they might be the hope their people are looking for. More importantly, they might be the dream both abandoned long ago.''
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3636984/chapters/8034318 The Conquest]]'' is an ''Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire'' AU where the Targaryens never conquered Westeros. As a result, the Seven Kingdoms remain separate, and the Targaryen Empire now rules over Essos instead. When Eddard Stark, the King In The North, is murdered, his sister Lyanna brings her son and his armies to fight the enemies of the North, and secure the Empire a foothold in Westeros. What follows is, quite simply, epic.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3636984/chapters/8034318 The Conquest]]'' is an ''Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire'' AU where the Targaryens never conquered Westeros. As a result, the Seven Kingdoms remain separate, and the Targaryen Empire now rules over Essos instead. When Eddard Stark, the King In The in the North, is murdered, his sister Lyanna brings her son and his armies to fight the enemies of the North, and secure the Empire a foothold in Westeros. What follows is, quite simply, epic. Westeros.
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* DevelopmentHell: Hasn't been updated since May 2016.
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* YoungConqueror: Jon. As a result of his conquering the Stormlands, Rhaegar makes him king of his own independent country.
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* YoungConqueror: Jon. As a result of his conquering the Stormlands, Rhaegar makes him king of his own independent country.country.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3636984/chapters/8034318 The Conquest]]'' is an ''Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire'' AU where the Targaryens never conquered Westeros. As a result, the Seven Kingdoms remain separate, and the Targaryen Empire now rules over Essos instead. When Eddard Stark, the King In The North, is murdered, his sister Lyanna brings her son and his armies to fight the enemies of the North, and secure the Empire a foothold in Westeros. What follows is, quite simply, epic.
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* TheGhost: [[spoiler: Elbert Arryn]] never actually appears, instead he [[spoiler:throws himself out of the Moon Door, rather than give Jon and Sansa the justice they want for Benjen and Lord Darklyn.]]
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* TheGhost: Surprisingly, [[spoiler: Elbert Arryn]] never actually appears, instead he [[spoiler:throws himself out of the Moon Door, rather than give Jon and Sansa the justice they want for Benjen and Lord Darklyn.]]
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* WalkingSpoiler: [[spoiler: Daenerys's son. She keeps it a secret as to who the father is: Aegon or Jon. When Sansa finds out, she is furious at Dany for taking advantage of Jon's goodness to protect her son.]] Later on, [[spoiler:Daenerys]] reveals that the father was [[spoiler:Aegon, just as Baelyon, her son, is being taken away by Aegon and given to Khal Drogo to foster in exchange for Rhaegar's release.]]
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** After the Arryn campaign, Sansa sinks into a deep melancholy because of ther guilt over what she decided to do at Martyr's Mill. Even the sight of her children doesn't help her.
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* TheManBehindTheMan: More like the Man behind the Man behind the Man. [[spoiler:Littlefinger was responsible for sending the assassins to Aevelon, but was told to do it with gold from Viserys, who was jealous of Jon's growing power in Westeros, whilst he was the Prince consort to the heir of Dorne. However Viserys was manipulated into sending the assassins by both Aegon and Littlefinger.]] So that's [[spoiler:Aegon and Littlefinger]] manipulating [[spoiler:Viserys]] who paid [[spoiler: Littlefinger]] to provoke war against the Arryns.
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* TheGhost: [[spoiler: Elbert Arryn]] never actually appears, instead he [[spoiler:throws himself out of the Moon Door, rather than give Jon and Sansa the justice they want for Benjen and Lord Darklyn.]]
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* HonorBeforeReason: Ser Barristan volunteers to go with [[spoiler: Brown Ben up to the Eyrie as a hostage so that Elbert would accept Ben's return, and wouldn't expect him and his men to slaughter the castle garrison and take Elbert hostage.]]
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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: King Mace Tyrell is defeated by Jon and gives away all the lands between the Mander and Blueburn rivers to end the war, including Tumbleton and the towns and villages.
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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: King Mace Tyrell Gardner is defeated by Jon and gives away all the lands between the Mander and Blueburn rivers to end the war, including Tumbleton and the towns and villages.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Various houses who would otherwise have been made extinct still exist, for example the Darklyns and the Gardners.
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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: King Mace Tyrell is defeated by Jon and gives away all the lands between the Mander and Blueburn rivers to end the war, including Tumbleton and the towns and villages.
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** [[spoiler:Benjen's murder at the theatre in Aevalon]] triggers riots in the city between the Westerosi and Essosi inhabitants. It also leads to a brutal and bloody war against [[spoiler:the Vale and the rule of King Elbert Arryn, who sent the assassins to kill Harrold Hardyng at the theatre.]]
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* AffectionateNickname: Jon and Sansa's son Aenry calls Ser Barristan 'Ser Barry'.
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* AffectionateNickname: Jon and Sansa's son Aenry calls Ser Barristan 'Ser Barry'.
