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** The Neo-Equestrians being alicorns also gets it. Instead of being a race of [[MarySuetopia complete alicorns]], they function more like the main triad of ponies in the show, just with their main features being heightened.
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** Titan was originally not a very imposing threat, showing up and kidnapping a bunch of ponies before heading off. Nadir, however, immediately shows why he's TheDreaded and trounces the EliteTrio of Starfleet, only being thwarted by Lightning Dawn's immense light powers.
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** Titan was originally not a very imposing threat, showing up and kidnapping a bunch of ponies before heading off. Nadir, however, immediately shows why he's TheDreaded and trounces the EliteTrio elite trio of Starfleet, only being thwarted by Lightning Dawn's immense light powers.
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** Of note, Lightning Dawn's status as TheHero is given a lot more credibility this time around. The original was seemingly found out of the blue by Celesto but here, he and Crystal are found at the same time after a tremendous display of power. Not only that, but he's able to stand up to [[BigBad Nadir]] in a weakened state, whereas LD Prime got knocked around a bunch, even by his minions, and then cowered upon first seeing him again
** Krysta wasn't much of a fighter at first, despite her SuperStrength. This fic shows a young Crystal tackling a cragadile and later shielding against an attack from Nadir, as opposed to getting captured like it happened originally.
** The idea of [[ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve believing]] is also given this treatment. Instead of being just a source of power, it's instead treated as an individual's determination and inner strength, with the ''[=FiM=]'' canon explanation of being tied to a pony's emotions.
** Celesto is barely around in the original, only showing up when the plot demands it. Here, we see him actually [[CurbStompBattle taking out a group of bandits]] far across the universe, and immediately rushing to Neo-Equestria when he senses it's in danger.
** Titan was originally not a very imposing threat, showing up and kidnapping a bunch of ponies before heading off. Nadir, however, immediately shows why he's TheDreaded and trounces the EliteTrio of Starfleet, only being thwarted by Lightning Dawn's immense light powers.
** Krysta wasn't much of a fighter at first, despite her SuperStrength. This fic shows a young Crystal tackling a cragadile and later shielding against an attack from Nadir, as opposed to getting captured like it happened originally.
** The idea of [[ClapYourHandsIfYouBelieve believing]] is also given this treatment. Instead of being just a source of power, it's instead treated as an individual's determination and inner strength, with the ''[=FiM=]'' canon explanation of being tied to a pony's emotions.
** Celesto is barely around in the original, only showing up when the plot demands it. Here, we see him actually [[CurbStompBattle taking out a group of bandits]] far across the universe, and immediately rushing to Neo-Equestria when he senses it's in danger.
** Titan was originally not a very imposing threat, showing up and kidnapping a bunch of ponies before heading off. Nadir, however, immediately shows why he's TheDreaded and trounces the EliteTrio of Starfleet, only being thwarted by Lightning Dawn's immense light powers.
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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Blackheart Hill, a former shrine of Neo-Equestria turned battlefield.
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* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: Lightning and Crystal go back on orders from Team Trifecta to stay put when they're on the losing end against Nadir. Astra, Garter, Colin, and Percy all follow suit.
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* HopeSpot: Team Trifecta lays quite the beating on Nadir, and it seems like they did the trick. Then the smoke clears and he quickly pieces himself back together. Cue CurbStompBattle.
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** Blacktop Mountain --> Blackheart Hill
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* EldritchLocation: Planet Eris, without question.
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* MythologyGag: [[spoiler:Like in ''Starfleet Magic'', Grand Ruler used to live in Equestria.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: The name "Neo-Equestria" wouldn't make any sense unless [[spoiler:the Grand Ruler used to live there in the past]].
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: The name "Neo-Equestria" wouldn't make any sense unless [[spoiler:the Grand Ruler used to live there in [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic Equestria]] in the past]].
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: The name "Neo-Equestria" wouldn't make any sense unless [[spoiler:one of their own kind used to live their in the past]].
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: The name "Neo-Equestria" wouldn't make any sense unless [[spoiler:one of their own kind [[spoiler:the Grand Ruler used to live their there in the past]].
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: The name "Neo-Equestria" wouldn't make any sense unless [[spoiler:one of their own kind used to live their in the past]].
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** Emerald Shaina --> Aqua Marine
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--> "Compared to me, that cragadile will be mere foal’s play.""
* TheWorfEffect: Team Trifecta consists of the three most elite officers in Starfleet's employ. So when they're having trouble against Nadir, that's your cue to panic.
* TheWorfEffect: Team Trifecta consists of the three most elite officers in Starfleet's employ. So when they're having trouble against Nadir, that's your cue to panic.
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** Horatio I.Q. Brain --> Equal Librium
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I'm back, baby!
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* {{Reconstruction}}: Whereas ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis'' and ''Fanfic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony'' {{deconstruct}} the world of the Unicornicopians and their ideologies, ''Starfleet Redone'' starts the series over and makes the characters genuine heroes (with definable characteristics) as well as give them a better system of morals.
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* {{Reconstruction}}: Whereas ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis'' and ''Fanfic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony'' {{deconstruct}} the world of the Unicornicopians and their ideologies, ''Starfleet Redone'' starts the series over and makes the characters genuine heroes (with definable characteristics) as well as give them a better system of morals. WordOfGod has stated that the ideas in ''Starfleet Magic'' had potential, but were mishandled in-story.
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As ''[[Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic Starfleet Magic]]'' has a sizable {{hatedom}}, fics that deconstruct or reconstruct it {{deconstruction}}s and {{reconstruction}}s were inevitable. This is [[FanFic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis one]] [[Fanfic/FallOfStarfleetRebirthOfFriendship of]] [[Fanfic/StarfleetMagicIsBelieving four]].
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As ''[[Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic Starfleet Magic]]'' has a sizable {{hatedom}}, a fic ([[FanFic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis or]] [[Fanfic/FallOfStarfleetRebirthOfFriendship three]]) rather]] [[Fanfic/StarfleetMagicIsBelieving four]]) that deconstructs it was inevitable. Or at least, a reconstruction.
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As ''[[Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic Starfleet Magic]]'' has a sizable {{hatedom}}, a fic ([[FanFic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis or]] [[FanFic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony [[Fanfic/FallOfStarfleetRebirthOfFriendship three]]) that deconstructs it was inevitable. Or at least, a reconstruction.
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As ''[[MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic ''[[Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic Starfleet Magic]]'' has a sizable {{hatedom}}, a fic ([[FanFic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis or]] [[FanFic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony three]]) that deconstructs it was inevitable. Or at least, a reconstruction.
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* {{Reconstruction}}: Whereas ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis'' and ''Fanfic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony'' {{deconstruct}} the world of the Unicornicopians and their ideologies, ''Starfleet Redone'' starts the series over and makes the characters genuine heroes (with definable characteristics) as well as give them a better system of morals.
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As ''[[FanFic/MyLittleUnicorn ''[[MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic Starfleet Magic]]'' has a sizable {{hatedom}}, a fic ([[FanFic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis or]] [[FanFic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony three]]) that deconstructs it was inevitable. Or at least, a reconstruction.
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How did no one notice this until now?
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** The time frame between Titan's imprisonment and the present, 962 years, is a reference to ''WesternAnimation/XiaolinShowdown''. See the page quote for ThousandYearReign.
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** The time frame between Titan's Nadir's imprisonment and the present, 962 years, is a reference to ''WesternAnimation/XiaolinShowdown''. See the page quote for ThousandYearReign.
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--> '''Percy:''' "That theory is about as half-baked as the other two dozen you came up with this week."
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* LukeIMightBeYourFather: Conversed. [[CloudCuckoolander Colin]] theorizes that Lightning was the result of the Grand Ruler having an affair, which LaserGuidedAmnesia caused them both to forget. Percy immediately deems this theory ridiculous.
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* LukeIMightBeYourFather: Conversed. [[CloudCuckoolander Colin]] theorizes that Lightning was the result of the Grand Ruler having an affair, which LaserGuidedAmnesia caused them both to forget. Percy [[DeadpanSnarker Percy]] immediately deems this theory ridiculous.ridiculous.
--> "That theory is about as half-baked as the other two dozen you came up with this week."
--> "That theory is about as half-baked as the other two dozen you came up with this week."
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** Titan --> [[SuddenNameChange Nadir]]
