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* IHaveYourWife: In this case, superhero partner. Marinette is held hostage to draw in Chat Noir (her identity is already compromised to the villains in this case).
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* IHaveYourWife: In this case, superhero partner. Marinette is [[spoiler:is held hostage to draw in Chat Noir (her Noir; her identity is already compromised to the villains in this case).case.]]
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* IHaveYourWife: In this case, superhero partner. Marinette is held hostage to draw in Chat Noir (her identity is already compromised to the villains in this case).
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Cleaning up misuses of Bruce Wayne Held Hostage, which isn't just "superhero is captured while not in costume". If the villains already know who she is, it doesn't fit the trope.
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* BruceWayneHeldHostage: Marinette is held hostage to draw in Chat Noir (her identity is already compromised to the villains in this case).
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* GoodPowersBadPeople: [[spoiler:Hawk Bug is able to use Ladybug's powers to purify akumas and create {{World Healing Wave}}s, but he's still the villainous Gabriel Agreste.]]
* RelationshipUpgrade: The fanfic ends with Adrien and Marinette willing to go on a date and find out more about each other.
* RelationshipUpgrade: The fanfic ends with Adrien and Marinette willing to go on a date and find out more about each other.
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* TheDogBitesBack: [[spoiler: Ondine had her akuma rescinded (keeping her memories of being Syren), then was stabbed by Hawk Moth for failing to meet his standards before taking the earrings and becoming Hawk Bug. When she is revived by Hawk Bug's WorldHealingWave, she is the one who defeats him in the end.]]
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* UngratefulBastard: When Syren gives Hawk Moth the Ladybug Earrings, he snatches them away and [[spoiler: depowers Ondine before killing her [[YouHaveFailedMe because she failed to retrieve the Cat Ring]]. When she is revived, [[TheDogBitesBack she bites back against him]].]]
* YoureNotMyFather: [[spoiler: When Hawk Bug tells Chat Noir that he's his father and he should obey him, Chat tells him that he's no longer his father after he hurt so many people, especially Ondine.]]
* YoureNotMyFather: [[spoiler: When Hawk Bug tells Chat Noir that he's his father and he should obey him, Chat tells him that he's no longer his father after he hurt so many people, especially Ondine.]]
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12976083/1/Syren-Sinks Syren Sinks]] is an AlternateUniverseFic made by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/80745/RockSunner RockSunner]], for WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug. Part of the [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/994671 Smart Adversaries AU]] for Miraculous Ladybug on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3]], in which Ladybug villains make smarter decisions.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12976083/1/Syren-Sinks Syren Sinks]] is an AlternateUniverseFic made by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/80745/RockSunner RockSunner]], for WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug. Part of the [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/994671 Smart Adversaries AU]] for Miraculous Ladybug on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3]], in which Ladybug villains make smarter decisions.
decisions. The series has a [[Fanfic/SmartAdversariesAU tropes page here]].
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* AlternateUniverseFic: A WhatIf with the change that Syren makes a more effective attack on Ladybug when she comes down after her alone, [[spoiler: nearly drowing her and capturing her Miraculous]].
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* AlternateUniverseFic: A WhatIf with the change that Syren makes a more effective attack on Ladybug when she comes down after her alone, [[spoiler: nearly drowing drowning her and capturing her Miraculous]].Miraculous]].
* BadassNormal: [[spoiler:The final fight between Chat Noir and Hawk Moth/Hawk Bug ends when Ondine outflanks the villain, puts him in a chokehold, and yoinks his earrings.]]
* BadassNormal: [[spoiler:The final fight between Chat Noir and Hawk Moth/Hawk Bug ends when Ondine outflanks the villain, puts him in a chokehold, and yoinks his earrings.]]
* TrappedInASinkingCar: Marinette is stuck in a window grill in a near-fatal deathtrap by Syren.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12976083/1/Syren-Sinks Syren Sinks]] is an AlternateUniverseFic made by [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/80745/RockSunner RockSunner]], for WesternAnimation/MiraculousLadybug. Part of the [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/994671 Smart Adversaries AU]] for Miraculous Ladybug on [[Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn AO3]], in which Ladybug villains make smarter decisions.
This is a 4-chapter work and it is now completed. It has some spoilers for the new episodes of Season 2.
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!!This fanfic contains examples of:
* ActionGirl: Ondine gets a chance after losing her powers [[spoiler: to finish the fight with Hawk Moth]].
* AlternateUniverseFic: A WhatIf with the change that Syren makes a more effective attack on Ladybug when she comes down after her alone, [[spoiler: nearly drowing her and capturing her Miraculous]].
* BadBoss: Syren finds herself [[spoiler: turned back to Ondine and stabbed]] by Hawk Moth for [[spoiler: letting her hostage be rescued]], even though she [[spoiler: turned over Ladybug's Miraculous to him]].
* BlessedWithSuck: Chat Noir finds his water-power flippers less effective when [[spoiler: Hawk Moth takes on Ladybug's powers and cures the flood]].
* BruceWayneHeldHostage: Marinette is held hostage to draw in Chat Noir (her identity is already compromised to the villains in this case).
* TheUnmasking: Ladybug loses her secret identity to [[spoiler: Syren, Kim, and Hawk Moth]]. She also reveals it to Chat Noir [[spoiler: after he rescues her]].
* [[TrappedInASinkingCar Trapped In A Sinking Window Grille]]: Marinette's near-fatal deathtrap by Syren.
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This is a 4-chapter work and it is now completed. It has some spoilers for the new episodes of Season 2.
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!!This fanfic contains examples of:
* ActionGirl: Ondine gets a chance after losing her powers [[spoiler: to finish the fight with Hawk Moth]].
* AlternateUniverseFic: A WhatIf with the change that Syren makes a more effective attack on Ladybug when she comes down after her alone, [[spoiler: nearly drowing her and capturing her Miraculous]].
* BadBoss: Syren finds herself [[spoiler: turned back to Ondine and stabbed]] by Hawk Moth for [[spoiler: letting her hostage be rescued]], even though she [[spoiler: turned over Ladybug's Miraculous to him]].
* BlessedWithSuck: Chat Noir finds his water-power flippers less effective when [[spoiler: Hawk Moth takes on Ladybug's powers and cures the flood]].
* BruceWayneHeldHostage: Marinette is held hostage to draw in Chat Noir (her identity is already compromised to the villains in this case).
* TheUnmasking: Ladybug loses her secret identity to [[spoiler: Syren, Kim, and Hawk Moth]]. She also reveals it to Chat Noir [[spoiler: after he rescues her]].
* [[TrappedInASinkingCar Trapped In A Sinking Window Grille]]: Marinette's near-fatal deathtrap by Syren.
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