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* SexStartsStoryStops. [[spoiler: Varian and Harmony have an unexpected sex scene at the end of ''Princess' Return Part 2'' that ultimately serves no purpose to the narrative.]]
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* SexStartsStoryStops. [[spoiler: Varian and Harmony have an unexpected sex scene at the end of ''Princess' Return Part 2''. that ultimately serves no purpose to the narrative.]]
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* SexStartsStoryStops. [[spoiler: Varian and Harmony have an unexpected sex scene at the end of ''Princess' Return Part 2''. 2'' that ultimately serves no purpose to the narrative.]]
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* ShortTeensTallAdults: Harmony is stated to be 5'2" at the start of the story, and while she does grow a couple of inches by the third season, she's still shorter than Varian, who himself is still shorter than Rapunzel despite his own growth spurt.
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* FamilyOfChoice: While Harmony is at an age where she would logically be considered Kiera and Catalina's adoptive older sister (as the former is 16 and the latter two are preteens by the start of the third season), they still refer to her as their mother, and she doesn't mind them calling her such.
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* PracticallyDifferentGenerations: Harmony and Varian's [[spoiler: son, Reid]], is born in the epilogue, when his adopted sisters, Kiera and Catalina are in their teen years.
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* PracticallyDifferentGenerations: Harmony and Varian's [[spoiler: son, Reid]], is born in the epilogue, when his adopted sisters, Kiera and Catalina Catalina, are in their teen years.
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* PracticallyDifferentGenerations: Harmony and Varian's [[spoiler: son, Reid]], is born in the epilogue, when his adopted sisters, Kiera and Catalina are in their teen years.
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** Edmund's crow Hamuel, develops a crush on Harmony’s pet duckling Daisy, despite being too dense to realize she wants nothing to do with him.
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** Edmund's crow Hamuel, develops a crush on Harmony’s Harmony's pet duckling Daisy, despite though it's more him being too dense to realize she wants nothing to do with him.
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** Edmund's crow Hamuel, develops a crush on Harmony’s pet duckling Daisy, despite too dense to realize she wants nothing to do with him.
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** Edmund's crow Hamuel, develops a crush on Harmony’s pet duckling Daisy, despite being too dense to realize she wants nothing to do with him.
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** As the flashbacks in ''Pascal and Daisy's Stories'' show, two baby animals become orphaned after their mothers are killed, a hunter in Daisy's case. Wait, are we talking about Daisy or [[WesternAnimation/{{Bambi}} Bambi]]?
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** As the flashbacks in ''Pascal and Daisy's Stories'' show, two baby animals become orphaned after their mothers are killed, a hunter killed; in Daisy's case.case, by a hunter. Wait, are we talking about Daisy or [[WesternAnimation/{{Bambi}} Bambi]]?
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* AdaptationalDyeChange: Morgan is described as a brunette in the fanfic, but artwork done of her on [=DeviantArt=] depicts her with blonde hair. This was intentional in order to make her more closely resemble her father, the Baron.
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* AdaptationalDyeChange: AdaptationDyeJob: Morgan is described as a brunette in the fanfic, but artwork done of her on [=DeviantArt=] depicts her with blonde hair. This was intentional in order to make her more closely resemble her father, the Baron.
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* AdaptationDyeChange: Morgan is described as a brunette in the fanfic, but artwork done of her on [=DeviantArt=] depicts her with blonde hair. This was intentional in order to make her more closely resemble her father, the Baron.
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* AdaptationDyeChange: AdaptationalDyeChange: Morgan is described as a brunette in the fanfic, but artwork done of her on [=DeviantArt=] depicts her with blonde hair. This was intentional in order to make her more closely resemble her father, the Baron.
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* AdaptationDyeChange: Morgan is described as a brunette in the fanfic, but artwork done of her on [=DeviantArt=] depicts her with blonde hair. This was intentional in order to make her more closely resemble her father, the Baron.
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: Trevor the 3rd looks exactly like his uncle, King Trevor, only without the facial hair.
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: StrongFamilyResemblance:
** Trevor the 3rd looks exactly like his uncle, King Trevor,only without minus the facial hair.
** Trevor the 3rd looks exactly like his uncle, King Trevor,
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* TeensAreShort: Harmony is stated to be 5'2" at the start of the story.
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: Trevor the 3rd looks exactly like his uncle, King Trevor, only without the facial hair.
** Morgan's facial features are similar to her sister, Stalyan, and she also has the same hair color as her father, the Baron.
** Morgan's facial features are similar to her sister, Stalyan, and she also has the same hair color as her father, the Baron.
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* AdoptedIntoRoyalty: Kiera and Catalina become princesses through Harmony's adoption of them, and are explicitly referred to as princesses in the epilogue.
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* AdoptedIntoRoyalty: Kiera and Catalina become princesses through Harmony's adoption of them, and are explicitly referred to as princesses ninth epilogue.
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* AdoptedIntoRoyalty: Kiera and Catalina become princesses through Harmony's adoption of them, and are explicitly referred to as princesses ninth epilogue.
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* SexStartsStoryStops. [[spoiler: Varian and Harmony have a rather steamy and passionate session at the end of ''Princess' Return Part 2''.]]
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* SexStartsStoryStops. [[spoiler: Varian and Harmony have a rather steamy and passionate session an unexpected sex scene at the end of ''Princess' Return Part 2''.2''. that ultimately serves no purpose to the narrative.]]
