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** While her feelings for Adrien are obvious in canon, Marintte also starts to develop a crush on Alya in this fanfic, implying she is either bi- or pansexual.
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** While her feelings for Adrien are obvious in canon, Marintte Marinette also starts to develop a crush on Alya in this fanfic, implying she is either bi- or pansexual.
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* AgeLift: Marinette, Juleka, and their classmates are all aged-up from fourteen to sixteen in this fic because the author felt uncomfortable with the idea of fourteen-year-olds risking their lives fighting crime.
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* AgeLift: Marinette, Juleka, and their classmates are all aged-up aged up from fourteen to sixteen in this fic because the author felt uncomfortable with the idea of fourteen-year-olds risking their lives fighting crime.
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* TheBeard: Why Lila acted so flirty with Adrien. She (although she doesn't realize it until talking to Panthera) is aro-ace and wanted her mom off her back over her not having a boyfriend.
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* TheBeard: Why Lila acted so flirty with Adrien. She (although she doesn't realize it until talking to Panthera) is aro-ace aroace and wanted her mom off her back over her not having a boyfriend.
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* ForWantOfANail: Several events in canon play out differently as a result of Juleka being Ladybug's partner instead of Adrien.
** The original nail that results in Juleka being chosen is Adrien deciding not to help the fallen old man (Fu) in favor of escaping Natalie and the Gorilla to attend school.
** While she was akumatized in "[[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS01E19Reflekta Reflekta]]" because she was locked in the bathroom by Chloe, Juleka manages to escape while the photographer Vincent (not to be confused with the other [[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS01E21Pixelator Vincent]]) is akumatized into Picture Perfect.
** In canon, Chat Noir teased the possibility of starting a relationship with Ladybug during the interview with Nadja Chamack in "[[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS02E03PrimeQueen Prime Queen]]" while Ladybug vehemently denied Nadja’s accusations. Here, both Ladybug and Panthera are horrified by the invasion of their privacy, the latter having a panic attack in the process. The event also convinces Ladybug to only allow her and Panthera to be interviewed by Alya.
** "[[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS01E03Copycat Copycat]]" happens when Chat Noir lies about being in a relationship with Ladybug to a {{sculptor|s}} who admires her. When Panthera hears the sculptor talk about how much he liked Ladybug, she is more disgusted to see [[PaedoHunt this man who looks like he's in his twenties simping for a teenage girl]]. This is later subverted when the sculptor finds out how old Ladybug actually is and immediately apologizes to her.
** While Adrien had a more passive approach when dealing with Chloé's bad behavior, Panthera Noire becomes acquainted with her, and helps motivate her to do better.
** After Volpina's defeat, Panthera stays to just talk to Lila. As a result she discovers Lila's issues and manages to get her to accept herself for what she is and stop lying, preventing her canonical descent into villainy. [[spoiler:Lila also starts suspecting Gabriel of being Hawk Moth]].
** The original nail that results in Juleka being chosen is Adrien deciding not to help the fallen old man (Fu) in favor of escaping Natalie and the Gorilla to attend school.
** While she was akumatized in "[[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS01E19Reflekta Reflekta]]" because she was locked in the bathroom by Chloe, Juleka manages to escape while the photographer Vincent (not to be confused with the other [[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS01E21Pixelator Vincent]]) is akumatized into Picture Perfect.
** In canon, Chat Noir teased the possibility of starting a relationship with Ladybug during the interview with Nadja Chamack in "[[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS02E03PrimeQueen Prime Queen]]" while Ladybug vehemently denied Nadja’s accusations. Here, both Ladybug and Panthera are horrified by the invasion of their privacy, the latter having a panic attack in the process. The event also convinces Ladybug to only allow her and Panthera to be interviewed by Alya.
** "[[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS01E03Copycat Copycat]]" happens when Chat Noir lies about being in a relationship with Ladybug to a {{sculptor|s}} who admires her. When Panthera hears the sculptor talk about how much he liked Ladybug, she is more disgusted to see [[PaedoHunt this man who looks like he's in his twenties simping for a teenage girl]]. This is later subverted when the sculptor finds out how old Ladybug actually is and immediately apologizes to her.
** While Adrien had a more passive approach when dealing with Chloé's bad behavior, Panthera Noire becomes acquainted with her, and helps motivate her to do better.
** After Volpina's defeat, Panthera stays to just talk to Lila. As a result she discovers Lila's issues and manages to get her to accept herself for what she is and stop lying, preventing her canonical descent into villainy. [[spoiler:Lila also starts suspecting Gabriel of being Hawk Moth]].
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** Some of the stuff that happens to Chat Noir in canon also happens Panthera Noire, like being brainwashed by Dark Cupid, The Puppeteer, and Princess Fragrance.
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** Some of the stuff that happens to Chat Noir in canon also happens to Panthera Noire, like being brainwashed by Dark Cupid, The Puppeteer, and Princess Fragrance.
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--> '''Chloé:''' [[NoIndoorVoice OOOWWWWWEEEEEEEEEN! THE BABY! IT IS HERE!]]
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* MaskOfConfidence: As Panthera, Juleka is almost unrecognizable, becoming a flirty, quick witted sass master. Ironically, her mask actually makes her insecurities in her normal life ''worse'' as it leads her to believe that Rose is in love with ''Panthera'' and not to the real her.
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* MaskOfConfidence: As Panthera, Juleka is almost unrecognizable, becoming a flirty, quick witted quick-witted sass master. Ironically, her mask actually makes her insecurities in her normal life ''worse'' as it leads her to believe that Rose is in love with ''Panthera'' and not to the real her.
* PointOfDivergence: Several events in canon play out differently as a result of Juleka being Ladybug's partner instead of Adrien.
** The original nail that results in Juleka being chosen is Adrien deciding not to help the fallen old man (Fu) in favor of escaping Natalie and the Gorilla to attend school.
** While she was akumatized in "[[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS01E19Reflekta Reflekta]]" because she was locked in the bathroom by Chloe, Juleka manages to escape while the photographer Vincent (not to be confused with the other [[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS01E21Pixelator Vincent]]) is akumatized into Picture Perfect.
** In canon, Chat Noir teased the possibility of starting a relationship with Ladybug during the interview with Nadja Chamack in "[[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS02E03PrimeQueen Prime Queen]]" while Ladybug vehemently denied Nadja’s accusations. Here, both Ladybug and Panthera are horrified by the invasion of their privacy, the latter having a panic attack in the process. The event also convinces Ladybug to only allow her and Panthera to be interviewed by Alya.
** "[[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS01E03Copycat Copycat]]" happens when Chat Noir lies about being in a relationship with Ladybug to a {{sculptor|s}} who admires her. When Panthera hears the sculptor talk about how much he liked Ladybug, she is more disgusted to see [[PaedoHunt this man who looks like he's in his twenties simping for a teenage girl]]. This is later subverted when the sculptor finds out how old Ladybug actually is and immediately apologizes to her.
** While Adrien had a more passive approach when dealing with Chloé's bad behavior, Panthera Noire becomes acquainted with her and helps motivate her to do better.
** After Volpina's defeat, Panthera stays to just talk to Lila. As a result, she discovers Lila's issues and manages to get her to accept herself for what she is and stop lying, preventing her canonical descent into villainy. [[spoiler:Lila also starts suspecting Gabriel of being Hawk Moth]].
** The original nail that results in Juleka being chosen is Adrien deciding not to help the fallen old man (Fu) in favor of escaping Natalie and the Gorilla to attend school.
** While she was akumatized in "[[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS01E19Reflekta Reflekta]]" because she was locked in the bathroom by Chloe, Juleka manages to escape while the photographer Vincent (not to be confused with the other [[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS01E21Pixelator Vincent]]) is akumatized into Picture Perfect.
** In canon, Chat Noir teased the possibility of starting a relationship with Ladybug during the interview with Nadja Chamack in "[[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS02E03PrimeQueen Prime Queen]]" while Ladybug vehemently denied Nadja’s accusations. Here, both Ladybug and Panthera are horrified by the invasion of their privacy, the latter having a panic attack in the process. The event also convinces Ladybug to only allow her and Panthera to be interviewed by Alya.
** "[[Recap/MiraculousLadybugS01E03Copycat Copycat]]" happens when Chat Noir lies about being in a relationship with Ladybug to a {{sculptor|s}} who admires her. When Panthera hears the sculptor talk about how much he liked Ladybug, she is more disgusted to see [[PaedoHunt this man who looks like he's in his twenties simping for a teenage girl]]. This is later subverted when the sculptor finds out how old Ladybug actually is and immediately apologizes to her.
** While Adrien had a more passive approach when dealing with Chloé's bad behavior, Panthera Noire becomes acquainted with her and helps motivate her to do better.
** After Volpina's defeat, Panthera stays to just talk to Lila. As a result, she discovers Lila's issues and manages to get her to accept herself for what she is and stop lying, preventing her canonical descent into villainy. [[spoiler:Lila also starts suspecting Gabriel of being Hawk Moth]].
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* RomanticRain: [[spoiler:after Prince Shining, Juleka and Rose go outside to talk about their feelings and it starts to rain as they reveal their love for each other]]
* SacredFirstKiss: After Ladybug is forced to kiss Panthera in order to break Dark Cupid's spell, neither of them take it well afterwards.
--> '''Ladybug:''' I’m sorry about kissing you it was the only way to break the spell!
--> '''Panthera:''' [[FlatWhat You... What?]]
--> '''Ladybug:''' *starting to blush* I.. I had to kiss you to break the spell. I remembered this thing in class, about how love conquered hate? So I had to..
--> '''Panthera:''' Ladybug! You kissed me?!
--> '''Ladybug:''' I'm sorry!
--> '''Panthera:''' *grabs Ladybug by the shoulders, blushing vividly* [[BigWhat YOU KISSED ME?!]]
--> '''Ladybug:''' I'M SO SORRY OKAY?
--> '''Panthera:''' *starts shaking Ladybug* [[SuddenlyShouting PARTNER THAT WAS MY FIRST KISS! YOU STOLE IT FROM ME!]]
--> '''Ladybug:''' IT WAS MINE TOO! I'M SORRY I'M SORRY!
--> *Both of their Miraculous start to beep*
--> '''Panthera:''' W-We’ll talk about this later Ladybug... [[YouOweMe you owe me so many pastries...]]
* SacredFirstKiss: After Ladybug is forced to kiss Panthera in order to break Dark Cupid's spell, neither of them take it well afterwards.
--> '''Ladybug:''' I’m sorry about kissing you it was the only way to break the spell!
--> '''Panthera:''' [[FlatWhat You... What?]]
--> '''Ladybug:''' *starting to blush* I.. I had to kiss you to break the spell. I remembered this thing in class, about how love conquered hate? So I had to..
--> '''Panthera:''' Ladybug! You kissed me?!
--> '''Ladybug:''' I'm sorry!
--> '''Panthera:''' *grabs Ladybug by the shoulders, blushing vividly* [[BigWhat YOU KISSED ME?!]]
--> '''Ladybug:''' I'M SO SORRY OKAY?
--> '''Panthera:''' *starts shaking Ladybug* [[SuddenlyShouting PARTNER THAT WAS MY FIRST KISS! YOU STOLE IT FROM ME!]]
--> '''Ladybug:''' IT WAS MINE TOO! I'M SORRY I'M SORRY!
--> *Both of their Miraculous start to beep*
--> '''Panthera:''' W-We’ll talk about this later Ladybug... [[YouOweMe you owe me so many pastries...]]
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* RomanticRain: [[spoiler:after Prince Shining, Juleka and Rose go outside to talk about their feelings and it starts to rain as they reveal their love for each other]]
other.]]
* SacredFirstKiss: After Ladybug is forced to kiss Panthera in order to break Dark Cupid's spell, neither of themtake takes it well afterwards.
--> '''Ladybug:''' -->'''Ladybug:''' I’m sorry about kissing you it was the only way to break the spell!
--> '''Panthera:''' -->'''Panthera:''' [[FlatWhat You... What?]]
--> '''Ladybug:''' *starting -->'''Ladybug:''' ''[starting to blush* blush]'' I.. I had to kiss you to break the spell. I remembered this thing in class, about how love conquered hate? So I had to..
--> '''Panthera:'''to...
-->'''Panthera:''' Ladybug! You kissed me?!
--> '''Ladybug:''' -->'''Ladybug:''' I'm sorry!
--> '''Panthera:''' *grabs -->'''Panthera:''' ''[grabs Ladybug by the shoulders, blushing vividly* vividly]'' [[BigWhat YOU KISSED ME?!]]
--> '''Ladybug:''' -->'''Ladybug:''' I'M SO SORRY OKAY?
--> '''Panthera:''' *starts -->'''Panthera:''' ''[starts shaking Ladybug* Ladybug]'' [[SuddenlyShouting PARTNER THAT WAS MY FIRST KISS! YOU STOLE IT FROM ME!]]
--> '''Ladybug:''' -->'''Ladybug:''' IT WAS MINE TOO! I'M SORRY I'M SORRY!
--> *Both -->''[Both of their Miraculous start to beep*
--> '''Panthera:'''beep]''
-->'''Panthera:''' W-We’ll talk about thislater later, Ladybug... [[YouOweMe you owe me so many pastries...]]
* SacredFirstKiss: After Ladybug is forced to kiss Panthera in order to break Dark Cupid's spell, neither of them
--> '''Panthera:'''
-->'''Panthera:''' Ladybug! You kissed me?!
--> '''Panthera:'''
-->'''Panthera:''' W-We’ll talk about this
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* ShipperOnDeck: Anarka, Luka and Lila for Juleka and Rose (though nobody knows of Lila).
* StressVomit: During the interview with Nadja Chamack, the stress of being asked if she and her partner are dating is enough for Panthera to run out and throw up in the bathroom. Ladybug uses her Lucky Charm to help her, and ends up creating a pack of mints, [[ActuallyPrettyFunny making both of them laugh]].
* StressVomit: During the interview with Nadja Chamack, the stress of being asked if she and her partner are dating is enough for Panthera to run out and throw up in the bathroom. Ladybug uses her Lucky Charm to help her, and ends up creating a pack of mints, [[ActuallyPrettyFunny making both of them laugh]].
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* ShipperOnDeck: Anarka, Luka Luka, and Lila for Juleka and Rose (though nobody knows of Lila).
* StressVomit: During the interview with Nadja Chamack, the stress of being asked if she and her partner are dating is enough for Panthera to run out and throw up in the bathroom. Ladybug uses her Lucky Charm to helpher, her and ends up creating a pack of mints, [[ActuallyPrettyFunny making both of them laugh]].
* StressVomit: During the interview with Nadja Chamack, the stress of being asked if she and her partner are dating is enough for Panthera to run out and throw up in the bathroom. Ladybug uses her Lucky Charm to help
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Both Chloe and Lila are portrayed in a more sympathetic light than in canon, and both make efforts to better themselves.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Both Chloe Chloé and Lila are portrayed in a more sympathetic light than in canon, and both make efforts to better themselves.
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** While Adrien had a more passive approach when dealing with Chloe's bad behavior, Panthera Noire becomes acquainted with her, and helps motivate her to do better.
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** While Adrien had a more passive approach when dealing with Chloe's Chloé's bad behavior, Panthera Noire becomes acquainted with her, and helps motivate her to do better.
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* LargeHam: [[InUniverse In-Universe]] example where Chloe decides to chew the scenery with the one line her character has in the play before she dies from childbirth.
--> '''Chloe:''' [[NoIndoorVoice OOOWWWWWEEEEEEEEEN! THE BABY! IT IS HERE!]]
--> '''Chloe:''' [[NoIndoorVoice OOOWWWWWEEEEEEEEEN! THE BABY! IT IS HERE!]]
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* LargeHam: [[InUniverse In-Universe]] example where Chloe Chloé decides to chew the scenery with the one line her character has in the play before she dies from childbirth.
-->'''Chloe:''' '''Chloé:''' [[NoIndoorVoice OOOWWWWWEEEEEEEEEN! THE BABY! IT IS HERE!]]
-->
