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* IfIWantedYouDead: Occurs in chapter 37 after Ikharos and the Eliksni came to the Varden's aid during the Battle under Farthen Dûr. Ajihad, though grateful, is still unsure whether his new allies can be trusted, leading to this exchange.
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** Occurs in chapter 37 after Ikharos and the Eliksni came to the Varden's aid during the Battle under Farthen Dûr. Ajihad, though grateful, is still unsure whether his new allies can be trusted, leading to this exchange.
-->'''Ajihad:''' --->'''Ajihad:''' How do we know you are not our foes?\\
** Occurs in chapter 37 after Ikharos and the Eliksni came to the Varden's aid during the Battle under Farthen Dûr. Ajihad, though grateful, is still unsure whether his new allies can be trusted, leading to this exchange.
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** In chapter 78, [[spoiler:Uren]] offers Ikharos two Oreos and assures him they're not poisoned, explaining that if he wanted to kill him, he wouldn't have saved his life earlier.
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* FakingTheDead: Formora was able to escape Galbatorix by faking her death, which she claims took seventy years of careful planning to accomplish.
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** The humans on Alagaesia are descendants of Golden Age colonists from the ''Exodus Prime''.
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* SelfImposedExile: Formora and Enduriel, the last two surving members of the Forsworn, lived in a self-imposed exile on Vroengard for decades in order to hide from Galbatorix.
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** [[spoiler:The Grey Folk are Harmony who survived Oryx's crusade and also created the elves and dwarves through gene-splicing.]]
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** Changelings are confirmed to be the hybrid offspring of [[spoiler:Ahamkara]],
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* LastOfHerKind: [[spoiler:After Ikharos kills Enduriel, Formora becomes the sole surviving member of the Forsworn.]]
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* MoleInCharge: [[spoiler:Da'aurc, the Primus of the Worldbreakers and the overall commander of the Cabal forces invading Alagaësia, is eventually revealed to be a Hive worshipper actively working to undermine his own army.]]
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** In Chapter 43, Xiān is reminded of a children's movie in which [[WesternAnimation/{{Ratatouille}} a rodent puppeteers a human by pulling his hair.]]
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-->'''[[spoiler:Harmony warrior]]''': ''[in ancient language]'' [[spoiler:We are the peace. We are the water. We are the song. We are the daughters and sons of Nezarec, the Song-Lord. Long may He sing.]]\\
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The story can be read on [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13593572/1/Stargazer FanFiction.net]], [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27060847 Archive of Our Own]], and [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/stargazer-destiny-inheritance-cycle.932104/ SpaceBattles]].
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The story can be read on [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13593572/1/Stargazer FanFiction.net]], [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27060847 Archive of Our Own]], and [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/stargazer-destiny-inheritance-cycle.932104/ SpaceBattles]].
SpaceBattles.com]].
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* HumanSubspecies: The elves and dwarves are confirmed to be neohumans [[spoiler:created through genetic engineering by the Harmony.]]
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* HumanSubspecies: The elves elves, Urgals, and dwarves are confirmed to be neohumans [[spoiler:created through genetic engineering by the Harmony.]]
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* AlliterativeName: The name of the [[BaseOnWheels Imperial Land Tank]] fielded by the Soulrazers late in the story is the ''Amarz Amalz''.
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** A flashback in Chapter 72 has Ikharos and a then-living Lennox make plans for a movie night with Xiān picking out ''Anime/SpiritedAway''.
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* ShoutOut: When the Cabal arrive at Alagaesia, Da'aurc proclaims [[UsefulNotes/JuliusCaesar "WE COME, WE SEE, WE CONQUER!"]]
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** While investigating the ''First Fleet'' in chapter 2, Ikharos finds the silence of the ship unsettling and tells Xiān that it reminds him of the Golden Age quote [[Film/{{Alien}} "In space, no one can hear you scream."]]
** When the Cabal arrive at Alagaesia, Da'aurc proclaims [[UsefulNotes/JuliusCaesar "WE COME, WE SEE, WE CONQUER!"]]
** While investigating the ''First Fleet'' in chapter 2, Ikharos finds the silence of the ship unsettling and tells Xiān that it reminds him of the Golden Age quote [[Film/{{Alien}} "In space, no one can hear you scream."]]
** When the Cabal arrive at Alagaesia, Da'aurc proclaims [[UsefulNotes/JuliusCaesar "WE COME, WE SEE, WE CONQUER!"]]
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* AtomicFBomb: At the end of Chapter 49, Ikharos kicks over a stool and angrily screams "''FUCK!''" when Obleker shows him a holographic recording revealing that [[spoiler:the Hive are on Kepler, having stowed away aboard one of the crashed Cabal warships.]]
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* PrecisionFStrike: At the end of Chapter 49, Ikharos kicks over a stool and angrily screams "''FUCK!''" when Obleker shows him a holographic recording revealing that [[spoiler:the Hive are on Kepler, having stowed away aboard one of the crashed Cabal warships.]]
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** The Fallen also measure distances in "rikhas". According to Ikharos, two rikhas is equivalent to one Canal chren.
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** The Fallen also measure distances in "rikhas". According to Ikharos, two rikhas is equivalent to one Canal chren.
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* BrokenAce: Ikahros is a veteran Guardian who mentored the Young Wolf and served on the same fireteam as him. He's also performed legendary feats such as delivering the killing blow to Oryx during the Taken War. However, he's gradually revealed to be struggling with his inner demons, still grieving over the death of his partner Lennox-2 and having a falling out with the Young Wolf. He eventually admits to Formora that his fireteam was the closest thing he had to a family and it's disbandment left him feeling alone in the world.
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* BrokenAce: Ikahros Ikharos is a veteran Guardian who mentored the Young Wolf and served on the same fireteam as him. He's also performed legendary feats such as delivering the killing blow to Oryx during the Taken War. However, he's gradually revealed to be struggling with his inner demons, still grieving over the death of his partner Lennox-2 and having a falling out with the Young Wolf. He eventually admits to Formora that his fireteam was the closest thing he had to a family and it's disbandment left him feeling alone in the world.
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* BenevolentAlienInvasion: Discussed in Chapter 64 by Invoctol, who believes that the Cabal invasion of Ceunon was this trope. Ikharos disagrees.
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'''Ikahros:''' After massacring every soldier within.\\
'''Invoctol''': The cost of uplifting a primitive civilization. Had you not interfered, those humans would have enjoyed new medicines, greater educations, the means by which to live in relative luxury -- not to spend their days groveling in filth.\\
'''Ikharos:''' They didn't ask you to.\\
'''Invoctol:''' No, perhaps not. [[WhiteMansBurden But it is my duty to give it to them, regardless of any barbaric notions of independence.]]
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'''Ikahros:''' After massacring every soldier within.\\
'''Invoctol''': The cost of uplifting a primitive civilization. Had you not interfered, those humans would have enjoyed new medicines, greater educations, the means by which to live in relative luxury -- not to spend their days groveling in filth.\\
'''Ikharos:''' They didn't ask you to.\\
'''Invoctol:''' No, perhaps not. [[WhiteMansBurden But it is my duty to give it to them, regardless of any barbaric notions of independence.]]
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* BigBad: Nezarec is a malevolent deity responsible for trapping Kepler-186f in a time bubble and creating the Shades. Defeating him is the end goal for the heroes as the only way Scipio will lift its orbital blockade is if Nezarec is neutralized. [[spoiler:Ikharos and Formora discover that he is an Ascendant Harmony using a version of the Hive's Sword Logic to feed off the misery caused by Galbatorix, whose FaceHeelTurn was orchestrated by Nezarec's shades.]]
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* BigBad: Nezarec is a malevolent deity responsible for trapping Kepler-186f in a time bubble and creating the Shades. Defeating him is the end goal for the heroes as the only way Scipio will lift its orbital blockade is if Nezarec is neutralized. [[spoiler:Ikharos and Formora discover that he is an Ascendant Harmony using a version of the Hive's Sword Logic to feed off the misery caused by Galbatorix, whose FaceHeelTurn was orchestrated by Nezarec's shades.Shades.]]
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** On the Cabal side, we have Primuses Da'aurc and Invoctol, the leaders of two Cabal Legions that establish a presence on Keplar after their ships crash land there during a space battle. While Invoctol is more concerned with finding a way to send out a distress call, Da'aurc is deadset on claiming the planet for the Cabal Empire.
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** On the Cabal side, we have Primuses Da'aurc and Invoctol, the leaders of two Cabal Legions that establish a presence on Keplar Kepler after their ships crash land there during a space battle. While Invoctol is more concerned with finding a way to send out a distress call, Da'aurc is deadset on claiming the planet for the Cabal Empire.
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* EvilVsEvil: [[spoiler:After the Hive arrive on Kepler via stowing away on the Cabal warships, they quickly go on the warpath against the Harmony. It's noted that if either side manages to defeat the other, it would spell doom for all of Keplar since both sides use the [[VictorGainsLosersPowers Sword Logic]]. If the Harmony win, the power they gain from killing the Hive would make Nezarec all but unstoppable. If the Hive win, they will absorb the Harmony's powers and go on to exterminate all life on Keplar. It's because of this that Ikharos is determined to destroy the Hive ''before'' they can reach the Harmony.]]
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* EvilVsEvil: [[spoiler:After the Hive arrive on Kepler via stowing away on the Cabal warships, they quickly go on the warpath against the Harmony. It's noted that if either side manages to defeat the other, it would spell doom for all of Keplar Kepler since both sides use the [[VictorGainsLosersPowers Sword Logic]]. If the Harmony win, the power they gain from killing the Hive would make Nezarec all but unstoppable. If the Hive win, they will absorb the Harmony's powers and go on to exterminate all life on Keplar.Kepler. It's because of this that Ikharos is determined to destroy the Hive ''before'' they can reach the Harmony.]]
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* LesCollaborateurs: [[spoiler:The Exos that survived the Harmony's massacre of the original human colonists on Keplar serve Nezarec out of their own free will, believing that the Darkness can't be defeated and allying with it is their only hope for survival.]]
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* LesCollaborateurs: [[spoiler:The Exos that survived the Harmony's massacre of the original human colonists on Keplar Kepler serve Nezarec out of their own free will, believing that the Darkness can't be defeated and allying with it is their only hope for survival.]]
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* YearInsideHourOutside: For some reason, time moves at a much faster rate inside Keplar's atmosphere than it does for rest of the universe. Whereas only a mere four centuries have passed for the people of the Sol System, it's been ''eight thousand years'' for anyone living on Kepler-186f. [[spoiler:Ikharos and Formora discover that this was intentionally done by Nezarec, as it allows him to build up his powerbase at an exponentially faster rate than any of the other major factions in the universe.]]
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* YearInsideHourOutside: For some reason, time moves at a much faster rate inside Keplar's Kepler's atmosphere than it does for rest of the universe. Whereas only a mere four centuries have passed for the people of the Sol System, it's been ''eight thousand years'' for anyone living on Kepler-186f. [[spoiler:Ikharos and Formora discover that this was intentionally done by Nezarec, as it allows him to build up his powerbase at an exponentially faster rate than any of the other major factions in the universe.]]
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* LostColony: The entire premise of the story is that the world of ''Inheritance Cycle'' takes place on the exo-planet Kepler-186f and that the humans on this world are actually the descendants of colonists from the Sol System who colonized the planet during the Golden Age. After the Collapse, the humans in Sol lost contact with Kepler-186 and eventually forgot about the existence of the colony altogether.
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* LostColony: The entire premise of the story is that the world of humans in ''Inheritance Cycle'' takes place on the exo-planet Kepler-186f and that the humans on this world are actually the forgotten descendants of Golden Age colonists from the Sol System who colonized the planet during the Golden Age. After the Collapse, the that have lost all their technology and regressed to a medieval-level civilization. The humans back in the Sol lost contact with Kepler-186 and eventually forgot about the existence of the System don't even realize that this colony altogether.exists since the Collapse happened before they could establish proper communications.
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* LostColony: The entire premise of the story is that the world of ''Inheritance Cycle'' takes place on the exo-planet Kepler-186f and that the humans on this world are actually the descendants of colonists from the Sol System who colonized the planet during the Golden Age. After the Collapse, the humans in Sol lost contact with Kepler-186 and eventually forgot about the existence of the colony altogether.
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* RapidFireNo: Formora's reaction to [[spoiler:Melkris' death.]]
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* YouRemindMeOfX:
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** In chapter 22, Ikharos tells Formora that she reminds him of a Hunter he once knew a long time ago.
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* OffWithHisHead: How Ikharos's first meeting with Formora on Vroengard went. She and Enduriel almost immediately attack him with Formora dealing the killing blow by cutting off his head. Obviously, this doesn't stick.
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* KilledOffForReal:
** [[spoiler:Alkris is killed by Durza during the Battle under Farthen Dûr while trying to protect Eragon.]]
** [[spoiler:Melkris is shot by a Hive Knight at the end of Chapter 76. Formora desperately tries to save him with a healing spell, but is unsuccessful and watches as ether leaves Melkris's body.]]
** [[spoiler:Alkris is killed by Durza during the Battle under Farthen Dûr while trying to protect Eragon.]]
** [[spoiler:Melkris is shot by a Hive Knight at the end of Chapter 76. Formora desperately tries to save him with a healing spell, but is unsuccessful and watches as ether leaves Melkris's body.]]
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